The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 84

Originally posted by: pinka28

brilliant update
thanks a lot darling 😊 😊 😊

RAJ was trying to love naina...per ye uska glat samy pe hi kyon ata hai... but i like the way he he think for her concern for that... and he definitely naughty... look at the way he is talking to her mom...
ab kuch progress ki hai na bacche ne pehle se 😉 😉 😉

kasam se use koi aur phrase nahi mila "makan bnane ke liye jameen khridni padti hai"..😆😆😆

he is such brat...
Sahi to keh raha tha aur kya kehta vo? 😆 😆 😆

here kunal wao hero smile bhi kera di flirt bhi ker liya ladki ko impress bhi ker liya aur tease bhi ... ise kahte hai ek scene aur many colors[ i know i know ye koi phrase nahi hai😆 per kyaa kerun aur koi line ayi hi nahi dimag mein]
Chalo accha hai yaar koi bhi phrase ho. 😛 😛 😛

thank god neha khisak li vhan se verna bhen ko patane se pahle bhai ki enquary commission mein baithan padta😆
tab bhi becari pakdi gayi na Naina k dwara 😉 😉 😉

seriously awesome update
once again a big thanks 😃 😃 😃

btw

upadte to apne bhut pahle di thi pper aap naya kab ker rahi hai

jaldi de se update ker de ...i am waiting

Originally posted by: arpita25

awesome parts dear. 👏
thanks yaar 😊 😊 😊

Raj n Naina are coming so close, Naina k dad ki death k baad Raj us ko console karne aaya hai aur ye jaroori bhi hai Naina k liye.😭
Haan kab tak us ka pati itna wait karega yaar?

Support ki jaroorat bhi hai abhi Naina ko. 😭 Ab Raj ko thoda waqt aur mil jaayega Naina k liye jo pehle nahi mil paaya tha.😃
Abhi Naina weak hai us ko help chahiye

Naina ne apne bhai k baad ab apne dad ko bhi kho diya aur ek k baad ek losses se vo kaafi kamjor pad gayi hai. 😭
koi bhi ladki apne ek sab se special rishte ko khone k baad aisa hi feel karegi na 😭 😭 😭

I think ab Raj sab kuch samhaal hi lega. 😊 Yahan us ki sis ki love story bhi acche track pe aa rahi hai.😆

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm....mujhe lag hi raha tha....I still didnt comment on one of ur fics....hehe.
Oh u missed it? 😕 😕 😕

Anyways....the part was really nice...the little romantic session was nice....and Raj-Naina understanding is also gud.....
thanks a lot dear 😃 😃 😃

though I'm still worried abt how Naina will react to knw the truth. However their naughty session was very very sweet....and I loved Raj and his mom's convo.....very very cute!!
Sach ka saamna kabhi na kabhi to karna hi hai Naina ko na.
Raj to bahut hi naughty ho gaya hai ab 😉 😉 😉

Kinal-Neha portion was also very gud.....and very sweet as well. Kunal kaise bhi karke Raj se bach gaya....hehe.....but Neha got caught by Naina.....w8ing to knw wat happens next.
Sab Kunal jaise challoo nahi hote hai na😛 😛 😛

And yeah Vertika....its been really long since u updated this one....so guess we want a part of this fic!! Pls try n continue soon.
I know yaar n sorry for inconvenience

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice precap.
update soon.

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

toh sukar haai tune is fic ke yaad toh aaye
yaad tha yaar bus thoda busy thi mai

the precap is good

waiting to see the up eagerly

plz cont soon and pm me

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

lo...1000km ke dur se chota sa toffee dikha kar madam kah rahi hai ENJOY...
😆 😆 😆

akhir tujhe yaad aa hi gayi na is fic ki...!!! aap ki daya...aur hamre karam...
nahi yaar thodi busy thi mai bus

as usall...PRECAP ke liye main kuch nahi kahungi...humain toh ud chahiye...aur voh bhi jald se jald...

Originally posted by: varshita

Yaar is baar mai bhi Priya k saath hoon aur jab tak update nahi hoga no reply on precap.

5 months ho chuke hain mam kab karengi aap is ko update?

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ohh....precap always makes me all the more eager yaar.....abhi jaldi jaldi part post karna pls.....I am realllllllllllllllllly eager and w8innnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggg!! 😛

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Mehak

Precap is really interesting but as Priya said we want an update..😃

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Interesting precap!!!!!!

What was Naina challenging Raj to do??🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Naina approves of Neha's choice and is teasing her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

It is good to see Raj and Naina joking with each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooome...

fab.precap........

do upd soon...

thanx for the pm.......

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

nice precap

waiting for you to update

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was too good
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

Hey Vertika hows u?

awesome ud

fantastic

rocking

bikul mast

as usual superb

ud soon dear

love

Deepa

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hi Vertika

interesting precap
plsssssssssss cont soon

Naina

"Kya matlab?" she asked again.

"Tum vakai me itne bholi ho Naina ki banne ki koshish kar rahi ho?" Raj gave him a look.

Naina smiled, "jab samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki kya keh rahe hain aap to poochoongi hi na?"

Raj thought of a mischief and said, "Theek hai ab mai clearly samajhata hoon apni innocent wife ko. Ye batao baccha hone k liye kya jaroori hota hai?"

"Mujhe kya pata, maine kabhi paida to kiya nahi hai?" she replied.

Raj felt irritated, "To ye to pata hoga na ki kaise paida hue thi tum?"

"Ye to maa hi bata sakti hain na." she responded.

Raj got more irritated, "Nahi, maa hi kyoun yahan aao mai bhi batata hoon tum ko."

"Haan to bataiye." She said.

Raj got surprised that she has no fear in her; she was simply challenging him to do what he wanted. Whatever Raj can never do such thing again.

When Naina saw him thinking something she started laughing, "oh god veer apni shakal dekho jara kaise bana k rakhi hai."

Raj came out of her thoughts and looked at her in amazement.

Naina was still laughing hard, "Ve.......Veer, tum to aise soch rahe ho jaise tum ladki ho aur mai ladka."

"Naina..".

But Naina was still laughing, "Veer............dekho apne aap ko kitne dare hue lag rahe ho tum, jaise lag raha hai kisi ne kya kar diya ho tumahre saath."

"Naina, tum mera mazak bana rahi ho. Jaanti ho mai kitna khatanaak hoon."

"Pata hai, abhi kuch der pehle ki tumhari halat dekh k lag raha tha ki mai tum se jyada khatarnaak hoon." She teased him further.

"jaao mai baat nahi karoonga tum se." Raj bacchon jaise muh fula k baith gaya sofe par.

Naina controlled her laugh n said, "Kitne der tak?"

"Kabhi baat nahi karoonga tum se."

"Ye to nahi ho sakta hai na Veer, kyounki mai acche se jaanti hoon ki mujhe kitna pyaar karte ho tum." She said confidentially.

"haan to is ka fayda uthaya jaa raha hai na. Kuch bhi ho mai baat nahi karoonga ab."

"Veer gusssa kyoun karte ho, ye to chota sa mazak tha bus." She said.

"Nahi tum mera mazak bana rahi thi. Accha hai vaise bhi kal mai chala jaaonga tab chain se baith k sab ka mazak banana."

Naina suddenly realized that his Veer is going tomorrow n how will she live without him, in kuch dino me Veer us ki aadat ban gaya hai. Pata nahi kaise jee paayegi vo us k bina.

Raj ko jab kaafi der tak Naina ki koi awaaz nahi aayi to us ne Naina ki taraf dekha to Naina kisi gehri soch me thi. Raj us ki aakhein padhne ki koshish karne laga. To dekhta kya hai kuch der me us ki aakhon se ansoon girne lage. Raj se dekha nahi gaya aur vo fauran Naina k pass uth kar chala gaya. He placed a hand on Naina's shoulder and Naina tried to hide her tears.

"Naina.....ansoon chipaane se dard kabhi kam nahi hota na."

Naina looked at him, shayad zindagi me us ne kabhi chaha tha Raj jaisa hi koi pyaar karne waala. Par Naveen ki maut aur us k naam par lage traitor k daag ne kaafi had tak Naina ko tod k rakh diya. Fir us haadse k baad Naina k dad ki poor health ne bhi Naina ki bachi hue umeedon ko bhi poori tarah se khatam kar diya tha. Naina ko laga tha shayad hi kabhi us ki zindagi me koi khoobsurat yaad aaye par Raj ka us ki zindagi me aana, bilkul ek registaan me jaise pehli bearish hoti hai.

She closed her eyes for sometime. Raj kissed her forehead, "Naina, mai kabhi bhi in naino me ansoon nahi dekh sakta samjhi tum."

Naina opened her eyes n hugged him immediately, "Mai nahi jaanti Veer ki uperwaale ne mere kis kaam se khush ho k mujhe aap se milwaaya hai. Par sach me maine kabhi tamaana nahi kit hi ki aap jaisa koi meri zindagi me kabhi aayega."

Raj smiled, "Naina bus tumhara hi nahi, maine bhi jaroor kuch accha kiya hoga jo mujhe tum mile ho."

Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi....................

Kismat pe aaye na yakeen...................

Utar aayi jheel me, jaise chaand utarta hai kabhi,

Haule haule, dheere se

Kunkuni dhoop ki tarah se taranum me tum.............

Chu k mujhe gujrai ho youn

Dekhoon tumhe ya mai sunoon.

Tum ho sukoon...................

Tum ho junoon.

Kyoun pehle na aayi tum...............

Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi.................

Kismat pe aaye na yakeen.................

Raj soch raha tha ki shayad kahin na kahin uperwaala us se itna naraj nahi hai tabhi to aaj Naina hai us k paas. Par kal ki soch k vo aaj bhi dar raha hai ki jab Naina ko ye sach pata chalega ki Raj ne hi Naveen ko maara hai to kya beetegi us par. Dil ka ek hissa kehta tha ki ye pal yu hi tham jaaye.

Mai to ye sochta tha

Ki uperwaale ko;

Fursat nahi................

Lekin tumhe bana k vo................

Mere najar me chad gaya

Rutbe me vo aur badh gaya.

Kaise mujhe tum mil gayi.....................

Kismat pe aaye na yakeen............

(to be continued)

Naina bhi Raj ki bahon me aaj apne aap ko saari suniya me sab se jyada safe samajh rahi thi. Achank se vo kuch sochne lagi.

"To ye to prove hua ki aap mujh se jyada der tak naraj nahi reh sakte na?"

Raj surprised but looking at he face he understood what was she trying to say. He hugged her more tightly in response.

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"Jaise aap aati hai na madam humare room me bina knock kiye vaise hi maine socha kyoun na mai aaj try kar k dekhoon." She winked her.

Neha blushed more.

"Vaise ek tarah se accha hi hua na. Kam se kam mujhe isi bahane pata to chala ki humari Neha hum se kya chipa rahi thi." She purposely teased her.

"Nahi bhabhi vo aise koi baat nahi hai, vo .................to..........ma..............mai bus."she stopped midway unable to continue more because of blush.

"Neha," she called her softly. Neha looked at her, "I am happy for u."

"Bhabhi................" she was still blushing.

"Bus bhi kar na blush. Vaise Kunal accha ladka hai. To mai ye to jaanti hi hoon ki teri choice bahut acchi hai." She again teased her.

"Bus bhi karo na bhabhi." She hugged Naina.

"Tu kahe to tere bhaiya se baat karoon is bare me?" Naina asked.

"Nahi bhabhi abhi nahi."

"Kyoun? Ab kya problem hai?" Naina asked.

"Bhabhi abhi mahole nahi sahi hai. Itne bade dukh se nikle hain aap. Mai nahi chahti ki bhaiya itne jaldi koi faisla lein is bare me." She added.

Naina smiled at her nand's intelligence,"Theek hai jaisa tujhe theek lage. Haan par ek baat hai." Naina said, " ab Kunal ko tadpaana bund kar, keh bhi de na ek baar."

"Bhabhi aap bhi na.................."

"Ok, ok jab man aaya tab kehna. Par pyaar me izhaar bhi bahut jaroori hota hai samjhi." Naina told her like an experienced gal.

"Kya bhabhi, bada experience ho gaya hai lagta hai."

"Chal hath shaitaan kahin ki, baatein ghumaana to koi tujh se seekhe."

Later in that day Naina was busy in making preprations of his dad's Chautha next day n Mrs. Shekhawat finally brought Neha with her in Godbharai .

"Naina, kya kar rahi ho?" Raj asked.

Naina quickly wiped her tears which were constatntly flowing from half an hour.

"Kahan ho tum mai tum ko kitne der se dhoondh raha hoon na?" he stopped looking at her swollen eyes.

"Mai yahan bus kuch nahi......................." she has no more words to lie.

"Tum ro rahi thi na." he asked.

Naina didn't answer n she nodded her head.

"Maine kaha hai na ki mai tumhare aankhon me ansoon nahi dekh sakta hoon. Kyoun tum mujhe................." aage Raj kuch bol nahi paaya kyounki us ne Naina ki aakhon se teji se behte hue ansoon dekhe Raj ne Naina ko console kiya aur Naina ne apna saara gum apne ansson me samet kar Raj k seene par sar rakh kar apna dil halka kar liya.

Us din shaam ko Raj ne ek faisla liya jo ki shayad logically sahi nahi tha par agar Naina kuch din aur vahan rahi to shayad vo gum kabhi nahi bhula paayegi ye soch kar Raj ne K.M.A. phone kiya.

Kuch der baad jab Raj kamre me aaya to dekha ki Naina Raj ka saaman reday kar rahi hai.

"Ye kya hai Naina? Abhi se mujhe bhejne ki taiyaari hai kya?" he teased her.

Naina smiled at him, "Nahi aisa nahi hai. Kal papa ka chautha hoga na to ho sakta hai mujhe poore din time nahi mile to mai pehle se hi tumhara saaman laga de rahi hoon ki koi problem na ho."

"Accha to sab ho gaya," he asked sitting near her.

"Kuch baaki hai bus ho jaayega." She told n again got busy.

Kuch der tak Raj aise hi Naina ko dekhta raha. Naina ne pehle to avoid kiya par lagtaar Raj k aise dekhne se us ka concentration thoda loose hone laga to us ne pooch hi liya. "Aise kya dekh rahe ho?"

"Tum ko, phir pata nahi dekhne ka mauka mile ya nahi?" Raj replied quickly.

"Khabardaar kabhi aise baatein ki to. Maaf nahi karoongi tum ko kabhi mai samjhe." She warned him holding his collars.

"Ok, baba relax kitna gussa karti ho."he said holding his ears.

"Nahi baat karni hai mujhe tum se hato jaao." She said still with a bit anger in her voice.

"Naina mere baat suno na, maine kaha na I am sorry baba ab nahi hoga aisa."

Naina ne abhi bhi apna muh doosri taraf ghumaya hua tha. Raj se ab aur bardaasht nahi ho raha tha us ne Naina ka haath pakda aur us ko apni taraf ghumaya aur ek cheek pe kiss kiya.

Naina was shocked ki Raj ne ye kaise.............Jab ki Raj k hothon pe ek smile thi aur us ki smile dekh k Naina ka gussa gayab ho gaya.

"To ye tareeka hai janab ka mujh ko manane ka na." she smiled at him.

"Abhi to ye bus trailor tha poori film to baaki hai madam. Abhi aapne kuch dekha hi kahan hai." He was teasing her n she was enjoying it too.

"To kya kya dikha sakte hain aap?"she asked in same tone.

"Kya kya dekhna chahogi mai to sab kuch dikhane ko taiyaar hoon tumhe." Raj said dramatically.

Pehle to Naina ko samajh nahi aaya ki Raj kehna kya chahta hai par jab Raj ne apni shirt k button kholne start kiye to Naina samajh gayi. Achanak se Raj k aisa karne par us ne kaha, "Ma....mai samjah gayi Veer aur mujhe kuch nahi dekhna hai pls." apni aakhein bund karte hue Naina ne kaha.

"Offo Naina tum bhi na ab agar yahan nahi karoonga to kahan?" Raj said naughtily.

"Mai keh rahi hoon na kuch pls bus karo." Naina ne fir se kaha aur us ko feel nahi hua ki Raj us k paas aa k khada ho gaya tha.

"Naina agar nahi karoonga to aage kaise karoonga?"

"Kya?"

"Change."

"Kya????????????????? Tum ne fir mazak kiya mujh se ab dekho mai tum ko nahi chodne vaali hoon."

"Yaar mai to bus mazak kar raha tha." Raj bechara apni jaan bachane k liye bhaag raha tha aur peeche peeche Naina us ko peetne k liye.

Kuch der k Tom n Jerry fight k baad dono filmy style me bed par gire Naina upper aur Raj neeche.

"Chodo hato jaane do mujhe Veer."

"Ahannnnn aise nahi mujhe kuch chahiye tum se." he said looking at her lips n rolling his tounge in mouth.

"Maine kaha na jaane do." She tried to push him but he was strong enough to hold her like this.

"Pls Naina ek baar."

"Kya, kuch nahi chalo jaao yahan se."

"Naina na nahi haan samjhi." Ye keh kar Raj ne Naina ko neeche liya aur apna upper aa gaya.

"Veer mai vo pls................nahi." she said softly but it seems that she has lost herself in him.

"Naina bus ek hi baar to." He again said.

"Pls nahi Veer, tum vaise bhi thak gaye ho na to thoda aaram kar lo." She added.

"Par Naina jab kal me chala jaaoonga tab hum kaise karenge?"

"Veer aap sach me na bahut shaitaan hain. Chodiye na mujhe." She requested.

"Ek baar kar lene do na Naina pls." he again requested.

"Kya?" she asked softly now.

"Kiss", Raj replied n burst out laughing.

"Veer tum phir se." she screamed.

"Kya karoon Naina tum ko is tarah se dekh k control hi nahi kar paata mai." He said laughing without knowing that what he is saying.

"Theek hai tum ko bus mera mazak banana aata hai na. Ab dekhna sach me mai kabhi bhi tum se baat nahi karoongi." She said n turned her face in another direction.

"Naina, Nainaaaaaa kitna gusaa karti ho tum." He tried to pull her in him but she was so stubborn. "Ok baba I am sorry ab no more jokes ok."

Still she didn't say anything. Raj turned her towards him n saw her teary eyes. "Naina mai to bus mazak kar raha tha mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum is ko itna seious le logi." He said with a sad face.

Soon Naina started laughing like hell n he was shocked to listen her laugh.

"Dar gaye na, mai bhi mazak kar rahi thi samjhe." She winked n continued laugh.

"Mera mazak banaya tum ne, ab dekho mai batata hoon tum ko." And he pulled her to him n she was trapped b/w his strong chest n circle of arms.

"Veer...................", she could utter only.

Raj was finally so close to her and she could sense something different in them. She couldn't continue looking in his eyes soon she lowered her eyes.

"Naina................." He called her softly n when she looked at him he quickly pasted his lips on hers without waiting for his response.

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj enjoys teasing Naina a lot aur usse kya kya pooch raha hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

But Naina is no less and answered him back boldly and her answer shocked Raj!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Seeing his face, Naina started laughing and Raj sulked at this!!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj threatened that he would never talk to her but Naina knew that is just not possible!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both of them love each other very much and have become very close!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj's remark made Naina realise that her Veer is going away the next day!!!!!

Naina's tears started flowing and she tried to hide them from Raj!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj never wants to see tears in her eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Raj is her support and if he goes away then how will she live without him!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina feels that she is very lucky to have him but Raj said that he is lucky ke usse Naina mil gayi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and apt for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is scared about how Naina will react when she finds out that he had killed Navin!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

I hope Naina does not hate him when she finds out the truth and understands his situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is feeling safe and secure in Raj's arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She said that it is proved that he cannot stay angry at her and Raj hugged her more tightly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Naina is teasing Neha about Kunal and Neha is blushing!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina suggests talking to Raj about it but Neha tells her not now!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is very happy for Neha and the scene between bhabhi and nanad was very sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is busy in preparations of her dad's chautha and crying!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj sees her crying and comforts her as she cries her heart out in his arms!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Seeing Naina this sad made Raj come to a decision!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I hope Raj will be taking her with him to KMA!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is packing for Raj and Raj teased her about it!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj keeps staring at Naina and on asking replied ke phir pata nahi Naina ko dekhne ka mauka mile ya nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Naina gets angry at this aur Raj usse manane ki koshish kar raha hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj pulled her towards him and kissed her on the cheek!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina was shocked while Raj was smiling which made Naina angry!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj is teasing her and said this was just the trailor aur aage toh poori film baaki hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Seeing Raj taking off his clothes, Naina shuts her eyes but Raj phir se mazak kar raha tha!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina starts chasing him and after their Tom and Jerry chase, they fall on the bed with Naina above Raj!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is not letting Naina go and wants a kiss but Naina wants him to let her go!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj said he cannot control his feelings for her!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ab Naina ne bhi Raj ke saath mazak kiya and started laughing like hell!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj is very close to her and Naina also felt something different in his eyes!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He kissed her and the kiss was very romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️