The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23

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Pinka

@pinka28

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Posted: 15 years ago

#791

brilliant update

RAJ was trying to love naina...per ye uska glat samy pe hi kyon ata hai... but i like theway he he think for her concern for that... and he definetily naughty... look at the way he is talking to her mom...

kasam se use koi aur phrase nahi mila "makan bnane ke liye jameen khridni padti hai"..😆😆😆

he is such brat...

here kunal wao hero smile bhi kera di flirt bhi ker liya ladki ko imporess bhi ker liya aur tease bhi ... ise kahte hai ek scene aur many colors[ i know i know ye koi phrase nahi hai😆 per kyaa kerun aur koi line ayi hi nahi dimag mein]

thank god neha khisak li vhan se verna bhen ko patane se pahle bhai ki enquary commission mein baithan padta😆😆😆😆

seriously awsome update

btw

upadte to apne bhut pahle di thi pper aap naya kab ker rahi hai

jaldi de se update ker de ...i am waiting

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#792

Hmm....mujhe lag hi raha tha....I still didnt comment on one of ur fics....hehe. Anyways....the part was really nice...the little romantic session was nice....and Raj-Naina understanding is also gud.....though I'm still worried abt how Naina will react to knw the truth. However their naughty session was very very sweet....and I loved Raj and his mom's convo.....very very cute!!

Kinal-Neha portion was also very gud.....and very sweet as well. Kunal kaise bhi karke Raj se bach gaya....hehe.....but Neha got caught by Naina.....w8ing to knw wat happens next. And yeah Vertika....its been really long since u updated this one....so guess we want a part of this fic!! Pls try n continue soon.

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#793

ab is ko jaldi se update kar yaar.😡

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#794

Pls continue soon

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#795

Pls continue soon

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: Deepanwita
HIIIIIIIIII VERTIKA HOW R U ?
AWESOOOOOOOOOOME UD
LOVELY
MINDBLOWING
AUR HAAN TUM
SUPERBBBBBBBB WRITER HO DEAR
FANTSTIC
LOVE EACH AND EVERY SCENE DEAR
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

LOVE
DEEPA

thanks Deepa dear 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#797

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
very nice update vertika !!!👏
thanks 😊 😊 😊

ek baat batao...tum iss fic ko itnaaaaa late kyun UD karti ho?

yaar ek saath 5 fics chal rahe the na to time kam mila bus

but update was very nice...
thank u 😊 😊 😊

RN toh as usual sweet hi hai ! 😃
yes they r 😃 😃 😃

Kunal toh baal baal bacha, par naine ne neha ko pakad hi liya....😛
mauka dhoondhta hai na vo bhi 😆 😆 😆

waise kehke koi khaas faida toh nahi...par keh hi deti hoon...continue soon...😛

i will try n going to try 😉 😉 😉

thanks mana dear 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: rituka7
damn cool
superb
update soon

thanks a lot dear 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#799

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Update was very good
thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Raj finds it difficult to control his emotions and gets carried away. But then realizes that he should not be doing anything with out Naina's consent.
Sahi soch raha hai na vo aakhir Naina ka bhi to haan kehna jaroori hai na 😃 😃 😃

Raj aur uske mom ki ched-khani bahut acchi thi. Phir Raj naina ko chedna shuru kar deta hai. Naina cannot help but blush after hearing his talks.
Bahut shaitaan hota jaa raha hai Raj bhi 😳 😳 😳

Kunal toh bach gaya....Raj ko usne apne boss ka excuse de diya.

Par Neha ko batein naina ne sun li
Haan n ab Naina ko help karni hogi Kunal n Neha ki is matter me 😉 😉 😉

Waiting to know what happens next.

Continue soon

thanks a lot sweetheart 😳 😳 😳
😳

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: mayadika11
hiiiiii vertika hows u sweety?
loved ur ud.......
it was as usual.....
awesooooome..........
superb.......
fantabulous.....
excellent.....
wonderful.......
just too good.....
thanx for the pm.......

thanks a lot Preeti dear for such nice reply 😉 😉 😉