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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: esha143
Nice precap Mahak.....do continue soon.......

thanks a lot...........😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: princessyogitha
Hiii Vertika,

Nice precap ,cant wait to read the update

plz continue soon

U r wait is over haan, do reply soon. 😳 😳 😳

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: mayadika11
hii vertika belated happy birthday.......
nice precap........
thanx for the pm........

thank u sweety for wishing me.🤗🤗🤗
thanks once again for giving ur views on precap. 😍😍😍

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: rajeev fann
wowwww finally iss fic ki baari bhi aa hi gayi😊ab jaldi se update bhi kar do....me waiting😊😊

Haan yaar aa hi gayi is ki baari n u have it's ud now.
Now waiting 4 ur reply. 🤗🤗🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: Deepanwita
hiiii vertika how r u?
happy belated birthday
excellent precap
ud soon

love
Deepa

Thank u so much Deepa, 😃 😃 😃
i have updated n hope to see ur reply soon.😉 😉 😉
😉

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#776

Vertika dear...

How r u?

for completing 100 pages 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 really awesome fic yaar... happy for u

Thank God..Finally tumhe is fic ki yaad aayi aur tune update ki

fabulous part dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina n rajs scene is so romantic Raj is so naughty ..apni maa se advise leraha tha..ki wo dadi pote ki banane chahthi hain ya poti ki... Raj naina ko kitna tease kar raha tha...loved that whole scene yaar

Neha n Kunals scene is awesome

totally fabulous update ..plz continue soon

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#777

Hi Mahak...

How are you??? Sorry for being so late yaar...m really in a dearth of time...so will be giving short comments...please don't mind....

Fantastic update...after losing control, now Raj is feeling guilty... poor fellow.... and on top of that his mother and her blessings....

Neha was blushing and Naina caught her...that was so funny.... waiting to know what happens next...

Love
Guglu

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#778

good precap dear.

seems something romantic gonna happen.

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#779

Chal thank god madam ne update karne ki jhehmat to uthayi na varna mujhe to laga tha ki na jaane kab ud hoga ye. 😛😛😛😛😛😛

Raj pehle aise hi utha raha tha Naina ko to madam ko uthne me takleef ho rahi thi.😆😆😆😆😆😆 Jab Raj ne romantically uthaya hai tab jaa k madam ki neend khuli hai vo bhi ek alag tarah se.😊😊😊😊😊 kya subah rahi na Naina ki.😉😉😉😉😉😉

Par sahi kiya Raj ne apne aap ko rok k, varna na jaane Naina kya sochti us k baare me? Par Naina bhi kitne samajhdaar hai na Raj ko samjha rahi thi ki us ne kuch galat nahi kiya. 😕😕😕😕😕😕 She is really a nice wife.

Jahan tak baat hai Raj n us ki mom k convo ki to vo kaafi funny tha.😳😳😳😳😳😳 Raj bhi na kitna shaitaan hai aise kaise pooch raha tha apni mom se ki un ko pehle kya chahiye.😉😉😉😉😉😉

Fir Naina ka mood divert karne k liye kitna accha topic uthaya na us ne ki Naina bus sharmaa k hi reh gayi. 😉😉😉😉😉😉 Aur us k baad kaise samjha raha tha vo. 😳😳😳😳😳😳

Jaldi se aage continue soon.

Edited by varshita - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#780

sab se pahle CONGRATS dear...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

tune notice kiya...tere lag-bhag sare fics 100 pages touch kar chuke hain...aur ek ne toh 2rd thrd bhi suru ho chuka hai...!!! par writer late-latif...😆 😆 😆

ok...ab UD par aate hain...kahne ki jarurat nahi hai yaar...tu hamesha se hi baht khubshurat likhti hai...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

ab raj bhi kya kare...!!! insaan hi toh hai...naina ko aise dekha toh thoda out of control ho gaya...!!! par aisa bhi nahi hai ki naina ko bura laga tha...voh bhi toh khush hi thi...!!! hope ki jaldi dono k bich sab kuch thik ho jaye...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

ab Raj ko ashirvaad ka matlab bhi nahi pata...😆??? pakka jhuth bol raha hai...!!! ab toh use jaldi se bachhe bhi chahiye...ha ha ha...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

kunal ne kitna tease kiya Neha ko...par neha ne voh nahi kaha...jo voh sun na chahta hai...!!! kunal ne toh raj ko ghuma diya...par neha pakdi gayi naina k samne...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

chal ab jaldi se likh ki aage kya hua...😃