The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

Hiiii vertika.....!!

ud was really too gud dear.👏

yeh neha bhi na.....kabhi bhi kuch bhi bol deti hai ....!!!bechare raj aur naina bina kuch kiye hi unhe yeh sun na pada aur sarmana bhi pada.😳

neha ko pata tha k raj jarur kisi bhi tarike se naina ko apne room main le kar jayega.....tabhi to sone ka bahana kar k yeh sab dekh rahi thi.😉😉😉

waise us letter main kya likha tha.....😕😕

i think k neha k opposite main alekh hai sayad.😕😕

take care & cont soon.

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

Hey deary maine abhi second part padha teri fic ka , 😊

Raj jaanta nahi tha na ki Naina itni khoobsurat hogi 😉, us ko dekhte hi Raj bilkul kho hi gaya kisi aur duniya me.😆

Navin ki mom ne Raj ka welcome kitne pyaar se kiya na. 😊 Kya letter likha na Raj ki mom ne nice plannig of ladies.😛

Kaafi senti tha update........................😭

kis ne chillaya tha andar se?😕

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

Third part bhi padha abhi maine is fic ka ye raha us ka reply........

Ye Naina k dad ko kya ho gaya achanak?

Un logon ki haalat kitni kharab hai na ab Raj hain vahan par pehle kaun dekhta tha ................😭

Mujhe bahut dukh ho raha hai Naina ki family k liye.😭

nice update.👏

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

vow too good n romantic update.😳

To finally bcz of Neha Raj n Naina have started romancing with each other well done😉. Neha ne vahi kaha jo hum sab ne socha tha 😛 par Raj bhi itni jaldi maane waala nahi tha 😡aur chala bhi gaya aise hi , par jab us se nahi raha gaya to vo Naina ko utha hi laya apni bahon me apne paas. 😳

Naina ki neend jab khuli aur us ne apne aap ko Raj ki baahon me paaya tab kitna blush kar rahi thi na haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳

Neha ka haath kis ne pakda tha?😕

Nice song yaar ⭐️ n the scene too when Raj saw Naina in that saari n Naina saw Raj in that dress.😛

update soon.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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Shree85

@Shree85

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

Hi Vertika

Another awesome part. U never give me any chance to point out any mistake. Neha is such a naughty sister. She never leaves any situation where she can embarass her brother and sister-in-law. Finally Raj is fallig for Naina and Naina, too, is thinking about Raj only. I hope that RN realises their love for each other soon and confess it to each other soon. Anyways you keep updating this fic regularly.

With Lots of Love and Wishes

Shree

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Neha ne akhir woh suggest kar hi diya Raj ko ke woh Naina ko gode mein uthake uske kamre tak lejaye!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neha ne kaha sabke saamne uthane mein sharm aati hai jab ke akele mein kya kya karte ho!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Yeh Neha kuch bhi bolti rehti hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj aur Naina kyun blush kar rahe hai jab ke woh log akele mein kuch bhi nahi karte!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Neha ko laga tha ke woh kahegi ke room mein jaane ki zaroorat nahi toh Raj kuch karega magar Raj sach much chala gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina was looking like an angel who had a magic in her smile which made Raj happy!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj pciked Naina up his arms and took her to his room and laid her on the bed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Lagta hai Raj se Naina ke bagair raha nahi jaata!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Neha bhi yeh chupke se dekh rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Pooja kehti hai bilkul Shahrukh aur Simran ki jodi lagte hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Neha Raj ko letter dena bhool gayi!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Kya tha ush letter mein??😕 😕 😕 😕I think Raj ke posting orders thhe!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Neha is now teasing Naina about last night and Naina is blushing!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Neha ne kaha jab tak dono taiyaar nahi ho jaate tab tak Raj Naina se nahi mil sakta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Yeh Neha ko bhi naa kya kya sujhta rehta hai!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😊 😊 😊 😊

Neha had turned from a tomboy into a perfect girl and is looking beautiful!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is now teasing her and asking who is she!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

This reminds me of Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham where seeing Kareena in a salwer Shahrukh asked Hrithik who she was!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Neha ka haath kisne pakda??😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is looking realy beautiful in beautiful pink and purple color saree!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is just speechless looking at her and felt an urge to put both her loose hairs behind her ear!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The song is very nice and just perfect for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is looking really superb in his black suit and purple shirt!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Matching with Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina soch rahi hai ke uski kismat itni acchi hai ke usse yakeen nahi ho raha hai ke Raj uska hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ko jo bhi ladki pehli baar dekhe would definately fall for him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina ne Raj ko uski taraf dekhte huye dekha and she blushed!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaiii!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj pata nahi kitne din Naina se dur reh payega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is just lost in Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ko bhi Raj ki aur koi force khich rahi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

This reminds me of the song........ 😊

Dil kho gaya,
Ho gaya kisi ka,
Ab raasta mil gaya,
Khushi ka..
Aankhon mein hai khwab sa,
Kisi ka..
Ab raasta mil gaya,
Khushi ka..
Rishta naya rabba,
Dil chu raha hai,
Kheeche mujhe koi dore, teri ore..
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore.....
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba
Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore............... 😊

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RITU

@RSZR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

hey sis superb part.. mindblowing...
sorry bada commnt nahi de sakti bcas mere exams near hain..
anyways thankk u sooo much for this lovely update... love the way u write.. 👏👏👏

lots of love
ritu😊

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Taskeen abdulaziz

@guddi29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

Neha is damn cute...luv the way she teases RAj.....raj takin naina bak 2 the room at nyt...tat was sweet.........plz cont....itz awesum fic

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@404_NotFound

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

This part was really cute...haii raj carried naina in his arms so sweet and nisha is so full of life..i love her character ...i want some more RN scenes yaar continue soon.

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#190

Hello!! Vertika!!
a very sweet update I must say....
I loved it.....the whole of it...
Neha is very sweet.....
and Raj and Naina's chemistry is as rocking as ever....
the whole mehendi thing was very sweet and romantic.....
thanks for this brilliant update.
please continue soon...

love
Riya.