pyaar ya inkaar ff p25 pg41 LAST PART - Page 5

i will definately read n comment soon arwa!

Originally posted by: ~samy~

Hello Arwa....

I was pretty much excited wen u had posted a sketch saying u wil be writing it on the lines of Pride and Prejudice.... and now I have read all ur three parts in one go... must say... ur fan fiction is just awesome.... 👏👏👏 Its really really different... its good to read dharamveer from a different perspective where u hav given ur characters differnt attitudes than what we usually have imagined them like... 😊

Hey thanks a lot for reading all the parts. Yeh I wanted to try out something new.

Pride and Prejudice is one novel I really like...though I never completed reading it.. 😆

omg .. so many princes...and princesses... i read it one time and then while reading jus forgot who was who 😕 😆 so then by-hearted the names and then continued reading 😆

hehehehe that was the trick - confuse so the reader would read over and over again

i liked that Sia is not the eldest daughter though she will be dharams love interest who is eldest.. its not the boring eldest son falling for eldest daughter...

younger son for younger daughter and so on..😆

yeh it is not the typical.

Loved ur character sketches... it was specifically hard for me to imagine Nivritti like that... very good.. and to imagine her as the wife of maharaj of sumaina..for whom u posted the pic of Sias dad from the show... had me in splits.. 😆

I wud hav loved if u wud hav given the pics of avantika and sawari too... and i liked ur choice of vaishali for bhoomi...

it was hard to imagine Nivi like that too but then I had the mother's character of P&P in mind so it came through. Hehehe Sia'd dad was funny in the serial but here he is quite serious. Hmm I couldn't find a pic for Avantika and Sawri but I might do in the future.

And Omg!!! Dharam as Darcy!!! 😳😳😳 Wow... too cool 😎 Oh God i love Dharam and u portraying him having this attitude is just amazing.. 👏 We hav always seen dharam as the sweet one in story and fan fics also... never the attitude... and Veer we have always seen as the one whos a little stubborn.... But u jus changed the characters... 👏👏👏

My my... veer loves poems and ananya is waiting for her rajkumar 😳

Dharam is insufferable and Sia hates insufferable ppl... 😆 wow..

he jus needs sumone who can hav an ego as big as his to....well... make him fall in love 😆

Yep Dharam is definitely different in this one. Veer is the charmer in this one and Dharam is the arrogant stubborn one. Well let's see how long it takes Dharam to fall in love.

I wud love to see how u bring forth the various other aspects of dharams nature... ppl probably wil hate him..or dislike him in the beginning... but I m waiting to see how u script his changes in attitude...

Hmmm well initially he is meant to be hated because of his attitude but I'm sure that's what's going to make him like him even more. Yeh his character is going to have various changes over the nexst few parts.

in first chp..

nice occasion to meet...

ananya and veer...its love at first itself... 😳 kitna flowery aur pyari baat karta hai veer 😛

but sia does luk at dharam and thinks that he is handsome... and later also she cant help but keep her eyes off him.. 😳 Guess shes already attracted but his attitude puts her off..

And yes...dharam is also attracted...eyes..smile 😳...but he wont realise it.. 😆 and both will keep showing attitude to one another.. 😆

veer ananya... first hee meeting se romance shuru 😉 great goin!

and sawari nad bhoomi are tornadoes.. 😲 itni masti 😆 😃😃😃

but missed avantika... she sat wid her book in party? 😕 wud hav liked to see her also..

Thanks.

Hmmm Veer is a charmer and he likes everything he sees. Yeh Sia does find Dharam attarctive but that's only until she doesn't know him.

yep both of them will continue denying it.

Sawri and Bhoomi are the trouble makers of this fic and wherever they'll be there will trouble.

Avantika has a minor role in this fic and I guess she'll come in and out of parts.

in chp 2..

Oh god...ananya in thoughts of veer..😍 and sia..she is so irritated wid dharam... see how dharams remarks hav not gone down wid her 😉 she says shes not concerned abt him saying shes not pretty but i guess sumwhere she does feel that.. only talking abt her kingdom is not the only reason shes feeling like this...😉 deep down she sumwhere feels that he said she was not itni khoobsoorat..hai naa?

Veer does poetry?? 😲 Kya ladka hai..😃 he is wooing ananya already.. lucky girl.. 😊

loved veers dia wen he said dil pe kisi ki hukumat nahi chalti..yeh dekhta hai toh sirf mohabbat.😳

Eww...nivi is so eager to get her daughters married(jus like the book).. and maharaj is samajhdaar and caring...

Aww.... Sia is also very caring.. relieved few of her fathers worries.. 😃

Yep Sia really hates Dharam now for insulting her like that. Perhaps in a way she is upset about what he said about her as it did hurt her ego.

Veer to bus kamaal ka hee hai. Thanks for liking the dialogues as I thoguht they were a bit modrn but I guess it seemed alright. Plus my hindi diction isnt that good at all.

yep Nivi is exactly like the mother in the original story.

Sia is the onyl one who can pacify her father all the time.

in chp 3...

i said naa...sawari and bhoomi are tornadoes...🤣🤣 i love this pair 😃

veer ananya enjoying time together..and spending some precious moments 😳

dharam jus looking at sia and realising that she was differnt 😳

Btw I was surprised wen dharam was so frank in front of antara about he being mesmerised by sia.. i thot he wont speak it out...

Omg veer kitne poems likega ananya ke liye 😆 Lover boy 😆

Avantika plays sitar...hmm..🤔 i wonder how is she gonna find her match..i dunno why but i feel shes gonna get married first..

And wat is dharam planning to do abt veer ananya

Yeh kya? dharam actually put his foot forward for the dance! 😉 😆 Oh boy! aha..Sia..kya attitude dikhaya hai! Dharam needs this dose of counter-attitude daily.... tabhi jaakar woh thik hoga.😆

see hes already impressed

And nivi 😲 she sent ananya away in toofan also.. 😡 poor girl 😭

And wat happened to ananya?? I m worried..upar se veer is also not there 😭

You'll be getting more of Sawri Bhoomi parts.

Yeh usually Dharam wouldnt be so frank about his feelings but here with Antara he was use to telling her straight forward things. Plus he was too involved in looking at Sia.


Veer is a poet and he's in love so what else wil lhe do 😃


you seem quite keen towards Avantika. Well lets see if she does find someone or gets married first.


Hehehe to aakhir me Dharam ne pehla qadam barha hee or Sia ne is baar ose wahi jawaab diya jo osne pehle diya tha. hmmm yeh maybe Sia wil lhave to continue doing that. Lets see how their relatinship continues and develops over time as there wil lbe plenty of encounters.


Yeh poor Ananya. Don't worry nothing much happened and u'll find out soon in the nest part.

I loved ur story Arwa.. 👏👏👏 I m already hooked... keep it up! 👍🏼

Thanks once again for the appreciation and i'm glad u're hooked as it helps me even more to write even better. I hope i can continue entertaining u.