pyaar ya inkaar ff p25 pg41 LAST PART

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Twinkle

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

thanxxxxx for clearing my query

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uighyuihui

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

wow excellent part 👏
i just liked the way u have scripted each and every character⭐️ ⭐️⭐️and then u went through ur part1 which i liked very much......😳

omg these two sis sawri and bhumi are very notty....😆
ananya and sia is soo sweet....😳
and veer is very frndly 😛but dharam is very rude...
i liked the dia's of veer-ananya😛
plz continue and update asap

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CutieA
ahhhh wooow wah a part 1...u startd it off wid a BANG! lol...awesome reali...loved da dia's...n da interaction btw da charas was good too! update soon hun x

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thank you very much for appreciating my first part so much

I'm glad u found everything so gr8

Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Cool! Please continue

yeh thanks for appreiciating.

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: hiri
awww loved their first meetings it was jus out standing and this dharam he go attitude ma8 btw it was gr8. loved veer ananya's meeting it was love at first sight cool do cont...

esha

hey esha thanks alot

yeh Dharam is the attidtue one in this one and Veer is the lovable guy. Love at first sight it is.

Originally posted by: Sharon_235
Lovely part. Just tell me who's Darcy here in this Pride
and Prejudice???😊

Waitin' for ur update

hey thanks but I thought it was quite obvious. 😊

hmmm who uptil lnow has been shown with so much attitude? I'm sure u'll know who I'm talking abt and if still not clear then ask me again.

Originally posted by: starpisces123
wow excellent part 👏
i just liked the way u have scripted each and every character⭐️ ⭐️⭐️and then u went through ur part1 which i liked very much......😳

omg these two sis sawri and bhumi are very notty....😆
ananya and sia is soo sweet....😳
and veer is very frndly 😛but dharam is very rude...
i liked the dia's of veer-ananya😛
plz continue and update asap

hey thank you very much for the appreciation

The two sisters sawri and Bhumi are the youngest so they're bound to be naughty and yeh the ote two are the eldest so u can see the contrast in there.

Dharam is the rude guy in this as if u wud have read Pride and Prejudice then u wud know which character he is based on.

thanks once again and yeh I'll try and update soon.

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

hey u all thanks so much for the lovely response which ahs really motivated me to write more.

I'll try and post the next part hopefully by Tuesday or Wednesday.

Thanks again.

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Rashi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Loved ur script dear.......

but whom should i relate whom..

well i m confused?

errrrrrrrrrrr 🤔

who plays role like ash.... 😕

n who plays d one of namrata shirodkar....😆

forget it..😉😆

this is different. if not much a lil bit different.from that movi..😛

but very intresting..👏👏👏 loved it 👏👏

Veer ananya 😳 😍

plzzzzz do continue...😳

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rash2cool
Loved ur script dear.......
but whom should i relate whom..

well i m confused?

errrrrrrrrrrr 🤔

who plays role like ash.... 😕

n who plays d one of namrata shirodkar....😆

forget it..😉😆

this is different. if not much a lil bit different.from that movi..😛

but very intresting..👏👏👏 loved it 👏👏

Veer ananya 😳 😍

plzzzzz do continue...😳

hey thanks a lot for reading

hmmm well the story has just started and I'm sure u'll soon pick up on the characters but this one is based on the english Pride and Prejudice so it wud a bit different from the Indian one.

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Kiran Baidya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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well...i just loved, it..........although i never the whole of pride and prejudice....but all i can say is that u are a brilliant writer........each character has been portrayed very beautifully........i specially love the way u have portrayed dharam.........he has never been like this before......i'm waiting for ur next update

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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thank you kiran_baidya for reading and appreciating

Im glad u liked each character and hope u'll enjoy the rest of the fic

and yeh Dharam has never been shown this arrogant before so I wanted to do something new.

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arwa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 2

First impressions

Ananya and Sia are in Ananya's room where Ananya is still lost in Veer's thoughts whilst Sia is annoyed about Dharam.

Sia: Aakhir kis baat ka ghamund hai Rajkumar Dharam ko? samajh te kya hai apne aapko? Logo se baat karne kee tameez nahi hai.

Ananya didn't answer as she was not even listening

Sia: kya kaha tha onhone, 'theek hai wo per itnee khoobsurat bhi nahi ke hamare hosh urjaaye.' wo hote koun hai aisa kehne waale? Bhagwaan ne onhe ooncha khaandaan or acchi shakal kya dedee onka dimaag to aasmaan tak pohoch gaya

Ananya just nodded but didn't really know what she was saying

Sia: chalo hamare baare me onhone jo bhi kaha osse hame ziada farak nahi para lekin onhone hamare parivaar ke baare me kaha wo hum bardaasht nahi karsakte. Agar yeh Aryanagar ke hone waale maharaj hai to phir hame Aryavrato pe bohat daya aarahee hai. Itna kathore ghamundee batameze raja jo milne waala hai

Ananya laughed which surprised Sia.

Sia: Hum yaha itne naraaz horahai or tum ho ke has rahee ho?

Ananya: huh? tum kuch humse kehrahee ho?

Sia: Kya! iska matlab tumne hamaree koi baat suni hee nahi. Aakhir kar kya rahee ho tum?

she comes closer to Ananya and sees she's sitting with a scroll in her hand

Sia: lagta hai kuch khaas hai

snatches the scroll out of her hands

Ananya: Sia, hame wo waapis de do

Sia: kyu aakhir aisee kya khaas baat hai isme?

Ananya: Sia hame tang mat karo or hame wo waapis dedo

Sia: de denge, de denge lekin osse pehle hame dekhne to do ke kya hai

Ananya: Dekho Sia hum kehrahe hai ke hame waapis de do warna...

Sia: Warna? hmmm ab to hame ise parna hee hai

Ananya: Sia, hame de do...

Sia giggled and ran away to the otherside of the room, followed by Ananya

then she starts reading the scroll out loud.

Sia: 'tere saath saath aisa koi noor aaya hai

Chand teri roshni ka halka sa ek saaya hai

Teri nazro ne dil ka kiya jo hashar

asar yeh huwa

ab inme hee dhoob ke hojao paar

yehi hai dua

In between Ananya tries stopping her and of snatching the scroll back but Sia still reads it.

Sia: '

Aakho me teree ajabsi ajabsi adaeh hai

Dil ko banade jo patang saase yeh teri wo hawaein hai'

Wah! Lagta hai Rajkumar kavi Veer sach mai tum par fida hogaye hai. Itnee acchi kavita hamne aajtak nahi suni.

Ananya: (blushing) Wo to...wo to onhone yuhi...aisa kuch nahi

Sia: hmmm wo to dikhraha hai. Aaj raat saaf nazar aaraha tha ke wo tumhe kitna pasand karte hai

Ananya: kuch pal saath bitaaya hai bus. Ose kuch or mat samajh na Sia. Wese bhi haqeeqat me yeh namumkin hai

Sia: Kuch bhi namumkin nahi hai Ananya. Dekho Rajkumar Veer ne khud tumhaaree taraf qadam barhaaya hai, or kyu na kare, tum sab se haseen jo ho

Ananya: Phir bhi hame darr lagraha hai Sia, ke kahi hum kuch ghalat to nahi soch rahe

Sia: Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Hame pura yakeen hai ke Rajkumar Veer tumhe pasand karne lage hai or hame yeh bhi pata hai ke tum bhi onhe pasand karne lagee ho

Ananya smiled and put her eyes towards the ground

Sia; Jaha tak hum or tum onhe jaante hai to onhe oonch neech or barabari kee koi parwa nahi. sab onke liye ek hee hai to phir tum ziada socho mat. Ha per Rajkumar Veer ke baare me zaroor soch saktee ho

Ananya: Dekho Sia tum phirse shuroo hogayee

Sia continues teasing Ananya and Ananya chases her around the room

Maharaj's room

Nivi: Aaj raat to kamaal hogaya Maharaj

S.M: Aisa kya hogaya

Nivi: Aap ne dekha nahi kese Rajkumar Veer puree raat jashan me sirf Ananya ke saat the. Osee ke saath ghoomte the or osee ke saath baate karte the

S.M: Waha or bhi log the Maharani

Nivi: Or wo sab dekhte hee rehgaye the. Jaante hai meree nazar sirf on dono pe hee thee puree raat. Dekh rahee thee ke kese Rajkumar Veer hamaree Ananya ke ilawa kisee or kee taraf dekhne ke liye tayaar hee nahi the. Ek do baar onkee nazar yaha waha gayee thee lekin phirse waapis hamaree Ananya ke paas hee ajaatee thee. Oh iska matlab jaante hai aap?

S.M: iska matlab hee hame chintit karaha hai Maharani

Nivi: Isme chinta karne kee kya baat hai Aapko to khush hona chaheeye ke Rajkumar Veer ko hamaree Ananya pasand aagyaee hai

S.M: kuch pal me koi kisee ko pasand nahi aajaata Maharani. Or wo to Aryanagar ke rajkumar hai to onhe rajkumariyo kee kamee kaha. Hame to hamaree Ananya kee chinta horahee hai

Nivi: Aap chinta ke ilawa or kar bhi kya karsakte hai. Dekhye me jaantee hu aapka asal irada kya hai. Yehi na ke aapke baad wo Rajkumar Harsh aake sab kuch le jaye. Lekin me ye nahi hone dungi

S.M: aap baat ko kahase kaha le jaarahee hai

Nivi: To or kya karu. Me aapse samajdaaree kee baat karahee hu or aap hai ke....Rajkumar Veer kee nazar Ananya pe per gayee hai to ab hamara farz banta hai ke Ananya ko Veer ke paas bheja jaaye. Zara sochye agar yeh milan hogaya to oske to bhaag khul jaaenge or hamare bhi. Wese to agar Rajkumar Dharam ne ose pasand kiya hota to or bhi acha hota per yeh Veer bhi theek hai. Aakhir ek hee khandaan ke to hai. Meree khushi ka to andaaza nahi laga sakte aap.

S.M: hame to sirf hamaree Ananya kee khushi kee chinta hai or kuch nahi

saying that he walks out of his room leaving an ecstatic Nivriti

Arayanagar Mahal

Veer and Dharam both are in Veer's room

Veer: aaj bohat maza aaya na

Dharam: Ab isme koi khaas baat to nahi thi

Veer: Me to bhool gaya ke tum kaha waha maza karne gaye the

Dharam: Hamare paas in sab ke liye koi waqt nahi hai. Tum jaante ho ke pitaji kee kaisee haalat hai Veer to kitnee zimmedaariya hai humpe.

Veer: Jaanta hu. Isliye tumhe waha legaya tha taake kuch pal apne liye bhi nikaal sako

Dharam: Yu faltoo me logo se milna or onse baate karna tumhaara shoke hoga Veer lekin hamara nahi. Hum agar logo ke saamne jhuk gaye to phir hamara kya maan rehjaaehga?

Veer: Me tumhe jhukne ke liye kaha kehraha hu. Me to sirf yeh kehraha tha ke agar tum wahape kisee bhi khoobsurat rajkumari ke saath baat karte to tumhaara kya jaata

Dharam: Baate hamesha hamare barabar waalo me hoti hai or waha kee koi bhi rajkumari hamare barabar nahi thi. Hum hamara waqt kyu barbaad karte Veer.

Veer: Insaan kee pehchaan oonch neech se nahi hoti Dharam. Wo to oske sanskaar or charitra se hoti hai. Ab rajkumari Ananya ko hee le lo. Wo bohat hee khoobsurat or saaf dil kee hai. On jesa haseen maine aaj tak nahi dekha. Kuch pal me hee mujhe yeh ehsaas huwa ke mujhe yeh rajkumari pasand aane lagi hai

Dharam: Sambhal ke Veer. Kuch pal bitaana or hamesha ke liye waqt bitaana alag baat hoti hai. Bohat kuch soch na parta hai.
Or hamare usool or parampara ke anusaar to yeh asambhav hai. Sumaina ke rajye ke log hamaree barabari kabhi nahi karsakte to hum tumhe aagha karahe hai ke abhi se sambhal jao.

Veer: Is dil pe kisee kee hukumat nahi chaltee Dharam or naahi yeh koi barabari ya oonch neech dekhta hai. Dekhta hai to sirf mohabbat.

Dharam: agar tumhaare yahi lakshan rahe na Veer to phir hame koi bara qadam uthaana parega. Or yeh hum ek bhai hone ke naate nahi karenge balke Aryanagar ke hone waale maharaj bankar karenge. Aage tumhaaree marzi

Dharam leaves

Veer: Tum chaahe jo bhi kaho or karlo Dharam magar me jaanta hu ke mera dil kya chahta hai

He smiles as he remembers Ananya again and gets lost in her thoughts.

Sumaina

The maharaj is sitting alone worried about everything when Sia comes

Sia: Pitaji aap itnee raat gaye yaha kya karahe hai?

S.M: kuch nahi, bus soch rahe the

Sia: Hmmm....samajh gayee. Aap zaroor phirse hum sab ke baare me chinta karahai honge.

S.M: to or kya kare? Jab tak aap sab kee shaadi nahi hojaatee tab tak hum chintit hee rahenge. Aap sab kee khushi hee mayene rakhti hai hamare liye.

Sia: hum jaante hai pitaji lekin aap kyu aisa sochte hai ke hum sab khush nahi? Bhagwaan ka diya huwa sab kuch hai hamare paas to phir...aap chinta mat kijye

S.M: Is waqt to hame hamaree Ananya kee chinta horahee hai, kya wo khush hai?

Sia: oskee khushi me bayaan nahi kar paaoongi. Aakhir me oska sapno ka rajkumar aahee gaya

S.M: Per Sia kya yeh theek hai. Wo Aryanagar ke rajkumar or hum Sumaina ke...

Sia: To kya huwa pitaji? Hum jaante hai ke Rajkumar Veer aise nahi hai or wo Ananya ko bohat pasand karne lage hai

S.M: Phir bhi hame bohat chinta horahee hai

Sia: Aap ziada mat sochye. Hum jaante hai ke Ananya ke saath kabhi kuch bura hohee nahi sakta. Rajkumar Veer pe hame pura bharosa hai.

Sia assures the maharaj and he is relieved for the time being.

Sia thought: Rajkumar Veer pe to hame pura bharosa hai per Rajkumar Dharam pe bilkul nahi.

End of part.