Definitely Yes, Maybe I- (AR) pt1- 13 - Page 31

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi bheegi,
o wht an amazing update!!!
anjali n riddhima sure remind me ov my sister n myself... so far anjali's character is as if ur narrating my sisters life.... lol... she luvs meeting new people, trying new things out!!! n deres me lyke riddhima - mre reserved towards new people, nt wantin 2 try new fings which im nt comfortable wiv... lol
armaan is sucha flirt, my god..... openly flirting wiv her... wel, its nt a crime 2 flirt as he does nt mean any harm afterall...i feel as if riddhima is timidated by armaans charm.... doesnt reali knw wht 2 do... hahaha.. armaans after affects!!!
reali want 2 knw wht hapens nxt, since her dreams almost turning 2 reality... which i believe she wants 2 cum tru as wel!!!!
i wonder if anjali wud help riddhima change her mind bout her life partner.. *fingers crossed*.. frankly speaking if i read anymore bout rahul ill most likely fall asleep.... lol... unfortunately, i knw a few people hu r like rahul.. urghh n dey cn defo b a bore....
i cnt believe riddhima 4gt 2 cal rahul... *rolling wiv laughter*... i gues she 4gt since she saw her 'david' n had lost al her senses n d fact dat shes engaged!!! i must say armaans dialogues were jus amazing n so true...!!!!
im sure their dream wiv armaan wil b unforgettable 4 all.... haaaiiii... i luvd d way u portrayed anjali's frustration regarding riddhimas sermon... 'engaged-to-be-married'....
i fink rahul needs mre ov d zing in life than riddhima... or shud i say garam masala.... lol
so excited 4 d nxt part....
luv sana
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey!!
very nice part!!
scenes bet AR in Italy r nice...
their conversation is coooooool!!
Ridz showing her engaement ring inderectly is sooooooooooo funny!!!

now tht ridz's dream is going 2 b true abt her David!!!

it will b tooo sweet move in the story!!

make the other part sooon!!!

can't wait!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey amazin part..luvd AR conversatn..update soon..
thanx fr PM sweety..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi di
first of all i m srry for replying so late, was out of town
d update was superb
d double meaning statements left me in splits
ridhi is in for a big big change😆
tattoos loved how armanoo defered frm d perfect david
anji is 2 cool
dis trip will change ridhi life ie wholly turn it upside down
anshu
Edited by someanshu2008 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

WINE ROMANCE, PVT JET.. TREMEMDOUS PRT... JUS SUPERB N BRILLIANT.. THNXX, 4 D PM.. UPDATE SOON

Thanls Lakshmi😊
thanks prajaya and saira_1😊
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AMAZING....loved this part......hopefully somethings good happens in between them soon.....its gonna be great....cant wait till the next part so pls update soon!.....n thank u very much for the pm!
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Thanks DMG 123....a lot will happen 4 sure😳
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~@$hm@~

Hey Bheegi!

Read your first part and got totally hooked!! Read part 2-3 just now since was a bit busy these days and O M G, I totally love it!!

Thanks Asma!😊

Ridz calling him "his David" was totally amazing!! I'm so loving her character, resembles me a bit : )
The way you wrote about her bowled over "Armaano" was brilliant!
and the fact that she writes poetry in her diary , awww =]
yes she is a chupi rustam 4 sure😊

Coming to part 3 I was left totally amazed..I LOVED the whole conversation between Armaan-Anjie-Ridz..It was fun to read! Armaan is quite witty there, Im liking him too though!
armaan is def a smooth operator here😳

Ill come to my favourite parts!

he drawled amorously, 'have water with the man who gave you that beautiful ring.'


He just said it! Totally loved that!

yes, he could care less if ridz is engaged.....😊 let's see how serious is he though



'Riddhima,' he offered me the glass of wine the waiter had just placed on the table, 'try this'..you will feel better''by the way'the word Romance originated from the Latin word Romanice'..to speak in Roman'..I meant the language'' you misunderstood me'..or maybe that's what you were hoping to do there.' He teased me with his eyes, and poured himself a glass of the wine too

He is cheeky!!

u bet he is! He might be enjoying teasing ridz...imagine her shocked expressions😆


What I really meant to say was ''how did you know my dream?' I couldn't believe that my vivid dream on the train about us flying in a plane over a beautiful countryside was actually not a dream anymore.


I found this really sweet! Shes trying to nderstand her hidden wishes.

yes her dreams have been very secretive so far....will she ever acknowledge them openly??





'You will feel better with a full stomach'.trust me,' he touched my elbow ever so lightly and gazed at me. Something about his calm expression and his touch convinced me to stay.


This showed that he did care for her aw : ) well he sure knows how to pull her strings


I felt a pang of jealousy as Anjali kept ooh-ing and aah-ing after Armaan's departure.


She should know the reason of jealousy soon =)

she is lucky that anji is not competing here

'May be,' I smiled and dozed off in the car, exhausted and worn out from jet lag, shopping, wine and rich food. As soon as my head touched the back of the seat, my vivid dream about Armaan and me flying over the open fields and he bending over to kiss me came back once again'..


Dreams ; the place to rest in. Loving it : )


You write very well and I enjoy every bit of it : )

Your new reader welcome aboard and hope to 'see' u regularly

Asma


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Wow, talk of instant mutual chemistry😳. I love Armaan/Armano, but how can ridz prefer the polished version to the 'bad-boy' look 😕? I think she's still lying to herself. In his suave avatar, he was a disturbing yet still fairly reasonable object of attraction for her but in this avatar; she no longer has that excuse which might account in part for her discomfort. Ok enough analysis 😆 I loved how ridz flashed her ring to deter him only to have the tables neatly turned on her. Armaan's question of whom exactly she was trying to convince was so spot on ⭐️ 'so was Angie's observation that life was meant to be lived.[/quote]

Thanks sea_nyx.... Ridz is more used to seeing and hanging out with the business type of men and not men with tattoos 😆😆 but now she will be forced to 'see' beyond the external looks😳

[quote=namelesssr]Very enchanting update, Bheegi 😊 Don't particularly like flirts... but Armaan ke liye sab maaf 😆... the way he had Ridhhima all flustered, searching for words
Wonderful [/quote] Thanks namelesssr.....when the flirt is armaan, all bets are off😆😆
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Thanks a bunch for the PM!

Ahha... Riddhima is the goodie two shoes, isn't it? She... seems to prefer being perfect, mistakes are a big fat no no... (that's so annoying really)

And then Anjali... wow, total opposite. It's so weird how two siblings growing up in the same family can be so different. Anyways, I'm totally enjoying the story! Can't waiiiiiit for the next part!

Thanks Zainab. Yes, Ridz's perfect life is being threatened big time now😆
UR absolutely right, how can 2 siblings be so different.....we are all born with our personalities wired in....and we can't change that, can we?😊
[quote=ttimpy]thanks ttimpy.....u know i heard this line for the first time from my hubby too😆😆...he still believes in this phenomenon😆
well he certainly knows that variety adds spice to life and is busy promoting it..................and as charity begins from home so does promotion..............lolzzzzzzzzzz[/quote]
Yes...ur right....charity does begin at home and yes, he does religiously follow that principle😆😆
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part!!
they r knowing each other!!
good thing!!
update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
[quote=coolpal]hey bheegi di, absolutely loved this part, really like armaan's character, such a flirt, and wow the advice Anjie gives is really good and i just love ur dialogues especially the chemistry experiment one, lol. was it just me or did this part seem short, i think it was cuz i took a break and read it in 2 parts, but it was just too good, i was hoping u would continue w/ the whole trip with armaan in the jet, but i guess that would be asking for too many good scenes in one update!! Anyway looking forward to the next part, update soon!!! [/quote]
Thanks cool pal...i kept the part short as it had a lot of important dialogues and i did not want Armaan's lines to get overshadowed by the flow of the story....don't worry the Jet part will be next😃
thanks Kat...it's an honor for me as a wonderful writer like u are reading my ff😊😊
thanks aishar, armaanridz and Mahru😊
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hi Beeghi,

Wow, sixer....They are going to Seina......Aramn drooling over Ridz...poor girl, can imagine her distress.......trying to show that she is engaged, but in reality she needs that assurances more than anyone....
Loved Angie's attitute:

Is there a law against checking the menu again once you have already placed your order at a restaurant?'

so true, but I guess thats what most Indian girls would do, stop checking the menu.....really Beeghi, this was so innovative

I want to go to Italy, can I get this version of Armanno there???

Thanks Jodubai....yes Ridz will be torn big time now...poor girl😕 I am glad u liked that statement....my hubby follows this rule and i could not help adding it here😆😆😆 We would all love to meet an Armaano somewhere....at least i can live that dream thru this ff😳
[quote=desiqt8806]armaano! lol he is soooooo hotttt and cute and such a flirt lol!!
it was soo funny how ridz kept on tellin armaan she is engaged...or rather remindin herself that she is engaged to rahul!
rahul and riddhima are soo boring and dull!
armaan and riddhima would soo hott and sizzling and full of life! lol!
its soo cute how riddhima views armaan as her david! lol she is adorable!
armaan is so bold and openly flirting!! and i loved that lol!! he is too godd!
great parts!!! can't wait for more :)

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Thanks Rima....yes Armaan is def a big flirt and knows his way with women😳 UR right R+R=boring
A+R=sizzling😳
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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