OMG Di this part was like sizziling.....i mean i agree thats notthe right adjective here but the way u penned the whole restaurant scene.....the super hunk Armaan Mallik and his entire interaction with the gupta ladies made the part sizziling...literally...such a brilliantly penned part Di!!!
Thanks Jia....u always floor me with ur flattering commentsNice to meet you, Signora.' His voice softened a bit, with an Italian lilt in his 'signora.' As I nodded gently, I felt my fingers being gripped inside his palm, 'HI! I am Anjali's sister'.R'Riddhima Gupta.' I wouldn't say that our handshake sent shivers down my spine or I felt goose bumps all over my body, a clich'd statement I had read in many a romantic novel, but if there was anything like an out-of-body-experience, I think I had just felt it for the first time in my life. Something about his hand was very comforting; at that moment I forgot my reservations about the artwork on his arms. I felt my heart thud against my chest as he refused to let go of my hand.
Like reading the start itself i was like left speechless....it was such a treat to read and left me in awe ofur superb writing talent yet again!!
OMG this para....the lines....out0of-body experience.....and herefusing to let go of her hand.....excellent description of their first close interaction!!
Each time his deep blue eyes rested on my face, my heart leapt a few hundred times. I felt awkward as I felt his eyes caress the upper half of my body. His gaze shifted from my eyes to my lips, pausing there leisurely, then dropped to my neck and then taking their sweet time to meander away from my deep V- necked dress. It was all my fault- I cursed myself. He had probably figured out how insanely I had been drooling and ogling him on the flight. My only recourse was now to put up my defenses and be on guard from revealing any more of my feelings.
Haha omggggg i cant stop exclaiming at each para.....😆 hewas checking her out?? and she now put up her guard....this is simply so delightfully penned....its outstanding. Sowas it like she checked himout so now his turn???😆 i bet armaan isthinking, she gave me the green signal so why should i not take initiative now😳😆
'have water with the man who gave you that beautiful ring.'
🤣 Gosh wat is this guy???? Loving his character here more then ever...it has to be one of the most brilliant characters of Armaan ever penned!!👏awww...ur so sweet. i guess in our imaginations, we can make armaan as desirable as we want
'Not Italian wines''maybe American wines do,' he murmured huskily and stared at my engagement ring as if mocking at it.
🤣 There again.....her chain of thoughts.....i have to admit i feel like giving u a standing ovation for this!!👏
and why do I think you need to keep reminding yourself that you are engaged?'😆
I amwondering the same....why is reminding herself of that super perfect stuck up fiance when u hav him sitting in front of u....only if i was in her place!!😆 because it is not a definite yes, but a maybe at this point😉
'Does borrowing a phone count as being unfaithful too?' He smiled mischievously.
Ok this has tobe heights of flirting ......seriously he is such an open flirt and our not-so experienced Ridz is gonna hav tough time keeping her thoughts in control!!😆 poor ridz....in real life i would probably bolt😆
may be not improvement'..but it definitely needs some zing''some seasoning'..a little flavoring'don't you think so?
Ahh i so want to see wat zing the italian hunk will add to their lives.....brilliant update Di....it was such a marvelous treat to read really....great update....made me more then eager for next part.😳
thanks for ur wonderful comments as always Jia😊😊
love
Jia
