Definitely Yes, Maybe I- (AR) pt1- 13

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KAT

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Wow read all 3 parts love how u are taking this...

Love Kat

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sony_123

nice update as usual👏. Armaan is soo cool😊😊 and ridhima is soo reserved😕😕.

they are opposites for sure😊

that makes me an Italian Born Confused Desi'.or IBCD.' 😆.

'have water with the man who gave you that beautiful ring.'🤣

he glanced at me mischievously, 'may be even get inspired to write poetry😊😊''and may be find some romance😉.'😆😆😆 Ridz need to keep reminding herself that she is engaged?🤣. Gupta sisters are poles apart. while ridz is soo reluctant to go with a stranger-armaan(ofcourse she has other reasons😉) anjali is soo excited to go with him😉

Wow Ridz, anjali armaan will fly in his private jet!!!!😊😊😊. anji is never afraid to have an adventure whereas ridz likes to play it safe and is not a risk taker

but somehow I felt 'David' was mine and could not fathom seeing my sister fall for him. - poor ridz, she likes to be with armaan and had already fallen for him😉 but she cannot accept it😆. i wonder if armaan is feelingthis way. you never mentioned his thoughts. may be i could see them oops read them😉 in next part😊😊. "I just witnessed the world's greatest chemistry experiment in front of my eyes dear'" ☺️😉😆. remember this story is ridz's POV so what we find about armaan is thru ridz😉

As soon as my head touched the back of the seat, my vivid dream about Armaan and me flying over tAAhe open fields and he bending over to kiss me came back once again'..- ridz is too much. whenever armaan is near her she tried to ignore😡😡 him and when he left she is dreaming about him😡. ofcourse dreams are not in her control😉. i dont know how she would resist armaan in their trip to Siena😆😆😆 U bet! She is in for a roller coaster ride of emotions and feelings now😳 THANks Sonia

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
wooow great intro
lkin 4wrd to readin more

luvin da sound of it already

updte sooon

luv nizx

Thanks Niz😊

[quote=sweet_jay_fan]

great part sweets

I think i already fell in luv with Italion confused Desi Armaan! lol so cute

so he's already flirting with Ridz? And ANji is with a guy for 2 YRS! From what u explained she seems like Armi- flirt. Anyways gr8 part plllllllllllllllz cont soon

u didnt pm this time and im ok with that, no problem sweets plz dont PM me ; I will be keeping an eye on this FF anyways

Update the AK on too

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Thanks sweet jay fan...sorry i must have overlooked ur name on my PM list...will remember next time....anji has been with atul for a year only, not 2 years. Armaan was def flirting with ridz big time but let's see if he keeps it up or does he really mean it?

[quote=aravi]heyyy sangeeta diiii!!!!!!!!😃wat a fabulous part dii!!!!!!! i'm in complete awe of urs wat a part n armaan toh is sooo irresistible here😉😆 hehe....he really freaked ridzy out !!!!!!! n angie is really sumthing she n armaan r a bit similar i feel!!!!!

man armaan is soo outging n never leaves a chance to provoke n has no problem wid her being engaged 😲 n now hez making her do wat she hasnt done in her entire lyftime i mean she alwaz would have played safe naaa😆😆.... but afterall who d hell can resist him😉!!!!!!!!!!!! n wow a ride in a private jet wid such a hunk! di dis ridzy of urs quite insane to even give dis journey a second thot!!!!! well thnks 4 d PM

luv aravi[/quote]

Thanks aravi....yes ridz is def torn between her 'play it safe' ideals and now what her heart desires....she is freaked out for sure😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: tanasha1993
IBCD+ABCD=greatest chemistry ever;D

You have left me wanting for more now after that fabulous part, signora😉

thanks tanasha....i am glad u liked that part....and yes their chem is already exploding😳

'My pleasure'..tasting is always available'..and we don't even charge for it,' he smiled again.

Armaano was so hitting on ridz....such a hot flirt🤣 yes he is....but how serious is he?

Wonder why armaano is getting so attracted to ridz until he wants to bring them to siena with him...seems like love at first sight. let's see why? May be because ridz gave him such looks on the plane...he thinks she is latoo over him😉

Anji rocks completely in this FF man, just love her! yes she is a good sis

'Ridz'..don't try to act innocent'.I just witnessed the world's greatest chemistry experiment in front of my eyes dear'..and trust me I was not part of that experiment.'

She stole the words out of my mouth, it was the worlds greatest chem experiment ever...with a great exothermic reaction😆 good point....i bet atul the scientist would have agreed about the experiment😆

Do cont soon

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aishar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#295

hey gud 1 do pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#296

Hi Beeghi,

Wow, sixer....They are going to Seina......Aramn drooling over Ridz...poor girl, can imagine her distress.......trying to show that she is engaged, but in reality she needs that assurances more than anyone....

Loved Angie's attitute:

Is there a law against checking the menu again once you have already placed your order at a restaurant?"

so true, but I guess thats what most Indian girls would do, stop checking the menu.....really Beeghi, this was so innovative

I want to go to Italy, can I get this version of Armanno there???

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Jia

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Posted: 16 years ago

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OMG Di this part was like sizziling.....i mean i agree thats notthe right adjective here but the way u penned the whole restaurant scene.....the super hunk Armaan Mallik and his entire interaction with the gupta ladies made the part sizziling...literally...such a brilliantly penned part Di!!!

Like reading the start itself i was like left speechless....it was such a treat to read and left me in awe ofur superb writing talent yet again!!

Nice to meet you, Signora." His voice softened a bit, with an Italian lilt in his 'signora.' As I nodded gently, I felt my fingers being gripped inside his palm, "HI! I am Anjali's sister….R…Riddhima Gupta." I wouldn't say that our handshake sent shivers down my spine or I felt goose bumps all over my body, a clichd statement I had read in many a romantic novel, but if there was anything like an out-of-body-experience, I think I had just felt it for the first time in my life. Something about his hand was very comforting; at that moment I forgot my reservations about the artwork on his arms. I felt my heart thud against my chest as he refused to let go of my hand.

OMG this para....the lines....out0of-body experience.....and herefusing to let go of her hand.....excellent description of their first close interaction!!

Each time his deep blue eyes rested on my face, my heart leapt a few hundred times. I felt awkward as I felt his eyes caress the upper half of my body. His gaze shifted from my eyes to my lips, pausing there leisurely, then dropped to my neck and then taking their sweet time to meander away from my deep V- necked dress. It was all my fault- I cursed myself. He had probably figured out how insanely I had been drooling and ogling him on the flight. My only recourse was now to put up my defenses and be on guard from revealing any more of my feelings.

Haha omggggg i cant stop exclaiming at each para.....😆 hewas checking her out?? and she now put up her guard....this is simply so delightfully penned....its outstanding. Sowas it like she checked himout so now his turn???😆

"have water with the man who gave you that beautiful ring."

🤣 Gosh wat is this guy???? Loving his character here more then ever...it has to be one of the most brilliant characters of Armaan ever penned!!👏

"Not Italian wines……maybe American wines do," he murmured huskily and stared at my engagement ring as if mocking at it.

🤣 There again.....her chain of thoughts.....i have to admit i feel like giving u a standing ovation for this!!👏

and why do I think you need to keep reminding yourself that you are engaged?"😆

I amwondering the same....why is reminding herself of that super perfect stuck up fiance when u hav him sitting in front of u....only if i was in her place!!😆

"Does borrowing a phone count as being unfaithful too?" He smiled mischievously.

Ok this has tobe heights of flirting ......seriously he is such an open flirt and our not-so experienced Ridz is gonna hav tough time keeping her thoughts in control!!😆

may be not improvement…..but it definitely needs some zing……some seasoning…..a little flavoring…don't you think so?

Ahh i so want to see wat zing the italian hunk will add to their lives.....brilliant update Di....it was such a marvelous treat to read really....great update....made me more then eager for next part.😳

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Jia

Edited by jia.. - 16 years ago

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sweet_JAY_FAN

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Posted: 16 years ago

#298

[quote=sweet_jay_fan]

great part sweets

I think i already fell in luv with Italion confused Desi Armaan! lol so cute

so he's already flirting with Ridz? And ANji is with a guy for 2 YRS! From what u explained she seems like Armi- flirt. Anyways gr8 part plllllllllllllllz cont soon

u didnt pm this time and im ok with that, no problem sweets plz dont PM me ; I will be keeping an eye on this FF anyways

Update the AK on too

bheegi wrote:

[/quote] no plz dont make it harder for yuorself i really dont need PMs😃I will bec hecking this FF daily to make sure how its doing so no worries plz i want to make ur life easy as possible😃No PM for me😊 But thanks fo being so considerate anyways

btw plz dont call me sweet_jay_fan i like being called Shriya, my name😆lol jk plz call me Shriya if u dont mind😳

Edited by sweet_JAY_FAN - 16 years ago

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mahru

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Posted: 16 years ago

#299

hey di

wowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was rellllyyyyyyyyy cho cho sweeeeeeeeettttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳

grt prt di

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru