Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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Saba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#591

hey

loved the part

so kripa is falling for angad

seva ho rahi thee lol

continue soon

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Nishttha Nath

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Posted: 16 years ago

#592

it blowed my mind... amazing part..
cont soon.

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Simone

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Posted: 16 years ago

#593

AWESOME PART BHEEGI!

love how kripa is getting pulled towards him! hopefully there's no twist where she misunderstands him and starts thinking that all of this was just to get her in bed! that would be BAD BAD

and good to see another transformation in angad's character.. not only is he turning into a better person, but he's also thinking about how he USED to be when he compares himself to misti!

hoping to see angad and kripa getting closer soon!

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#594

relationships are improving.. both the relations... angad is become more sensitive day by day.. thats pretty interesting... but i am not able to get to where the story is progressing...

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Sweta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#595

Awwww di........its justtttt tooo Awesome part...😉👏

seems like a Angad changed....😛i loved the way he take care of Kripa....😉😳

Angad n Kripa scene was justtt toooo HOT n CUTE....😉😳

just hate msihty.....she is sooo digusting...🤢😡

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#596

Aww such a lovely update Di! All those small gestures from Angad's side made my heart skip a beat...It was tooo cute--I was bowled over by Angad's caring and sweet side..A lot of different shades to his character are being revealed as the story progresses--all thanks to Kripa's presence!! Angad interacting with kids as a normal human being, setting his ego aside--It's just all because of Kripa = D

Angad-Rhea are climbing up the ladder with their relationship! Aww, I could so imagine Angad acting all father-like with Rhea!!!

I LOVE the songs Nihaal Ho Gayi and Teri Ore...You definitely have a good taste in music Di! I think it's also because we're both Taureans...lol....

His experience with women told him that a jealous woman was worse than a serpent.

Misthi sure is like this! Aww I love seeing Angad's overprotective side!

OMG, that physiotheraphy AK scene was just like mesmerizing!!! You did a great job with dialogues there! In fact, that scene had the best dialogues of the update:

'THAT HURTS!' She screamed.

'First time is always painful,' he grinned mischievously.
'I'll kill you!' She cried in pain and threw the roll of crepe bandage on his face.

'You have already killed me'..I am just waiting for the post mortem now,' he winked playfully and chuckled loudly.

🤣🤣 🤣🤣LOL! Angad sure has an awesome way with words, or should i say you? LOL...

'How sexy!' Anita commented and nudged Manan's elbow.

'I can do that too'..you want me to try?'

'SHUT UP!' Anita gave him a dirty look and moved away.

🤣 Okay, this had me in splits..Like seriously! Seriously, I don't know you manage to mix in humor with your updates, but I LOVE it!!

Awesome update Di! I Loved it...My head is hurting right now, but right when I saw you updated, I couldn't resist opening to the update and reading it! Now im gonna go get some sleep! LOL

Continue whenever convienient!!

Love, Anita

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: deeya123
fab part di
luved angad rhea's relationship

angad kripa scene was simply brilliant and very well written

waitin for next part

Thanks Deeya😊...i am glad u liked it

[quote=armaanridz4eva]awesome part once again

love the change in Angad slowly surfacing!!

waiting for the next part

Sania

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thanks sania...yes everyone is changing at least for now😉

[quote=rajeevskitu]

hey di!! superb part!!😃...... angad had definetly changed (aah..... mayb😆).........hehe..... but it's so cute whn he takes care of rhea n kripa....... especially rhea...... he takes care of her e1 without he, himself noticing...... sooooo sweet......... n Mr.Attitude suddenly transformed into Mr.Protective huh?? hehe..... hez just scared that ppl will do the same to kripa wot he had done as a youngster....... mayb somehow hez thinking of the saying "jo karni, sow barni😉" ......... thanks kitu...yes angad is going through a lot of introspection now that rhea and kripa are in his life

and mishty is sooo disgusting🤢...... but once or twice e1 i felt happy bcoz i got some oppurtunity as others were ill or they quit....... now don't tell me e1 i'm like mishty😕........ but i cudn't help but laugh whn angad was wondering if he was amle mishty😆......... none of us are perfect are we??....as long as we realize our mistakes, that's what's important

so sparks r flying everywhr......love is in the air...... but the only problem is these 2 stubborn pig heads won't accept it so quickly😛........... maybe dance will help them express themselves😳

ok di! will wait for the next part!! take care......

but surprisingly (for me😆), i'm waiting more for the other ff...... i hope atleast u end that interval now that SWD is updated........ plz plz.... don't tell me u'll update SWD only again😕...... don't worry, DYM will be updated first😆...even i am anxious to write that one first

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[quote=sea_nyx]

wow bheegs, another amazing update as usual, awwwww angad is so cute these days, i feel like killng tht mishti and anita though 😡 god has anyone seen such money-minded witches😲 forget angad, don't they have any sense of loyalty to their group mate ????? [/quote]

thanks sea nyx. U know i sometimes feel sorry for celebrities as everyone around them is trying to take advantage of them...like anita and mishti here but unfortunately that's how the real world works😕

[quote=cutie_tajju]Hey Bheegi(Sangeeta) Di !!!

Awesum part !!!!

Will surely comment in detail later !! :):D

Cutie

[/quote] thanks cutie...take ur time dear...thanks 4 reading tho😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: saridena
hi bheegi di
rocking part di

angad and kripa r not fighting

the part was fun

i am expecting a storm in part di abt the press asking him questions and he was not listening

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

thanks soumya....enjoy the calm before the storm😊

@ thanks sameira😊

[quote=missypatel]right and rong????
naaah...i dunn think so!! its all right!! ahahha!!

okay..luved it!! d bondin betn Angad n rheas is adoarable...luved d knee hurt scene..!! :)
gud thinkin u didnt put much detail 2 d scenes...ull need 2 save dt for cumin parts..yehh!!

grt update!!
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Thanks nijal....that statement has an important bearing on the future of the story😉. As this story is a short one, i might not describe things in detail😳

[quote=rima791]amazing part

love itttttttttttttttttttt

i love both of the songs too much specially teri ore haila its beautiful just like AK, very suitable choice

love the knee hurting scene

angad is getting naughty with kripa and all

nice to know kripa is bit relaxed and not getting mad about angad's bindaas "bols"

do cont soon

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thanks rima😊...yes i luv those songs too. ur right, each time i hear teri ore song, i always think of AK😳

AK are acting more like friends now

[quote=sweet_honey]hey...awesome part...awww lovda-r scene in mornin....nn lovd a-kz dancin scenes aswel...lovd it wen angad was getinn naughy wid ha behind closed doors hehe.....plz connnt sooon

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thanks sweet honey....😊

[quote=krina_17]Di, This was short.....

I loved the friendliness and warmness in their realtinship...

AK and rhea there were cute... and I m sure soon there is going to news of controversies with anita's story, but please don't make Kripa think otherwise.....

I Love their pair and joking parts... nyways is good and very affectionate episode with Rhea helping them to come together.....

Keep up the fantastic work, tc

krina[/quote]

thanks krina...let's see if any misunderstandings will happen or not😕...yes they all will get closer soon😊

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#599

heyy i love your part 8 and 9 plzz contuied soon

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namelesssr

@namelesssr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#600

[quote=bheegi]"Haan….jaante ho aadmi log jab aurat ki seva karte hain tho sharam se darwaaze bandh kar lete hain…..aur jab seva karwaate hain tho khullam khulla karvaate hain." She chuckled, "aakhir ek aurat ki seva karne se unki mardaangi kum ho jaayegi na?"[/quote] That was a good one, Bheegi😆😆... one that only we married ones appreciate. Wonderfully expressed!

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