Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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sweetaddiction

@sweetaddiction

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Posted: 16 years ago

#611

niceee-- cute litl part-- liked the whole seva bit !
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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part bheegi
i really loved the way u have shown the change in angads charachter since he met ria and kripa he finally is getting comfartable with ria and acting like her father.

the scene were angad goes to collect kripa nd plays with those kids was amazing.

i really enjoyed the way u have shown the chemistry between angad and kripa.

Thanks iqbal neha1 The change in angad's character is important to show as that's important for the rest of the story. AK chamistry always sizzles- on and off screen (in our ffs😆)

[quote=sheldev]Hi Sangeeta;

What a great update...Thanks for the PM BTW...

Wow AK's scene was so damn good...the way he was flirting with her and then blowing a generous

kiss towards her was so romantic....😳😳...loved their changing room scene...very well written as always...👏👏

Angad playing with the kids was so good as well...he is trying to be better and not that egositic as he was first potrayed thanks to Kripa....😆😆

fantastic update...pls pls continue soon...want to see more teasing,eyelocks, passionate gazes....😉😉

thanks dear....

shel[/quote]

Thanks shel.....yes more eyelocls, passion and intense scenes coming up....but will they ever confess their true feelings??😉

[quote=sweet_mittal]hey di it was awesome and wonderful part

awwwwwwwwwwww angad is so cute he is softening his behavior and love towards rhea and kripa

i love his this behavior he really cares for them i hope that he and kripa really confess soon to eachother

awwwwwwwwww he came to pick her up and also he is gonna drop them off too

i feel sorry and sad for kripa i wonder what's wrong with her that she really gets upset soon

i hate that misty she needs a lesson

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal[/quote]

Thanks mittal...kripa has a lot of finacial and emotional burden at home, also her chacha had treated her badly as u will find out+ she had a poor opinion of angad. That's why she was so rude to him but now AK are become friends so she has softened up a bit. let's see if they will ever confess their true feelings😳 Mishti is helping them indirectly so let's leave her there😆

thanks Harjot and sweetoo😊

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Niyati Joshi

@noyonika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#613

hey bheegi!!!!!

the oart was very nice and breezy.....making u happy while reading it!!! :)

i love the love that's blossoming between AK...the best part about every love story is the falling in love part....every single person can relate to it!!!! and its the same here!!! kripa is soo smitten!!! hehe...

angad is full on acting like the charmer!!! the ultimate flirt and a guy who'd kripa not even dream to date!!! hehe..lol!!

the story rite now is at a very good place!!! everything is like falling in place for them!!!

i especially was amused when angad kept looking at kripa during the dance class and kripa kept giving him sweet smiles!!! that was a very cute detail u added to the story!!! :)

goes without sayong i'll be waiting for ur next update...hope its soon!!!!

love,
niyati..

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: noyonika
hey bheegi!!!!!

the oart was very nice and breezy.....making u happy while reading it!!! :)

i love the love that's blossoming between AK...the best part about every love story is the falling in love part....every single person can relate to it!!!! and its the same here!!! kripa is soo smitten!!! hehe...

angad is full on acting like the charmer!!! the ultimate flirt and a guy who'd kripa not even dream to date!!! hehe..lol!!

the story rite now is at a very good place!!! everything is like falling in place for them!!!

i especially was amused when angad kept looking at kripa during the dance class and kripa kept giving him sweet smiles!!! that was a very cute detail u added to the story!!! :)

goes without sayong i'll be waiting for ur next update...hope its soon!!!!

love,
niyati..

thanks Niyati. I am glad u like the way AK are gradually coming close to each other....friendship laced with attraction and passion😳 Thanks for appreciating the 'falling in love' phase and ur right sometimes that is more attractive than love itself😊. These little detials are important for the future of the story as u will see later. Will update DYM next😊

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#615

I just heard this hilarious song from the new SRK movie 'Rab ne bana di jodi' Even though it's late for me to insert this song in my story, I would like to share it with you as the theme of my story is 'dance'

It's called 'Dance pe chance' Imagine Kripa and Rhea teaching our pappu some dance steps:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8noOJDhxGnI[/YOUTUBE]

Enjoy! I was in splits when i heard the song

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*MitiRasmalai*

@*MitiRasmalai*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#616

hahahahah.😆😆😆..woww.....LOLL...

I wonder what the video will look like...lolll... Looking forward to it....

And I agree this song would have been perfect for your story loll...i could just imagine Kripa and Rhea both teasing Angad in this song...hahaha....

thanks for sharing...really is a halarious song...lolll

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#617

🤣 LMAO! WOW, Di that song had me in splits too as I imagined Kripa and Rhea teaching our pappu Angad to dance..LOL....I could visualize it all!

That song has a NICE beat though..I like it now..LOL..IM gonna listen to it over and over again now...

I hope you update DYM soon! I need a treat after having the worst friday in my life..Had a high fever, got an injection which still hurts my arm and got my blood tested...it wasn't the best day ever...I feel much better now with the medications I'm taking though...and your update would make it even better = D...Hopefully you'll update DYM today or tommorow...

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tehreem

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Posted: 16 years ago

#618

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tht was such a sweet and nice part i luved it angad has changed soo much just becoz of rhea and kripa continue soon waiting 4 the next part

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#619

waoh di👍🏼 really ur update and this vedio is superb⭐️ so sweet😊😉 so they become gud friend cool😎 plz continue it soon😊 and sorry😭😭😭 for late reply😳 plz forgive me😳

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