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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1 - The Beginning

Some 21 years earlier...


with a young couple

-Gasp-

"She's beautiful .. "

"Yeah, she has your eyes. Emerald green and striking.
..
Why are you crying? " asked the young man.

" Because.. of fate" she answered.
"She'll never know who her parents were, we'll be gone soon. I'll never see her grow up.."

"Padma.. you knew this from the beginning. "

"Yes, Shashank, i did. But she's changed me. I don't want to leave her. I want to stay and fight."

"I can't change what happened and you know that. I love her too, but we have to do this. Her life is at stake. If we dont give her up, they'll come after us and then take her too and make her live through hell. I'm leaving her with Abhimanyu. He'll take good care of her."

"Yeah right. None of us can take good care of her." Padma replied sarcastically.
" We fight for our lives everyday. With guns Shashank, guns! I've murdered with these same hands that i'm holding her with."

"But with Abhi at least she'll be out of danger. No one suspects him to be a part of all these killings and gang fights. He's the secretary of State. They have security everywhere and he'll keep her with him only till he can keep her safe. He promised me."

"He better."

Sigh. "And soon she'll be part of this world as well. She has too. God this frail baby girl of mine will fight and kill one day. Can you imagine?"

Padma let out a chuckle. "Of course i can. That's how i started frail and skinny. But now look. Im one of the best fighters around."

"Haha. You never leave a chance to praise yourself do you?"

"Not once.
..

What should we name her?"

.

"Riddhima...
Riddhima Gupta."


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thanks for commenting you guys. it's really helpful! and i appreciate it alot.
Part 1 is quite short. and the other one might be too. But i hope i can update regulary. But school is on so forgive me in advance for delaying. Do tell me if you like it and whether i should continue.

Characters you've probably already guessed as AR fanfic. I guess i am more comfortable writing about them. Dont know.
Anyways stop my blabbing. Do comment if you liked it !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Hey interesting first part, update soon. Mini
suvrati thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
hmmmn interesting again bt still didnt got any idea honey no probs i will in the time i read
thnx a lot fr the pm
plz now without delaying continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
really an awesome⭐️ touching one😳😳 plz continue it soon😊 and plz pm😳 me when u update it if u dont hv any problem😳

"Ice is a cream, luv is a dream but r friendship is evergreen. Don t make friends bfore understanding & don t break a friendship after misunderstanding."


360913 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
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wow totally interesting ridz gona grow up to murder people definately a one to read. plzzz do pm me
luv iram
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks! 😊

Hey interesting first part, update soon.
Mini

thanks ! will do. 😊

hmmmn interesting again bt still didnt got any idea honey no probs i will in the time i read
thnx a lot fr the pm
plz now without delaying continue soon.

haha yes. but patience is a virtue.😆 i have to get through the background and you'll hopefully understand the story's concept more vividly. thanks!

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really an awesome⭐️ touching one😳😳 plz continue it soon😊 and plz pm😳 me when u update it if u dont hv any problem😳

"Ice is a cream, luv is a dream but r friendship is evergreen. Don t make friends bfore understanding & don t break a friendship after misunderstanding."


wow thank you so much!
will update soon. and pm you as well.! thanks again 😃

Originally posted by: ttimpy

hmmmmmmmmm............sounds interesting..........

hehe thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: rani 19

wow totally interesting ridz gona grow up to murder people definately a one to read. plzzz do pm me

luv iram

yup she's a born murderer. i'll put you on the pm list 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2 - Damn Fat Ass

2 years and 5 months later..

( 19 years ago)

"Riddhima .. RIDDHIMA GET BACK HERE!" shouted a man who looked in his late 30's.

"Damn it, that kid never stops running." he muttered to himself.

"Oh c'mon Abhi she's only 2 years old." sighed an old aged woman.

"Yeah and she's already turning this side of the house into a tornado god knows what the hell is were to happen if im gone for a few days dai jaan."

"Well who the hell told you to buy this damn huge house. It's just me, you, and her. We're not trying to fit in the whole indian population in here, so what's the point of it? " countered Dai Jaan irritatedly.

-History/Flashback

Dai jaan raised Abhimanyu and Shashank since they were a mere 5 and 3 years old. She is a pure muslim and these two children were caught in the midst of muslim-hindu riots. She never tried converting as she knew better. Never force your opinions or beliefs onto others. Her motto was to live and let live. And she was the most precious thing Abhi and Shashank had. She was poor all her life and the kids hadn't changed much. By the time they were 14 and 12 respectively they both started working trying to help their dai jaan with finances.

Abhimanyu was 16 and started doing well at the motorcycle shop he worked in for a year. He was fascinated by the gizmos. Speed, agility, was anything a teenage boy would want. And he knew all the motorcycles back and forth, left and right. Abhi was a genious. Anything he was interested in would immediately be planted into his brain without a second thought. His photographic memory proved quite well in his studies and he grew up with high marks and went into a prestigous law school. By the time he was 22 he was already one of the most influential people in india. And Dai jaan was damn proud of that fact.

Shashank on the other was also brilliant yet he lacked motivation. He always found a shortcut and that's what landed him in trouble. BIG trouble.

He was 15 at the time and trying to find work after being fired for stealing money.

....

"Man, all i did was borrow a little cash. So what if i didn't ask. It's not like that fat ass would have gave me the money anyways. What was i supposed to do?" mumbled Shashank.

Walking and talking to himself he finally stopped in an unknown area.

"What is this place?"

He heard a voice.

"HEY KID!" screamed someone from afar.

Shashank turned around getting ready to fight or get beat up.

"What are you doing in this part of the neighborhood kid. You don't belong here. And you wouldn't want to." said a man who seemed about 18, who was towering over Shashank by now.

"I was walking and didn't realize how far i went." stated a confident Shashank. He may be 15 but he was strong. His avid attention in kickboxing earned him a few metals and definitely some self-protection.

"Why don't run along and go home. These parts of the streets are too dangerous .--

"Nothing's too dangerous for me." Shashank spoke once again.

The strange man's laughter roared throughout what seemed to be the empty streets.

"Look kid, there's alot of stuff you don't know yet so i suggest you listen and go about your way before something bad happens."

THUMP

A high ego Shashank was fuming by now and socked the older man in his face. And blood came gushing out.

"Ugh." growled the strange man and took a few hasty steps back. His eyes were burning in rage.

But before he could fight back. --

BRRRRRRMMMMMMM

5 motorcycles came in an instant and surrounded the two men. All containing colors ranging from black and red to green and blue.

One of them got off and started cracking up. "Hahaha man look at your face Rohit. That kid blew your jaw man. Hahaha"

"Shut up. I was caught off guard. But now i'm ready." Rohit said.

BRRRRMMMMM

A hot pink motorcycle came and stopped right before Rohit...

Shashank gawked at it.

Who the hell drives a pink motorcycle? he thought.
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ok i know you guys probably want AR in it. But honestly speaking he's not going to be in the story for a while. Bear with me if you can and i'll try finishing the history as soon as possible. And all this is completely relevant to the story. Trust me. So don't just skim over it please.
I'll do a little bit more dialogue for the history then sum it up so we can get to Riddhima. And then to Armaan.
Again sorry about that.
Do reply if it was good or you liked it. And criticism is always welcome. So if you have anything to say please do.
thank you guys for commenting. will pm now.! thanks again. 😊
Edited by Bissu - 16 years ago
suvrati thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
hi bissu bt i am sure its nt ur name or it is
ok coming to the ff...1st thnx fr the pm
n ok so dont get scared ufcourse we want ar bt that can be possible only if the story continues so we surely gonna bear wid it
bt hey plz 1 suggestion make the prts longer so u cud finish the history fast n bring ar in to picture soon
plz ypdate fast cause i think ur ff is good n gonna be superb after ar comes into action.
bye tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice story n concept
liked it
coool parts
plz pm me when u update
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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pl. put me on the pm list...................it sounds like a thriller to me..........

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