°o The Kill o°| AR Part 26(12/02) - Page 3

thats my nickname. well some people call me that. my full first name is Bisma 😊

no prob. thanks alot for bearing with me. i was quite scared and a lil apprehensive at first. the longer parts might be a slight problem because i am on time restraints but i actually started writing the parts at my school when ever i have free time 😆 tried to make it longer. will try to finish the boring history, just need to establish a few things and get on to the real parts. thanks so much! your a sweetheart.

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey
nice story n concept
liked it
coool parts
plz pm me when u update
update soon

thanks prerna! (i hope thats your name 😆) will pm you. & update soon. trying to do a part everyday.

Originally posted by: ttimpy

pl. put me on the pm list...................it sounds like a thriller to me..........

will do ! 😊 yeah it's kind of a thriller i hope im able to thrill you guys hehe 😆 ok corny joke.

it's a basic action love story. thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: ~*~Rachu~*~

this is a cool ff...quite unique...lol i cant imagine padma or shashank as killers n tht...sounds kinda funny lol anyways will b waiting 4 the next part....is there any chance u could PM when the next parts up plz?

now that you say it . it is kind of wierd imagining them 😆. but the names are strictly for formality. as they are ridz parents in dmg. so i thought it would be better than to rename them. thanks for commenting and you'll be added to the pm list!

Originally posted by: rani 19

hey jus read part 2 n got to say ur ff is different from the rest which will make it jus as gud, no need to apologize about AR scences u need to lay down da foundations in order 4 us to understand as to y ridz has turnd out da way she has. do continue soon ur doing a gr8 job definately got my interest. luv iram

thanks alot! and thanks for understanding about the AR delay. 😃

pls continue soooooon

thanks mar! will continue soon! 😊

Part 3 - W O A H

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A hot pink motorcycle?!

Just as the thought formed in his mind the rider got off the bike in a swift movement. As they did, the body of the driver was revealed. The jacket was snug, white and tight-fitting. And the second skin-like jeans clung to the curvaceous body. With bike boots zipped up till her knees.

Shash was left in a daze. Whoever the driver was was definitely H-O-T.

He noticed the drivers back facing toward him and watched as the shiny black helmet came off to reveal jet-black silky hair that fell to the waist.

"W-O-A-H" he muttered.

Rohit who was paying extra attention to the exchanging glances made by the kid, smirked. He was used to people reacting that was to HER. She was gorgeous, no doubt about it but,..

interupting his thoughts ..

"A girl?.." questioned Shashank who thought in a murmur which was barely audible.

Upon hearing this the driver turned around to face the son of a bitch who had the nerve to speak in HER territory.

By now Shashank was captivated. Her milky skin glistened as the moonlight grazed her. Her mid-emerald dark green eyes were gorgeously perfect and..

"You think you're real smart huh?" she spoke.

"Eh?"

" ' A girl? ' " she repeated, mimicking his astonished expression.

"Oh.."

It was amazing, a once overly confident Shash was left speechless only to speak in monosyllables.

"What do you think you're doing here?"

"He's lost .. poor kid. tch tch. " Rohit interupted.

"Kid?" Shash suddenly repeated.

By the looks of it the girl standing a few feet away looked around his age, maybe younger.

"Leave." she stated plainly.

"Aww c'mon Padma. Let's have a little fun before sending him away." said Rohit.

"I'lll break all of your jaws if you touch me.

...

Right, RO-HIT" Shash sneered as he regained composure.

Padma turned her head sideways to look at Rohit , whose bottom cheek held a very big bruise and was changing colors momentarily. Her amazed emotions weren't shown on her blank face but came out with voice.

"Ro - .. BAHAHAHA" she burst out laughing. Even though she was still amazed, Rohit was a top fighter and ever since he brought her in no one could lay a finger on him. He was that strong and swift.

Rohit was embarrassed.

"F you kid"

"Oo he got a punch out of you. Nice.

..

Hmm maybe a little fun wouldn't be so bad." Padma said in between of taking off her jacket.

SHE's going to fight him?! No.. he thought. He can't fight a girl. He'd knock her out with one swing. It was a lose-lose situation. If she lost, they'd say it's because he was a guy. If he'd lose they'd make fun of him for losing to a girl.

Padma came forward abruptly and stood a good inch away from his face, catching him off balance.

"If you can touch me, then we'll let you go. If not then…" finishing off she took a step back and unfolded her biker gloves.

Rohit smirked. Padma was an underground street fighter. Her talents were beyond boundaries and she overshadowed the whole gang. HER whole gang. The Cobra gang. She was able to swipe out hard core built men by herself and get out without a scratch. At first glance, she looked far from a gang leader, besides her clothes and expressions, she'd be a fairytale princess. Or the girl you'd envy in high school cause she was flawless. But Padma was a different story, WAY DIFFERENT.

She grew up on the streets and learned to fight in order to live. She stole, starved, and stuck it out. Till he found her and brought her in with him. He was amazed at the amount of confidence and integrity of the little 8 year old. He was only a good 3 years older than her but she was something else. Her specialty : KNIVES. She carried ten with her at all times, especially being part of the underground world. People were after her, heck they were after all of them. Ready to kill, to murder. They could smell fear from a long way back, and this kid showed none. Which lead him to think either he's underestimating Padma's abilities or he a good fighter himself. Well that would shown soon…

"Punch me " she said as dully of a voice as possible.

"Huh?"

"I said punch me" repeating it with an ever-so-calm face.

"Look I don't want to fight. The only reason I came here was because I was looking for a job. I need the money." Shash replied honestly.

Which Padma saw. And actually hesitated for a moment.

…

But that was gone as fast as it came.

"You should've never came here if you didn't belong here. Punch me."

Shash was confused , her face was about 3 inches away and he could clobber her in a sec. Why didn't she move back? Why didn't she take the initiative and at least TRY to beat him up?

THUMP

"Crap" he groaned falling on his face.

WHAT.THE.HELL.

He looked up and saw a collectively cool Padma acting as if she had done nothing and he didn't exist.

"I told you 3 times. So I took the initiative. " a grin tugged on her full red lips.

Damn, he thought, I've never been hit that hard. Did she punch me? Crap she's strong.

He got up hastily and touched his jaw but instantly pulled his hand away from the horrible sting in it. He was angry.

He swung at her.

..

Once..

…

Twice..

…

Three times.

…

And she blocked all of them.

"Stay still you bitch," he said out of frustration.

"Haha.

..

You can't even touch me, too bad I would've given you a job."

"Huh? "

"Yeah, I was impressed Rohit's a good fighter and you socked him. So I thought you could join the gang for a while..

Until Vivek is recovering."

Vivek?

"My friend" she replied gazing at the confused expression on his face.

Suddenly he remembered.

..

Dai jaan…

" I'll do it! "

"Do what?"

"The job.! "

"You weren't offered the job, weren't you listening.? " she replied.

"But I need the money.

…

PLEASE. I'll do anything."

And thus it began. The core of the story.

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I just finished reading your entire FF, really thrilling I must say, love the concept, as its very different from the ones in the IF now

can't wait to read what will happen next

why does Padma want Ridz to join the gang, wouldn't she be happy if hee daughter lives a normal life, that certainly would have being the case in movies, but guess, you are gonna prove movies wrong & I can't wait to read

do add me to your pm list.

thanks