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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
awesome yaar loved it
interesting ff
plz continue soon
pm me when u will update next parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey
nice part
i liked padma's char agar woh unch nahi kara toh main hoon naa lolz
heheheheheh
cool part
update soon

hehe yeah she was growing impatient with him 😆.
thanks!

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

whoa, just finished reading the ff and have to say its totally different, i'm stil realing from the shock of seeing this version of Pads and Shashank😆

yeah it seems quite a few people are having a hard time adjusting to their "personalities" in this ff. 😆
thanks for commenting! hope to see you around.

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hey,

I just finished reading your entire FF, really thrilling I must say, love the concept, as its very different from the ones in the IF now
can't wait to read what will happen next
why does Padma want Ridz to join the gang, wouldn't she be happy if hee daughter lives a normal life, that certainly would have being the case in movies, but guess, you are gonna prove movies wrong & I can't wait to read
do add me to your pm list.
thanks

thanks alot jodubai! Padma doesn't want Ridz to join a gang but it's mostly out of self protection. it'll be more vividly explained as to WHY she needs protection in the next chapter. i'll pm you . thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one⭐️ both part 2😊 and 3😊 r awesome😊 so sweet😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉 and sorry i dont comment on part 2 coz im nt well😳

"kayi raaz aise hote hain jo dikhaye nahi jaate,
kayi kisse aise hote hain jo sunaye nahi jaate,
kayi dil aise hote hain jo tode nahi jaate,
aur kuch aap jaise dost aise hote hain jo chore nahi jaate!"


i hope you feel better! thanks for commenting even though! i really appreciate it. your poems are really inspiring. 😊

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

awesome yaar loved it

interesting ff
plz continue soon
pm me when u will update next parts

thanks alot!
will continue soon maybe tomorow. i'll add you to the pm list 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
once again WOW👏 i just caught up with ur ff its really good plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: tava

once again WOW👏 i just caught up with ur ff its really good plz continue soon😊

thanks tava! 😊
i'll try to continue soon.
just a little tired, 🥱
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

Part 4 - Decisions Decisions

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And thus began. The core of the story.

After literally begging, Rohit told Padma to give him a chance. He felt remorse for the kid, it seemed like he was in trouble financially and needed the money desperately. She reluctantly agreed. Vivek, the gang member who was injured, was an excellent shooter. All the members had a specialty. From guns, knives, to speed and technology.

And Shashank needed to learn how to shoot.

From the looks of it, he could fightbut other than that he didn't seem much of an asset.

The gang sped off with him and went deeper into the part of the neighborhood .

Until Padma stopped in front of a layer, or what seemed to be their hideout.

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"What is this place?" he asked

But no one spoke. Riguring out they won't he ran off to catch up with them. And that's when he saw..

There was a huge door, probably around 10 ft tall. With a very big snake; precisely a green cobra on it.

Embellished with fine scriptures all around.

Padma opened the door with her cross shaped necklace.

Hmm she must be christian.

Inside was grande and dangerous. There was knives and guns everywhere and in awe he bent to touch it ...

SLAP

"Owww

What was that for?"

"Don't touch" she said.

"You couldv'e just said so, jeez" he muttered.

She abruptly stopped and turned around.

"Start training, he better be ready in a few weeks or else ..

TRASH HIM " she stated looking directly into his eyes.

Trash him?!! "Huh"

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Over the next few weeks he came to the layer futively without informing Dai jaan, instead saying that he was at a job. He was trained by Rohit and a couple of others.

And suprisingly he picked it up quick and was good, even better than Vivek, which Padma and Rohit observed.

"He's better" Padma said

"Hmm" Rohit replied.

"What about Vivek?"

"...

We can't let him go or anything. What are you suggesting?"

"To let him go."

"But Padma, you can't"

"Why not?" she countered.

... he was stumped. He never expected her to do this, it was supposed to be a temporary thing. They got a good fighter and the kid got his money. All's well that ends well, right?

"Look I know you're the leader and all but you can't make decisions like this."

The real reason was that Padma liked Shashank, romantically, she harbored feelings for him. And was dead sure that he reciprocated them from the first day by the way he gawked at her, it was just so obvious to anyone. She wanted him to be close and to join the gang but she knew that wasn't possible. A part of her didn't want him to join because it was dangerous. He could get hurt or worse killed and that was the last thing she wanted. His abilities were a bonus.

Vivek was the jealous kind, he'd envy someone who was BETTER in HIS field.

It would be impossible..

There would be only one way.

To kick Vivek out.

"We CAN'T" Rohit repeated and reminded.

"He's been loyal to us all these years and you're going to replace him for some kid who been here for 3 weeks?!"

"Look, I'M the leader, so I'LL decide what or what not to do with MY gang."

Padma left along with Shashank, Rohit, and a couple others. The rest or the group just wouldn't listen, they were furious, this wasn't the plan and she was pulling authority. So they broke up on BAD terms and swore on their lives for revenge from their betrayal.

Over the years, Padma and Shashank's love blossomed and hadn't heard from Vivek's gang throughout.

However, they started receiving death threats, suddenly. They found out that over the time of their love story, Vivek's gangs were becoming bigger, stronger, and dangerous, futively. It was hard to gain any information on them and when Padma found out she was pregnant and she became worried.

"Shash, what are we going to do? Im pregnant.."

"Don't worry we're going to leave from here after my baby girl is born."

"How do you know it's a girl, I haven't been to the doctor?" she asked surprised.

"You just watch, we're going to have a girl! " he said gleefully.

...

"What about Vivek's gang, what if they hurt her?"

"Nothing will happen to you or her, I promise."

Meanwhile through the months of Padma's pregnancy, gang's and guns left them, they wanted to protects their child and not put her in any sort of difficulty that could complicate Padma's pregnancy.

But they hadn't realized they were being monitered and followed the whole time by Vivek's gang.

Just like the past few months, they had received another threat, but this time only of their death but also torturing and a slow death of their baby as payback for revenge.

By now Padma was hell bent.

Due to stress and trepidation she went into early labour. Shash and Padma both agreed that keeping their daughter away from them no matter how painful, would be the best solution, even though Padma was hesistant to do so. And so they fled after Riddhima Shashank Gupta was born.

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Very sorry you guys this part was really delayed i was hoping that i could continue thursday and/or friday but something came up. No excuses, anyways. So sorry about that.
Finally, one part of history is finished 😆 and the next part which will either be posted today or tomorow hopefully it will go back to when Riddhima was 2 years old.
If this part or the story is getting boring please tell me. Not alot people are commenting much on it. So i'm getting a little worried. Anyways feedback would be nice so pleasee comment it really helps.
Will send pms in a few.
Thanks you guys!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

hi😊

nice part yaar

update soooooooooooon

can u pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
ok so that was the history...i wonder if ridz is going to be in a gang as well now! look forward to more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
hey
thanks for the pm sweety
so finally the history is over almost naa
she actually threw out that vivek for shanky lolz
cool dear
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
very nice yaar.....
its awesome.........
thanx for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
really an awesome one⭐️ so touching😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉 and sorry😭😭 for late reply😳 plz😳😳 forgive me😳

"Kabhi Jo Khuwab Banay Kajal, Phel Ankhon May Jaye To, Usay Roya Nahi Kartay, Woh Khuwab Tora Nahi Kartay, Koi Manzil Say Bhatak Jaye, Uskay Sath Chaltay Hain, Usay Khonay Nahi Detay, Usay Tanha nahi Kartay!"


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