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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina is really very fast!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She left him fast and got back to him faster!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina as a woman would never have forgiven Raj easily but Naina the mother forgave the father of her child easily!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

For the sake of Prachi she forgave Raj!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats is understandable!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Prachi had been denied her father's love and now she deserves it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj had given Prachi a bath and gotten himself drenched as weli, while playing with her!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina really has changed a lot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She had always thought if she met him again she would try to give him a second chance!!!! Thats nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She is right!!! 😊 😊 😊People who get their true love is fortunate but people who value their true love is even more fortunate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

They have to make their relationship a success at least for Prachi's sake!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina wants him to go and help at the fashion week!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Thats so sweet of her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was because of fashion week that they had met!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ritu is really hysterical is is really glad to see Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Poor her!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Ritu wakai akeli pad gayi hai!!!!

Ritu ne Prachi ko dekha, phir Naina ko dekha aur phir sab samaj gayi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ritu is very understanding jo usne kabhi Raj se kuch nahi pucha until he told her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is remembering so many instances of hers and Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina is thanking Sonali for calling her here and Sonali is still lying about the property dealers aur kehti hai she will manage it all!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Amrita sorry bolne ke naam par is again trying to hit on Raj!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Raj bhi sab samaj gaya!!! 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne jan bujh kar usse Naina se introduce karwaya to make it clear he is not interested in anyone besides his Naina!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Good for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Amrita is really angry and Raj ne uska position shift bhi nahi kiya!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Sonali is also smirking at her!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Sonali ne akhir Amrita ko suna hi diya!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sonali resigned but said she has promised so she will help in the fashion week and then leave!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She really sticks to her commitments!!!!! 😊 😊 😊She is a gem!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj said he left the house because the walls were eating him up!!!! But the house has their memories though most of them may not be pleasant yet it was memories of theirs!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj really loves that house!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina got tears but Raj is right ke time for tears is over!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The worst part part of their life is over!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Now they are forunate to get a chance to live their life again and I am sure they will!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
fabulous updt...I liked d part of amrita n raj1...also sonali was awesome......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiii Deeya,

am gonna miss u n ur fic dear.........😭 hope we can read ur another fic soon..........πŸ˜›
n about update it's BEST......don't want to say another word......the understanding between all characters specially RN n then their up n downs Gr8........m happy that finally they r taking right path.too good....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Haan yaar mai one by one padhti hoon na abhi maine 2 parts aur padhe aur un k comments dene jaa rahi hoon ab.😊

To Naina k hi collection se LFW ka inaugration hoga aur Naina ko Ritu se milne ka chance bhi mila aur kaam bhi ho gaya .πŸ˜ƒ

Raj se bhi mile vo vahan dono party me gaye aur Naina ko vahan boar nahi hona pada na.πŸ˜‰

Raj ne Naina k ghar tak lift di us ko jab us ki gadi ki battery khatam ho gayi, so nice.πŸ˜›

nice parts dear.πŸ‘

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi deeya,
nice update...i liked d part wen raj introduces naina as his wife to be...found it cute...
i m sad abt this fic completing but i hope u write another fic soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey dear really a sweet part indeed. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Naina ne aakhir Raj ko is baat k liye mana hi lliya ki vo apna kaam continue kare😊😊😊 .I like the way Raj asked Naina that how did he forgive him so easily and Naina told him the main reason of that without talking and dramatic thing.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
I appreiciate Sonali for showning Amrita her ill manners πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. Ritu welcomed Naina warmly so nice it is πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.Amrita type gals can never behave polietly with anyone 😑😑😑.Raj did a nice thing that he told Amrita indirectly that his Naina is back with her and will always be.πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Sonali has not told the truth to Naina yet and soon she will come to know that it was her plan.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Naina became so senti when she came to know that y did Raj not sell their home 😭😭😭 and i loved the way he said Naina that their memories are attached to it so how can he.....................πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•. He stills loves her a lot n Naina too love him so much.😳😳😳
update soon dear and hope v shall get a new fic from u soon.😊😊😊
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Loved it when Raj gave a bath to Prachi, tht was too cute :) I hope we get some father- daughter scenes in ur next / last update!
Good to see that the two are behaving rationally and giving their relationship another chance.
It was too beautiful to let go for such a small thing in the first place.Im not saying tht Naina shudnt hv left but everything tht went into ruining the relationship couldv been avoided!
Great to see Raj back at work! With his personal life in place, his professional life will be on track too! Excellent tht Naina is encouraging him :)
No comments onAmrita, lol!
will wait for ur next update
I hope u start thinking abt ur next fic too Deeya! u can take it slowly but do give it a thought, will be looking fwd to a lrl based fic!
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Posted: 16 years ago

nice update.πŸ‘

Amrita ki waat lag gayi acche se Raj ne bhi lagai aur Sonali ne bhi πŸ˜† and now i am shure that they will live happily now onwards.πŸ˜‰

Dono ek doosre k saath kitne acche lagte hai bus aisa lagta hai jaise dono ek doosre k liye hi bane hain.😳

Ritu is happy that Raj is back in the show and it's all bcz of Naina πŸ˜ƒ and Naina also realized that Raj loves her a lot.πŸ˜›

update soon dear.😊
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!!Deeya!!!
the update was surely lovely...
loved the scene between Rajveer and Prachi....
very cute.
It's really great to see that both Naina and raj are trying to make
their relationship work...
brilliant....loved Sonali...undeniably she is s great friend....
waiting for your next update...
take care.
continue soon.

love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys, my heart felt apologies to u all..... for making u wait....... i know its been ages... and so its the last update of this story....
will reply to all ur comments in a few days time... maybe tomorrow... jus dnt fell like doin it right now......
the turn of events has been quite unfortunate lately... i jus came to mumbai on sunday so was busy setling down, and suddenly all these terrorsit attacks, i stay very close to the domestic aiport which was one of the blast sites and so i had heard a very lound noise on wed night but i jus thgt it was a crackers, later on i realized tht it was the bomb tht hd gone off..... reality hit me like a lightning..... and i hav been quite depressed ever since.......
nyways this is the last update.... i know its nt great but i jus wantd to end it,..... things always do no turn out to be as we want them too.... so here goes....
will pm all the readers tomorrow itself so plz dnt post it ur comments tht u r sad to nt reieve my pm... coz i am gonna do it tomorrow.....
Happy reading!!!

Part Sixteen

It was a fortnight since the fashion week had ended, and it was Raj and Naina's marriage Day….

Naina had offcourse awaited this day… but when it had actually come it had brought along a lot of anxiety, hopes and a fear……

There were no villains to disturb their life, it was only themselves who could act as villains and spoil things….

Naina remembered her talking to Sonali the Previous night

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"Sonali, I am just so nervous yaar"

"Why are you nervous Naina? What can possibly happen"

"You know what happened the last time Sonali"

"Oh God Naina, that should be the least of your concerns, both of you'll have matured 3 years, been through the worst, realized what it is to have lived without eachother for a long period of time"

"Sonali I agree, but still I am jus simply scared"

"The worst is over Naina"

Naina just gave her friend a smile but yet she wasn't assured…. She was still scared nervous and anxious….

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Rajveer and Naina signed their marriage documents and were now lawfully wedded, their witnesses had been Sonali, Ritu and her boyfriend, and a few common friends, and offcourse our dear Prachi, Naina and Rajveer wondered if Prachi will consider herself lucky or unlucky when she grew up to think that she had attended her parents marriage, after all not many kids attend their parents marriage, but they would deal with the situation later on

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Sonali watched her friends as they exchanged loavable glances to eachother while slipping the rings onto eachother's fingers,

She had never told Naina and Raj that she had actually planned the whole thing about them meeting, and let them believe that it was destiny and fate that had caused them to end up together

She had told Naina that all the property issue had got sorted out and had taken her signature's, At first Naina had been a bit suspicious, but had then dropped the idea, because after all, she was happy to be back

Raj also never came to know that Sonali had purposely screamt loundly to amrita that day when she knew he was around, and had purposely pursued the Naina topic earlier in that day…..

Sonali strongly believed that if the right hand did something the left hand should never know….. and so had put that into practice

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The ceremony was shortly followed by a private dinner,

With the newly weds and their witnesses

And so just after everyone had ordered whatever they wanted Raj stood up and talked

"Hi guys, it means a lot to me and Naina and offcourse our darling Prachi to have you all here to share in our happiness, im sure all of u know wat we have been thru, the way we reunited was awfully simply, but I guess the 2 of us were tired of what v had done, and wanted to apologize and be back together, I have realized that a few words can do a lot of damange, but a small "Sorry" can mend everything, I was surprised when Naina agreed so soon and with little persuasion, but I think she realized that I really meant that I was sorry and wanted to give me a 2nd chance, so all I want to tell u guys, choose your words correctly snd give your relationship time, never take decisions in haste, and always trust your heart, thanks Sonali, for evrythg, and thanks you all for being here today with us"

The table broke into applause and they all beamed at him

And Raj truned towards Naina

"Is there something you want to say"

"No My dear pati dev, you said it all"

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The evening passed soon and all headed towards their own respective homes, Naina and Raj along with Prachi were leaving on their honeymoon the next day, to London, well it wasn't exactly a honeymoon, they were goping their to clear off Naina's things that she had left behind, but would also spend some quality time together

They reached their home, the same one in which they used to live before, but they wanted to move on, they didn't want to abandon their house just because they had bad memories associated with it but because they wanted to .live in it and have happy memories with it…….

"So Mrs. Rajveer Shekhawat, how do you feel feel to be my wife"

"It feels wonderful, though I maybe one of the few woman to be a mother before being a wife, so hows does it feel to be a husband?"

"IT feels… hmm…. Hmmm…. I feel like a captive"

He soon earned a smack from Naina…

"Captive haan, go I don't want to talk to u"

Naina knew he was just teasing her, and she was just playing along

"Offcourse Jaanu, I have been captivated by your love"

Naina just turned towards him and kissed him soundly, they were starting a new life, they knew there would be ups and downs but yet they were ready to face it…..

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2 years later

"Prachi don't run around while eating, PRACHI!!!! COME BACK!!!!!"

Rajveer was running after his 4 year old daughter trying to feed her

Naina's voice was heard suddenly

"Raj, havnt you fed her as yet???"

"Naina, look at her, she has become like a tornado, never stays at one place"

"She is only like that with you, she knows she can get away with anything where Dada is concerned, look at how I feed her now"

"Naina im more interested in getting ready now"

"Ok, you go get ready ill feed her and then get ready"

"Naina you have eaten naah, you shouldn't be staying hungry now"

"Yeah I have eaten now you go and get ready soon and make sure you have kept Sonali's gift ready"

Naina soon fed Prachi and went into their room to get both her and Prachi ready, and soon Raj took charge of Prachi

It was sonali's wedding Day, and it was jus 2 days after Raj and Naina's 2nd anniversary

Naina was pregnant for the second time, though she was happy with just Prachi, Raj had insisted that he wanted another kid, and wanted to be a proper father this time.

She was 4 months pregnant… and was having a tough time handling Prachi and Raj

Prachi was a smart kid and had realized that she cud get anythg frm Raj and so often bullied him, had Naina not been there to keep control Raj would have ended up bankrupt.

Naina was just doing her make up when suddenly Raj came from the behind and planted a small kiss on her cheek

"I love you Naina, you are the most gorgeous woman I hav ever seen"

Naina just blushed and stood up and hugged him

"I love you too Raj, I just hope nothing bad happens to us now, this is my perfect family, I would have given anything 3 years back to be like this, and today I have it all…."

"Naina we can face anything now and as long as we are together"

"Raj we are gonna be late, Sonali wud kill us…."

But Raj just disregarded that and continued

"There has never been or there never will be any happiness, joy, life or LOVE WITHOUT YOU"

Prachi came running from behing and Raj carried her and the 3 of them hugged, wishing life wud be as perfect as this always…….

THE END

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