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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok guys now moral of the story… I know all of u r big and matured yet it doesn't harm to learn a little does it????

With the example of Sonali we can guess that sometimes v have our frnds and family members who do mkuch more for us than we ever know, so plase do make it a point to make all ur family nd frnds feel special coz u neva knw… maybe one of them has contributed towards ur happiness…

Secondly, always choose ur words and they do cut thru like daggers

And thirdly, before rushing into relationships do think about the effects it will have …..

So guys thanks for all the support….. love u all……

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dia
How r u?????hope u n your family is safe in Mumbai..All wat is happening dere is really very scary.Now abt the update it was usually really gud n ending was super cool.I know u r wrapping up dis fiction fast.But it has a logiacl ending.Raj n Naina both got married n r living happily ..Naina is pregnant coz Raj wants to b a complete father so sweet of him😛..
Loved the perfect ending.n yeah moral of the story was really gud..We shud have some real gud friends in life n we all shud value dem coz they all the reasons of our happiness.See life is so very unpredictable .Yes one more thing i learned from your fiction is dat we shud not loose our temper coz we do something disaterous in dat mindset.Words r indeed mightier than swords n do not rush into anything.We have to give sometime to every relation...
Dia your story was fantastic👏n i hope u'll start with some new fiction soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Finally its Raj and Naina's marriage day!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina had awaited this day but when it came it brought along anxiety, hopes and fear!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

It happens!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But yes they can spoil their lives or make it beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sonali assured her and said that both have matured 3 years, been through the worst,realized what it is to live without each other for a long period of time!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

She is right!!!! 😊 😊 😊Sonali is just so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊But Naina was still scared and nervous!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Rajveer and Nains signed the documents and were now lawfully wedded!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sonali, Ritu and her boyfriend and few friends had come!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Prachi attended her parenst wedding!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is really lucky!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina and Raj are wondering whether Prachi will think herself lucky or unlucky!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

I am sure she will consider herself lucky!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊After all not many kids attend their parents marriage!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊

Sonali is really happy today!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊She let them believe it was destiny and fate!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

She never told Raj and Naina it was her plan and managed everything!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛She is so good!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

She believed that if the right hand did something the left hand shoudl never know and had put that into practise!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Great theory!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

So Raj and Naina never knew that who had the biggest hand in bringing them together and had planned it all!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's speech at their wedding dinner was very good!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏He is right a few words can do a lot of damage and a small sorry mend everything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj said to choose your words carefully, give your relationship time, never take decisions in haste and always trust your heart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Well said!!!!

Raj now thanked Sonali for everything and for being their today with them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Really Sonali is a gem of a friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

She deserves a standing ovation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Bhagwaan kare har kisi ko aisa hi dost mile!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved Naina calling my dear Raj pati dev!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina and Raj along with Prachi are leaving on their honeymoon!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow they are going on their honeymoon with their daughter!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

They are going to live in their old house and have happy memories with it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure they will have lots of happy memories in it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved calling Naina Mrs.Rajveer Shekhawat and asking her how does it feel to be his wife!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina is right that she is one of the few woman to be a mother before being a wife!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

On asking Raj said he feels like a captive!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is so naughty!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina smacked him!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for her!!!! 😊 😊 😊She knows he is teasing her and she is just playing along!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He said of course jaanu he had always been captivated by her love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳That is so romantic!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina kissed him!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️They were starting a new life but they are ready to face it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is running after his 4 year old daughter trying to feed her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆That is so cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj said Prachi has become like a tornado and never stays at one place!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆So naughty of her!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

She knows she can get away with anything where Dada is concerned!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆Good for her!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj Naina ka kitna khayal rakh raha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is such a caring husband!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Sonali is getting married and that too just two days after Raj and Naina's second anniversary!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏She deserves all the happiness in the word!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is 4 months pregnant because Raj wanted to be a proper father this time!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet of him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Prachi has really become smart and realized she can get anything from Raj and bullied him!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is such a good father!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Naina has to keep him in control though!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj came from behind and kissed Naina and said she is the most gorgeous woman he has ever seen!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳So romantic!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina hopes nothing bad happens to them now and this is her perfect family!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊That it is and even I hope so!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina would have given anything 3 years back to get it and now she has it all!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Yes and she really deserves this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is right that they can face anything now as long as they are together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj said there has never been or there never will be any happiness, joy, life or love with her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Beautiful!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally we have the dialogue of the story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj carried Prachi and they hugged!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️The perfect family!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Even I wish that life would be as perfect as this always!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the perfect ending and the moral of the story was really good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

We should have real friends in life and value them because they are the reason for our happiness!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

We should not lose our temper and do something disastrous in that!!!!

Words are really mightier than swords and this saying applies here as well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊They can hurt more as well!!!!

Relationships should never be rushed into and we should think about the effects it will have!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Well said!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The story was just beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏It was very contemporary and realistic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
And now its time for the perfect ending!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

And they lived Happily Ever After!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so beautiful
loved this fic
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Posted: 16 years ago
a fabulous end to d fic of urs.......

too good.....

do take care of urself....i know dos blasts wer very depressing.plz be safe
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiiiii Deeya,

how r u dear....i read the update n it's just Gr8.story is simply superb.what else i say about fic...m totally agreed with what u said at end .this ff is a lesson to all ur readers.
i luved it sooooooo much n now m gonna miss it n u offcouse so plzzzzzzz come back with another fic.
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Posted: 16 years ago
deeya...glad to know u r safe....

d update was gud enough....d words of wisdom nicely given at d end...

raj n prachi thing was very cute...i think every father goes thru it....n ya d speech raj gave on his wedding day was also nice......

over all a very good job done...!!!!

hoping to read more of ur fics....


love,
dhara.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi
i'm sorry yaar i was not able to give replies earlier because of my own fic which i was busy writting
awesome ud
mindblowing
prachi is so cute
rk-naina love her so much
very very nice fic allover.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Nice n perfect ending of a superb fic.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Naina n Raj got married finally 🥳🥳🥳 though Naina still has some doubts n confusions but all sorted out as the time passed.😔 😔 😔
Sonali did a superb thing and i like her decision not to tell them about that it was her plan.
Jab milna tha to mil hi gaye.😉 😉 😉
I like the way Raj thought that when Prachi will grow up what would she think about her parents that she was present in their marriage.😆 😆 😆
Sonali is also getting married nice to know.😊 😊 😊
I am happy that Naina is again going to be mom.

Happy Family 😍😍😍

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
What a perfect ending for a perfect fic.

Id love to start off with how you ended it because thats the part i loved the best. Naina getting pregnant. *sigh*

Raj finally experiences fatherhood. What a bilssful feeling. Father-daughter relationship is simply the best tht ever exists in the world and i love the way it has been highlighted in ur fic.

And now he can shower all his love on Naina, prachi and the unborn child.

Wedding bells for the two- great.

Kudos to Sonali for planning everything so articulately.

and good to know shes settling down too.For all the good work she has done by bringing the two together, she deserves all the happiness too.

and lastly, Kudos to Deeya for giving us such a beautiful and sensitive fic.

Will wait for ur next fic. Do write one please , ur fans (readers) willl be waiting 😊




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