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Posted: 16 years ago
ur back! that was a good update.
poor muskaan.
thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiya!
Riddhima here!
I love this ff!
Its so RAHUL MUSKAAN TYPE!
I can imagin them!
PLZ PM ME WEN U UPDATE NXT
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey...its amazing dear..do update soon..i'll be looking forward to ur update..and if possible do PM
Love,
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg!! that was wonderful!! naya twist!! i hope muskaan's parents don't say anything to rahul!!! plz cont soon and thanx fr the pm!! <33
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey again a twist dear.......it was nice
i hope muskaan gets well soon.........
n is ur RM FF going to end?
hey if so v r gona miss it very much
n i hope u will start another very soon
ok bye dear .....tc
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Posted: 16 years ago

that was a great update, apoorva and thanks for the pm. this is a new twist to your ff, i wonder what's going to happen now? is this going to go like the vivah track? please continue soon and pm me when you do so.

love, mona :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
* The next day *
*Muskaan was still critical...Rahul was desperate to see her but the doctor wouldnt allow him to meet her*
* Rahul paced franatically in the corridor...the rest of the gand was sleeping on the benches *
*Then suddenly someone yelled his name...he turned around to see who it was...MUSKAAN'S PARENTS ! *
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( PLZ NOTE - MM= Muskaan's mother , MD - Muskaan's dad )
MM- ( Running upto Rahul ) - Muskaan kahaa hai ?
* Rahul dosnt say anything he just points at the operation theater *
* Muskaan's mum starts crying and lays her head on her husband's cheat *
* Finally Rahul could take it no longer and he speaks up *
Rahul - Mujhe maaf kardo Aunty...yeh sab meri wajh se hua hai...nahi main Muskaan ko bagaa ke lejataa or nahi Muskaan ke saath aisa hotaa...app mujhse nafrat karte honge...
MD - ( shocked ) Nahi puttar...tum kyun maafi maang rahe ho...yeh sab humari galti hain...Hum dono me tum dono ka pyaar nahi samjh paaye...hume maaf kardo puttar
* And before Rahul could say anything...MD had pulled Rahul into a hug...and Rahul hugged right back *
* Suddenly inturrupting this happy moment the Doctor came out and announced an another happy news *
Doctor ( to all of them ) - She is completly alright now....she is currently uncounsious......She will be discharged by tomorrow *
* Everyone cheered....Anjali, Atul gave Rahul a hug...*
* Rahul went inside to see how Muskaan was doing *
* Muskaan was Lying on the bad...there was a huge bandage around her head....even with the larrge white bandage she looked beautiful ...Rahul kissed her forehead and left the room *
The next day -
* The gang and Muskaan's parents were sitting on the benches waiting for Muskaan's discharge...*
* Soon..the doctor came out with Muskaan leaning on his shoulders *
* As soon as Rahul saw Muskaan...he went to her and gave her a hug...he felt tears of happiness sting his eyes *
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The next night at Fasalpur --
* Muskaan and Rahul were married......Both of them were standing on the terrace of the Guest house *
* Rahul felt Joy he had never experienced before...Muskaan was finally his...and she would remain his forever...no one could take her away from him *
Rahul - I love u muskaan !
Muskaan - I love yuo too..
* and they both share a passionate kiss....and lived happily ever after *
THE END !
PLZ CHK OUT MY NEW FAN - FIC
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Muskaan and Rahul diaries !
Thtz the end of the story guys. After 2 mnths of writing this story...the story has ended....I loved wrtinting this FF...It was loads of fun viewing your encouraging comments too...
I would like to thank the following people for always posting in their comments and encouraging me ----( I wont write their real names...I will be writing their screen names )
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THANKZ A LOT FOR UR SUPPORT GUYS !!!!!!!!!
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I have a half a mind to start a new FF called " Muskaan's diaries "....Its will be a collection of Muskaan's diary entry everday....I am not really sure about it...but I will let u guyz know...
Love,
Apoorva

Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww thanks for putting me in the list...and it was a very sweet and nice happy ending! hehe
can't wait to see your new fanfic!! :D:D
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys !!! I FINALLy put the whole stroy together in one piece !!! chk it out !!

In was muskaans...wedding day...Her whole family were enjoying the celebrations...She was getting married to the most handsome guy she had ever seen, he was rich,he was attractive and he loved her very much...Everyone were happy....everyone except muskaan bcuz the guy she was about to marry was not the guy she loved, Rahul...
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Sanjeevani a hospital where the doctors bonded well with the patients.....a place where doctors and the patients were friends and a place where the patient can actually fell at home....It was the most prestigeous hospital in the whole of mumbai...so Armaan, riddima, anjali, atul, muskaan and rahul were really proud to be selected as interns...

Riddima and anjali were sisiters and also the daughters of Dr.shashank ( senior doctor of Sanjeevani ) anjali was more of the hot type while ridzi was more of the sweet type... Ridzi was in love with Armaan and armaan loved her too...they were in love with each other frm their college days. Atul was in love with anjali but then anjali likes him more like her frend and nuthing elz...and then comes our bubbly gal muskaan...she is the type of gal every one wud b afraid of...everone but rahul....Rahul juz loved to irritate her...but no matter hw much he irritated her he loves her and muskaan loved him too...but then she was confused abt her feelings...
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{ hey I 4gt to add---muskaan and rahul were childhood frendz }

A month after the interns joined ( I am forwarding the story )-

Riddima and muskaan are great frendz now and they everything abt each other (but muskaan still has nt tld her abt her feelings for rahul ) and on the other hand armaan and rahul are great frendz too..

During the breifing session -

Dr.K - Kal tum sab ko hastipura jaan a hogaa...orr waha patients ko treat karna hogaa...orr agar hum aapke kaam se kush hai toh hum aap mein se ek ko intern of the month banaayenge...aaj aap sab ghar jaake apne bags karle....thankz u...aap sab jaa sakte hain...

The next day -

everyone were sittin in the van...rahul sumhow managed to sit next to muskaan shoving away atul as he tried to do so...

Muskaan was feeling lil uncomfortable sitting next to rahul who she likes a lot...and tried oushing herself away from him...but rahul wouldnt let go of her so easily and ended sittting next to her again...

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Soon after a few hours they reach hastipura-It was a beautiful village with a forest on one side and a lake on the other side-The interns watched the village with awe-.It was that kind of a place you expect to see on picture postcards?It was simply beautiful....but then all the admiration vanished with a phoof when they saw a sign that read....raat ko jungle mein jaana khtarnak hain...
Soon they set up a tent and were back to their duties....Keerthi assigned them their duties as usual and Muskaan was delighted to know that she was supposed that she was assisting Dr.jai (yes, the same person muskaan is going to marry)..Jai was the 'dude' of Sanjeevani though he was 2 years bigger than any of the interns and he was also one of the doctors...Jai usually hanged out with the interns..he is the kind of guy any gal would want as a husband..handsome..attractive...bright green eyes...and the cutest smile...And anjali and muskaan have a HUGE crush on him...
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Muskaan was very happy to b assisting Dr.Jai...Infact she found herself blushing whenever Dr.Jai accidentally brushes his hand aganist her hand...Rahul saw this and was very jealous...he was feely gloomy the whole and he dint want to talk to anybody xpeceally Jai...


That night -
[ All the interns were sitting near the lake..the lake was beautiful....and the full moon light made it look even better ]

[ Muskaan was looking gorgeous...she was 'glowing' in the moon light ]

Rahul looked and looked and looking at her...he couldnt help it...no matter how hard he tried turning his eyes away from her he just coudnt.....then suddenly Armaan came and sat beside him---

AR - ( staring at muskaan )- wow ! Muskaan is looking really stunning......

R- Oye ! ty Muskaan pe line mat marr warna mein ridzi ko bata dungaa...."\

Ar- *laughs*
Then suddenly Jai comes frm nowhere goes right up to muskaan and says "wow ! tum bahut sudar lag rahi ho" * muskaan blushes*

JAI - abb chale? walk ke liye?

Mu - Haah chalo !

and all the interns are looking at them, shocked .....but Rahul was really hurt..
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Muskaan and jai leave for their walk near the lake...Rahul was really depressed....he was jealous and he was also angry...he knew that he really liked muskaan a lot and he also knew that muskaan ahad some feelings 4 him 2...but now bcuz of Jai even dose few feelings may vanish 2....he dint know what to do to make muskaan his own....but Dr.Armaan came to his rescue

Ar - Rahul tu inta udaas mat ho...orr devdas mat ban....t

RA - ( irraitated ) Toh aur kya karu...jaake Jai ko maar du kya...?

Ar - haha ! ver funny ! Tu woh toh nahi kar sakta par to kucj orr kar saktaa hai....

Ra - ky ?
Ar - muskaan ko pataa....uske saath flirt kar......itnaa flirt kar ki woh tere prem jaal mein phass jaye...

Ra - Hmmm....not a bad idea....par kya yeh plan kameyaab hogaa?
Ar - haah kyun nahi? zaroor hogaa...maine bhi riddima k saath yehi kiya tha....* winks *

Ra - hmmm...theek hai ....try karne mein kya jaata hai?
Chatper - 4

The day after the next day...everyone were back at sanjeevani....

Muskaan was alone in the locker room as she was the first one to come to sanjeevani that day....

Then rahul enters the Locker room and is really pleased to find her all alone....

he slowly creeps up behind her...

R - Hey Muskaan ! ( in a flirty tone )

Muskaan is surprised and turns around to face rahul

Mu - hey...

But b4 muskaan could complete the sentence rahul slowy moved closer to her...Muskaan's heart started beating rather fast...she dint knw wht waswrong with Rahul...he was acting very weird..Rahul then caught her hand and brushed away a starnd of hair from her face and gazed into muskaan's eyes -

RA - tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho...

Mu - umm...thankz...rahul...ummm

she dint knw wht to say....she never felt like this with rahul before...and she could actuallly eel herself go red....and the slowly Rahul let go of her hand and went out of the locker room ...leaving Muskaan all confused and alone to ponder over her feelings...
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Muskaan was alone in the room...she dint understand what just happened...and she dint understand why she was blushing...did she like Rahul...no that was not possible she thought he is an idiot I cant like him....I DONT like him....but she was not so sure that she dint like him...but b4 she could think anything else about the incident....The others interns came in...
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The interns were arguing about who would get the intern of the month award...muskaan was just sitting there lost in her thoughts...she couldnt get the thoughts out of her...she was something like dazzed by what happened....

Ar- so muskaan? tum kya sochti ho kisko milega intern of the month?

Mu * still lost...no reply *
Ar - muskaan....?

Mu - * no reply *

Ar - MUSKAAN !!!!!!!

Mu - * startled * huh ? .....ummm...hey armaan

Ar - so tumhe kya lagta hai?
Mu - kya lagtaa hai...??
Ar - kya tumne suna ki maina tumse kys pucha abhi?
Mu - nahi...

Atul - lagta hai muskaan kisi ki kyaloo mein dubee hui hai...

Ridzi - Mujhe pataa hai kaun hai.....

- muskaan getting scared....maybe ridzi ko rahul ke baare mein pata hai she thought -

ridzi - Haah...mujhe pata hai...vo Jai he na muskaan?

* muskaan heaves a sigh of relif...so ridzi f=dint knw about it afterall...but she kindof felt guilty about not wanting to tell ridzi...bcuz they were good frendz now*

During the breifing-

* to muskaan's utter dissapointment she was given her duty with Rahul...she dint like that all bcuz she thinks she does not like him...but whenever she sees rahul her heart goes all flutter-flutter and somtimes her heart beats at such a fast rate that u could almost hear it.......But rahul on the other hand was immensly happy and wanted nothing else but that...Armaan gave him a thumbs just b4 going to attend their respective duties....*
* since RM's duty was in the general ward so both of them headed that way....Muskaan promised herself that she would keep herself as far from Rahul as possible ans she was doing just that...she dint Talk to him much...and dint let him talk either....this plan of hers actually worked....and she dint let her heart go all flutter-flutter as she hardly looked at him...immediatly after completin her duty Muskaan Fled from the ward b4 Rahul had a chance to speak to her....*

But Rahul wouldnt let go of her so easily he had plans up his sleeves...
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Muksaan was in a BIG dilemma...she dint knw why her heart was beating so fast....but she kept telling herself that she dint like Rahul and this was all a mistake...b4 she could think anything else ....Jai came up to her and put his one arm around her shoulder...Muskaan felt a lil uncomfortable....but she let him put his arm around her shoulders althe more ......


Jai - hey...umm...Muskaan tum mere saath...umm...aaj bahar chalogi?

Mu - * cant blive her ears *...Kya?


Jai - tum chalogi...mere sath...kahi baahar?

Mu - haah jaroor chalungii !

jai - * really happy * okz...I will call u at 7 'o'clock...be ready by then * and he goes away *


* muskaan couldnt blive she had jus been asked out by the most handsome man on earth.....she was so happy....she couldnt blive it at all....she was juz thinking its a dream...wow !........but unknown to het rahul had been following her and he heard everything...*
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Rahul was sitting all alone in the ceanteen when armaan entered....

Ar - kya hua? devdas ki tarah muh latkaakar kyun baitaa hai?
* rahul tells him everything *

Ar - bass ! itni si baat ! have no fear when armaan is here ! dekh....see muskaan tujhse pyaar karti hai par yeh woh nahi jantii....so tu usse janne ka ek maouka de....agar woh tujhe Jai ke saath bahar jaake jealous kar sakti hai...tu tu bhi kisi aur ke saath jaakar usse jealous kar?
Ra - Plan accha hai lekin main kiske saath jaau ?
Ar - ummmmm...tu na anjali ke saath jaa !

Ra- PAGAL HO GAYA HAI KYA???????

Ar - accha accha ...usse chd...ummmm....areey HAAH ! tu uske saath jaa...

Ra - kiske saath ???
Ar - arrey wohi....ur neighbour

Ra - Naina ?
Ar - haah ....naina....sab ko pata hai ki woh tujhe pasand karti hain...orr tu usse upne saath bahar jaane ke liye puche gaa toh wohh immediatly haah boldegi...orr woh sundar bhi hain....orr...

Ra - par yaar...how can I just use a person like that?

Ar...Its not like tu usse use kar rahaa hai...ummm...tu usse bahar jaane ke liye puch kar usse bhi kush kar raha hai na?

Ra - haah ! yeah baat to hai....lekin mein yeh kaise pata lagau ki jai orr muskaan kahaa jaa rahe hai?

Ar - yeh kaam tu mere liye chod de....

Ra - thanks yaar armaan ! tu mera saccha dost hai !
Ar - no problem yaar !
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Just before evrone were leaving Sanjeevani......

* Armaan runs up to Rahul *

Armaan - " they are goin to The Taj this evening....best of luck..."
* Rahul thanks him and gets in his car.....there and drove straight upto Naina's huse...( to ask her out )

* Naina opens the door and is really surprised to see Rahul there.....*

Naina - hey !
Rahul -ummm...hey

Naina- come in.

Rahul - umm...no I just wanted to ask u sumthing..

Naina - yeah?
Rahul- * really fast * willyougooutwithme?
Naina - soory...I dint get what you just said....

Rahul - * slowly * will...u...go...out...with...me?
Nania - OF course !

Rahul - Ok then be ready by 7...I will pick you up...

At Muskaan's apartment -

*Muskaan is getting ready and admiring herself in the mirror.....she was looking really pretty....*

Muskaan( Thinking ) - If only Rahul can see me now......Hai ! yeh kyaa horaa hai? main Rahul ke baare mein intna kyun soch rahi hu...focus muskaan focus....jai....Jai hie tere sapno kaa rajkumar hai....Rahul nahi...


* then suddenly someone gives her a missed call...IT WAS JAI ! *
* Meanwhile Rahul picks up Naina from her house...Rahul really had to admit that Naina looked really stunning and if he was not in love with Muskaan he would have totally fallen for Naina...Naina flashed Rahul a big smile when she got in the car... and now both of them were sitting in the car and heading towards The Taj hotel *
Meaniwhile in the Taj hotel....

* Muskaan had already arrived with Jai and jai had gone oto the washroom so Muskaan was sitting alone looking around when suddenly she turns around and sees rahul entering with a pretty girl she dint know *

* Muskaan's insides were squirming qith Jealousy...She dint know why....but she suddenl y felt a Pang of hatred toward that pretty girl *

* Meanwhile Jai had come back and he also saw Rahul and naina *
Jai - wow ! Rhaul ke saath woh ladki kaun hai?

Muskaan - pataa nahi...ekdum bhais ki tarh lag rahi hai na?

Jai - nahi yaar...bahut kubsooorat hai ! orr dono ek dusre ke saath acche lag rahe hai !
Muskaan - KYA ? she is soo ugly...mujhe nahi maaloom tha ki Rahul ki taste inti buri thi...

Jai - ok ok .......chill maar ! par meri taste bahut acchi hai...kyunki mein yahah ki sabse kubsoorat ladki ke saath baithaa hu,,,,

* muskaan blushes *
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@ The Taj -

* Rahul and naina were giving their table RIGHT NEXT 2 jai's and muskaan's.......ahul just came up to their table said hi 2 both of them...intoduced Naina..and went back to his table...*

* Muskaan kept looking over at thier table.....Rahul saw that and was really happy*

Jai - so.....wht elz?

muskaan- ummm...* looking at Rahul and naina * yum batao....

* just then she sees a waiter heading towards them ( ie...muskaan's and rhaul's table ) with a very large dish in his hands....and suddenly she had an idea *

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* Muskaan sticks out her leg......the waiter slips and the dish falls on Naina......*
Muskaan ( thinking ) - Bullseye !
Naina - * screms * ( to the waiter ) Dekn tune kya kiya....GHADA !
( to rahul ) - Main washroom jaa rahi hu


Rahul ( giggling ) - ok....

Muskaan ( getting up ) - main tumhari help karti hu....

* both of them go to the wash room *
Naina - abb main isse saaf kaise karu ?

Muskaan - with soap...ruk...main karti hu

* ...Muskaan spreads the "daag" more when naina was nt looking *
Muskaan - aila ! yeh daag to sabun seh bhi nahi jaa raha hai....tomhe shayd ghar jaa chahiya.....warna sab tumpe hasenge *
Nania - haah ! mujhe ghar jaana chaiye *
* muskaan smiles 2 herself on the success of her plan *

* they both go out ofthe washroom *

* Rahul is laughing at Naina *
Rahul ( lauging ) - tumhari dress bahut acchi hai !!!
Nanina - Tum hass rahe ho? god...rahul how can u b so unsupportive?

*Naina storms out of the hotel *
* Muskaan is really happy now *
* suddenly Jai's pager rings *
Jai - oh ! mujhe Sanjeevani jaana padegaa....Rahul? tum Muskaan ko ghar drop kar sakte ho ka?Muskaan.....no probs na? if rahul drops u ???

* Both Rahul and Muskaan are hapy now *

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In the car -

Muskaan - woh kaun thi?

Rahul - kaun?Naina?
Muskaan - haah...

Rahul - meri padosan !
Muskaan - Pata hai....woh tumhari kya lagtii hai?
Rahul - Pataa nahi....shayad meri Girlfrend

Muskaan - GIRLFRIEND ????
Rahul - haah....kyun?

Muskaan - uski shakal dekhi hai kabhi....bhoothini lagti hai boothini !
Rahul - bhootni woh nahi tu hai.....orr waise bhi tujhe kya farak padta hai ki mein kiske saath jaau?

Muskaan - ummmm...hum dono dost hai na .....orr woh acch ladki nahi hai...kis orr ladki dhund !

Rahul - Tujhe woh pasand nahi aayi? mujhe toh bahut pasand aayi...

Muskaan - apni taste sudhar...pata nahi ki tu uuse kaise pasang karta hai.....Naina se ppyaar karne seh toh sister lovely se pyaar karna behtar hogaa !

Rahul - oye...tu inti chid kyu rahi hai???chill mar ...

.Muskaan - kaise chill maru ? orr main isliye chid rahi hu kyunki main tujhe kisi orr ladki ke saath nahi dekh saktii !!
Rahul - kya?

* the suddenly Muskaan realises what she said *
Muskaan - I mean....main tujhe ek buri ladki ke saath nahi dekh saktii...

* Rahul smiles...*

* Suddenly...*

Muskaan - oye ! mujhe mera purse collect karna tha sanjeevani mein....main wahi bhool gayi thi !
Rahul - ok...wahi chalte hai..

* Rahul turns the car and then both of them head towards Sanjeevani *

* they reach Sanjeevani *

* Muskaan goes inside to get her bag.....Rahul is waiting outside for Muskaan ...suddenly...Muskaan comes outside with her bag in her hands and she was crying...*
Rahul ( shocked ) - Muskaan ! kya jua ?
Muskaan ( crying ) - gaadi ko start karo....orr yahan she chalo please !

* then Jai comes outside of the Sanjeevani buliding......shouting for Muskaan *
Muskaan - Rahul PLEASE !
Rahul - ok ok

* Rahul and Muskaan sit in the car and go away leaving Jai behind
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Rahul and Muskaan are sitting in the car...Muskaan is crying silently.....Rahul dint want to ask any questions right now....as she was already so upset *
* They reach Muskaan's aprtment...Muskaan quickly says thanks and runs away....Rahul is really concered but then he thought it was best 2 leave her alone for sometime *

* Rahul reaches his house.....he is really concered 4 Muskaan....he wanted to meet her....and he had a plan *
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Muskaan was unable to sleep that night....she was really depressed....how could Jai have done that?....He was flirting with her all day....and she actually thought that he might like her....how could she have been so stupid?.....He was a player....thts right a player and the biggest flirt she had ever met...*
* Let me tell u wht happend and wht muskaan is so unhappy with Jai *
FLASHBACK -

* Muskaan enters the Sanjeevani building...she goes straight upto ther locker.....she pulls out her handbag*

* there were hardly any doctors in the hospital...*

* Suddenly she hears voices from the empty canteen...she goes inside to see who they were...*


* IT WAS JAI with an another female doctor....their was an candle on the table and they were speaking soflty *

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* Muskaan strained to hear what they were saying....*

Jai - tum kitni sudar ho....main Snajeevani ka sabse lucky ladka hu....jo maine tumhara pyaar payaa.

* The female doctor blushes...*

Female doctor - Tum aaj uss intern seh kya baat kar rahe the....maine suna ki tum dono kahin bahar jaa rahe the?

Jai - kaun ? muskaan? woh tho bus tympass k liye tha....woh mere saath bahar jaana chahti thi....orr mujhe usse bahar le jaane k liye din raat pareshn kar rahi thi...isiliye le gaya....bahut pakaau type hai....

( BACK TO THE PRESENT )
* Muskaan started crying again....suddenly there was a hard rap on the balcony window.....and then again a hard rap......*

* Muskaan went and opened the window door an peeped out....and then suddenly she looked on the other side and there was sum1 standing on the other side.....rahul !
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Muskaan - RAHUL !!!!!!!!!!!!! tu yahan kya kar raha hai?

Rahul - bas tumse milne chala aaya......

Muskaan - tum darwaaze se bhi toh andar aa sakte the na?
Rahul - haah maine beel bajaayi thi....par tune darwaza nahi kholaa.....

Muskaan - woh beel kaam nahi kr rahi hai...

Rahul - mujhe aadar aane dogi ki nahi....yaa raat bar hum dono yehi baat kare?
Muskaan - andar aao......

* both of them go inside *
Rahul - aab tum yeh baatao ki tum ro kyun rahi thi...?

* Muskaan told him everything.....she dint feel as unhappy as she felt before...infact she felt happy that rahul came to her house...*
Rahul - woh saala...

* Muskaan shot him a look as Rahul was just about to use a swear word *

Rahul - ahem ....I mean woh saala Jai....kal uski bahut dhulaayi hogi...

* Muskaan laughed....*
* Suddenly......someone bangs on the door *

* Rahul goes and peeps through the peephole...then he rushes back to Muskaan and whispers *

Rahul - oh my god ! Jai hai !

Muskaan ( worried ) - KYA ???
Rahul - mazaak tha...pata nahi koi ladki hai...jaa..... jaake dekh

* Muskaan goes and peeps....*

Muskaan( whispering ) - Chup jaa Rahul ?

Rahul - kyu?

Muskaan - arrey woh ladki meri padason hai !!
Rahul - haah toh....wo mujhe kha jaayegi kya?

Muskaan - abbey oye ! iss tym pe koi ladka ek akle ladki ke hall mein hogaa toh sab kya sochenge ?
Rahul - good point...leking kaha chupu?

Muskaan - bed ke neeche chup jaa......jaldi !

* Rahul goes away and hides under the bed...Muskaan opens the door *
* PS - the neibours name is nandini *
Nandini - inta time kyu lagaaya ? kisse baat kar rahi thi ? yaha koi hai kya?

Muskaan - nahi.....ummm....koi bhi nahi hai... sivaye hum dono

Nandini - kuch gadbad lag raaha hai....tum mujse kuch chupaa rahi ho kya?

Muskaan( all worried now ) - nahi nahii !....tu yaha? intni raat ko?
Nandini - haah ! woh kya hua na....mujhhe need nahi aa rahi thi...orr tune kal mujhe bataya tha ki kal tujhe hospital nahi jaana hogaa....isiliye maine socha aaj hum derr raat tak baat karenge !

Muskaan - NAHI !

Nandini - oye...tu chilla kyu rahi hai...!

Muskaan - ummm...aaj nahi plz....kisi orr din...kyunki mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai * faking a ywn *
Nandini - neend- weend chod orr mere saath yeh movie dekh....bahut acchi hai

* She drags muskaan to the bedroom( where the TV an dthe dvd player where there....and also the same place where Rahul was hiding *
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Muskaan ( to herself ) - yeah Rahul toh nahi hai ? nahi hosaktaa....rahul toh bedroom mein hai...so yeh sach mucch ek chor hie hogaa ( Loudly- to nandini ) - USSE PAKAD K RAK MEIN JAHDOO LEKAR AATI HU !

Nanidini ( holding Rahul's neck really tight...due to wich he cudnt breathe properly let alone talk ) - ABBEY OYE ! TUJHE YAHAN AAKAR JAHDOO MARNE AAYEGI KYA ! KOI STICK-WICK LEKE AA JALDI !

* Muskaan runs with a stick in her hand to the hall *
* Apparently it looks as if both of them do not have the sense to switch on the lights 1st *
* Muskaan takes a quick swipe with the stick at the ' chor's '( as in rahul ) head....but Rahul was quick enough 4 her and the stick instead of hitting rahul hit nandini and she lumped onto the floor *
* Muskaan raised the stick again to him the ' chor ' *
Rahul - MUSKAAN ! rukh jaa ! mein rahul hu !
Muskaan - Rahul ? tu ? oye...maine tujhe bedroom mein chupne ke liye kahan tha na...ghade !
Rahul - bewakoof ! bedroom lock tha ! orr tu pagal hai kya ? pehle lights switch on karke yeh 'chor' kaun hai dekh nahi sakti ?
Muskaan - ok ok...jo bhi ho !

* Rahul goes and switches the light on *

* then suddenly *

Rahul - ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH !!!!
Muskaan - KYA HUA ? KYU CHILLAH RAHA HAI ?

Rahul - tune apne KHUBSURAT chehre pe kya lagaa rakha hai ?
Muskaan - Face pack hai bhuddu !

Rahul * laughing * - Ek dum alien lagtii hai !!
Muskaan ( sarcastically ) - haha !
Rahul - abb iss moti kya kya kare ? yeh toh behoosh ho...kitni zor seh marti hai tu muskaan ?

Muskaan - Usse moti mat bulao...yoh meri dost hai !

Rahul - ok....wht should we do about this" gravitationally challenged " frend of urs ?

Muskaan - mujhe nahi pataa....isse yehi chod dete hai...

Rahul * looking at his watch * - abb mujhe janaa chahiiye

* Both of them walk to the door *

* when they reach the door..Muskaan holds the door open 4 him ....but then just b 4 he was about to leave kisses Muskaan on the cheek and then gives a wicked smile and goes away *
* Muskaan is surprised...she touched her cheek where he kissed her and smiled to herself *
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* Muskaan wakes up next moring...she giggles at all the incidents that happened yesterday...she felt happy! ....she had totally got over Jai....but she was afraid to face him in the hospital that moring *

* Then Muskaan suddenly remembers that Nandini was still lying in the hall *
* She runs to the hall and finds Nandini still lying on the floor *
* She giggles to herself and goes to the kitchen to bring a galss of water to spinkle on nandini face *
* Muskaan brings the glass of water...but instead of sprinkling a few drops of water she pours the whole glass of water on nandini's head ! *

* Nandini gets up and then stares at Muskaan's face *
Nandini - main zaameen par kya kar rahi thi ? orr main tere ghar mein kya kar rahi hu ?

Muskaan - woh...kya hua na...

Nandini - Hayee ! mera shar dukh raha hai ! Mujhe ghar jaana chaiye !
Muskaan ( relieved ) - haah ! theek hai

* Muskaan drops Nandini at her aprtment and she back for a bath *
* she quuickly get ready and heads off 2 sanjeevani *

In sanjeevani -

* Muskaan was the first intern to come to the hospital that day...she was really scared...wht if she was given a duty with Jai ? wht would happen then ? *
* Rahul slowly enters the locker room....*
Rahul - hey muskaan !

* Muskaan apparently dint hear him *

Rahul ( a little louder ) - Hey muskaan !

* Muskaan was lost in her own thoughts and she dint hear him this time too *

* Rahul smiled.....he walked right up to muskaan and caught her by the hand....Muskaan was startled...but she dint say anything...Rahul pushed her to the wall and said *

Rahul - Tum mere baare mein soch rahi thi kya?
Muskaan - nahi...orr main tumhare baare mein kyu sochungii ?
Rahul - kyukii...

* But before Rahul could complete what he was about to say someone scremed OYE *
* rahul and Muskaan turn to see who it was...IT WAS ATUL *
* Rahul lets go of Muskaan hand and moves away from her *
Atul ( suspicious ) - Tum dono kya karr rahe the?
Muskaan - wo....wo ...kya hua na....wo

Atul - wo kya ?

Rahul - ahem....ske aakh mein...umm ....kuch ghus gayaa tha...orr main uske aakh mein blow karke nikal raha tha ?
Atul - par tumne uskaa haath kyu pakad raka tha ?

But thankfully before Atul could say anything else the other interns entered the locker room...so rahul dint have to answer atul *
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In the breifing session -

Dr.keerti assigns them to their duties as usual...then when it was mukaan's turn to be assigned

Dr.keerti - drmuskaan...aap Dr.Jai ko assit karengii...unhone kaas apko chuna hai

Muskaan - lekin ma'am

* But b4 muksaan could protest....Dr.keerti went away from there *

* Muskaan was really upset...she dint know wht to do ? how the hell could she face Jai? *
* Rahul sees Muskaan upset and goes to her *

Rahul - muskaan...sun main tere liye Jai ko assit kar dunga

Muskaan - lekin Dr.keerti ?
Rahul - Kuch nahi hogaa...dont worry...aur jai ki fikhar tu mat kar...main usse sambhal loonga !
Muskaan - smbhaal lungaa matlab kya....

* But before Muskaan could say anything else Rahul went away *

* Muskaan was confused....wht did Rahul mean by " usse sambhal lungaa " ?....wht was he gonna do ? *
- Rahul enters Jai's room -

Jai - haah Rahul bolo kya baat hai ?
Rahul - main aapko assit karunga...Muskaan ki tabiyat theek nahi hai !
Jai - lekin main khaas Dr.Muskaan ke liye requst kiya tha !

Rahul - sorry Dr.Jai woh bahut bimaar hai ! main kuch nahi kar sakta ! orr waise bhi aapko intni kya khaas kaam thi Muskaan se ? ( angrily )
Jai - dekhiye Dr.rahul...its none of ur business !
Rahul - ofcourse its my business ! orr aap usse dur hi rahiye.....warna...

Jai ( angry now ) - warna kya ? warna kya rahul?

* Rahul pushes Jai to the wall and holds him by the collor *
Rahul - warna...tum mujhe bahut maar khaoge

* Unknown to them Muskaan was just standing oustside and watching everything...and when she sees whats goiin on sh burts herself into the room and tries to bring back Rahul to his senses *
Muskaan ( holding rahul by the arm and trying to pull him back ) - chod na rahul ! chalo please !

* Rahul gave in and went away with Muskaan *
* Muskaan drags Rahul into one of the storeroom *

Muskaan - Tum kya kar rahe the wahan ? pagal ho gaya hai kya ? tu yeh mat bhool ki Jai yahan ka sr.doctor....orr tujhe kya farak padtaa hai ki mere orr Jai ke beech kya ho raha hai ? tu kyu musibat ke picche picche jaa raha hai ?

Rahul - MUJHE FARAK PADTAA HAI MUSKAAN ! koi tumhare saath bataameeze kare...main woh sehn nahi saktaa...samji ?
* Rahul walks out of the storeroom.....*

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- In the canteen -

* all the Armaan, riddima, anjali, atual and rahul were all there...Muskaan still hadnt finnished her duty so she wasnt there yet *
* Rahul was in an angry mood...due to the talk he had with Muskaan...hw could she ask why should he bother if there was something wrong between her and jai ?...*

* Muskaan enters the canteen *

Muskaan - hey sab log ! hi rahul....

* No reply from Rahul he dosnt even look up *

* Muskaan goes and sits next to rahul....but the moment she goes and sits Rahul gets up and leaves *
* Alll the other inters notice this *
Ridzi - arrey iss rahul ko kya hogaya ?
Muskaan - pata nahi......

* Soon all the othet interns leave except Ridzi and Muskaan *

* Both of them are still sitting in the canteen *

* Muskaan is worried....she dint understand why Rahul was so angry....*

* Ridzi places a hand over muskaan and asks her what happened...Muskaan tells her everything *

Ridzi - Pgal ladki ! Tune Rahul se kyu kaha ki Usse kya farak padta hai ?

Muskaan - main kuch samji nahi...

Ridzi -aarey pagal....uske isharon se saaf saaf pata chalta hai ki woh tujhse pyaar karta hai !

Muskaan ( Blushing and smiling ) - kYa ? tumhe aisa lagta hai ?

Ridzi - haah ! orr woh tujhe isiliye naraj hai kyuki woh samjtha hai ki tu uske feelings ko samj nahi rahi hai !
Muskaan - kya ? Mujhe pata hi nahi tha....

Ridzi ( whispering ) - tu usse pyaar karti hai ?

Muskaan - pataa nahi...shayad haah !
Ridzi - oooooooh !
* Meanwhile in the locker room -Armaan and Rahul were alone in the locker room an dthey very busy talking *
Rahul - yeah muskaan kabhi nahi samjh payegi ki main usse pyaar karta hu...orr mujhe yeh bhhi nahi maloum ki woh mujhese pyaar karti hai ki nahi

Armaan - mujhe lagtaa hai ki woh bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai....lekin usse yeh pata nahi hai ki woh tujhse pyaar karti hai...

Rahul - Tu yeh pehle bhi keh chukaa hai ! Kuch naya bol...!
Armaan - tu na ek kaam kar ! aise hi usse naraz rehne ka bahana kar ! phir dekte hain ki woh tujhe manane ke liye kya kya karti hai

Rahul - hmmm.....par kya yeh kaam karegaa ?
Armaan - haah zaroor kaam karega ! main already isse riddima ke saath experiment kar chukaa hu !
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- The next day in the locker room -
* Muskaan surprisingly was the last person to enter the locker room that they all they interns were already there *

Muskaan - hello evryone ! hey rahul ! { note - special hi to rahul }

* Rahul remebering what armaan had said prefers to keep his mouth tight shut and look angry *

* Muskaan thinks that Rahul is still angry with her...slowy moves toward riddima and pulls her aside *

Muskaan ( whispering so that only Riddima could hear ) - Main kya karu...woh mujse abhi bhi naraaz hai !

Ridzi - simple...usse pato !

Muskaan - kya simple ? kaise patau ?

Ridzi - phool de !

Muskaan - Phool ? ladke ko kaun bhala phool detaa hai ?
Ridzi - arrey ! phool ke saath ek sorry card bhi dede !

Muskaan - haah ! yeh theek hai ! abhi main phool orr card kahan se laau ?

Ridzi - arrey ! hospital ke bagal mein ek shop hai 1 jaakar leke aa...orr jaldi aana Keerthi ko pata na lage !

* Muskaan goes to the shop after she completes the duty assigned to her....buys flowers and a sorry card and slowly sneaks into the locker room *

* This time there was noone in the locker room as all of them were in the canteen *

* Muskaan was just about to place the flowers and the card in Rahul's locker when suddenly she hears someone footsteps...so she dumps the floers and the card into Atul's locker *

* She 4gets to close Atul's locker properly so u sould see that there were flowers inside *

* Some comes inside the locker room....It was Rahul *

* Muskaan rushes out of the locker room...leaving atul's locker door half opened with the flowers and the card inside it * ( Muskaan was too shy to give the flowers and the card to Rahul face-to-face so she decided to put them in Rahul's locker later ) *

* Rahul walks upto his locker to take out a file....he suddenly glances flowers in Atuls locker *

Rahul - yeh atul abb locker mein bhi phool raktaa hai ?

* He goes upto Atuls locker and takes out the flower bunch....and suddenly he sees this tag attached to them...and the tag reads....WITH LOVE, FROM MUSKAAN *
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* Rahul is shocked and angry *

* He slams atul's locker shut.....an Riddima enters the locker room just then *
* Riddima sees the flowers in Rahul's hands *
Ridzi - so....Muskaan ke phool tujhe pasand aaye ?

Rahul - nahi.....duniya ki sabse badi ghadi hai wo....main usse kabhi baat nahi karungaa !
* and Rahul leaves the locker room angriiy..*
Ridzi ( 2 herself ) - yeah Rahul bhi na....bahut hi ajeeb ladkaa hai...Muskaan ne usse kitni pyaar ke phool diya hai orr yeh orr gussa ho gaya ! aaj kal ke ladke bhi na

* Meanwhile Rahul is walking in the corridor with the flowers still in his hands *

Rahul ( to himself ) - yeh Muskaan bhi na....sab ladko ke saath ghumiti hai....pehle jai orr abb atul....kabhi meri tarak dekti hi nahi hai !

* He dumps the flowers in the dustbin and goes away...still angry *
* But unknown to him Muskaan ha seen him dumping the flowers in the dusbin....*

* Muskaan was angry that Rahul dumped the flowers in the dusbin....she was sitting alone in the canteen drinking coffee *
Muskaan ( to herself ) - woh ghadda ! pata nahi kis baat pe inta gussa ho raha hai ! orr uss fool ne mere diye huye phool ko dustbin mein phek diya ! pata nahi apne aap ko kya samjta hai ?

* Riddima sees muskaan sitting alone in the canteen and comes and sits with her *

Ridzi - Rahul abhi bhi tumse bahut guss hai....hame sayad koi orr tarika dudna hoga usse patane kaa...

Muskaan - koi zaarurat nahi hai ! main usse kabhi baat nahi karne waali hu !
Ridzi - lekin...ek baar usse baat toh karle...

Muskaan - nahi 1 kabhi nahi !

--Meanwhile on the other hand...Armaan is busy trying to make Rahul talk to muskaan --

Armaan - shayad woh usse ek frend ki tarah phool de rahi hogi ....u know giving flowers to ur best frend ?

Rahul - us tag par clearly with Bold letter lika tha...with LOVE, from muskaan !
Armaan - oh ! par tu ek baar usse baat toh karle !

Rahul nahi ! kabhi nahi !
Armaan - lekin tujhe usse baat karni hogi....

Rahul - kyu ?
Armaan - kyuki teri next duty uske saath hi toh hai ( with a smile )
Rahul - oh shit man !
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Ridzi - KYA ? par woh card to tu rahul ko dene waali thi na?
Muskaan - dene waali THI.....lekin uss ghade ko main abb koi card-ward nahi dena chati..
Ridzi - abhi jaake usse phek deeti hu
* Muskaan goes back to resume her work with Rahul *
* But then suddenly Atul walks in with Muskaan's card in his hands *
Atul - hey Muskaan ! Thankz for the card ! lekin tum sorry kyu keh rahui ho !
* Rahul heard this *
Rahul - MUSKAAN ! TUNE ATUL KO EK CARD BBHI DIYA ?
Muskaan - lekin maine nahi diya !
Rahul - MUSKAAN TUMSE MUJHE YEH UMEED NAHI THI !
Muskaan - oye...chilla kyu raha hai ?
Atul - haah yaar...tu chilla kyu raha hai....bahut hi cute card hai
Rahul - atul tu chup reh !orr Muskaan....mein chillau nahi toh aur kya karu...pehle tune atul ke locker mein phool rakhe...aur abb card bhi !
Atul - arrey wah muskaan ! Phool bhi rakhe ?
Muskaan - ( to Atul ) chup reh ! ( to rahul ) Tu kya bakwaas kar raha hai ? woh phool orr card mein tere liye laayi thi orr by mistake Atul ke locker mein rakdiya !
Atul - ( sadly ) yeh mere liye nahi hai ?
Rahul - ( to atul ) atul tu chup reh ! ( to muskaan ) - mere liye ?
Muskaan - haah tere liye ! Ghada kahikaa...orr tune woh phool dustbin mein phek diye !
Rahul - ( snaches the card from atul )
Atul - Oye !
Rahul - chup kar ! yeh mera hai !
Atul - tum dona na...PAGAL ho ! ( leaves )
Rahul - sorry Muskaan ! I dint know !
Muskaan - humph ! its ok !
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* at night *

- Rahul was in his bedroom ....it was 2 o colock in the morning but he coudnt sleep...he just kept thinking about how muskaan had actually bought the flowers an dthe card for him...his plan was slowly working Muskaan was slowly slowly getting attracted towards him....even though she does not feel it yet -

- But then now he had to make Muskaan tht she likes him too...and according to Armaan tht can be only done if he gets all flirty with her-

- But flirting was a difficult task for Rahul as he was no good at it...and flirting with a girl like muskaan makes it more harder -

* The next day at Sanjeevani *

* All the interns were still in the locker room...as Dr.Keerti had not yet arrived to assign them their duties *

* Armaan was continuoulsy nudging Rahul to go and talk to Muskaan alone *

Armaan - jaake usse baat kar na !
Rahul - aarey nahi jaa saktaa yaar !

Armaan - kyu ?

Rahul ( all shy ) - mujhe sharam aati hai !

Armaan - oye tu aise sharmaraha hai jaise ki koi dulhan apni shaadi ke din sharmati hai !.....be a man rahul ! be a man !

Rahul - (imitating armaan ) - be a man rahul ! be a man ! -- u cant be a man in front of Muskaan ! Koi bhi aadmi uske saame flirt karega na...usse wo kabab samjke khaa jayegi...samjaa ?

Armaan - kabab ? aarey nahi yar dont worry ! woh tujhe kabab samjke nahi khaa jayegii !

Rahul - u think so ?


Armaan - woh tujhe malai kofta samjke kha jaayegi...( starts laughing at his own joke )
Rahul - oh hahaha ! what a funny joke ! PJs mat maar !

Armaan - ok ok back to business...tumhe na...tumhe na...

Rahul - abbey ! aage vho toh bol na !

Armaan - mujhe pata nahi !

Rahul - KYA ? ( Screams )

* All the interns stare at him *

Rahul -( to the interns ) sorry- ( to armaan ) - kya matlab tujhe nahi maaloom ? tu toh mera love guru hai yaar !

Armaan - sorry yaar I am just out of ideas now ! sorry !
* Armaan walks away *

Rahul ( to himself ) - lagta hai abb mujhe hoe kuch karnaa padagaa...lekin kya ?
* suddenly *

Muskaan and anjali - ( scream )

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Rahul, atul and ridzi - KYA HUA ?

* All of them turn to look at Anjie and Muskaan *

Atul - kya hua ...tum dono kyu chillaie ?

Anjie - woh wahan ek cockroch hai !
* Rahul rolls his eyes *

Rahul - arrey yaar ! tum dono kitne darpok log ho ! inte bade hokar bhi tum dono ek bichare, masum. chote cockroch se darte ho ?

Muskaan - ( looking around..as if the cockroch is gonna jump on her ) - woh chota nahi tha ! bahut bada tha ! orr yahi kahi hai ! mujhe cockroch se darr lagta hai !

Rahul - Muskaan pagal mat ban ! cockrock tujhe kha nahi jaayenge ! Tum log ek cockroch se darte ho ! darpoks !
Anjie - lekin....( suudenly anjie "apne aakhe badi karti hai " )

Rahul - kya hua ?

Anjie - Rahul hilnaa mat.....

* Anjie is looking aroung franatically searching 4 something *

Muskaan - Rahul hilnaa mat....orr daro mat...kuch nahi hoga !
Rahul - abbey ! tum log aise kyu bol rahe ho ?

Ridzi - Rahul hilo mat ! orr darne ki koi baat nahi hai....

* Rahul is now getting scared thinking that why are these ppl speaking like that "

Rahul ( scared ) - yeh.....kya-kya ho raha hai ?

* Anjie comes towards him with a hard folder in her hands *

Anjie - daro mat ! kuch nahi hogaa....

Rahul - tum log aise kyun bol rahe ho...orr anjie tum yeh folder leke mere pass kyu aa rahi ho ?

Anjie - hilo mat !

Rahul ( scared )- tu...tu yeh kya karne waali hai ?

* Anjjie slowly moves the folder ...so that its just above Rahul's head *
Rahul - yeh tum...

* but b4 rahul could finish the sentence anjie stareted banging Rahul's head with the folder *
Rahul - anjie...stop....OW !

* But anjie kept hitting him *
* Finally Rhaul caught anjie's hands *

Rahul - Tu yeh kya kar rahi hai ? Mujhe iss umar mein marna nahi hai...!!

Muskaan - woh tere baaalon mein cockroch tha !

Rahul - ( jumping around ....ruffling his hair ...to het the cockroch out )

Atul - Lagtaa hai cockroch Rahul ki baalon ki forest mein ghum ho gayi !

* Muskaan starts laughing *

* Finally the cockroch falls out of Rahuls hair ( eew ! ) and it runs away somewhere *

Rahul - Muskaan ! tere shoulder pe cockroch hai ( Rahul was just joking )

* Muskaan starts jumping around...trying to get the ' cockroch ' off her *

Rahul - haha ! mazaak kar raha tha !
Muskaan - uule ke phatte Rahul... ..tujhe theek se mazaak karna bhi nahi aata kya ?

* and then a the great RM fight happens *
* Then ridzi, anjie and muskaan leave the locker room...Muskaan is very angry with Rahul *

* Rahul realizes that his flirting plan was going nowhere....then suddenly and idea struck him *
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Rahul ( thinking ) - abhi mujhe kuch karna chahiye...lekin kya karu...mujhe flirt karna bhi nahi aata ....orr wo bhi muskaan ke saath ??? lekin mujhe yeh karna hi hogaa...usse mere feelings ke baar emein maaloom chalna chaiye...!


* Rahul goes out of the locker room seraching for Muskaan.*

* He soon inds her near the deserted storeroom *
* Realizing that this was his only chance...he slwly creeps up behinf Muskaan *

* and drags her into the into the storeroom *
* and then puses her aganist the wall *

* Muskaan is shocked and was just about to screm when Rahul puts his hand over her mouth *
Rahul - shh ! chup raho !

Muskaan - oye...kya kar raha hai ! koi dekha to..?

Rahul - to dekne do...

* Rahul slowly srats edging towars her...*

* Muskaan is surprised but she has no plce to go...*

Rahul - pata hai muskaan....maine hamesha tume duniya ki sabse cute aur koobsurat ladkii manaa hai...

* Muskaan does not say anything *

* Rahul slowly moves a strand hair from her face *

* Muskaan heart starts beating rather fast...you could almost hear it *
* Rahul comes closer and closer *

* Just before thier lips are about to meet....Rahul backs away...gives Muskaan a kiss on the cheek and walks away ...leaving Muskaan still in the storeroom *
* Muskaan is still standing there...shocked...surprised....she dint know wht just happened ?...why did Rahul all of a sudden act like that ? .....and she dint even know why she was actually liked it...*

* Muskaan stood there....for a few more..minutes an then slowly came out of the storeroom...still not back to her full senses *

* Rahul on the other hand was walking in the corridor and was pleased with what he just did...and the best part ...he wasnt flirting...the words just came staright from his heart ! *

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* Then the an annocement went thorugh asking the interns to report for the briefing as Dr.Keerthi had arrived *
* Rahul wantedly jostled all his way..to stand next to muskaan *
* Muskaan was kinda embaressed ny what just happened in the storem and managed to keep a 'safe' distance from him *
* Unfortunatly for Rahul...Muskaan was giving duty with Atul and he was given duty with anajli *
* Dr.keerti asked all the interns to diperse for their duties *
* Just before Atul could go for his duty...Rahul caught him by the arm and pulled him back *
Atul - ouch ! kya hai Rahul ?
Rahul - sun....tujhe aaj ANjali ke saath duty karni hai kya ?
Atul - haah karni hai na ! lekin kya karoon Dr.keerti ne tujhe Anjali ke saath duty de di or mujhe Muskaan ke saath duty karni hogi !
Rahul - arrey tu tension kyu letaa hai ? Tu jaake meri duty kar or main teri duty kartaa hai !
Atul - lekin Dr.keerti....
Rahul - Tu Dr..keerti ki tension kyun letaa hai ? usse pataa hi nahi chalegaa...orr waise bhi tu Anjali ke saath duty karne ka mauka haath se nikalne deegaa kya ?
Atul ( brighted ) - wow yaar ! thankz yaar Rahul ! tu mera saccha dost hai !
* Atul walks away to accommopany Anjali in the path lab *
* Rahul was delighted...He went up to the general ward and saw Muskaan treating patients there *
* He slowly crept up behind her...and tapped her on the shoulder *
Rahul - Hi Muskaan....
Muskaan ( still shy ) - Rahul...umm...tu yahan ?
Rahul - Haah ! Maine Atul ke saath duty swap kar li !
Muskaan - umm...lekin kyu ?
Rahul ( taking the patients file from her hand ) - Kyunki mujhe tumhare saath thoda time bitaana tha...isiliye...kyun tumhe koi problem hai kya ? ( edging closer )
Muskaan ( moving away ) - ummm.....nahi..
* She takes the file from Rahul's hands and runs away to attend a patient...just trying to get away frm Rahul *

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* RM's duty ends *
* Muskaan is just trying to keep away from Rahul...while Rahul is just trying to do the opposite *

* Muskaan while walking in a corridor she bumps into someone....Jai *
Jai - hi muskaan....

* No reply from Muskaan.....and she keeps on walking *
* Jai follows her ...*

Jai - dekh Muskaan....tu jaise soch rahi hai...aisaa kuch nahi hai ! please meri baat sunoo !
Muskaan - dekhiye...abb hum dono ki kahaani khatam ho chuki hai ! plase leave me !
Jai - lekin Muskaan......

* Muskaan walks away *
* Meanwhile....Muskaan had been assigned evening duty and all the other interns had gone back home *
* Meanwhile Muskaan was just taking a litle break from her duty and sat down in the canteen for a small break...The canteen was empty *
* Jai sees Muskaan going inside the anteen and follows her *
* Muskaan is itting on the chair and silently sipping her coffee when Jai comes up behind her *
* He takes the coffee from her hands...puts it on the table...pulls her up to a standing position and he himself stands on his knees *
Muskaan ( shocked and srprised ) - Jai tum yeh kya kar rahe ho ?
Jai - Muskaan...mujhe pataa hai ki tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti ho jitnaa main tumse kartaa hu...

Muskaan - Jai...yeh tum...

* Jai pulls out a small box from his lab coat and opens it...there was a beautiful diamond ring in it *
Jai - Muskaan.....will u marry me ?

* But before Muskaan could say anything ----- *
A Voice from the door of the canteen - KYA ??
* Muskaan and she turned around to see whose voice it was...and the voice turned out to be....MUSKAAN'S FATHER ! *
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Muskaan - papa....aap yahan kya kar rahe ho ?
Muskaan's dad - oye ! main toh yahan tujhe waaa lee jaane aaya tha...lekin abb lagtaa hai ki main ek son - in - law ko bhi waapas lee jaaungaa !
Muskaan - SON - IN - LAW ??? papa...app galat samjh rahe...

* But before Muskaan could protest or argue about it...Muskaan's dad had started hugging her and Jai *

Muskaan's dad - oye muskaan ! tunne kyu mujhe nahi baataya ki tu iss ladke ko pasand karti hai ? abb teri shaadi isse hi hoogi...

* Jai bends and touches Muskaan's dad's feet *
Muskaan's dad - jeeta reh puttar ! ( pulls jai up ) wah ! kitnaa sonaa mundaa hai ! Muskaan ki pasand hamesha acchi hi hoti hai !
* Muskaan was stunned...speachless...she dint know wht to say *

* Then suddenly she saw an another figure near the canteen door...RAHUL ! *

* Rahul apparently had heard everything and walks away fron there angrily *

* Muskaan follows him *
Muskaan - Rahul ! ruko ! tum galat soch rahe ho !

* But Rahul was really angry and upset...he dint want to talk to her....infact he dint even want to see her *
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* Muskaan is running behind Rahul...trying to make him understand *

Muskaan - Rahul please ! main sach keh rahi hu ! jo tum soch rahe ho aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...plz ruk jaao

Rahul (makes an angry sort of sound ) - Muskaan ! abhi tuhare paaas bolne ke liye kuch bhi bacha nahi hai...mujhe akala chod do...

* Muskaan runs and grabs Rahul by his shoulders *

Muskaan - Rahul please ! meri baat suno...main jai se pyaar nahi karti....main tumse pyaar karti hu

* Rahul slowly turns his head.....he couldnt believe his ears... *
Rahul - kya ?

Muskaan haah Rahul...main tumse pyaar karti hu...orr maine tumse bachpan se pyaar kiya hai...lekin tum kabhi mujhe ya mere pyaar ko kabhi theek se samjha nahi hai....

Rahul - maine nahi samjha Muskaan ? maine ?

Muskaan - haah Rahul ! tune ! tune naa mujse kabhi theek tarah se baat nahi kiya...orr jab bhi baat karte ho....mujhe chidate ho...isiliye maine socha ki tum mujhe pasand nahi karte...isiliye main Jai ke saath ghume lagi..

Rahul - Tune ye soch liya ki main tujhe pasand nahi kartaa ? yeh tumne kaise soch liya Muskaan ? Main bhi toh tumhe bachpan se pyaar kartaa aaya hu...orr woh taane marnaa or tok sirf ek mazaak tha...I dint mean it......I love u too muskaan !

Muskaan ( brightned up ) - reall ?
Rahul - really....!

* Rahul slowly enveloped Muskaan in his arms....and kissed her on her forehead..*

suddenly --

A voice - MUSKAAN !!!

* The voice belonged to none other than Muskaan's dad....apparently both of them forgot that he was in the hospital *

* Muskaan's dad strides up to Rahul and Muskaan...pulls Muskaan away from Rahul *

Muskaan - papa....main Jai se nahi Rahul se pyaar karti hu...

Muskaan's dad - dekh Muskaan....maine Jai ko yeh vaada de diya hai ki teri shaadi uske saath hi hogi...orr main pna vaada nibhataa hu !

Rahul - lekin...

Muskaan's dad - Rahul tu chup kar ! abb Muskaan ki shaadi Jai se hi hogi...orr tu Muskaan ke paas aane ki koshish bhi nahi karna....


* Muskaan's dad drags a silently crying Muskaan away from Rahul...orders her to sit in a car with jai and the they all drive away ...*

* Rahul meanwhile was still standing there.....not knowing what to do !
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Jai drops Muskaan and her dad at Muskaan's apartment and goes away *
* Muskaan's dad drags a crying Muksaan into the house ... *
Muskaan's dad - dekh muskaan.....maine ek vaada kar diya hai...orr mein upne diye hue vaade nibhataa hu...orr abb tu chup chaap usse shaadi karle...

Muskaan - main nahi karungii !
Muskaan's dad - agar tu nahi karegi toh.......toh meri beti mere liye maar chuki hogi !
* Saying so Muskaan's dad leaves the house and slmas the door behind him *
* meanwhile on the other hand Rahul was busy thinking what to do...*

* Suddenly the phone rings *

* It was Muskaan *
Muskaan ( half crying ) - Rahul....

Rahul - muskaan ?

Muskaan - haah mein hu...Rahul...hum bahut bade problem mein phass gaye hai....papa mujhe orr Jai ko kal Amritsar lee jaa rahe hai...shaadi ke liye

Rahul - kya ??? lekin tune tumhare papa ko bataya nahi ki tumhe ye shaadi pasand nahi hai ?

Muskaan - batane ki koshish ki rahul....lekin vo apne zid pe aade hai...meri baat hi nahi suni...Rahul tum mujhse pyaar karte ho na ?

Rahul - haah kartaa hu muskaan...

Muskaan - to please mujhe yaahan se bhagaake le jaao ! Mujhe ye shaadi nahi karti ! please Rahul 1
Rahul - Muskaan ! pagal mat ban...main tumhare papa se baat karne ki koshish karungaa....orr agar woh nahi maane toh...Main Amristar aake tume utaakar le jaaungaa....

Muskaan - ( smiles a little ) ok bye rahul ! I love you !

Rahul - bye Muskaan ! love u too !

* The moment Rahul keeps the phone down...it starts ringing again *

* It was Armaan *
Armaan - HI Rahul ! bass bore ho raha tha...orr riddima bhi phone nahi utha rahi toh maine socha tumne phone kardu...

Rahul ( sounding dull ) - hi Armaan...

Armaan - kya hua...?
* Rahul fills up Armaan about the day's events *
Armaan - whoa ! yeh muskaan ke paap thide crack hai kya ?

Rahul - haah shayad.....

Armaan - so whats the plan....?

Rahul - pata nahi !

Armaan - mujhe pata tha ki tu yehin bolegaa....tu ruk ! maine kuch sochtaa hu...bye !
Rahul - Bye !
* Meanwhile at Muskaan's house *

* Muskaan's father comes back *
Muskaan's father - dekh Muskaan maine Jai ke maatji or pitaji se baat karli hain....orr woh chate hain ki shaadi jald se jald ho jaaye .....isiliye hum Armritsar ke liye kal hi rawaana ho jaayege !

* Muskaan was speechless....there was no point in arguing with her dada....but how could she coney that she was leaving today to Rahul ? *

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* Muskaan's dad was busy packing the luggage ....he had almost emptied all the 'samaan' in Muskaan's house *

* Muskaan had no other option but too help her father in packing *
* Then with a lot of courage Muskaan goes up to her father and asks --*

Muskaan - papa ? kya mein ridzi ko ek baar phone kar sakti hu ?
Muskaan's dad - haah kar na ! isme meri permission ki kya zaroorat? lekin zaldi....hume thode derr ke baat niklanaa hogaa....

* Muskaan dials ridzi number.....she knew her father wouldnt allow her to call Rahul...so she called ridzi instead *
Ridzi - Muskaan ! tu mujhe abhi phone kar rahi hai ? maine yah armaan se kya suna ? tu shaadi karne waali hai ? usse nikamme Jai se ? lekin tujhe to Rahul pasand hai na ? to tu Jai se kyu shaadi kar rahi haii ? tere papa ki wajah se kya ? lekin kyun....

Muskaan - Riddima...plz mujhe bhi toh kuch bolne de...

Ridzi - oh sorry ! haah bol !
Muskaan - riddima mein aaj raat ko hi yahan se Amritsar jaa rahi hu....plz yeh baat tum Rahul ko bataa do gi ? * Muskaan's dad eneters the room...Muskaan chages the topic * .....haah haah ridzi....tu uss patient ko sambhal legi....orr shaadi mein zaroor aana..ok bye ! *

* meanwhile after an hour....*
* Muskaan is sitting beside Jai and they are all going to Amritsar in a train *

* Muskaan was really upset...she dint what to leave Sanjeevani...she dint want to leave her frendz and she dint want to lose Rahul *
* Jai kept trying to talk to her...but Muskaan kept her lips tight shut *
( PS- jai's dad and mum are traveling with them too....Jai's dad's name is rajeev and his mom's name is sunita )
* Muskaan really dint know how this all was happening only in one day...her dad was acting like a mad person and getting her married to someone she will never love......and jai's parents ? they both were complete nutcases ! they agreed to this whole shaadi thing because it seems it was the first time Jai had proposed a gal 4 marriage even though he went out with almost 100 girls...*
* Jai was now really gettingon her nerves....he was actually trying to feed her !!! *
* Muskaan pushed his hand away *
Muskaan ( whispering ) - dekho Jai ......mujhe tanng mat kao....waarna kaan ke neech ke dungii na....tere iss handsome chere ko koi pehchaan bhi nahi payegaa....smajhe ?
* That shut Jai up right away *
* Muskaan was sitting in the in the train bogie...surrounded by this psychos ! all she wanted to do was to escape from here and meet Rahul *
* Suddenly she heard someone calling her name *

* She looked around...she thought it was her imagination *
* ...and then she heard it again *
* She kept looking here and ther to find out who it was *
* Muskaan's dad noticed this *
Muskaan's dad - kya hua Muskaan ?
Muskaan - kuch anahi papa....kuch nahi ...

* The she heard the voice again *
* But this time she dint have to look hard.....the person was sitting in the seat just diagonal to her...*
* Muskaan makes a bahana that she wants to go to the washroom...*
* The person follows here *
* Both of them reach a deserted train bogie *
Muskaan - Armaan ! tu yahan kya kar rahe ho ?
Armaan - tumhari madat !
Muskaan - lekin....sanjeevani ?

Armaan - Sanjeevani ki fikar chodo ......hum Dr.keerti ko baatakar hi aanye hai....woh bhi tumhari madat karnaa chati thi !
* Muskaan couldnt belive her luck...she had the worlds bestest freinds *
Muskaan - Tum akele aaye ho ?

Armaan - nahi ......ridzi...atul...anjie...bhi saath aye hai

Muskaan ( upset that Rahul dint come ) - oooh...

Armaan - orr Rahul bhi aaya hai...

* Muskaan brightned up at this sentence *

Muskaan - kaha hai sab ?
* Armaan asks her to follow him...and takes her to an another bohie *
* The muskaan she sees Rahul....Muskaan goes and practically leaps upon him *
* But then suddenly --- *
A voice ( with anger ) - MUSKAAN ! YEH TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO ?
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* All the interns turn around to see who it was...*

* It was woman...she was speaking to an another gal whose name was also Muskaan *

* All the interns heaved a sigh of relief !.....*
Muskaan - abb mujhe jaana hai...

Ridzi - intni jaldi mat jaao...

Atul - nahi muskaan ko jaana chaiye....warna uske papaa ko shak ho jaaye gaa...

Anjali - haah atul shai keh rahaa hai...Muskan ko jaana chahiye...

* Rahul is silent......he dint want her to go.....but he couldnt let her stay either...*
* Muskaan looks at him ..*
Rahul - I think you shoult go now...

* Muskaan gives Rahul a swift kiss ( all the interns wantedly look away )and then she leaves *
* Rahul stares after her *

* Muskaan goes back to her seat, smiling slightly as she was happy that the interns had come to resuue her from this nightmare *
* Jai notices her smiling *

Jai - kya baat hai ? intni muskuraa kyun rahi ho ? hamare shaadi ke baare mein soch rahi ho kya ?
* Muskaan asks Jai to shut his mouth..*
* The next day...in Muskaan's house...The wedding preparations were on full swing..*

* Unfortunatly for Muskaan....Jai kept following her like a dog .....and she dint get the time to call Rahul *

* Jai and Muskaan were asked to go to a Jewellry shop...Muskaan agrees and calls up Rahul to tell him were she was going..so tht they could meet *
* In the shop--- *
* Muskaan was not interested in selecting any jewellry for her self because she was sure that her marraige with Jai was not going to take place *
* Jai notices the lack of interest in Muskaan for selecting the jewels...so--- *
Jai ( to the shopkeeper ) - yeh waala dikhana ....( pointing to a necklace )

Shopkeeper- ( hands him the neckalce )lekin yeh necklace sirf ek shaadishuda ourat pehn saktii hai...

Jai - no problem ! akir yeh meri biwi banne wali hai...

* He takes the necklace and was heading towards Muskaan to put it around her neck *
* But before he could do that....some yelled-- *
A voice - RUKO !
* Jai turns around to see who it was...It was Rahul !!!*
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* Rahul walks upto Jai and Muskaan *
* He takes away the necklace from Jai's hands and lays it on the table *
Rahul ( to Jai ) - Only I have the right to put that necklace on Muskaan's neck...get it ?
* Jai laughs sarcastically at this *
Jai - toh tum yahan aa hi gaye....Main tumahra intezaar kar raha tha....ki kab tum aaoge orr mein tere samne hi Muskaan ke saath shaadi ki mandap per baitu...

Rahul - intna over confidence sehat ke liye theek nahi hai Jai....orr waise bhi pataa nahi kal kya ho saktaa hai....!
* Saying that Rahul plants a small kisson Muskaan's forehead ( in front of Jai ) and leaves...*
* Jai is all confused...he dint understand the meaning of Rahul's sentence.....*

* He drags Muskaan by the arm....opens the car door...pushes her inside....he sits in the drivers seat....and drives really fast *
* They reach home.....Jai storms into his bedroom....he was angry infact he was fuming...what did Rahul mean....??....was Rahul planning to elope with muskaan ?? as these questions were spinning in his mind...he decided that he should be on high alret and keep a check on Muskaan *

* Muskaan on the other hand was eavesdropping on her father' and mother's conversation in their room *
( MD- Muskaan's dad...MM - muskaan's mom )
MM - Muskaan Rahul se pyaar karti hain ?
MD - haah ! wo ek dusre se pyaar karte hain...

MM- Hame shayad Muskaan ko bataa denaa chahiye ki hamare orr Gerewal pariwaar ke beech kya hua tha !
Md - Nahi ! Main nahi chahta ki Muskaan yeh jaane....wo bahut duki ho jaayegii...

* Muskaan couldnt resist....she burst into thier room *

Muskaan - Papa....yeh aap dono kis baat ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai ?
MD - kuch nahi...kuch bhi toh nahi...

Muskaan - boliye naa papaji....boliye naa papa !
MM - main batati hu...

MD - nahi...mat batao..

MM - Usse jaane ka haq hai....ki kyun hum usse Rahul se door rehne ke liye keh rahe hai...

Muskaan - boliye mummyjii

MD - jab tu or Rahul Sanjeevani gaye the na upni internship ke liye....tab main orr tumhare papajii gaye the Rahul ke ghar tere rishtaa lekar...orr jab humne tumhari orr Rahul ki shaadi ke baare mein baat karna shuru kiya tha.....tab Rahul ke mummy papa humpe hasne lage orr hamari bahut bezaati ki...

Muskaan - KYA ?
MM - haah Mukaan ! un logon ne hame dhake maarke ghar se bahar nikal diya tha....

* Muskaan was shocked...she felt anger rise in in her....she felt a sudden pang of hatred towards thr grewal family...*
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( BACK TO THE PRESENT ) ( READ THE 1ST PART OF THE STORY )

* The next night *

* Muskaan sat fully dressed and alone in her room...it was her wedding night...she was getting married to Jai....but she was not happy....she was crying....she dint love Jai......and now she dint love Rahul either...*

* Normally whenever she thought of Rahul, she would start blushing and smiling to herself....but today she dint fing herself blushing or smilig...instead she felt hatred aganist him....*
( Suddenly Muskaan's cell rang...It was ridzi *

Ridzi ( in a hurry ) - Muskaan ...jaldi chath pe aa....Jaldi !
Muskaan - Ridzi ? kya hua ?
Ridzi - tu sawaal mat puch chath pe aa

* Muskaan goes to the terrace....there was nobody there....suddenly a figure is visible....and it turns out to be none other than Rahul *

Rahul - Muskaan....jaldi chalo...hum dono yaha se baagh chalte hain....Armaan ne train ki tickets book ar liye....jladi...chalo...

* Rahul grabs Muskaan hand and pulls her fprward *
Muskaan ( pulling her hand back ) - Nahi ....

Rahul - kya ?

Muskaan - nahi...main nahi chalungii....

Rahul - Muskaan....yeh tu kya bol rahi hai ?
Muskaan - mein tumhare saaath nahi calungii Rahul...orr main tumse baat bhi nahi karnaa chatii !
* Muskaan breaks down into tears *

* Rahul is shocked...he dint understand what was going on *
Rahul - Muskaan.....??

\Muskaan - tumse behter Jai hai.....main usse hi shaadi karungiii

* The moment she said this and another person comes to the terrace...Jai ! *
Jai - AHAA ! mujhe pataa tha ki tum dono kuch gabad karne waale the....

* Muskaan runs and jumps into Jai's arms....Jai is clealy surprised...but he returns the hug back and drags Muskaan away *
* Rahul is still standing on the terrace....he dint know what juz happened.....his phone rings *
Armaan - hello...Rahul ?

Rahul ( almost crying ) - Armaan...

Armaan - what happened Rahul ?

Rahul - muskaan mujhe pyaar nahi karti armaan...nahi karti....

Armaan - KYA? tu jaldi guest house aaja....abhi ke abhi

IN the guesthouse --

* Rahul enters the guesthouse...he is looking really sad *
* Armaan ridzi atul and anjie walk upto him and ask him what happened *

* Rahul explains what happened to them *
* Everone is just shocked with what muskaan did *
* Armaan was furious *
Armaan - Muskaan aise kaise kar sakti hai ? how could she toy with rahul like that....

Ridzi - I will go and talk to her.....

* Ridzi goes to Muskaan's house...she walks into Muskaan's room *
* Muskaan was crying silently...*
Ridzi - how could u do tht Muskaan ? tu Rahul ke saaath aisa kaise kar sekti hai ??

Muskaan - lemme explain...

* Muskaan tells Ridzi everthing...*
* Ridzi is shocked ....*

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* Ridzi is shocked *

Muskaan - mein kya karu riddima ?? Kya main apne 5 mahino ke pyaar ke liye apne maa baap ko naaraz kar du ?
Riddima - nahi....lekin tumhe Rahul ko bhi dhoka nahi denaa chahiye na Muskaan.....orr waise bhi usse ne kya kiya ? galtii toh saari uski mummy papa ki thi na....toh phir tu usse kyu sazaa de rahi hai ? uskaa kya dosh hai ?
* Muskaan is silent....Ridzi continues *
Ridzi - yeh tum galat kar rahi ho Muskaan......apne saath bhi orr Rahul ke saath bhi....tu toh shaadi karke chaali jaayegii Muskaan lekin uss bichare Rahul ka kya hogaa Muskaan ?....Woh tumse pyaar kartaa hai Muskaan....orr usse khoke tum apni zindagii ki sabse badi bhool kar rahi hai....

Muskaan - yeh maine kya kar diya...??

Ridzi - dont worry Muskaan....abhi bhi time hai...Rahul ko phone kar !

*Ridzi gives Muskaan her mobile....Muskaan quickly dials Rahul's no *
Muskaan - uskaa mobile switch off aa rahaa hai !
Ridzi - de....main guesthouse call karti hu...

* Ridzi calls the guesthouse...Anjie picks up the phone...*
Anjie -hello ?

Ridzi - di ! Rahul kahaa hai ? usse jaldi bulaao !
Anjie - Rahul ? woh toh Railway station chalaa gaya....hume usse bahut rokne ki koshish ki...lekin usne hamari baat nahi maani...

Ridzi - to fir aap guesthouse main kya kar rahe ho ?
Anjie - Main aur atul , armaan ka wait kar rahe the...pataa nahi kahaa chalaa gaya...

Ridzi - ok bye !

Ridzi ( to Muskaan ) - Rahul railway station chalaa gaa...hame jaldi wahaa jaana hogaa Muskaan !
Muskaan - kaise ?

* Ridzi walks up on down the room.....she sees a window *
Ridzi ( pointing to the window ) - uss khidki se...

Muskaan - lekin....hum fit ho paayege wahan...

Ridzi - obviously yaar ! chalo jaldii !!!

* Muskaan and Ridzi escape through the window *

Muskaan ( in hushed tones ) - lekin hum yaha se station kaise jaayege ? orr yaha auto orr taxi bhi nahi miltii !
A voice behind Muskaan's houlder - Maybe I can help you woth that !
* Muskaan and Riddima turn around...It was Armaan....*
Ridzi ( giving him a hug ) - u r a lifesaver ! waise tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ?
Armaan - Mujhe Muskaan ke saath baat karni thi....isiliye main yahan chalaa aaya...abb jaldi chalo...warna train chut jaayegii !

Muskaan ( ginving Armaan a huge hug ) - Armaan ! I love you......as a frend ( she aads after seeing ridzi's face )
* Muskaan , Ridzi and Armaan get into the car *
* But before they could drive away.....someone sees Muskaan running away before her marraige...and the person turned out to be none other than Jai *
* But before Jai could do or say anything...they drive away *
* Meanwhile....Rahul was sitting on a bench....he was waiting for the train...*

* The train arrives...Rahul gets up and gets inside it *
* Muskaan, armaan and ridzi were still in the car *
Ridzi - Jaldi karo Armaan....warna Rahul chalaa jayegaa

Armaan - orr kitni tez chaalaau ? already 130 ki speed pe jaa raha hu !
* Rahul gets into the train ....The train would leave in 2 mins....*
* Armaan. ridzi and Muskaan reach the station.....Muskaan runs as fast as she can ans reached platform no.2 *
* Muskaan is running around like a mad person searching for a the train 2323 ( the train tht Rahul is supposed to go in ) ......she is running around asking people for directions....but none bothered to help her *
* Finally she spots train 2323...and in was just about to leave *

* Muskaan starts running behind the train ...screaming Rahul's name...*
* The train was was gaining speed and Muskaan could no longer keep pace with it....she stopped running...her eyes shone with the tears...she lost Rahul...lost him forever...*
* Riddima gave Muskaan a hug...ridzi dint know what to do or what to say to Muskaan to make her feel better *

* Riddima makes Muskaan sit on the bemch....suddenly Armaan taps Muskaan on the shoulder....she looks up at Armaan.....Armaan was pointing somewhere....Muskaan looked where his finger was pointing *

* There was someone standing on the far end of the station...RAHUL !!! *

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* Muskaan looks towards the direction Armaan was pointing at.....Rahul was atnding there *

* Muskaan's joy knew bounds....she ran upto him and hugged him *
* Rahul dint hug her back...apprently he was angry with her *
Muskaan - Rahul...mujhe maaf kardo....mein pataa nahi tumhe kya kya bol gayee....plz rahul mujhe maaf kardo...I really lone u !
Rahul - tum mujhe pagal samjhti ho Muskaan ? Ek baar kehti ho ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho...orr ek baar kehti ho ki tum Jai se shaadi karnaa chahti hai.....tumne mujhe kya samjh rakha hai Muskaan....main koi khilouna nahi hu jiske saath tum khel saako...

Muskaan ( hurt by Rahul's words ) - lekin Rahul...pehle meri baat toh suno......

Rahul - abb tumhara paas sunane ke liye kuch orr bhi bacha hai ??

Muskaan - haah hai...

* Muskaan explains the reason 4 her sudden change in behaviour...she tells him everthing about the feud between her family and his family *
Rahul - kya ??????

Ridzi - haah Rahul ! yeh sacch hai....

Rahul - oh I am sorry Muskaan.....mujhe nahi pataa tha ki mere maa baap tumhare papaaji se aise baat ki thi...

Muskaan - no Rahul ! I am sorry....main pataa nahi ....kya kar rahi thi ...I love u !
* Hearing this Rahul lifts Muskaan face by her chin and plants a kiss on her *

* Suddenly - *
Anjali - Ridzi !!!
* Armaan , rahul, muskaan and ridz turn their faces to see Atul and anjali coming towards them with all their luggage in their hands *
Atul ( panting..the luggage was heavy !! ) - hum log aa gaye ! orr humne sabke bags bhi le aaye !!
Armaan - waah champ ! lekin tujhe kaise pataa tha ki hum loag yahan hai ?
Ridz - wo maine di ko car mein call karke bataaya tha ki hum loag aaj ni yaha se nikale waale hai...

Rahul - lekin train ke tickets ?
Atul - mere paas hai....yeh lo !!!
* Muskaan hugs all of them together ....she was happy that she had such great friends..*
Armaan - abb sab loag alag alag directions mein jaakar train 1231 ko dundho...orr 5 mins mein waapas yahi aajanaa...ok?
* All the interns go in diffrent diffrent directions to serach for the train *
* Suddenly while muskaan was searching for he train....she feels a hand tap her shoulder...she turns aroung and gasps

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* Muskaan felt a hand on her shoulder...she turns around to see who it was *
Muskaan - Ashish bhaiyaa ??? ( Ashish was her cousin bro...they both loved each other a lot )
Ashish - haah main muskaan ! ( in a stern voice ) orr yeh tu kya karne jaa rahi hai Muskaan ???

Muskaan - main Rahul se bahut pyaar karti hu ...plz mujhe jaane do

Ashish - Nahi Muskaan tu nahi jaa sakti...

* Muskaan fell silent...she was hurt..she dint expect her brother who she loved the most did not let her go*

Ashish ( laughs ) - arrey pagli! main mazaak kar raha tha !! Tujhe kya lagaa ??? main tujhe jaane nahi dungaa ??
* Muskaan is relieved ....she hugs him *

Ashish - abb jaldi jaa....Train platform 6 par hain....

Muskaan - mummy papa...??
Ashish - tu fikar mat kar...main un logon ko samjhane ki koshish karungaa...( giving her a slight push ) ...abb jaldii jaa...warna train choot jayegii *
*Muskaan hugs him once more and calls the rest of the gang on her mobile 2 inform them about the train *
* She waves a quick goodbay to Ashish and runs to Platform 6 *
* The rest of the gang was already waiting for her on the platform *

* They all get into the train *

IN the compartment -

Armaan - Phew !!! finally yeh drama khatam ho gayaa..

Rahul - haah !! finally...

Ridzi - yeh drama tab nak nahi hogi jab tak in dono ( pointing at Rm ) ki shaadi nahi hoo jaati

Atul - arey haah....in dono ki shaadi Mumbai mein karva de ??

Rahul - na....too risky...Muskaan ke mummy papaa jante hoge ki hum Mumbai jaa rahe he...

Anjali - haah ye baat sahi he ! to orr fir kahan ??
Ridzi - Dont worry....I have a solutuon for this problem...

Armaan - kya ?
Ridzi - Fasalpur....

* The gang excahge confused looks *
Ridzi - Faslapur yaar ! wohi chota sa gaau.....

Anjali - oooh !!...good idea ridzi

Muskaan ( confused ) - tum loag kya bol rahe ho ?? kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha ...

Ridzi - fasalpur ek gaau hain jahan hum tum dono ki shaadi karwa sakte hain..

Rahul - lekin hum wahan jaaye kaise ??
Anjali - Iss train se hi !!
Atul - kya ??
Anjali ( rolling her eyes ) - Yeh train falsapur ke platform mein thodi der ke liye ruk jaayegii...tab hum loag utar jaayenge..simple !
Atul - lekin humne toh mumbai ki tickte le rakhi hain...

Anjali ( shrugs ) - atul......!
Armaan ( thinking ) - impressive...lekin tum dono iss fasalpur ke baare kaise jaante ho ??
Ridzi - hum dono papa ke saath Falsalpur gaaye te...papa ne wahan ek chota sa medical camp khola hain..

Armaan - oh !

Ajali - so falsalpur final ??

Muskaan - final !!
* All of them cheer *

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* Muskaan was lying comfortably on her bed in the compartment....It was 5 mins to 12 o clock and Muskaan, Riddima, Anjali were in the same compartment....The boys were snoring peacefull in the compartment next to their *

* Anjali and Riddima were deep in their sleep....Muskaan meanwhile was awake....she was scared...At 10 o clock in the morning...she woudnt be Muskaan Chadda anymore...she would be Muskaan Rahul Gerewal....*
* Muskaan wasnt the only one awake....Rahul was awake too.....he was also lost in his thoughts...he was finally gonna marry the girl he wanted...finally after so many problems and obsacles they both were finally gonna be together forever....soon in his thoughts Rahul fell asleep *

* Muskaan still lay awake...she coudnt sleep....she was too exicted...she also felt sick so she ran into the washroom *

* Once in the bathroom....she washed her face...and stared at herself in the mirror...She wouldnt be the same Muskaan anymorw...she would belong to Rahul after the marriage...she smiled...she liked the idea of belonging to Rahul *
* Suddenly interrupting her thoughts she heard people screaming outside, The train stopped...she quickly tugged on the handle of the door....but it dint open...she tugged on it harder...after about 5 mins of tugging the washroom door...she managed to open the door...and the moment she opened the door...she found herself surrounded by fire *

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* Rahul and the rest of the gang had already got off the train.....Ridzi and Anjali were nursing a wounded man....Armaan and Rahul on the other hand were waiting for Muskaan *
Rahul ( tensed ) - somethings wrong....all the people have got down except Muskaan...Mujhe andar jaana chahiye

Armaan ( scared that Rahul will get into the blazing train ) - No....Main tujhe nahi jaane dungaa....( Catches him by the arm before he could run into the train )
Rahul ( Deperate ) - ( screaming ) ARMAAN !! TUM KYA KAR RAHE HO ??? MUSKAAN IS IN THE TRAIN...MUJHE JAANA HAI...CHOD

Armaan - Nahi...Main tujhe nahi jaane dungaa Rahul...no matter what...

* Suddenly a scream is heard from inside the train....it was Muskaan's voice *

Rahul - ( screaming ) ..ARMAAN ! AGAR RIDZI ADAR HOTI TO TUM ADAR NAHI JAATE KYA ?

* Armaan then understands what Rahul said...with a sigh he lets go of Rahul's arm and Rahul jumps into the blazing train *

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Muskaan was out of the washroom...She was surrounded by fire....she screamt for help...but it was of no use ...no one could hear her as the train was empty *
* Suddenly she herad a voice...the same voice her ears ached to hear...Rahul's voice *
* Rahul was running toward her...even though she was stuck betweeb the flames...she couldnt help but admire how handsome he was......his red shirt brought out the bright hazel colour of his eyes....*
* As she was thinking about Rahul...she suddenly heard Rahul yell.. *

Rahul - MUSKAAN !!! LOOK OUT !!
* But before Muskaan could do or say anything....and metal bar from above Muskaan broke loose and she was knocked out *
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Later in the hospital ---

* Rahul had succesfully saved Muskaan from the fire...but he unfortunatly coudnt save her from the metal bar that fell on her head....and she was currently in a serious condition *

* Armaan, ridzi , anjali, and Atul were sitting on the bench...while Rahul was pacing up and down the hall *
* Ridzi cpmes up to Rahul and places a hand on his shoulder *

Ridzi - Hume Muskaan ke parents ko phone karke unhe batana chahiye Rahul...

* Rahul does not say anything....he felt his tears stinging...he nods at Ridzi..*
* Ridzi gives Rahul a small smile and walks away to call them *

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* The next day *

*Muskaan was still critical...Rahul was desperate to see her but the doctor wouldnt allow him to meet her*

* Rahul paced franatically in the corridor...the rest of the gand was sleeping on the benches *
* Then suddenly someone yelled his name...he turned around to see who it was...MUSKAAN'S PARENTS ! *
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* The next day *

*Muskaan was still critical...Rahul was desperate to see her but the doctor wouldnt allow him to meet her*

* Rahul paced franatically in the corridor...the rest of the gand was sleeping on the benches *

*Then suddenly someone yelled his name...he turned around to see who it was...MUSKAAN'S PARENTS ! *

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( PLZ NOTE - MM= Muskaan's mother , MD - Muskaan's dad )

MM- ( Running upto Rahul ) - Muskaan kahaa hai ?
* Rahul dosnt say anything he just points at the operation theater *
* Muskaan's mum starts crying and lays her head on her husband's cheat *
* Finally Rahul could take it no longer and he speaks up *

Rahul - Mujhe maaf kardo Aunty...yeh sab meri wajh se hua hai...nahi main Muskaan ko bagaa ke lejataa or nahi Muskaan ke saath aisa hotaa...app mujhse nafrat karte honge...

MD - ( shocked ) Nahi puttar...tum kyun maafi maang rahe ho...yeh sab humari galti hain...Hum dono me tum dono ka pyaar nahi samjh paaye...hume maaf kardo puttar
* And before Rahul could say anything...MD had pulled Rahul into a hug...and Rahul hugged right back *

* Suddenly inturrupting this happy moment the Doctor came out and announced an another happy news *
Doctor ( to all of them ) - She is completly alright now....she is currently uncounsious......She will be discharged by tomorrow *

* Everyone cheered....Anjali, Atul gave Rahul a hug...*
* Rahul went inside to see how Muskaan was doing *

* Muskaan was Lying on the bad...there was a huge bandage around her head....even with the larrge white bandage she looked beautiful ...Rahul kissed her forehead and left the room *

The next day -

* The gang and Muskaan's parents were sitting on the benches waiting for Muskaan's discharge...*
* Soon..the doctor came out with Muskaan leaning on his shoulders *
* As soon as Rahul saw Muskaan...he went to her and gave her a hug...he felt tears of happiness sting his eyes *
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The next night at Fasalpur --

* Muskaan and Rahul were married......Both of them were standing on the terrace of the Guest house *
* Rahul felt Joy he had never experienced before...Muskaan was finally his...and she would remain his forever...no one could take her away from him *
Rahul - I love u muskaan !
Muskaan - I love yOU too..

* and they both share a passionate kiss....and lived happily ever after *
THE END !
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Originally posted by: sweetdamage

awww thanks for putting me in the list...and it was a very sweet and nice happy ending! hehe

can't wait to see your new fanfic!! :D:D

Why r u telling me thankz ??? IInfact I shud Thank u !!!
thankz !!!

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