Kasauti - Part 5 - Pg 8 - 10-11-08

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Thanks.... I know after its kind of lonely with LRL but life has to go on... How about right...

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Sorry for the delay but I got caught up with school work and before I start again I wanted to update for you guys who are dying to read it... 😛

Chapter One
Part Five

"Come' on Vidya... lets go and meet Yuvi Sir's wife?" said by one of her friends

"I am not interested in meeting Yuvi Sir's wife" she told them

"Come' on Vidya... for me!" said by Rummy

"Alright Rummy... only for you" she told him with a smile

They all go heading toward the mess while Yuvi took Additi back to the mess and found a table for them. 'I'll just go and get us some food for us,' he told her, knowing how tired she really was even though she was pretending not to be, 'You wait here and I'll be back in a minute.'

Additi nods her head and sits down when she saw whole bunch of people coming her way... At that moment... Additi got scared and wanted to hide herself in her mother's arm badly but she wasn't with her anymore... when she needs her. Additi had few tears in her eyes...

"Hey guys... why is she crying?" asked by Rummy

"Like we know" said by his friends who were standing with him

"Who is crying?" asked by Vidya who was standing behind Akruti, Purvi, and Peter

"I think Captain Yuvi Sir's wife is crying..." said by Mallah and Rummy

"Suriji, can I have two plates of today's menu?" asked by Yuvi

"kyun nahii" said by Suriji, in his happy mood

Yuvi just gave him a smile when he heard someone scream and someone cry-out-loud for help

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"What's the matter Cadet Sharma and why are you shouting at my wife? And what did she do to you?" asked by Yuvi

Vidya turns around and tells him "you just stay out of our matters and who gave you the right to interfere in our matters?"

"Yuvraz, please don't interfere between two sisters and I knew this was going to happen because Jiji (Jiji means older sister) is carbon-copy of my step-father." She told her husband than turns around and faces her sister "So what were you saying few minutes ago that I ruined your life... yeah your dad ruined my life. If he had never been so stubborn like you than I would have never ran away from home leaving mom with you guys." she told her sister

Vidya: So what are you trying to say... that me and dad aren't keeping mom happy only you were than gust again your wrong... mom is so happy with us and she isn't even missing you one bit (pointing at Additi).

Additi: Actually, your right! Mom doesn't need to miss me because I'm always inside her heart like my real dad and one more thing mom doesn't need to show her love toward me because I know she loves me a-lot like Raj Juju, Tanya Jiji, Kaajal Jiji and Dhruv Juju. And they don't have to show their love to me like they have to show you.

Burning Vidya said "take back what you said or else"

"or else what?" said by Additi who was ready for a nasty cat-fight even Vidya was ready for one too.

Yuvraz just watched his wife argue with her sister who is his cadet and his favorite cadet.

"Come' on Additi... lets go you must be hungry since your vrat" said by Yuvi who was trying to break the fight between two sisters who are ready to jump one another.

"or else what" Additi repeat herself

Vidya got more mad and said something that she should have not said "Dad, was right you have failed in keeping all your relationships that's why Sagar left you on your guys wedding day and people say that I failed in relationships"

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Suddenly everything stopped for both sisters and mostly Additi. Additi just stood there silently and remembered how Sagar ditched her on their wedding day and few tears drop down her face. Yuvi just wanted to hug her and assure her that nothing will happen to her because he is their to protect her from all the evil things around them after knowing Additi's past and how she has been hurt by her loved ones...

To change the atmosphere... Yuvraz brought two plates of food for him and Additi but Additi told him "I'm not hungry anymore"

"Additi, I know that your hungry but you just don't want to eat after what just happened few minutes ago and why are you bothered by Cadet Sharma's words when I accepted you the way you are not because of your past. Also I give a dam about your past so now eat something." Yuvi told her, but Additi wasn't in the mood to eat and leaves from there when she hears someone saying "you aren't going to eat from my hands too Prachi"

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Guys... I think i'll ended over here and if I get more than three replies in next hour or so than I'll post next part...

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Edited by Kasamm - 16 years ago