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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: prerna1
that was so sweet
plz continue soon

Thanks and I'm still not feeling good but I will post this part for you and many other people who are supporting me.... 😊

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#43

Thanks guys... and I'm still not feeling good but I will post this part for you and many other people who are supporting me.... 😊

Chapter One
Part Three

They drive to the academy in silence, but fortunately the atmosphere is a little less tense now that they've had the opportunity to actually talk to each other again after many years.

As they enter the gates, Additi had a strange feeling about the place for some reason also felt like she had been here before with someone. But, who?

"Additi, what are you thinking?"

"Nothing"

Yuvi walked Additi to his room, carrying her suitcase. He was thankful that all of the cadets were currently in their classes so that they could attract minimal attention. Still, he noticed that all of the orderlies were staring at them, obviously having nothing better to do.

They entered his quarters and Additi looked around, knowing that this was going to be her new home for at least awhile. The place was tidy, she shouldn't have been surprised, she knew that soldiers were usually very careful about their things, and he probably had somebody come in to clean for him too.

"Well this is it," Yuvi announced, "I know it's not much, but I hope you'll be comfortable here." He led her through the living room and entered the bedroom where he placed her suitcase down. "The bathroom is through that door," he told her, "And there should be enough room for you in the closet, but if there's not, you can shift some of my things."

Additi just nodded and gave him a small smile, trying to let him know that she would be fine.

"Well then I'll leave you to settle in," Yuvi told her, "I'll be gone for about an hour and then after that I'll show you around the academy, if there's anything you need before then, one of the orderlies will help you or you could come finding me in my class around the concern or just ask one of the faculty Members and they will bring you to me."

Once again Additi nods her head to assure him that she will be fine... Also Yuvi takes one quick glance at his wife to reassure himself that she would be alright he left, closing the door behind him.

Additi unzipped her suitcase and began to unpack, placing her clothes into the closet. It was only when she had finished and sat down on the bed to rest when she noticed what had escaped her attention while she was un-packing. She picked up the picture of them together on their wedding day and looked at it. Two years seemed like such a long time ago now. Neither of them were smiling in the photo, instead they looked straight ahead at the camera, serious expressions on their faces. The only sign that it was a marriage photo at all was Additi's outfit and the garlands around both of their necks.

Their marriage might not have had the best beginnings, but now here two years later she had finally joined her husband. Additi wanted to believe that the future would hold better things for her, that finally there might be some happiness in her life after what happened in her past, but she was hoping too much for herself.

Because she had learned the hard way of finding happiness in her life.

***

Yuvi had been heading down the corridor towards his classroom when the familiar voice called out to him. He turned around to find Dr Shalini hurrying towards him and smiling at him.

"What is it, Doctor?" he asked her, "Anything you need?"

"Well Captain, I was wondering where your wife was." Shalini said, looking around as if expecting her to be just behind Yuvi. "I thought you were picking her up this morning."

"Well Doctor Shalini, my wife has arrived and she is here, but right now I'm heading to my next class, so obviously she won't be going with me." Yuvi was quite amused by her eagerness to meet Additi, ever since Shalini had learned that his wife was coming she had been bombarding him with questions which he had been successfully avoiding.

"I can't believe you're abandoning her to go to class on her very first day!" Shalini exclaimed, "What's she going to do by herself?"

"It's only for an hour, Shalini, and Additi is fine, she's getting settled in." Yuvi told her patiently, "But if you wouldn't mind looking in on her then I would appreciate it. She wanted to call her sister to let her know she arrived safely so maybe you could show her where the phone is?"

Shalini's face brightened, excited to be able to meet Yuvi's wife at last. "Of course I don't mind!" she exclaimed, "I'll just go and meet her right now, she'll be fine with me until you come back!"

She was already hurrying off when Yuvi called after her. "Shalini!" he said, trying to stop her before she had already gone too far away. She turned around expectantly, waiting for him to continue. "Additi is very quiet," Yuvi warned her, "And very shy too, so don't expect her to be too talkative."

Shalini nodded and giving him a mock salute, continued walking towards his room.

Yuvi just smiled and shook his head slightly. Additi might be quiet but Shalini was definitely talkative enough for both of them, so he knew she would be in good hands.

***

Additi had just finished putting her things away when she heard a knock at the door to the outside and went to open it.

Shalini's first thought when she saw the girl who opened the door, was how one of the cadets had gotten into Captain Yuvraz's room and what they were doing there.

However Shalini quickly realized by the way this girl was looking at her expectantly that this was no cadet at all but Captain Yuvraz's wife.

"Yes?" The girl asked her quietly, and Shalini shook herself out of her thoughts, realizing that if she stood there staring for too long Captain Yuvraz's wife would start wondering what was wrong with her.

"You must be Additi," Shalini started off, wanting to at least check if she was right. The girl nodded and Shalini breathed a sigh of relief. "I'm Dr Shalini Singhal, and I'm the doctor here at KMA. I ran into Captain Yuvraz while he was on the way to class and he asked me if I could check on you."

Additi nodded and gave her a small smile, "Please come in," she told Shalini politely, and opened the door wider so that she could come into the room.

Shalini followed her inside thinking that Yuvi's warning had been correct, his wife was very quiet.

"Have you settled in yet?" Shalini asked her, "Let me know if you need any help unpacking, luckily we don't have any cadets in the infirmary at the moment, so I'm quite free."

"Do the cadets end up in the infirmary often?" Additi asked her, sounding quite concerned.

"Well that depends on which cadet it is." Shalini replied with quite a bit of humour, "Some of them are more accident prone than others. But training is quite tough and most of them will get small injuries occasionally."

Additi nodded and Shalini suddenly remembered that she was also training to become a doctor. "I heard that you're also studying medicine," she asked her, "Are you enrolled in the college here in town?"

"I think you have misunderstood because I am not studying medicine but I am studying law" Additi cleared Shanlini confusion...

"Sorry about that... so have you checked out any of the colleges around here?" Shanlini covering up for her mistake...

"Um... I'm not sure because Yuvi hadn't told me anything about it yet"

"It's no problem," Shalini told her reassuringly, "You must be tired after your journey anyway, if you like I'll show you where the phone is, Captain Yuvraz said you might like to call your sister."

"That would be good," Additi replied, "She must be worrying about whether I've arrived or not."

"Do you have any brothers other than sisters?" Shalini asked her as they walked towards the phone, she noticed that Additi hesitated before she replied, looking down towards the ground.

"I don't have any brothers... only three sisters and one mother" Additi told her, "Maybe that's why my sister worries more."

"And it's the first time you've left home after marriage, isn't it?" Shalini asked her, wanting to find out more about the girl walking next to her. She was so very quiet, and despite how young she was, she had an air of maturity to her that most young people didn't.

They reached the mess which was currently empty since all of the students were attending their classes and drills, and Shalini called out for Suriji.

He quickly appeared with his usual smile on his face, "Good morning, Dr Shalini!" he told her, "And who is this charming young lady with you? Is she a new addition to the academy?"

Shalini hid her smile while Additi looked a little embarrassed.

"No Suriji, this is Additi…" at his continued look of confusion, Shalini decided that she had better just tell him, "Captain Yuvraz's wife!"

Suriji's face suddenly broke out into a huge grin, "So this is Yuvraz Putar's wife?" he asked, and shook Additi's hand enthusiastically. "Welcome to the academy Additi Putar, ai hai, kitni sohni ladhki hai!"

Additi looked even more embarrassed even as she smiled back at him, and Shalini thought she had better tell him why they were here before Additi started blushing.

"Well Suriji we're here to use the phone so that Additi can call her sister." She told him, and Suriji quickly led them over to the phone that was currently working, then he and Shalini stepped away while Additi dialled the number.

"Very quiet girl isn't she," Suriji remarked thoughtfully, "She seems very sweet too."

"She certainly is," Shalini told him, "Captain Yuvraz had warned me she was quiet, I think she's just a bit shy. It will take her awhile to get used to life here."

Suriji nodded as they both watched Additi speak to her sister quietly on the phone. "You know she reminds me of somebody, I just can't work out who…" he was beginning to say, when Additi hung up the phone and came over to join them.

"How much for the call, Suriji?" she asked him quietly, starting to look for her purse in her bag.

"No, putar, I'm not going to take any money from you." Suriji told her kindly, "It's your first day here with us, and after all, I know your husband since when he joined the academy and helped Naina Singh Allhuwalia and her friends to prove Navin is innocent and plus finish Rajveer Putar's mission in proving Navin's innocent. I'm glad that he found himself such a sweet girl."

Looking over at Additi, Shalini noticed that she had turned a bit pale and wondered what the matter was. But Additi recovered quickly, nodding shyly in reply to Suriji's words.

"Thank you very much, Suriji." She told him politely.

"There's no need for thanks, putar." He told her in a very fatherly way, "Just think of this canteen as your own, come and sit here whenever you please, I'll always be happy to have you here."

Additi nodded, a small smile on her face, and Shalini decided it was time for them to leave there. Noticing that Additi seemed a bit tired, she suggested that they go back to the room and Additi nodded as if relieved.

It was when they had entered the bedroom and Additi had put her purse down that Shalini noticed the photo on the bedside table and picked it up to examine it. It had obviously been taken at their wedding and neither of them was smiling. If anything Shalini had even more questions about this marriage than she had before. She had always been a naturally curious person, and it was when she sensed a mystery that she really switched to full detective mode.

Additi seemed tired and Shalini realized that she had traveled a long way and probably hadn't had much sleep.

"I'll leave you to rest," she told Additi, "Captain Yuvraz should be back soon, you can take a short nap until then."

Additi nodded thankfully, really just wanting to collapse on the bed.

When Shalini was gone she lay down on the bed and quickly drifted off to sleep, exhausted by everything she had been through that day.

Apnki Pyari
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Edited by Kasamm - 16 years ago

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

that was gr8 part

but Aditi aur Yuvi ki shaadi ko 4 saal nahi hua the kya ?

plz continue soon going gr8

aur ye story Raj Naina ki story ke baad ki hain hmmm

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Panchi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Awesome dude... I have read your prologue its mind-blowing....

The first part was great and second part was superb.

Last but not least part three is the best..

Tumhari Panchi
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Edited by Panchi106 - 16 years ago

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Eesha Virani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Hey

I love the scenes between Shalini, Suriji, and Additi even the scene between Shalini and Yuvi.

Please update soon

Eesha

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SamLuvsSaRun

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Hey Kinjal GR8..👏 I liked the UD....😊 So we can now hope tht the two sisters are gonna meet...Hopefully in the next part.....Update soon Cant wait......... 😊

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Kasamm

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was gr8 part
but Aditi aur Yuvi ki shaadi ko 4 saal nahi hua the kya ?

plz continue soon going gr8

aur ye story Raj Naina ki story ke baad ki hain hmmm

Actually... you could say its after Raj and Naina's story but who knows they could also return back...

Originally posted by: Panchi106
Awesome dude... I have read your prologue its mind-blowing....

The first part was great and second part was superb.

Last but not least part three is the best..

Tumhari Panchi
😳

Well thank you and I'm glad that you liked the concept and all the parts...

Originally posted by: Tumhari Eesha
Hey

I love the scenes between Shalini, Suriji, and Additi even the scene between Shalini and Yuvi.

Please update soon

Eesha

I'm glad that you liked the scene between Suriji, Shalini and Additi because there will be more scenes between them and even Yuvi...

Thanks again Eesha

Originally posted by: sweetdreams4040
Hey Kinjal GR8..👏 I liked the UD....😊 So we can now hope tht the two sisters are gonna meet...Hopefully in the next part.....Update soon Cant wait......... 😊

Thanks... not in this part but the next part they will meet and its going to be a nasty scene between two sisters even might get into a cat-fight "like Meera and Pronita in Kasamh Se" 😆

Originally posted by: Prachi_Shah
Awesomely done....

Prachi

Thanks Prachi

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Kasamm

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Guys... I am feeling much better but disappointed that Left Right Left ended this week and now they are planning to close the forum... But this won't stop us from enjoying each others fan-fic...

Anyways I hope you guys will like this part and next part will be kinda nasty toward the end between two sisters... 😉

Chapter One
Part 4

Shalini was back in the infirmary when she heard a knock on the door and looked up to see Yuvi standing there.

"Did everything go alright?" he asked her, obviously on his way back from class "Additi managed to call her sister?"

"It went fine," Shalini tells him, "She made the call and after that I took her back to the room so she could rest."

Yuvi nodded, "Thanks for that, I felt bad about leaving her on the first day, but you know a soldier's duty has to come first."

"She's really sweet," Shalini told him with a smile, "I just hadn't expected her to be so…"

"Quiet?" Additi asked, "I warned you about that."

"Actually I was going to say young." Shalini told him, "I thought that she was a cadet at first, there must be quite an age difference between you."

Yuvi was a bit annoyed at her comment, but he knew he had to expect it. After all, it would be obvious to everybody exactly how young Additi was.

"There's a difference of six years," he told her, "Additi will be turning twenty two in August 10th." He only knew when her birthday was because his Bhabhi had informed him in a letter once. He remembered he had been posted up north near the border when the letter had arrived and not knowing what else to do, he had sent her a pair of silver and blue earrings he found in the market. He remembered that she had sent a note back thanking him, the only time she had ever written to him.

"That's quite a difference," Shalini remarked, obviously still digging around for information. "How did you two get married?"

"In the normal way," Yuvi told her, a bit amused by Shalini's not so subtle attempts to find out more, "You know, taking the rounds around the fire, putting on the mangalsutra. Were you expecting us to have gone to a church instead?"

"Very funny," Shalini told him, rolling her eyes, "You know what I mean, was it a love marriage or an arranged marriage?"

"It was an arranged marriage," Yuvi tells her quietly, not sure how else to describe it. The only difference is that their marriage was arranged only one day in advance. "It's a very long story, Shalini, and I think we'll have to save it for another day. Right now I'd like to go and check on Additi."

"Alright, but I hope you know that I want all of the details eventually." Shalini told him with a smile, "You can't escape me forever."

Yuvi smiled at this. She certainly wouldn't be finding out all the details, however he would have to think up another version of how it happened because knowing Dr Shalini, she wasn't going to give up until she found out.

***

Kaajal doing her house work, she climbs up a chair to clean some dusty looking shelves, she loses balance and is about to fall when Dhruv catches her just in time, in fear Kaajal holds Dhruv really tight with her eyes closed, Dhurv looks at her with a grin on his face and gives her a soft kiss.

At the same time his daughter walks on them...

Soon as Dhruv notice his daughter he lets go off Kaajal and Kaajal takes Shurti with her while she has her eyes covered after seeing her Dad give her Mom a kiss.

Tanya sitting in her room starring out of the window, Raj walks in with a plate of food.

R: Tanya you havent eaten anything since this morning, here i brought you some food

T: Raj, i'm not hungry but worried for Gurdiya and since its her fast

Y: Tanya, don't worry for Gurdiya anymore because Yuvi is with her and about her fast I have already texted Yuvi about it so don't worry... And now eat something

T: Raj just leave me alone!!!

Tanya storms out of the room, on her way out she bumps into her mother-in-law

Raj's Mother: beta, Raj is only trying to cheer you up

T: lekin mama, Raj aur Trish...

Raj's Mother: beta listen, whatever God does, he does for the best

T: lekin...

Raj's Mother: you should support Raj, he hasnt ate anything since this morning either

After saying this Raj's Mother leaves form there while Tanya feels bad and walks back into her room. Where she finds Raj sitting on her bed looking dejected. She goes and sits next to him

T: I am really hungry

Raj looks up at her with a smile and is about to give her some food

T: I will only eat if you eat with me

Raj nods his head

They both smile at each other and eat together...

***

Yuvi knocked softly on the door but when he received no answer he opened it and went inside. Making his way to the bedroom he found Additi fast asleep on the bed, curled up tightly into herself. Standing there he watched her, noticing that at least she looked a bit more carefree when she was asleep.

Shalini was right, she was very young, much younger than he was. He worried about the age difference between them. At this age she shouldn't have been married at all, she should've been enjoying herself at college and falling in love with boys in her class. Instead she had had to grow up far too fast.

Additi stirred, perhaps realising that somebody had been watching her and opened her eyes.

Seeing Yuvi standing there, she hurriedly sat up, rubbing at her eyes tiredly.

"When did you arrive back?" she asked him, smoothing out the chooridar she was wearing and beginning to plait her hair again.

"Just now," Yuvi told her, "You don't need to get up, you can keep sleeping if you like."

"No that's okay," Additi replied, "I just needed a short nap."

"Then if you like, I'll show you around the academy and we'll have dinner." Raj told her, "Did you meet Suriji when you made your call?"

Additi nodded, "He seems very nice." she told Yuvi

"Then shall we go see the academy?" Yuvi asked as she slipped on her shoes, "It's not so very big, but it's good for you to become familiar with it."

Nodding, Additi followed him out of the room. She stayed close by to his side as they walked around. Yuvi showed her the academy buildings, the outside of the hostels and the parade ground before leading her back to the main building.

"I should introduce you to Brigadier Chandook," He told Additi with a smile, "After all, he's the reason that you're here in the first place."

***

Taking her to Brigadier Chandook's office, he knocked sharply on the door and waited to be asked to come in. Gesturing to Additi to follow him, he stepped in, saluted the General and stood to attention. Additi walked in and stood quietly a step behind him.

"Yes, Captain Yuvraz." Brigadier Chandook said, waiting for Yuvi to say what he wanted.

"Sir, I wanted to introduce you to my wife." Yuvi told him, "This is Additi Randhawa. Additi, this is Brigadier Chandook, KMA's commandent."

"I'm very pleased to meet you, Sir." Additi told him, thinking that he looked exactly the way Shanlini had described him, as if he was tough yet fair, and a strong disciplinarian.

"I'm pleased to meet you too, Mrs Randhawa." Brigadier Chandook told her, looking her up and down as if inspecting one of his cadets. "I hope you'll be comfortable here in our academy. Have you settled in properly."

"Yes, Sir." She told him, "Yuvi was just giving me the tour so that I can become more familiar with KMA."

"I believe you're joining your new college from tomorrow."

"That's right, Sir." Yuvi replied for her, "I'll take her for registration in the morning."

"If you wish then you can always help us with our legal matters," Brigadier Chandook suggested, "I know that we can often use some extra hands."

"I would like that, Sir." Additi told him, "Thank you very much."

"Then we'll go and take our dinner now, Sir." Yuvi told BC, glad that the meeting had gone so well.

"Carry on, Captain." Brigadier Chandook told him and they left the room.

Before they had to the mess, Yuvi took Aditi to the nearest Ganesha temple by KMA. After Additi finished her prays she left with Yuvi and asked him "why didn't he come inside the temple?"

He didn't know what to say but he told his wife that he doesn't have faith in god anymore after what happened to him... when he was a kid.

Additi stared at him for a minute than told him "it doesn't matter how many things we go through in life but we never should loose faith in god because usually its him who helps us in our difficult moments in life. Therefore, you should never loose hope in god and who knows one day you will come to him for help"

"maybe your right" he told her with a smile while they are driving back to KMA...

***

Enjoy this part... 😛

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal

Edited by Kasamm - 16 years ago