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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: firdous
arluver15 and dmgluver01(plz tell me ur name)......cool updates gals....any1 continuing or shall i?

thnxs my name is nruti

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afreen

@Afreen22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

**recap**

A: bye luv ya

R:luv ya too

Riddhima and all finish their shopping and return home

As soon as Riddhima reaches home she sees for armaan

Riddhima: papa armaan aur arima kahan hain?

Shashank: woh upar room mein hai....

She goes upstairs...

Armaan has put arima in her cot and has gone to take a shower

Arima wakes up from her sleep and stands up in her cot...

As soon as Riddhima opens the door ...she sees Riddhima and in her excitement starts to put her leg out and by mistake falls out...

Riddhima: arimaaaaaaaaaaa....

She quickly takes her in her arms.....arima is crying....Riddhima tries to console her but she is inconsolable...

Riddhima takes her to the garden

Armaan comes out and is surprised to c arima's cot empty

He goes down and asks 4 Riddhima

Just then she enters.......arima has fallen asleep

Armaan: sooo madam how was ur shopping? aur yeh arima ko kahan lekar gayi thi?

She looks at him with tears in her eyes

Armaan: jaan....kya hua?tum.....

she moves away

Edited by firdous - 16 years ago

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: firdous
arluver15 and dmgluver01(plz tell me ur name)......cool updates gals....any1 continuing or shall i?

thank you!!!😊.....my name is Mahima.....

btw....very nice part!

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

hey.......is n e one continuing?

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

ok.......i'm gonna try again!!

recap:

*Armaan: sooo madam how was ur shopping? aur yeh arima ko kahan lekar gayi thi?

She looks at him with tears in her eyes

Armaan: jaan....kya hua?tum.....

she moves away*

Armaan follows Ridhima

Armaan: arre jaan, kya hua....tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Ridhima:................😭

Armaan: Ridhima, kuch tho bolo?!?!?!

Ridhima just keeps crying and hugs armaan tightly
Armaan hugs her back

Armaan: Ridhima, jaan, chup ho jao
He puts her face into his hands and asks her wat happened

Ridhima: while crying she says......Armaan, Arima apne cot mein se girgaye thi!!

Armaan: KYA????😲

Ridhima:..........haan.....sab meri galati hein!! mujhe dekh ker wo khari hui aur fir bhar nikalne lagi aur gir gayi!!.....i'm very sorry Armaan!!! mujhe maaf kardo!

Armaan: arre jaan, tum aisa kyun kain rahi ho? ismein tumari koi galti nahi hain.......arima bas tumhe dekh kar excite hogayi aur us excitement main gir pari!.....waise ab to wo tikh hain na?

Ridhima: haan wo tikh hain....main usko chup karane aur sulane legayi thi garden mein

Armaan: tho fir ab chup ho jao....and he kissed away her tears

Armaan: now give me a big smile!!😊

Ridhima:😃.....i luv u armaan

Armaan: i luv u 2 jaan!!...........waise tum mujhe ek chiz dena bhul gayye!! (he's tlking about his good morning kiss that she didn't give him😆)

Ridhima:(she understands that he wants a kiss but is pretending😆)kya......mujhe to kuch yaad nahi ara hain jo mujhe tumhe dena ho!

Armaan: (he understands that Ridhima is playing around!!)....really basket?!?!?...with a naughty smile!!

Ridhima: really Armaan!! also with a naughty smile!!

Armaan: aacha?? koi baat nahi!! mein bata deta hun!!

Armaan now starts coming closer to Ridzz and she is moving back

Ridhima: Armaan.....kya kare ho? koi dekh lega!

Armaan: tho kya hua....mein to tumara pati hun!!!

Ridhima starts to say sumthing but b4 she culd start, Armaan kissed Ridhima on the lips

This kiss went on until someone knocked on the door.....they left each other and wen Ridzz saw who was on the door, she got really embarassed and was blushing so much and she hid behing armaan

Armaan: app??😲*

hey guys........this was another attempt and the longest i've written....of course cuz its my second update!! lol.............but tell me how it was!!😊.....someone continue soon!!
byes<333333333
Mahima

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

thanx!! i actually have work rite now so i can't continue....but can sumone else???? and i'll try to continue tomorrow!

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afreen

@Afreen22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

Mahima rocked it......loved ur part😃

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

thank you so much!!😊 r u going to continue?

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

gr8 part plz cont soon

if u want i can write the next part but who do u want to b standing out side???

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

yea sure u can continue! 😊

umm.......i think it should be one of the elders like shashank or nani.

i'll try to continue after u!!
waiting for ur update!!
byes<3333333333