Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151 - Page 7

hey part 1 was really very nice!! liked it alot! u write extremely well n d way u describe ppl , emotions , situations , thoughts , scenes n evrythin is very nice!!! thnx for d pm n cont soon!!!

hey amazin ff..was a silent reader..bt cudnt cntrl nw 2 comment...waiting fr next update...

rilly nice nj.. n dnt u wrry u gonna score d hihgest in ur class..lol!!n m soooo sorry but cnt comment on each part... will try but not sure...but do plzzzz pm me....k?
love u loadzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
stutie

Hey!

omg!!! u strtd a fanfic 3 days bk nd i even dint come 2 kno.....nd u even updated a part.....gosh.....it ws a definate treat 2 read it...tho as u said it ws a lil more explanative....bt its k.....i love readin d way u express feelings....well best of luck for ur literature project....i kno u r gonna rock it gal....

coming back to the part....i ws..no no...i'm literally in shock.....nd nt 1....many shocks.....gosh gal wat an intro nd wat an update.....surprises par surprises!!!! armaan nd lovely married 😲 nd dat 2 for FIVE yrs...omg!!! watever d reason ws wud hav been big!!! bt wt medical evidences!!!! gosh storyline toh samajh aa gayi bt ur english first tym me toh sab upar se jaa rahi thi....had 2 read it twice....😆 bt must say its suprbly written.....

btw wen i read lovely i ws almost rollin in laughter😆 nd dat 2 petite😆 sorry bt woh uski image kind of fix hai na dimaag me....😆

thnx for d pm...tho its late...shd hav got it aftr the intro itself..
cont soon....too many things gotta unfold....

alrite folks....thanx for the LOVELLLLYYYY comments lolzzzz


yeh i understand u all stil going bonkers abt her being married to our greek god....but well all in its good time...im letting u all think more for a chnage!!!!

n well acing the course...haha ul be surprised to know the amt of talent ppl have in that class.....well they are all eng majors in grad school the least to say n me an engin major um just glad i cleared the quals n got thru the class i wasnt sure id make it thru hehe considering i have no official eng education after like 12th grade!!!

but oh well thanx for the support....i am gona say again......PLEASE BE HONEST N CRITICAL it will make a difference....if theres any part u dont understand leme know il explain for sure, the lingo is a bit different trust me um making it less here, for my final drafts for the class update each week its way more....thats how fiction writing is according to them...descriptive hehe!!!!

oki lamba bhashan....il stop just wanted to thank u all for the great comments....glad u all enjoyed the part....n yeh for those who realized after my PM that the fic is done, i never sent any PM's after the intro so these were the first set of them......its very less time for me now that school is one so.....oh well there i go again il end the speech now.....

lovya all!!!

amazing part NJ👏! loved the way you wrote it😳but im so glad Lovely isnt 'lovely' from dmg😆

it is sciences hun...um an engineering grad student, EE major.....far from english lolzzz