Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151 - Page 110

reserved...sorry hinz...plz dont be mad...

i wonder if u even want me to reserve this one now kratz... :(

*hmmmm* did u c KS G(karan n shraddha grover lol...how convenient) ..SBS chat..chota mota cute stuff..

Roses are red, violets are blue
Its Valentines Day, i too love you! :D

ohh well u guessed rite..ntn for u here either..go on...skip yurself now! -------->

luv more,
me😎

:) smile jauz!!!

*edit* well no matter how much one tries..ters never a escape! =)

luved it..for wat it was...! dts rite jauz...it was nt yur best...bt amt of time u gve it..was clear...if i had ne doubts abt it bein wat i thot it wud be lke...i m left wit none now..!!
i dnt have a favorite bit...u wud koe y! ..d last RM u gve...touched d ground and tis one d clouds..!! (WW in makin...u shd koe wat i mean..)

RR..i didnt c dt cumin..and i was pleasantly surprised..silly me..y didnt i think u cnt let 2 people in d family binded by relations and culture..to walk away wit no bond betn tem...u had to draw a circle arnd tem too....u did..effortlessly...!! i was hurtin myself wit a constant smile...i cudnt let go..sam got a verse on RR..yur RR deserve no less...tey were so simple...and dnt kill me....bt i thot of yur bong frd for a sec ten...dnt even ask me y..cuz i dunno!!!! uve mde tis fic d most realistic..bt darlin all yur chars are d nicest ppl livin on earth...i wonder hw dt works?..and tey all are roped wit a similar level of goodness..wish i cud be muskaan.. :)!!
Ridzi and Muski....tev become...i like..dt!! Wen rahul tlks abt A..at times i think of GR..ters a odd similarity betn d two bonds..as if dey bth deal wit d same base...or smg!! and dt cumes to me...so dts really gud stuff!!
Rz reaction was marv...lke i mentioned (earlier commnt)..ridz was doin hinz wopiie dance...hehe!so cute...adorable..and d innocent joy n satisfaction..u defin got dt!
"Yeh our secret I promise. I'm zipped!" i tld yah..while readin..i was laughin..dt was fab!! =)
Az bit...on d flight...i was thinkin abt u..ten..ovb! bt i cudnt imagine u..sayin all dt wit a strt face..maybe its juss onl dt u cum out so...grounded...and calm...!!ovb...dt was another impressive stuff ter!!
CR..hmm i hvnt forgotten ter old days...lke u tlkd abt...sumhw..ters always a line betn tem...tis line of comfort...and protection...ridz sumhw remains to be ammyz girl bfr chiragz frd...and i luv it dt way...!!
ridz uneasiness regardin gappu...her crazy banter wit chirag..silly bill duo were mast ekdam!!

Anji-Armaan-Atul...c wat i mean...ur such a class wit relations of all sorts dt u skipped on d most imp of all dt related to u as an individual...dt calls for yur personal need..(yeh u koe wat m referrin 2...) well well gappu stayed over at armaanz...and all dt taken care of.....ovb anji shudnt hve gven a second thot on invitin him...id dam her for doin dt...and armaan so easily mde himself through atulz gud bks..ahha!! had to be..atul must koe abt AR..if nt anji.....atul wud...or rather shud! be able to guess!! calls for d bond atul-ridz share!! yehh!!
d dinner table chat was fun..reminded me of ter hme part ovb...phew u gotta move away frm creatin d same bg and interactions jauz...not every1 n every fam is goin to be d same...yes..similat bt defin nt d sme! (umm...no not pointin twds ..ziz)..bt i luved it nehow...was d flow od happenin...most i luved abt!..

AR..wat cud i possibly say abt tem..!!ter 1st look..i almost...cried..!!divine meet..!!memories flushed..i was walkin simultn in NZ world...first time i saw Z..naseem...dt was so us...so nazzee!! 😊

Number of first times i've lived, ive lost count
I have been hugged, been touched, cared for
None would come close to you, anything about you
That one look, one smile, that eye-lock,
I don't remember ever before in my life,
to have lived worth a lifetime,
that i did in that moment, seeing you.
You are my world, i always knew
You own my heart, i always felt
Its only today, i reaslized i even lost
my soul to you.
Every thirst has a time for its quench,
YOU are both...just you..only you.

jauz...it was hell of a part...no words cud do justice to yur work and feelinz..all in all...u shud koe,...i luved experiencin and livin d moment through ridz eyes..i stepped in her shoes and didnt let off...till A called out her nme...cuz dt bit i KNEW for d life of me..was cumin and in d end..(NO KIDDIN)...and i wanted to feel it...lke a stranger! =)

luvya nutter..always!
me ⭐️

awesome part!!!! they're finaly back 2getha 😃

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ohh wow its soo long! yay im excited to read it :D
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ohhh my what a happening part! your sooo right nj, its not just a lot in length, but the events taking place!
ok firstly i love how ridz and rahul have bonded so well! she really is like part of the family now! felt bad for muski tho, had to say goodbye to gappu and armaan :( but she has mr garewal to support her!!! hehe
chirag is awesome!!! hahah omg hes so fun and cool! really the way he distracted her were was great. it was a sweet idea, having armaan see her before she sees him... and i just adored his excitment on finally seeing his best friend after a year! him and gaurav the ultimate accomplices!
alright, i dont think i have enough words to describe the much awaited armaan riddhima reunion!!!!!!! nj you really went above and beyond my hopes and expectations! it was way better then i could have ever imagined!
the way you had the both their point of views showing simultaneously during the scene was briliant! the whole scene...from the point armaan wakes up on the plane, his excitment and anticipation on a high...to when hes off the plane and sees chirag...then the moment his eyes land on her, and her turning around seeing him...i just dont know what word to use to describe that exact moment...their eyes meet...the rush of emotions...it was beautiful and perfect!
i cant imagine what they must have felt in those few seconds that seemed like an eternity! her whispering his name, his sweet reasuring smile, her jumping into his arms, and the warm embrace!!!!!!! OMG it was soooooo exciting and heartfelt and passionate and emotional! AMAZING! i had tears in my eyes and a huge grin on my lips!
you did a wonderful job nj, the way you described everything, the emotions you brought out, i really wanna give you a huge hug for that! well done girl!!!!!
*sigh* and now they are together! but still didnt get any alone time to fully enjoy their new feelings, to talk to one another. but the family dinner was so sweet! im so glad he fit in so well with them! and i especially loved seeing ridz and gappu together again being totally crazy and adorable! gosh i love gappu, hes my fav :D and it was very nice to see them so affectionate with each other... the smiles, kiss, hugs! yay im so glad they are both back in chicogo!!!!!!
ok the ending was soooooo good! omg cant believe he showed up at her house outside her window in the middle of the night after angie and atul left! that too after he flew halfway cross the world and should be jet lagged! what a guy...crazy and hopelessly in love! ohhh im soooooooo excited for the next part, they will finally be together! alone! omg im going insane, i feel like im gonna explode, cant handdle all this excitment! lol so since, im sure, we all are dying for the next part, pleassseeee update soon! or at least try to :D
p.s. loved the lagaan reference! one of indians finest creations according to me! and i just love that song...went very well with riddhimas current state!
ok, continue soon nj! your the best :)

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amazing update👏!!!