Unleashing Wat Remaind Unsaid-Pt19/pg144/note-p151

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Reine

@Reine

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1101

hey,

no doubt u kept us waitin, but the part was so gr8 that v can actually think of lettin u go this time. lol.

u know, i was actually as nervous and excited as armaan. couldnt wait to read wat riddhima's reaction would be like. would it be surprised, full of love.......

i must say, u really surpassed all my expectations. that was suchh an adorable part.

cant thank u enough.

luved the way a girl like riddhima, who is so outgoing could feel so shy. awww. that was so cute

and armaan using his status in gettin info about atul and angies duties, lol, that was so cute and funny at the same time.

missed having much of gappu around though. i mean though he was there almost throughout, i missed his cheeky lines and his gr8 sense of humour. but, at the same time i enjoyed seeing AR together again.

hope the next part is comin up pretty soon.

waitin eagerly.

pls. pm me.

sakshi

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#1102

*reserved....even in one of the worst days ever, this one surely was something to smile upon...so thanks nia...!!

Kiran

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Pragati

@-Bubbles-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1103

hey NJ!!!
absolutely LOVED the part....everything...everything was just amazing put down,right from the restlessness of Armaan to meet Riddhima to him surprising her...i seriously dont have too many words to describe how much i lovedd this part!!!!!!!!
coming to specific parts..
i was spellbound by the way u portrayed Armaan n Chirag's feelings when they saw each other after a whole year..
And that second he met his eye. Chirag. It took Armaan all but a second to feel the elation hit him all over again as he broke into a smile.

"Gaurav!" he said suddenly finding his voice hoarse and constricted and tugged at his sleeve to get his attention. And then his look with Chirag broke as a he saw his attention drawn to...her.
and the song...
"My heart it speaks a thousand words I feel eternal bliss
The roses pout their scarlet mouths like offering a kiss... :)

No drop of rain or glowing flame has ever been so pure
If being in love can feel like this then...

I'M IN LOVE FOR SURE..."
its one of my all time favourite ones,as i happen to love A.R.Rahman too!!
and last,but definitely NOT the least...the way he came to meet her after such a lot of trouble in the end was like the icing on the cake,after such a looong n nice part,double treat with riddhima's cute confusion!!!!!
"Well its 15 under freezing at the moment outside, if you don't let me in, I have no option."

"What? I mean...NO! I meant...why...no...how...no...YOU'RE HERE?"

"My dearest articulate love, yes I am. Right outside your window, if I calculated the right one." Armaan said grinning wide as he sat on the bumper of his car looking up towards her room. Ridhima took a second to comprehend, then rushed to her window wall. She gaped in shock at the sight of him blowing her a kiss and indiacting he was missing her through gestures, then she broke out laughing. Armaan just stared at her from below hearing her laugh into the cell. He wondered how many times would he fall for her all over again, like it was new and fresh every time.

"OMG!..." she exclaimed through her giggling, "I don't believe this."

"Hell you better honey. After I spent the night tracking and calling up the hospital to check for your jeej and sister's shift hours and other details. Don't know how many ethics of medical I broke tonight, in misusing my status to get the information. And then I had to wait forever for them to leave finally. And then you wouldn't answer the phone but I drove all the way anyhow. And now..." he said pausing for a breath while Ridhima was taken aback by hearing The Armaan Malik talk so much, "You refuse to let me in, worse still, you deny to acknowledge my existence?"

"OMG..." was all she whispered in disbelief at it all. And it made him break out laughing himself.

"Are you finally going to let me in?"

"Huh...Oh yeh." She clicked her tongue at him, "Obviously Armaan. Hang on, I'm gona come down. God...I still can't believe this is you."

"Ridhima..." he whispered and she paused to look at him as he looked back up at her, "I love you..."😳
awww.....i love it when he says those words to her!!!!!
anyway...i think u must have gotten tired already reading this essay length comment of mine,😆so ill just finish up quickly now..
ur an amazing writer,thats all i can say,
and looking forward to the next part soon!!!(no pressure at all though,LOL)
loads of love,
pragati😊

P.S>i forgot to add up there,so..thanks for the PM!!!!

Edited by ksgaddict - 16 years ago

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namelesssr

@namelesssr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1104

Armaan behaving like a teenager much in love, compelled to meet Riddhima on the sly behind the watchful eyes of AA... I like it 😊. And loved all that Chirag came up with to keep her distracted for the moment ... may I add of "shubh drishti" (which in Bengali wedding rituals is also the moment when the bride and groom "see" each other for the first time... until shubh drishti happens, the bride is supposed to cover her face from the groom's view and after this moment passes the couple exchange the garlands of flowers).
You did indicate that the creep is going to make an appearance soon enough... but I'm not going to worry, because Armaan hai naa 😊

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1105

@nijal....i dont know wats my thot in deciding when to call u nijal n when not...i havent figured that yet...somehow...i hot nijal was for the serious moments....somehow....it comes more often than those moments alone....something wrong with me....oki nah nothing to ur comment(s) sorry to disappoint ur expectant heart...think i talked enuf on the chat...besides....id rather not be unleashing the N.A.S.E.E.M. thing....i dont wana offend anyone on the forum u shud know wat i mean by the idiotic hint u gave me to guess it...u nut.....lovya....i think i say thet in my head everytime i see my sigg!

@shriya....gosh....u had me in for a surprise...i duno why....i dint expect that essay i gues n u really did do wonders to my modd with it, in a very good time...i needed it just then i think....thanx hun...um glad u like the track the fic n all that...but most of all...thanx for the comments at the right moment!...will try to post soon...n i decided to stop making promises just to break them abt posting dealines!!!

@Mandy...@nidha...@saira....thnx a bunch for the comments, glad u al like the fic!

@simran, @aravi,@robin, @anahat, @suvarna...will be waiting for the reserves to update!

@kratz @hinz....missin ya nutterz tonz...hope the V day went all great n fun...i know for one of u it did :)

Edited by spln - 16 years ago

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1106

@sakshi...thnx hun...for all of the comments, um glad u like the way things went...missed gappu...hmmm il be honest...i was fearing actually that there might be ppl telling me off for too much of him in wat was promised to be an AR part....i kept getting distracted by the range of chars in there trying to not make things ethreal just for the moment, had the heardest time focusing on AR n having them in there mostly despite all others to barge in...but gappu...il keep that in mind....u have a thing for the cheeky guys in my fics um guesisng...adi in RM....gappu here...both are inspired from two of the dearest ppl in my life....cheers hun, thanx for the comments!

@zia...yeh yeh we talked...il wait for the essay!...until then..u know me love u fetus!

@pragati...wow...thnx for that extensive comment...somehow...after um done doing updates, i can never actually sit n read them myself in one go...n so he quotes from readers actually are a help!....um glad u liked how it went...n rehman is a music fellow i never get enuf of....i can hear anything of him not know it was him n still tell u for crtain it is....hes differment n very gifted....oh well... n the song...its funny i was just out of no whr huming it to myself while cooking n thats when i thot of that whole scene!...glad u like it!

@miss 'she who must not be named' :) i know the shubh drishti custom, n am wondering how, altho i never quite thot of it that way, its a very intriguing coincidence.,...since the custom is bengali n so is armaan, i think il feel proud abt the serendipity of that scene!...but all thnx to u to make me feel proud!....glad u like the track!

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1107

woah.. amazing part hun..

i just love the way u write.. i wish i could write like that..

in so much awe..

i loved all the AR scenes. and can't wait to c wat him coming to her house is going to bring..

: )

do cont soon.

xxSonia

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Mia

@everlastingword

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1108

hey,

wow....! i didn't know what else to write. i just love your ff. it is extremely well written and you are amazing at describing the emotions. Gappu is such a sweetheart.

love,

mia.

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lakshmi

@meow23

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1109

brilliant update....
rahul. mushki.. gappu.. ammy.. n chirag... wid d suprise 4 ridz.... luvd d way chirag planned it at d airport.. same goes 4 rahul.. 4 handling ridz.. n givngg her a hint....
n yeah... ammy landing up at d hse..(certain thngzz don't chng...)..
luvd d prt.. thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soonnn