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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Mindblowing bhoomi its awesome , perfect and everry thing i am gone spechless , thx a lot for magnificint story .

Hi Monika dear... hey am so glad that u liked it so much.. I will try to be better in the next .... and dont be spechless i want to hear a lot yaar. akhir nothing better than wonderful comments from a wonderful friend and writer her selff.. luv u dear...tc

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268143

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

tht was jst gr8 👏 👏 👏

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: 268143

tht was jst gr8 👏 👏 👏

Hey thats so sweet.... am glad u liked it...😃

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Kritika

@rajeevskitu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

well, atleast i cud read this😃..... hehe......

awesome story yaa👏!! i just luv ur concepts..... u e1 take very small issues in our day-2-day life and mould it to a beautiful concept........... same goes in for this ff....... v do here such stories...but the way u presented it was just sooooooooooo cool😃...........

well, the main moral of the story (from my pt. of view) is, chatting really helps😆........... hehe...... so everybody shd chat b4 getting married😃.......... wot say bhoomi???😉........ nice interpretation na😃........ i kno i kno!! (patting my back😆) .........

to be frank, to some extent e1 i give more importance to friends than my family.....and many a times got blasted by my mom for that....... but anywyas, i don't mind getting those blasts for friends......😃......

chalo then! cya in another ff😆

byeeee

take care😃

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu
well, atleast i cud read this😃..... hehe......

awesome story yaa👏!! i just luv ur concepts..... u e1 take very small issues in our day-2-day life and mould it to a beautiful concept........... same goes in for this ff....... v do here such stories...but the way u presented it was just sooooooooooo cool😃...........

well, the main moral of the story (from my pt. of view) is, chatting really helps😆........... hehe...... so everybody shd chat b4 getting married😃.......... wot say bhoomi???😉........ nice interpretation na😃........ i kno i kno!! (patting my back😆) .........

to be frank, to some extent e1 i give more importance to friends than my family.....and many a times got blasted by my mom for that....... but anywyas, i don't mind getting those blasts for friends......😃......

chalo then! cya in another ff😆

byeeee

take care😃

Hi Meri cute cute Kitu,

Meri kehsakti hun na tum Rajeev's Kitu sirf nahi na😉😆... So u read the looong poetic lines....story..

Yes the story isn on a very big issue but a small element and i felt ho wwe feel we can marry we cant think of this guy by a single thing which hurt us or we couldnt agree... and its small for others but people have theri won setof reasons to feel its soooo BIG... I am glad dear..u felt its Cool.. it happens so many times..

So the main moral is that U shoudl chat? thats what u came up with ..👏kya baat hai.. dekho they chatted and then they fought and said NO NO... pehle miley hotey to😉.. hmmbut when they met and didnt speak and later chatted... so may be u r right somewhere.... 😊.. U can pat ur back.. akhir dost kiski ho....😆😳...

Yes, i can understnad what u mean , givign importance to ur friends, its not intentioned to ..but its just u cant let anyone coem in btw trygin to hanper the warmth and care u want to give to ur friend .. fro many when they hear their parents or anyoen else saying.... yeh friend sab yeh hain woh hain.... they cant hear even those words against their friends..and theer r many who have seen only famlily standig and friends not havign time . so each one to his own.. am gald u have friends who r dear to u..and am sure u have a great family who feel happy that u have great friends too....👏😃 both should be there to feel life's journey is easier to handle..

yup U will certainly see another FF comign soon.. hope u enjoy reading that too dear.... catch u later. Kitu..

luv u

Bhoomi

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

this is awesome bhoomi. sorry for the late reply.

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: golu_1677
this is awesome bhoomi. sorry for the late reply.

Hi Golu dear... hey no problem even if its late.. U felt like reading and than to comment on it makes me happy .. I will be trygin to post another ff after a week I guess.. till then no eatign anyones brain..😉😆..

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hi Bhoomi, The first thing that came to my mind when i finished reading this poem was that all those who are in search of a marriage partner should read this. Wonderful definitions of compatibility.👏

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Sumz

@.MayAngels.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

wow i luved it amzingg👏👏

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ssh57

Hi Bhoomi, The first thing that came to my mind when i finished reading this poem was that all those who are in search of a marriage partner should read this. Wonderful definitions of compatibility.👏

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Hi looks like i missed comenting on this before... am glad u liked this poetic story as well... hahaha u think every one who is searchign for life partner shoudl read this.. aww looks like u liked the whole concept a lot... good ot know u agreed witht he whole structure of this poetic story... ur comments did cheer me.. thanks ..

Bhoomi

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