AR ff 'Mere Pass Pass'( DMG/New/Part 11) - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

I just read all ur parts! I really love how you are playing out each character dear!

Do update soon!
-Natasha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: suv.patki

That was a real quick update and thanks for the PM.

Rahul seems to be a one emotionless freak ... he is so cool about Ridz being in hospital and she and her baby in distress. Guess he going to have a major fall coz of this attitude of his. And Muskaan also seems very much like him or has taken caught his right nerve.
Will love ever evolve between AR or will they remain as friends for ever? Ok ... Armaan does have feelings, but what about Riddhima? She is still soooo occupied by Rahul's thoughts.

Be Patient 😛 love takes time it does when the girl is married 😆 and having a baby too 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Adildagr8

Be Patient 😛 love takes time it does when the girl is married 😆 and having a baby too 😳

True :) I just hope though Armaan is not jumpy and takes it slowly. Well, his "this is my first baby" was a really cute statement 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Hey Fabulous part, I completely loved it.
Rahul is such a jerk, I hope ridzi will fall in love with ammi soon.
Continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Hmm thts a quick one...Lovely update.. Rahul is so cruel man.... Muski is very bad... Armaan the sweetu... he is so caring.. enjoyed the convo between Armaan n ridzi.... Plzz continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Great Part .. gosh altho ii love Rahul, i feel like slappin him so hard.. uski naani ki yaad ayegi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
this is such a cute ff.. but so sad.. i cant imagine rahul being like this cruel.. tis soo sad.. and muski being so manupulative.. anyway.. i really like armaan's character.. its fun to read about this craziness.. and he takes such good care of ridz.. its sweet.. hope you update soon.. and if u send pms.. would you please add me to the list? thanks so much!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mere Pass Pass 11
Armaan brings a wheelchair for Ridz..when he comes in the room she is all ready to go..

Armaan: ek toh tumhein itni jaldi hai ghar jaane ki hai..

Ridz: yeh kyun le aye..

Armaan: ab you know tumhein toh mein utha sakta tha..baby ke saath zyda heavy hogayi hoo isliye wheelchair se kaam chalao..

Ridz: I am fine..i can walk...

Armaan: no argument bethoo is per chup chaap...(they are talking when Muskaan walks in)

Muskaan: oh how sweet...i m so sorry maine aap lougo ko distrub kiya...you were so busy among urselves..na kisi ke aane ki parwa na kisi ke jaane ka khyaal...

Armaan: umm do i know you ?

Muskan: Ridz know me..right Ridz? aur mujhe umeed hai ke Rahul bhi tumhein bahut jaldi peechan lega...waise mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha ke Rahul ne tumhein divorce de di hai..

Armaan: this is none of your business

Muskaan: oh then is this ur business ( Armaan keeps quiet) Ridz i am soo happy ke tumhara baby bach gaya hai but husband haath se nikal gaya..dono mein se choose karna bahut muskil hoga but you made the right choice now stick by it..aur Rahul ke baare mein sochna chor dou..

Armaan: tum jao yahan se warna mein hospital ke stuff ko bula lounga

Muskaan: kyun khud mein himmat nahin hai

Armaan: tum per time nahin hai waste karne ko..

Muskaan: agr mein yeh fasla karloun ke mein yahan se nahin jaonga toh kisi ki himmat nahin hai mujhe yahan se nikalne ki

Armaan: tu aap rukiye ( smiles) yahan se hilna nahin..hum hi chale jaate hain ( they leave)

AT HOME

Ridz is sitting on the bed and is really upset...Armaan brings a tray full of food

Armaan: yeh raha apka breakfast...

Ridz: Armaan..please isse le jao..i can't eat anything

Armaan: kyun..acha nahin hai kya...(she is quiet) dekho agr tum bologi nahin na..toh andar se jalti rahoogi..tum ek kaam karoo..tum us per ghussa karlou..usse bhala bura keh lou..aur usse apne system se nikal dou..bhool jao usse...( she stares at him) mujhe ghoor kar nahin dekhoo sahee keha raha hoon..aur woh itni impressive ladki toh hai nahin ke hum usk liye apna mood kharab karein..aur na hi woh itni imp hai ke hum uska liye apna khana chor dein...yeh lou khao ( hands her a sandwich) kha lou na...dekhoo tum bilkul wohi kar rahi hoo woh jo chahti hai..woh agr yahan hoti kitna khushi hoti...aa mujhe samjh agaya tum usse khush karna chahti hoo

Ridz: tum kya samjhte hoo mein koi chota sa bacha hoon jo tumhari in baaton se bhaal jayega...itni bakwaas ki thee usne mein kaise bhoolongi...zalil kiya tha usne mujhe..(shouts)

Armaan: Relax...relax..BP high karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai..baby ke liye acha nahin hai...yeh lou juice piyo( gives her the glass)

Ridz: Armaan tumhein pata hai woh kaun hai ?

Armaan: phele juice piyo..(she takse the juice) tumhein Rahul ne bataya woh kaun hai ? tum sirf uski baat ka yakeen kar rahi ho...woh itni imp nahin hai..ke tum usk liye apne baby ko khatre mein dal dou..nahin sochoo usk baare mein..

Ridz: maine khud sunna hai Rahul ko usse i love u kehte hue..

Armaan: zaroori toh nahin hai..ke yeh wohi love hoo..kehne ko toh mein bhi tumse keh sakta hoon I Love You but yeh wohi love toh nahin hai na..jo tum Rahul se karti ho..( Laughs)

Ridz: khabhi khabhi tum mujhe chote se bache lagte hoo..cute se...per khabhi khabhi tum samjhdari ki baat kar jaate hoo..

Armaan: mein hamshea samjhdaari ki baatein hi karta hoon yeh toh tum ho jo samjhti hi nahin....(smileS) acha nashta karlou please...mein studio jaa raha hoon..apna cell apne pass rakhna..mein call karta rahoonga..okay ? ( Ridz nods her head)

Ridz: Armaan..meri office ki files kahan hain.. ?

Armaan: koi files nahin mil rahein tumhein...tum yahan room mein aaram karoo aur yeh books padhoo...sukoon se...byee..

Ridz: okay...bye..( he leaves)

AFTER TWO HOURS

Ridz is reading a book and her fone rings..she picks up

Ridz: Hello..

Armaan: Ridz..kaisi hoo..koi prob toh nahin hai na..

Ridz: haan hai...ek

Armaan: KYA HUA ?

Ridz: TUM Armaan..picle 2 hr mein tumne 10 bar fone karlia..

Armaan: aare tumhein toh khush hona chahiye mein tumhari kitni fikar kar raha hoon...aise dost aaj kal milte hi kahan hain...

Ridz: aise dosto se mein bedost hi achi hoon..picle 2 hrs mein maine 3 bar chap khatam karne ki koshish ki hai...abhi tak ek chap khatam nahin hua..

Armaan(teases her): kyun bahut muskil english hai kya ? dictionary le kar bethoo..

Ridz(laughs): jee nahin..muskil english nahin hai..tumhare stupid fone jo aajate hain beech mein...

Armaan: ab tum mere phones ko stupid kahoo ya kuch bhi mein toh aise hi karta rahoonga..ab mein aur risk nahin le sakta..

Ridz: acha..toh phir tum karte rahoo haan..( she switches off the phone and gets busy in reading after 30 mins..the door bell rings)

Ridz: ARMAAN......( bells keeps on ringing) aarhi hoon...itni hi fikar hoti hai toh jata hi kyun hoo..

Muskaan: soo sweet...mujhe nahin pata tha ke Armaan tumhari itni care karta hai...

Ridz: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho...

Muskaan: guest hoon...koi chai..ya drink ka poacho..aate hi yeh sawal...

Ridz: bin bule guest mujhe passand nahin...

Muskaan: theek hai..toh reason bata deti hoon...why don't you file divorce..rehti toh tum ho nahin Rahul ke saath...

Ridz: yeh baat karne Rahul ne tumhein bheja hai..

Muskaan:usne bheja ho ya nahin kya fariq padhta hai..ismein sab ki bhilayi hai...

Ridz: thanks for your advice..u may leave now...( shows her the door)

Muskaan: ghor karna meri baat er...(she leaves)

Ridz calls Rahul..

Rahul:hello

Ridz: Ridz bol rahi hoon..

Rahul: haan bolo kya baat hai...

Ridz: agr tum apni mails lene aasakte ho...toh divorce ki baat karne khud kyun nahin aasakte.. haan? tumhein messanger ki zaroorat kab se padh gayi..

Rahul: what rubbish..mein tumse khud baat karne kyun nahin aasakta..darta hun kya tumse...

Ridz: nahin...

Rahul:kaisi ho tum waise ?

Ridz: theek hoon

Rahul: tum fikar nahin karoo mein dekhta hoon kaun aya tha...

LATER

Armaan comes running in Ridz bedroom...

Armaan: RIDZ..RIDZ.. ?

Ridz: haan haan kya hogaya ?

Armaan: mein toh dar gaya tha..bahar ka door khula tha..

Ridz: mein toh pura din yahin thee...

Armaan: theek ho na.. ?

Ridz: haan baba...

Armaan: aur baby.. ?

Ridz: haan woh bhi theek hai...bhook bahut lagi hai...kuch khana wahna hojaye...

Armaan( smiles): Yes Boss

THE TIME HAS BEEN PASSING BY AND ITS THE 8 MONTH

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Plz do Comment 😳
Edited by Adildagr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey amezing update...armaan is such a sweetheart.love him..so sweet..i m lil surprised that ridz didnt realise that he loves her..i hope rahul give her a divorce and ridz can get marride to armaan lol....i know i lil crazy but u know cant see ridz or armaan with anyone else...amezing part..continue soon....thankc 4 the pm..
❤️MONA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
wow nice....hope armaan marries ridhima...

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