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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Hiyaaaa!

I am Riddhima nd i jus wana say i love this ff! .😊. The chemistry between Armaan and Riddhima to the fights between Rahul nd Riddhima to Muskaan nd all the songs ..😉 sab kucch! N i jus wanna say fanx for this awesome ff! .. 😃 Plz cud you pm me wen you do the next update .. plzzz .!


=] Riddhima 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
A new concept .I started it today and read all the parts in one shot .U describe a pure love .Ofcourse song TU JAHAN is just right 4r situation.Plz conti. soon I am eager to feel depth of theirrelationship.plzpmmeifucan.
Thanx👍🏼


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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Hey ... please update soon. Waiting to read on!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey!
Its a great story.Really i am still lost in it. I hate Rahul.He is such a jerk. & better to stay away frm Ridz.Armaan is so caring. I feel in upcoming parts they grow their relations. Good going.Keep it up.
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ update asap & pmme if u can.
thanx

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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Lovely FF... Different concept.. but very well written.......... Awwww i hate this Rahul.. Armaan is such a sweetheart.... Really hope muski doesn mistake Armaan n Ridzi's frndship... PLzz continue soon... n Plzz do PM me......😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar, its a really sad story but a nice one...will u pm me pleeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooooooooo nice ff.......... do cont soon.......... & do pm me wen u will cont love
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mere Pass Pass 9
Rahul and Muskaan are out on lunch...

Rahul:waise tum thori pagal nahin hoo

Muskaan: thori nahin bahuttttt

Rahul:acha yeh bataoo office mein jo humara intezaar kar raha hai..meeting mein..uska kya hoga..

Muskaan:ab agr raaste mein humara tyre flat hojaye toh ismein humara kya kasoor

Rahul(smiles): yeh humara tyra flat hua hai ?

Muskaan: to aur kya ?

Rahul: next question..hum yahan kyun ayen hain..

Muskaan: 2 things ek toh Aditya ki haar aur dosra woh surprise jo tumhien milne wana hai ?

Rahul:surprise ??

Muskaan: surprises are not to be told..

Rahul:jab se tum office mein ayi hoo mujhe roz hi koi na koi surprise milta hai

Muskaan: really ?

Rahul: the position u got i wanted that...i was so upset..but tum itni achi nikli...ke..

Muskaan:ahan..kaise ?

Rahul: itni caring aur sweet...

Muskaan: loving ??

Rahul:haan

Muskaan: tumehin pata hai 24th ko tumhein ek aur surprise milne wala hai..

Rahul:24th ko toh meri aur Ridz ki wedding anniversary hoti hai..

Muskaan: tumhein yaad hai ?

Rahul:ofcourse hum har year celebrate jo karte thay..

Muskaan: any plans for this time ?

Rahul:not as such...maybe Ridz ne kuch socha hoo

Muskaan: hosakta hai usse kuch yaad hi na hoo..busy hoo

Rahul:usne busy kiske saath hona hai..

Muskaan: friends bhi toh hote hain...girl friends..boyfriends

Rahul:Ridz ? impossible..

Muskaan: are u sure ?

Rahul: yep

Muskaan: okay then get ready for another big surprise .

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Anniversay Day

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Ridz come home from work and thinks of the anniversaries Rahul and her spent together

(FLASHBACK)

Rahul:Ridzzz agr tum 5 mins mein bahar nahin ayi toh bhool jao is dinner ko..

Ridz:arahi hoon

(Ridz comes out in a black party dress and looking stunning)

Rahul:heyyy...beautifulllll

Ridz: Rahul..mein bahar nahin jaongi aise..

Rahul: aare yeh humari zindagi ka itna special din hai aur tum...lougo ko pata toh chale meri biwi kitni khubsorat hai..

Ridz(blushes): tumhein pata hai na bas wohi kafi hai..

Rahul: mein unki annkhon mein jealously dekhna chahta hun

Ridz:acha chalu ab..jaa kahan rahe hain..

Rahul: oh in a five star hotel

Ridz: okay..

(FLASHBACK ENDS)

Ridz is crying and sits on the floor..and is all lost in her past memories. She comes back to reality hearing that someone is banging the door...and ofcourse its none other than Armaan. She opens the door.

Armaan: tumne toh mujhe dara hi dia tha..darwaza kyun nahin khul rahi thee

Ridz(still lost):haan ?

Armaan:darwaza kyun nahin khul rahi thee ?

Ridz:kaam kar rahi thee

Armaan: tum bahut down lag rahi hoo..everything okay ?

Ridz:theek hun mein..

Armaan:woh mein Atul ke saath aaj bahar jaa raha hoon..you know mind..

Ridz: noo..

Armaan:you sure ?

Ridz: haan..

Armaan: okay (he leaves)

Ridz is going to call someone..when he comes back..

Armaan: woh..ek aur baat mera cell on hoga..kuch bhi problem ho toh phone karleyna..okay ?

Ridz: okay..(he leaves )

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Muskaan tells Rahul he got promoted that was the surprised she wanted to give him. They both go to his home( where Ridz is) to get the papers .

Ridz Home

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Ridz is sitting on a couch looking at old pixs..

Ridz(thoughts): tum aaj kya din kaise bhool sakte hoo Rahul..tum ne toh kaha tha agr tum is duniya mein bhi na rahe toh is din mujhe khuwab mein tang karne zaroor aaoge..abhi toh sirf mujse alag hue aise kaise hosakta hai ke tum aaj nahin aaoge..humari kitni bhi ladai hoo itni toh nahin hui hogi na..

( she hears a knocks at the door and Ridz have a huge smile on her face she opens the door and its Rahul..she is really happy to see him)

Rahul: mein kuch letters bhool gaya tha...aur kuch imp mail bhi ayi hai ? mein ajaon ?

(Ridz nods her head and goes to her room to get the letters when she comes back she sees Muskaan there too gives the letters to Rahul )

Rahul:itne saare letters wow..Muskaan...you are azaming..you are wonderful...i love you for this...(Muskaan comes close to Rahul and holds his arm..and sees Ridz)

Muskaan: and..i love you too..(drags him) chalu na Rahul..we gotta celebrate...

They leave..Ridz DEVASTED

Suddenly there is pain in his stomach...she shouts..Rahul..(but he already left) she falls on the ground and is unconsious

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Armaan and Atul are walking on a sidewalk..and Armaan is calling Ridz but she isn't picking up...

Atul: khabhi muskra bhi lia kar mere bhai..mujhe toh lagta hai tu toh ata hi mere pass roune ke liye hai woh bhi without any reason...

Armaan: tujhe kya bataoon..tu kuch samjhega hi nahin...

Atul: mere se zyda tujhe koi nahin jaanta..mein nahin samjhoonga toh kaun samjhega...

Armaan:tu wada kar..lecture nahin dega

Atul(laughs):tumne aaj tak mera koi lecture suna hai..jo mein tumhein ab lecture dounga..chal bata kia hua ?

Armaan:yaar kal parsoo tak toh bilkul theek thee...has rahi thee..mazak kar rahi thee...per aaj mujhe aisa ehaas hua jaise mein Mrs.Rahul se baat kar raha hun..

Atul:toh woh hai hi Mrs.Rahul

Armaan: haan woh toh theek hai...per jitna pareshaan..udaas aur khoyi khoyi..maine usse aaj dekha hai..phele khabhi nahin dekha...mujse ek second bhi bardhast nahin hua..aur mein chala aya...

Atul:mere khyaal se toh acha kiya ke aap chale aye...agr koi insan akela rehna chahta hai toh prob kya hai ?

Armaan: woh Rahul se bahut pyar karti hai...usse aaj bhi umeed hai ke woh ayega...usne zaroor usse phone bhi kiya hoga...

Atul: toh ismein problem kya hai...uska husband hai...don't you want them to be back ? saath rahenge toh khush rahenge yaar

Armaan: yaar mein toh chahta woh khush rahe..

Atul:tu usse apne raaste chunne dou..

Armaan: yaar mujhe bahut ajeeb feel horaha hai...mujhe aisa lag raha hai..jaise..mujhe usse akela nahin chorna chahiye tha...

Atul:tension kyun le raha hai..

Armaan: nahin something isn't right...mein usse phone karta hun...(he calls her..and she isnt picking up )

HE RUNS TO THE CAR without saying anything to Atul...and drives away...

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PLZ DO COMMENT
I know i haven't been continuing it from the longest time now i would try...
THANKS EVERYONE
Edited by Adildagr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
Cool ... good to have you back. And please keep updating. Does that mean this fic is active now???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: suv.patki

Cool ... good to have you back. And please keep updating. Does that mean this fic is active now???

yep it is 😃

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