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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
Hey thanx for the pm .. gerat part ..is Ridzii pregnant? tczxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

Hey thanx for the pm .. gerat part ..is Ridzii pregnant? tczxx

Yeah she is
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
Hey I just caught up with ur FF and it's mind blowing.
I feel like smashing on rahul's face, it will be worth watching when ridzi will ask divorce moreover when he'll se ammi and ridzi together.
I am really looking forward.
Continue soon and if possible PM me.

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
Gr8 to hve u back.. lovely update... Armaan is so caring... Poor Ridzi... still hopeful of Rahul's return... When is AR's luv story goin to begin... plzz continue n keep updating.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Hey this is nice part. Armaan is like an angel in ur ff.
I wanna knock down that Rahoooool & Muskaan
I think its best 4r Ridz to get rid of them otherwise it alwaz
give her pain nothing else.I wish Ridz get well soon and ofcourse
her infant play in hands of Armaan. AMEEEN
"It takes more than caring
To be a real friend;
The nature of friendship;
Requires a blend
Of warmest compassion
And love deep and true
To reach and to comfort
The way that you do.
Because I can see
That your kind of friendship
Is priceless to me."
Thanx 4r pm.
take care
plz update soon.
ritu

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mere Pass Pass 10

Armaan has been speeding all his way...he screehes his breaks and stops the car right infront of the house and runs inside..

He sees Ridz on the floor crying out of pain....

Armaan: sab theek hojayega..Riddhima..(he helps her getting up...)

Ridz(crying): My baby..(she can't walk...he picks her up in his arms)

Armaan:sab theek hojayega

Ridz:Armaan mere baby..ko..

Armaan: main hoon na kuch nahin hoga..(He takes her to the car and drives to the hospital)

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HOSPITAL

Armaan is holding Ridz hand when they doctors are taking her to ER. She is constantly asking if the baby would be okay...Armaan has bee comforting her.

Ridz:mere baby ko kuch hogaya toh..?

Armaan: na tumhein kuch hoga na tumhare baby ko...

Ridz:sach keh rahe hoo na

Nurse: aap please bahar chale jayen..

Ridz(shouts): Rahul..nahin...please don't leave me alone..( she isn't letting of his hand)

Armaan: don't worry....(hesitant)main tumhare saath hoon..

(Song At Background)

Kahin tho
Kahin tho hogi woh
Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai

Jahan mein jahan tu aur jahann
Bass tere mere jazbaat hai
Hogi jahan subah teri
Palkoki kirano mein
Lori jahan chand ki
Sune teri baahon meinnn'..

Jaane naa kahan woh duniya hai
Jaane naa woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Itni khafa nahii

(Doctors take her inside and Armaan is walking to and fro infront of the room and biting his nails unknowingly as he is really nervous doc comes out)

Armaan: everything okay ?

Doc:shock aur girne ki wajah se...she was stressed...humein thori dayer ke liye observation mein rakhna hoga..

Armaan: doc..dono theek hai na ?

Doc: baby ka mein kuch keh nahin sakti...Mother is fine..agr yehi conditon rahi toh humein operation karna hoga..don't worry everything would be alright ( she leaves a really worried Armaan behind)

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Armaan is ringing bell of someone's door...Rahul comes out

Rahul: ohh tum..

Armaan:Hi Rahul....woh mein tumhein batane aya tha ke Ridz hospital mein hai...

Rahul(irritated): tum mujhe itni raat ko yeh batane aye hoo ?

Armaan: mera matlab hai..ke Ridz gir gayi thee aur baby ki jaan ko bhi khatra hai...

Rahul:pheli baat toh yeh...mujhe yeh samjh nahin araha tumhara in sab baaton se kya matlab hai....okay tum usse hospital chor aye...very good...but ab ghar jao na apne...usse apne haal per chor dou...

Armaan(digusted by his reaction but still calm):Rahul shyad tum meri baat samjh nahin rahe..Ridz ko tumhari is waqt bahut zaroorat ho...agr tum is waqt uska haath pakad kar khare hojaoge toh Ridz aur baby dono khatre se bahar ajayenge..(Armaan holds Rahul's arm )tum please mere saath chalu...( Rahul takes his arm back)

Rahul: mera us bache..ya us maa se koi naata nahin hai..

Armaan: Rahul woh tumhari biwi hai...tumhara bache hai...Oh God mujhe toh yeh samjh nahin araha tum is waqt aisi baat kar sakte hoo..

Rahul: na yakeen karna mera kaam hai..na yakeen dilana mera...don't waste my time. jao yahan se...

Armaan: Rahul please...thori dayer hi sahee..Ridz ki khatar hi chalu...

Rahul: jis bache ki wajah se Ridz ne mujhe chora hai..woh jiye ya mare mujhe koi fariq nahin padhta...but agr us bache ko kuch hojaye..toh mujhe zaroor inform kardena..shyad mein...Ridz se milne ajaon...samjh gaye hoo...

Armaan:Rahul please...baat sunoo meri...

Rahul: time waste nahin karoo mera...

Armaan leaves..he is really worried about Ridz..he comes back to the hospital he takes out his cell and calls someone...

A Lady : Armaan khairyet hai..itni raat ko fone kiya ?

Armaan: haan woh yaad arahi thee apki mom...aap sou rahein theen ?

Mom: raat ke 1 baje...koi souyega nahin toh kya karega beta...tum itni late kyun jaag rahe hoo..pareshani hai koi ?

Armaan: nahin woh bas ek dost ki tabiyet theek nahin thee toh usk pass hospital mein tha..

Mom:kya hua ?

Armaan: gir gaya tha...aap bas pray karna usk liye...

Mom: haan haan tum Atul ki baat kar rahe hoo na

Armaan: nahin Atul nahin ek aur dost hai bas aap pray karna...dad kaise hain ?

Mom:theek hai...he is accepting your profession with time...

Armaan: hmm theek hai mom mein apko baad mein call karta hoon...bye..

Mom: Bye

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OFFICE

Rahul:yaar i am soo tired today....kal raat ko saari neend distrub kardi us Armaan ne...

Muskaan: tumne bataya nahin woh kyun aya tha...?

Rahul: Armaan..Ridz ka neighbour..mujhe batane aya tha ke Ridz hospital mein hai..

Muskaan: toh ?

Rahul: woh chahta tha ke mein Ridz se mil loun..

Muskaan: usse kya hoga ?

Rahul:usse shyad woh behtar feel kare...

Muskaan:tum koi spirtual healer ho jo kisi se milooge toh woh theek hojayega...

Rahul:exactly my point...

Muskaan: waise Rahul tumne socha hai...ke Armaan Ridz se kyun itni harmdari karta hai..

Rahul: i don't really care..maine khabhi usse seriously lia hi nahin...

Muskaan:per Ridz toh usse bahut lift karwa rahi hai...

Rahul:haan toh woh toh kisi se bhi baat karna shuroo kardeti hai...

Muskaan: so tum hospital nahin jaa rahe...

Rahul:abhi tak socha nahin maine...lekin agr bacha na rahe aur woh mujse maafi mang le toh shyad chala jaon...

Muskaan(thinks): akhir usmein aisa kya hai jo yeh abhi bhi usk pass jaane ki soch raha hai...samjhta kya hai apne aap ko...usse pata hi nahin hai main usse kitna pyar karti hoon..

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HOSPITAL

Armaan: Excuse Me Doc..Ridz kaisi hai ?

Doc: she is fine now

Armaan: aur baby ?

Doc: woh bhi ab theek hai..ab toh operation ki bhi zaroorat nahin hai...

Armaan(relieved): thanks doc..

Doc: ab Ridz ki apko extra care karni hogi...and usse kahiyega aaram kare aur tension na le...

Armaan: mein usse mil sakta hoon...

Doc: yeah sure..

(Armaan goes to the room Ridz is....she is all lost...Armaan goes close to her )

Armaan: Hey...kahan ho ? kaisi hoo ?

Ridz: yahin hoon...theek hoon..

Armaan: aur choti Ridz ?

Ridz(looks away): theek hai...

( he takes a chair and turns it arnd and sit on it with his face on his crossed arms)

Armaan: uhmm..jhoot..phyically tum yahan per hoo per mentally pata nahin kahan kahan ghum rahi hoo...dekho Ridz..mein bahut pareshan hogaya tha..mein samjha ke..

Ridz: acha hi hota na sab ki jaan chut jaati..

Armaan: meri jaan toh na chuti...tum bhoot bankar mujhe tang karti rehti toh mein kya karta..

Ridz(looks at him and smiles): souye nahin raat bhar..

Armaan(smiles):nopes...waiting room mein bahut machar thay...

Ridz: baaz nahin aaoge...?

Armaan: bilkul waise jaise tum badhuri se baaz nahin aarahi..Ridz..mujhe tumhein akele nahin chorna chahiye tha....agr mein wahan hota toh...

Ridz(nodes her head in a No):tumne acha kiye..us waqt mera akela rehna chahti thee...

Armaan: maan lia..but ab nahin..ab mein tumhein akela nahin choroonga..na tum office jaogi..na hi tum bed se uthoogi..tumhien jo cheez chahiye mujse kahoogi..suna tumne..

Ridz: sun lia..lekin sach bataoon Armaan..mujhe yeh sab acha nahin lag raha..tum mujhe bataoo koi beghiar ki wajah ke tumhari itni help kare..tumhein kaisa lagega...?

Armaan: agr mujhe kuch hoga...aur tum mere liye kuch karoogi toh mujhe bahut acha lagega..kyunki tum meri friend hoo...jaise main tumhara friend hoon ab yeh tension nahin lou..aur kuch nahin sochoo...agr tumhein meri shakal buri lagti hai toh mein next time apna face cover kark aaonga...( Ridz smiles) aur haan agr yeh ulti seedhi baaton per depress hoone se agr baby per asar hua..toh theek nahin hoga..samjhi tum....( Ridz nods and agreement) Good..acha ab next months ka kya plan hai...its my first baby you know...(Ridz and Armaan laugh)

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Edited by Adildagr8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks everyone for there comments...i can't reply every1 indiviually but your comments do mean a lot 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow yaar update after so long...nice update..i hope ridz recovers from this rahul's bhoot and get back with armaan.well hope she is fine...armaan better reache there in time....continue sooon...thankc 4 the pm..
❤️MONA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
That was a real quick update and thanks for the PM.
Rahul seems to be a one emotionless freak ... he is so cool about Ridz being in hospital and she and her baby in distress. Guess he going to have a major fall coz of this attitude of his. And Muskaan also seems very much like him or has taken caught his right nerve.
Will love ever evolve between AR or will they remain as friends for ever? Ok ... Armaan does have feelings, but what about Riddhima? She is still soooo occupied by Rahul's thoughts.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey so nice of u. Quick update.👏👏👏
Rahul is mentaly handicap.
May shock treatment help him to come out of thi state.
Armaan is cutiepie,chooooooo chweeeeet.
Lovely character.I feel pity 4r Ridz.
"Koi Mila Hi Nahi Jis Ko Wafa Dete
Har Ik Ne Dokha Diya Kis Kis Ko Saza Dete
Ye Hamara Zarf Tha Ke Khamosh Rahe Warna
Daastan Sunatey To Mehfil Ko Rula Dete"

Thanx 4r pm
take care
ritu.

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