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khushu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

that was nice sounds too good

last wala e mail kahi hamare hero ka to nahi

plz continue soon

[thankssssss! 😆e mail ki baat kaise batau ?

HERO KO KAISE BULAUUUUUUUUUUUU😆

YUNHI STORY PaDIYE,

phir main unse apko milauuuuuuuu👏..

than q./QUOTE]

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Riti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey it good one yaar..cont soon...

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khushu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: rlrl
hey it good one yaar..cont soon...

welcome and thanks.kee p..........visiting.

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khushu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: KRIZZY
nice starting
ud asap

thanks yaar plz plz............... keep reading.

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Hey Khushboo welcome in IF.

Yeah i think the plot is nice.

Par ye kaun hai jis ne likha hai to ms. uff?

nice start update soon.

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khushu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Khushboo welcome in IF.

Yeah i think the plot is nice.

Par ye kaun hai jis ne likha hai to ms. uff?

nice start update soon.

thanku verymuch for reading and apreciating.

ur comment is really encouraging.

take care!

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khushu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

next morning 6.00am . In the hostel room ,the room is big enough for 4 girls residing there ,

once the matron of hostel makes an annnouncement for breakfast at 6.30 and ifanybody gets

late than 6.35 one has to skip off from ones breakfast.

SCENE IN THE ROOM .[sonia and sneha r standing besides their beds knotting their tie ]

SNEHA- hey sonia ! U r looking big enough.😉

SONIA- what! In what sense am I big .

SNEHA-your shoes ?????.ur shoes must have gained height.😲

SONIA- [gusse mein thoda niche jhuk kar dekhti hai ] what !😡

SNEHA- happy birth day !!!!!😆

SONIA- ufffff??. Ruk ja tu .[sonia sneha ko pakadne ke liye bhagti hai ] tabhi announcement hoti hai.

SNEHA- hey! Ruk ruk ruk varna bhuke rehna padega ???..

SONIA- tujhe to mein dekh loongi ??..

SNEHA- haan jaise aj maine tujhe dekha hai ??.kal raat ka badla yaad hai na .

[aur iske saath hi dono khilkhila ke hans padti hai .dono hostel ke comman hall mein pahochti hai ..

ek bada rectangle table hai jahaan sabhi apni seat pe breakfast kar rahe hai

he hai.

SNEHA- come on lets have something .aaj hai [sabhi ki plate mein dekhti hai ]

bread boiled egg and and ????.ya! Ur favourite fruit salad ??.bahot bhook lagi hai ???

chal kya sonch rahi hai

SONIA- yaar mera mood kharab ho raha hai .mera birthday yoonhi chala jayega kya ?

Yeh last year hai hamara school mein .

SNEHA- are are re re re re?tu to emotional ho gayi ????.comeon !

Yeh to sonch next birthday par hum apne ghar pe honge g8 na [dono fruitsalad serve karti hai

aur window ke pas bench par baithti hai,] kafi thandi hawa hai na!

SONIA- sneha ko ektak dekhe ja rahi hai wo kha rahi hai aur jab ekdum se upar dekhti hai

to sonia ki palke jhapak jati hai.

SNEHA- kya hua !

SONIA- main tumhare bin tu mere bin kabhi soncha hi nahi yaar .5th se jo dost hue hai to aj tak.............

SNEHA- rulaegi kya !😭 Bas sonch mat aur zindgi ko mauka do ????.[tabhi anouncement hoti hai]

sonia kapoor student of 12-d office mein turant present ho.

SONIA- [matron prayer ke liye ja chuki hai unki table pe black chocolate cake hai. ]

to soni soni sonia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! papa...........papa thanku so much.😛

SNEHA- are tu abhi tak yahaan hai! Kya hua ???..

SONIA- here's a chocolate cake.😃

SNEHA- sach to phir shaam ki party pakki

SONIA- haan pakki.😳

SNEHA- toh phir aisa karenge ???????????.[sonia cake uthati hai aur dono

shaam ki planing karti hui cake ko kitchen mein rakhvati hai.]

SONIA- mai na is tarah class mein back bench pe pehli baar khadi hui hoon.

SNEHA- gud na ????.maine to tujhe kitni bar mujhe join karne ko kaha??..

SONIA- stop it! Mujhe punishment ka shock nahi ?..pehli bar late aayi aur???..

SNEHA- haan haan miss sincere.[Tabhi ek chaprasi ata hai????notice teacher announce karte hai???].

SIR- sonia kapoor u have been called by ur house teacher.

IN THE PLAYGROUND.

SONIA- mam apne bulaya.

----shweta salwe is payal gaur ----

MISS SHWETA- hello!

delicate darling.😳

u absentee of the zero period for sports

I dismis u.😡

SONIA- pavalion bhag jati hai aur rone lagti hai.😭[tabhi pas se kahin gaane ki aawaaz ati hai.sonia dekhti hai

boyz ka group hai ] shayad basketball national championship ke liye aya hai.[bohot curiosity se age

badti hai aur....................]

SONIA- excuse me !😕

BOYZ- [eksaath] ya sure!

SONIA- yeh gaana............ yeh gaana aap log ga rahe the!!!!!!!!!!!!!![uski ankhon mein ek ajeeb si

besabri hai to know]

par kaise......................

kahan se sikha??????????????????????????????

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

too good...........a new entry shweta salve......hope she plays good here.....

awesome.......cont soon

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khushu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

kya yahi pyar hai u d on pg -3

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362035

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

HII KHUSHBOO DEAR HOW R U? AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME UD SWEETY, ALL THE SCENES WERE TOO GOOD, I MUST SAY A REALLY GOOD JOB, KEEP IT UP........... SONIA AND SNEHA'S FRIENDSHIP HAS BEEN PORTRAYED VERY NICELY AND BEAUTIFULLY................. ALL THE BEST FOR THE NEZT PART.............. UD SOON................ WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

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