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khushu

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Posted: 17 years ago

HI GUISE Iam writing a new ff on rajeev & priyanka with the hope u all will like it .

yeh pyar ke ehsas ki kahani hai , kis tarah jaane anjaane yeh shakl leta hai aur hamare samne ata hai yeh itna mahatvapoorna isliye hai kyounki kehte hai ki ise khud khuda banata hai ,dilon ko ehsaas bhi wohi karata hai,jodiyaan bhi khudi banata hai,aur humare liye bachti hai yeh kahaniyaan...............................

scene ek kamre mein shuru hota hai charon taraf andhera hai sirf sonia---- PRIYANKA BASSI is SONIA KAPOOR---- ka laptop on hai aur

woh uske bagal mein so gayi hai , tabhi jor se asmani bijli ki gadgadahat hoti hai aur woh ghabra ke uth jaati hai

SONIA- ufffff...........main so kaise gayi .main so kaise sakti hoon !just hold ....time kum hai....main moo dho ke ati hoon .😲

woh kaphi nervous hai bed se utarti hai, dheere dheere age badti hai tabhi woh ek bed se takra jati hai .......

A VOICE - sonia! what happened, r u alright.?

SONIA- ya ya............i am ........sorry sneha

----POOJA GHAI is SNEHA MITTAL---- tum so jaao

SNEHA- [dabi hui awaz mein ]r u sure.

SONIA-i am [phir age jate hue woh palatti hai] acha sun mere sath bathroom chal yaar

SNEHA- chalti hoon.....chal........

room se bahar ate hi sonia lambi saans leti hai aur moo dhone ke baad hi woh puri tarah jagti hai.

SNEHA- kitna time hua hai ?

SONIA- uffffff............chal chal jaldi kar ,tere ko time ki padi hai meri yahaan jaan atki hui hai...........

SNEHA- dekh sonia stop it! chod mujhe kitni baar kaha ..mujhe kheecha mat kar😡

SONIA- shsh........sub uth jayenge.

SNEHA- [dabi hui awaz mein] main tujhe dekh loongi......subah hone de/ kitna acha sapna dekh rahi thi.....................bas bas.......shahrukh mujhse hi baatein kiye ja raha tha ; aur pata hai

woh mujhe apni shooting pe le jaane wala tha .........ki . ki. . humari car jor se hili aur main apne bed pe aa giri hmhmhm.......😭...pata nahi woh kahan gira hoga😔? sub teri wajah se.ek toh pareshan karti hai,phir bhi main hamesha tera saath deti hoon,aur tu nakhre dikhati hai,,,,,,,,,dehh tu maine matron se shikayat na ki to kehna😈

SONIA- [dabi hui awaz mein] chup hoja and soja

sneha apne bed par jati hai aur sonia apne[mausam kharab hai bahar barish shuru ho chuki hai].

SONIA- its 11:50😲, mujhe yeh e mail pura karna hi hoga warna meri sis . ka project adhura reh jayega aur is bar uske board exams hai o! god yeh gandhiji pe aur kitna likhoon.............kal school bhi attend karna hai khair[ ant mein mail send karne ke bad woh chouk jati hai] itne sare e- mails ,itni raat ko saare friends ko kya soojhi? uffffffffff........'its my birthday and it is exact 12 😛gret what a bulzie by every one😍

sudenly sonia shock ho jati hai dil dhak se baith jata hai; 'TO MISS

UFFFFF.........'

yeh kaun hai kuch sochne se pehle hi sonia se klick ho jata hai par yeh kya message toh blank hai!! sonia ke moo se ek ahh nikal jati hai.

SNEHA-[sonia laptop ka drawer lock kar rahi thi ki ]

band kar khit pit ......abhi tak jag rahi hai 😒 yaad hai na kal school ka pehla period aur ...

sONIA- aur..

if u all liked it plz send ur comments for it will decide for me that i should continue the story or not? -----------with lots of love❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago

HII KHUSHBOO HOW R U DEAR?

NOW ABOUT UR FF, WELL IT'S REALLY VERY NICE I MUST SAY THAT,

I REALLY LIKED IT A LOT,

BUT EK BAAT KEHNI HAI TUMSE, PLZZZZZZZ NEXT TIME ZARA AUR SPACE DAAL KAR CLEARLY LIKHNA OK SWEETY,

AUR HAAN SABSE KAHO KI WOH TUMHE COMMENTS KAREIN, NA KI PM OK SWEETY.

AUR HAAN PLZZZZZZZ ISE CONT. ZAROOR KARNA OK.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

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Posted: 17 years ago

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIII KHUSHBOO WELCOME TO IF

I AM DEEP

UR FF IS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME YAAR,

BUT KUCH CHANGES LANE CHAHIYE TUMHE,

JAISE KI TUMHARE LIKHNE KA TAREEKA DEAR,

PLZZZZZZZ NEXT PART MEIN THODA SA SPACE ZAROOR DENA,

AUR THODA SA BADA BHI KARKE LIKHNA OK,

AUR HAAN SABKO PM NAHIN BALKI COMMENTS KARNE KO BOLO OK.

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONT. SOON.

LOVE DEEP

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

Too good!!!!

Sonia ka Birthday hai aaj!!!!😊 😊 😊

Magar woh last wala mail kisne kiya tha??😕 😕 😕 😕

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khushu

@khushuwhitcom

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!

Sonia ka Birthday hai aaj!!!!😊 😊 😊

Magar woh last wala mail kisne kiya tha??😕 😕 😕 😕

okkkkk..........dear i got it .😛

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khushu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
tooo good

welcome and thankuuuuuu so muchch..........

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khushu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIII KHUSHBOO WELCOME TO IF

I AM DEEP

UR FF IS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME YAAR,

BUT KUCH CHANGES LANE CHAHIYE TUMHE,

JAISE KI TUMHARE LIKHNE KA TAREEKA DEAR,

PLZZZZZZZ NEXT PART MEIN THODA SA SPACE ZAROOR DENA,

AUR THODA SA BADA BHI KARKE LIKHNA OK,

AUR HAAN SABKO PM NAHIN BALKI COMMENTS KARNE KO BOLO OK.

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONT. SOON.

LOVE DEEP

i accept ur suggestions ;thanks for reading darling .

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khushu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII KHUSHBOO HOW R U DEAR?

NOW ABOUT UR FF, WELL IT'S REALLY VERY NICE I MUST SAY THAT,
I REALLY LIKED IT A LOT,

BUT EK BAAT KEHNI HAI TUMSE, PLZZZZZZZ NEXT TIME ZARA AUR SPACE DAAL KAR CLEARLY LIKHNA OK SWEETY,

AUR HAAN SABSE KAHO KI WOH TUMHE COMMENTS KAREIN, NA KI PM OK SWEETY.

AUR HAAN PLZZZZZZZ ISE CONT. ZAROOR KARNA OK.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

keep reading and for now with lots of love for u my first reader.