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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya
Im here before ur pm! ha!
mene comment agaey post kar dia hai....still yaha par bhi kuch na kuch likh hi deti hu
ud bahut hi zyada entertaining thi..raj k emotions wer sooo cute..pehle jab wo alekh ki shock therapy ka shikar hua and flash back me naina k liye uska pyar!
uski bhavishyavani apne future k baare me badi achi thi...i think agar uske sath ye sab ho jata to naina sach me uske aspas nahi fatakti...par maybe usko apne pyaar me pagal hota dekh maan bhi jati
khair alekh to humari ummeed se zyada samajhdar nikla aur raj k samne uske kiye dhare ka chittha khol dia...no doubt raj was scared of him..policewala hai bhai...aur copy kar k policewala nahi bana hai! khari mehnat ab rang lai hai!
flashback me raj ki harkate to were like toooo much...acha kia alekh ne photographer ka intazam kar dia...aur wo bhi bhargav! apne pichle fic me to tumne uski dhulai karva di thi..im sure isme andha karke chodogi...lrl ka sara badla yahi nikal do dear!
overall ud was gr8(i know har baar me yahi likhti hu par kya kare..limited vocabulary😆 😆 😆)
ab itne chote se ud ko compensate karne k liye jaldi aur lamba ud karna
agle saal se pehle 😉
love
sur
Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nahi priya nahi😲 😲 ...tum itna bada dhoka nahi de sakti 😭 😭 bas itna chhotu sa update 😛 😛..shuru kiya aur khatam 😆

Haye alekh is so cute 😳 😳 how lively he meets his sis's bf 😆 but raj hai hi aisa 😉 😉 usne to koi jadoo kar diya hai sab par..alekh ka best frnd to hai hi..shalu ka bhi hai aur naina ka to bf hai!!

to raj-nainaa ki itni saari baatein ho chuki hain pehle 😳 aur usne alekh ko hi bola photograph arrange karne ke liye 😆 😆 if alekh wud hv known..raj ki to band baj jati 🤣 🤣 🤣 but alekh knows how good raj is 😊 😊

arrey baba is raj ko samjhao..alekh inspector hai..uski nazron se raj ka pyaar kaise bachta.. 😆 😆 😆 lets see how alekh tells abt nupur to raj 😉 😉 bechara..raj ne nahi chhodna use tab 😆 😆

nice update 👏 👏
waiting fr next art 😊 (it better be loooong 😛 😆 )
thnx fr the PM 😊

mehendi
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Posted: 15 years ago
and theawars goes to priya
this was breathtaking performance , alekh ko kya kya pata tha yaar ... had hai 4 saal pahle se even the room scene also...seriously yaar ... ye police officer pakka cheating kerk nahin bna...
mushkil hoga naina aur RAJ k liye dating kerna 😆 ek to naina ka bhai aur RAJ ka dost uper se police officer ... log dosto ki madad se GF ko message kerte hai date ki setting kerte hai aur yhan to GF ka bhai hi dost hai uper se police vala alag ki agar jhuth bol ker ya ullu bnane ki koshish bhi ki to pakde jayenge 😆
vaise acha tha ye pakad naina ko pasand ayegi .... aur aise khada tha jaise kuch hua na ho ....
jhtke pe jhtake
dekhne layak tab hoga jab naina ko ye baat pata chalegi aur sath hi nupur k bare is MR SMART Ko arj se bat kerni hogi ...
vaise bhi to mujhe ise baat ka intejar hai ki kaise RAJVEER use pili dall vali ladki 😆 😆 k kale til ko duniya k najar se bchayega aur kaise MR.SMART ko ye sab pata chala 😎
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was really sweet but itna chota sa update not fair yaar
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya How r u??
aajkal to aap itne dino mein update karte ho ki aankhein intazaar karte karte pathra jaati hain😆😆😆I know dis is too filmy but chalta hai na..
Main janti hoon update karna kitna tough kaam hai..👏👏👏..Tum log hum readers ke liye kitne acche se story ko aur interesting banate rehte ho..👍🏼
Raj is so scared of Alekh ..Sabhi ladke apne hone wale saalon se itna darte kyun hain..???Woh koi dara singh thore na hai😉😆😆
Alekh to Raj ki feelings ke baare mein 4 saal se janta hai..😉 Sacchi ab mujhe bhi yakeen ho gaya ki woh copy kar ke police mein nahin aaya hai..Uska dimaag to Chacha Chaudhari se bhi zyaada tez chalta hai..😉
Raj us din room mein kya kya kar raha tha agar uski ek jhalak bhi alekh ko mil jaati toh woh kya karta???😉😆😆sirf baatein to nahin ho rahi thi..
Raj Naina se kitna pyaar karta tha uski ek jhalak to iss para mein dikh hi rahi hai..main read kam rahi thi hansi zyaada aa rahi thi😆😆😆
It was too funny
"Rajveer:- "kya karun yaar...??? mera dimag ek hi jagah par uljha hua hai...aur mujhe mera future saaf saaf dikhai de raha hai...!!! Canada chala jayunga toh us ki awaz toh dur us ki shaqal bhi nahi dekh payunga...!!! phir main udaas rahne lagunga...aur roz 'Pankaj Udaas' k gazal sunn ne lagunga...!!! aur us k baad main khana peena chod dunga...phir mere ankhon k niche kaale ghere ban jayenge...main us ka naam le kar canada k gali gali me pagalon ki tarah ghumunga...!!!phir mujhe har ladki me vohi nazar aayegi...aur main kisi ko voh samajh kar use pakad kar kiss kar dunga...voh meri jamm kar dhulai kar degi...phir police mujhe pakad kar le jayegi...aur phir se dhoyegi...phir jab unhe mere halat k bare me pata chalega toh voh mujhe ek mental asylum me thok degi...!!! ab bata...tu kya apne is pyare aur masum se dost ko pagal banta hua dekhna chahta hai...???"
Alekh ko bhi pata cahl gaya ki Raj uss ladki ko lekar kitna serious hai..
Uss photographer ki to dono aankhein hi khatre mein pad gayi thi..
Ek aankh Raj ne reserve kar li thi n dusri Alekh ne...
Poor guy!!!😆😆
Naina ke upar Raj ne thodi si dal gira di but Naina uspar sari kadai daalne ko ready thi😉😆😆
Raj ne jab photographerko picture lene se mana kiya to mujhe laga pata nahin kahin Alekh to nahin aa gaya..But maamla kuch aur hi tha..
Raj to Naina ko protect kar raha tha...
Naina bhi theek se lace nahin baandh sakto thi..Raj ne pata nahi kya kya dekh liya..Hai mujhe to abhi se hi kaafi blush karne lagi
Pls update soon
bye..
Warning...
Yeh reply kuch zyaada hi melodramatic hai but kya karoon abhi thodi tabiyat theek nahin hai..Isi liye aisi non- sense baatein kar rahi hoon..
Hope u wont mind😛
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice UD
raj ki halat typical romeo type ki thi.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj is still very shocked aur yahan Aalekh aram se chane kha raha hai!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Aalekh drove as Raj seems to be in no state to drive!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne socha tha ke woh Aalekh ko khud batayega ish baare mein magar usse aisa mauka kaha mila??😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Sabhi ladke apne honewaale saalo se kitna darte hai akhir saari khudayi ek taraf aur joru ka bhai ek taraf!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Bechara Raj bhi kitna darr gaya and Aalekh knows his state!!!!!

Ab Raj ko usse bhi bada jhatka laga jab usse yeh pata chala ke Aalekh uski feelings ke baare mein aaj nahi balki 4 saal se jaanta hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Coffee shop mein Aalekh ne ky style se black coffee mangwayi Raj ke dimag ko shock se bahar laane ke liye!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh toh sab kuch jaanta tha, even the fact that Shalini was helping them!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aaj confirm ho gaya that Aalekh is really a deserving police officer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It was funny to hear Aalekh say that after seeing Raj and Naina alone in the room for so long his brotherly feelings arose and so he came in the room making an excuse!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj Aalekh ko bol raha hai aisa kuch nahi huya tha ush din magar Shalu se toh tab kuch aur hi keh raha tha!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh's dialogue ke tujhe kya lagta hai, main copy karke inspector bana hoon was too good!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Aalekh ko yeh bhi pata hai ke Naina ne girne ka natak kiya tha kyunki jaise hi Naina room se bahar aayi uska pair theek ho gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Even after knowing about Naina and Raj, Aalekh is so cool kyunki usse bharosa hai Raj par!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Woh jaanta hai ke Raj ka pyaar saccha hai warna woh kabhi bhi laut ke nahi aata Naina ke liye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ko pehle yeh pata chala tha ke Raj jis ladki se pyaar karta hai woh Naina hai aur Raj ko uske baad pata chala tha ke Naina Aalekh ki behen hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur Aalekh kitni masumiyat se kuch dino pehle keh raha tha ke usse bilkul nahi pata ke woh ladki kaun hai jisne uske dost ko pagal kar diya hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh doesn't take Raj seriously and thinks that it is just an attraction!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

I loved Raj's attitude that he will get his love and no one else will come into his life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Aalekh had the perfect test to see whether Raj was serious about Naina or not and Raj passed the test!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj ki future planning about how he would become away from his love was too funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj ne Aalekh se kaha ush ladki ki tasveer ka bandobast karne ke liye aur Aalekh ish kaam ke liye wahan ke photographer Bhargav ko le aaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka gussa hona jayaz hai aakhir Raj ne uski nayi dress par daal gira di thi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Par Raj ne jo jawab diya woh sirf Raj hi de sakta tha!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ne Aalekh ki tarah Bhargav ki ankh phodne ki dhamki di!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bhargav actually asked ke kaun sa ankh phodenge kyunki right side ke ankh ko Aalekh ne pehle se reserve kiya hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

It was nice to see that Raj not only loved Naina but respected her and so did not want others to see that her dress straps were open!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar Naina toh ispe bhi bhadak gayi but now I think she will probably thank Raj and that is why she is calling him back!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waiting to see how Aalekh had actually found out that the girl was Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya, How r u dear??
lovely update...!!!
So flashback... how Raj started liking naina..n how alekh found abt it..
Raj is shocked to know that Alekh knows everything from last 4 years...its really shocking.. 😆
But alekh is cool with that... but still he is girl's bro..so Raj ka nervous hona jaayeez hai..😆
Raj want to take Naina's pic before going to canada... poor photographer.. 🤣... Alekh n Raj dono ne use dhamki di hai Aankhen phodne ki..🤣...
Raj n Naina's encounter ws lovely...
Nice update...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hii priya, very very very sweet ud sare dialoge bohot achhe the . i really like it.thanks for the ud waiting for ur next ud.
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Posted: 15 years ago
oye too good yaar.......

it was amazing.......

luved aalekh n rajs part and den party wala portion was also mindblowing.....

njoyed bhargavs part....
Bhargav:- "koun si ankh phodenge...sir...??? kyoun ki Alekh jee ne ryt side ankh ko pahle se reserve kiya hai...!!!"
Rajveer:- "phir left side mera dipartment hai...!!!" 😆

too good.....
Edited by fanatic 21 - 15 years ago

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