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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Update was cool..👏 Thanx......yaar.😊 So it was all flashback na when Raj doesn't know abt Naina... sorry....yaar....nahin bata sakti...lekin haan next ud main thode aur hints jarur dungi😊😊
😃He is indeed madly in love with Naina......yeah...that's true.

Do update soon n pls inform me abt the update dear

Thanx for the comments dear.

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hello madam aap mujhe pehle ek baat bataiye ki is story me Raj aur Naina k alawa kisi aur ko lane ki kya jaroorat thi batao.😡...ab iska jawab to mere next uds hi denge😛😛😛

Mujhe nahi accha lagega ki un dono k beech me aur koi aaye is tarah.......don't worry .....yaar.....main raj aur naina k bich main kisi ko aane nahin dungi😃😃😃

Chalo koi baat nahi par dhyan rakhna is baat ka aage se.🥱

Update was really good....thanx yaar

Raj ne sach me show kar diya ki vo kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se 😳us ki photo ko kitne aaraam se badlata rehta hai suabh shaam.😆haan.....pyar main itna to chalta hai...yaar😆

Par vo aadmi kaun tha jis ne Raj ko phone kiya tha raat ko?😕 sorry...yaar..woh koun hai abhi nahin bata sakti.....bt promise u that k woh ek surprise item hoga😉

Aur vo ladki kaun hai?😕....well...is sawal k liye thode se hints main next ud main dungi...

Do update soon.

Thanx for the sweet comment.....

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Nishttha Nath

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

hi! U have a new reader... Ur ff is really good.
ud soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was so good Thanx....prerna...

plz continue soon and sorry for late replying ....it's ok...tumne comment kiya...yahi bahat hai...
but next time plz pm me for the update

Thanx for the comment....

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985
Hello!! Priya!!! Hiiiii Riya.....
Sorry for not being regular....got busy a little bit...it' s ok..yaar....late hi sahi ...magar bich bich main comment kar diya karo

Well loved the update....whole of it.....thanx.....a lottt
Very nice dear....waiting eagerly to know who's that girl....
Take care.
Continue soon....

love
Riya...

THANX FOR THE SWEET COMMENT....

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Nishttha
hi! U have a new reader... Hiiii Nishttha.....!!!!!! new reader...... means new friend.....😃😃😃
Ur ff is really good.

ud soon

Thanx.....a lott...

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Rajveer ko kiska phone aaya tha??😕 😕 😕 😕Aur woh kya kehe raha tha ke woh itna gussa ho gaya??😕 😕 😕 😕

Rajveer apne bedside table par Naina ki photo rakha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aur subah uthkar ush photo frame mein apne mom dad ki photo dal deta hai aur raat ko phir se Naina ki photo jo usne bahut muskil se ek reception party mein li thi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kitna pyaar karta hai woh Naina se!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Rajveer Naina ki photo ko seene se laga kar kehta hai ke kaash woh uske saare dukh apne mein saama leta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ki gadi jaa rahi thi toh Naina ko laga uski dress gayi aur usse dhire awaz mein gali deni lagi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Magar Raj ne gadi ki speed kam kardi taaki uspar pani ki ek boondh bhi naa lage!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne jab usse dekha toh bas uski sadgi bhari khudsoorati uske dil ko choo gayi aur usse socha ne khubsoorati sadgi mein hi hoti hai!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar Naina usse nahi dekh payi!!!!😊 😊 😊

Aur ush din din bhar uska chehra Raj ki ankhon ke saamne chaya raha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaaiiiii!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ki taraf ek car aa rahi hai tezi se!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!!!

Thanx for ur comments.....that was really sweet.😛

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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*PART:-8*

Rajveer ne socha k woh jake un k help karega .Isiliye woh jaise hi road cross kar k dushri side par jane laga....us k samne ek maruti van aa gaya......

Woh ruk gaya thodi der....van k jane k baad woh phir se dushri side par janewala tha k...tabhi us ne dekha k ek ladki bhagti hui aayi aur us bus k ander chali gayi, us k hath main milk packets the.

Us ladki ne wahin bus k ander ek side main woh packets rakh aur apna hath bahar k taraf nikal kar ek ek kar k sare logon ko sahara dete hue bus k ander tak khinch kar le gayi.Isi tarah se woh sab ko bus k ander k taraf khinch kar le gayi.

Rajveer ko us ladki ka chehera nahin dikh raha tha kyoun k har bar koi na koi us k samne hota tha.

Kuch der baad jab woh ladki apne packets ko lekar jane lagi tabhi ek old lady ne use rok liya aur use apne gale se laga liya aur us ladki ka matha chum liya...us bus main baithe hue sabhi log us ladki k liye tali baja rahe the...

Rajveer sare incidents ko kafi dhyan se dekh raha tha. Kuch der baad woh ladki mushkurati hui bus se nikli...Rajveer use dekh kar chaunk gaya....kyoun k yeh wohi galiwali ladki thi.

Woh ladki bus main se utar kar niche aayi, tabhi ek ladka apne racinng cycle se wohin se gujar raha tha. Woh ladki boli...

STOP.......STOP.......STOP.......STOP.....STOP......STOP

Woh ladka ruk gaya.Woh ladka Rajveer k taraf pith kar k khada tha. Isiliye Rajveer use dekh to nahin pa raha tha lekin un dono k batain sun raha tha.......

Woh ladki boli:- "Plz mujhe ghar tak chod de!"

Woh ladka bola:-" Us bus k ander kya kar rahi thi.....???Subah subha tera social works suru ho gaya na...!!!!! Thik hai...lekin ek shart hai...pahle mujhe bhai bol phir tujhe ghar tak lift dunga!"

Woh ladki chidhte hue boli:-"Bhai sahab....kripya mujhe ghar tak chod denge?"

Woh ladka bola:-"Nahin .....is tarah se comic kar k nahin.... seriously bol....."

Woh ladki boli:-" Ok.....bhai, ghar tak chod de plz warna main college k liye late ho jaungi..."

Woh ladka bola:-" Bas itni si baat...chal baith...ghar tak ..kya tu kahe to tujhe mars par chod deta hoon...kam se kam is bar jab NASA apne astronuts bhejega to use kuch to darawani chiz milegi..."

Woh ladki gusse main chali jati hai....woh ladka us k piche piche use bulata hua jata hai:-" Are..sun to.....naraz kyoun hoti hai main to mazak kar raha tha."

Rajveer baichain tha...use lag raha tha jaise aabhi thodi pahele us k paas sab kuch tha.....magar ab kuch nahin....use lag raha tha..us k ander se ek bahat badi chiz koi chhin k le gaya hai. Woh apne ander ek khalipan mehsoos kar raha tha. Ek ajeeb sa ehsaas jag raha tha us k dil main....woh kafi disturbed mehsoos kar raha tha.

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Kuch dino baad.......................................................

Rajveer ek shaam ko apne ghar se nikla.Use kuch books kharidne the. Isiliye woh apne bike par book shop k taraf market buildings k taraf ja raha tha. Woh signal par ruk gaya...red lite on tha.Woh idhar udar dekh raha tha.

Us ne notice kiya k wohi ladki footpath par bhagte hue aa rahi thi. Rajveer ne use dhyan se dekha...woh kafi pareshan lag rahi thi.

Woh rajveer ko cross kar k road k dushri side par gayi aur kuch flowers kharide aur wapas aa rahi thi k us ne dekha k ek blind person road cross kar ne k koshis kar raha hai...

Us ladki ne us aadmi ka hath pakad kar road cross karwa diya. Tabhi green signal on ho gaya. Woh ladki Rajveer k aage khadi ek bus ki taraf bhagi....lekin tabhi Rajveer k kareeb us ka pair fishla......

Rajveer ne us ka hath tham liya. Us ladki ne bhi Rajveer ka hath kafi jor se pakad lia tha......itni jor se k us k nails k nishan aa gaye the rajveer k hath par.........

Phir woh ladki jaldi se 'thanx' kahne k liye turn kiya...Rajveer ko dekh kar woh kuch sec.ruki.... Phir'thanx' kah kar jaldi se us bus k ander chad gayi.Rajveer ne notice kiya k khidki se bahar woh Rajveer ko ek ajeeb si nazar se dekh rahi thi.................

Rajveer sochne k liye majboor ho gaya tha k kya us ka us ladki k sath koi rishta hai...????? Kyoun baar baar woh ladki aa jati hai us k samne ek paheli ban kar....????? Kyoun us ladki ko dekhte hi us ka dil baichain ho jata hai.....????? Aur kyoun us k jane k baad us ek khalipan ka ehsaas hota hai.......?????

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Us din Sudha ji k bahat zor dene par Rajveer un k sath mandir jata hai.Sudha ji to chali gayi pujari ji se kuch baat karne aur Rajveer ghum ghum kar mandir ke charon taraf dekhne laga, phir woh soch ne laga,

"Pata nahin kyoun har bar jab bhi us ladki ko dekhta hoon, aisa lagta hai k use janta hoon main....par pehchan nahin para hoon!!!!!

Aisa kyoun lag raha hai k main kafi pahle se janta hoon us ko ....

SH***TT

Main kyoun us k bare main soch raha hoon.....??? Pata nahi koun hai....??? Phir milegi ya nahin.......????? Kyoun bar bar soch kar us k bare main pareshan karoon apne aap ko....!!!!!!!!"

Yeh soch kar apne aap ko relax kar ne k liye us ne idhar udhar dekhna suru kiya.Lekin baar baar us ladki ka chehera us k aankhon ke samne aa jata tha.

Use Bhagwan ji par gussa aa gaya...Woh un k samne gaya aur khade ho kar dhire dhire se kahne laga,

"Maza aa raha hoga na aap ko...????? Mujhe is tarah se pareshan kar k.....!!!!!!!!! Aaj pata chala...k kyoun har film main Amitabh Bachhan aap ko itne emotional dialouges marte the...????

Kitni aachi thi meri zindagi.....aur aab aap ne is naye prob, ko mere dimag k screen par headlines k tarah baar baar repeat telicast kar k mujhe pareshan kyoun kiye ja rahe hain.....????? Woh ladki meri kuch nahin lagti...... phir bhi....!!!!! Aagar aap ko aisa kuch lagta hai....to bulaiye us ladki ko is mandir main aabhi isi waqt......aur haan ...kripa kar k us ka naam bhi bata dijiyega mujhe.....!!!!!!!"

Dil hi dil main itna kah kar woh jaise hi muda ......woh chounk gaya.....kyoun k woh ladki us se thodi hi duri par khadi thi..... Aur hath jod kar prayer kar rahi thi......

Rajveer hairani se kabhi us ladki ko to kabhi bhagwan ko dekh raha tha.Use yakeen hi nahin ho raha tha k aabhi thodi der pahle us ne jo kuch bhi kaha woh itni jaldi puri ho jayegi.

Woh mushkurate hue Bhagwan ji se kahta hai:-" Kya sach main is k sath mera koi rishta hai.....!!!!!!!! Main na kitna bewakuf hoon......haan..agar mujhe pata hota k aabhi aap kafi mood main hain wishes pura karne k liye ....to main do char aur wishes kar leta...."

Rajveer ne notice kiya us ladki k sath ek aur bhi khubshurat si ladki thi.....jise woh ladki 'di' kahti thi. Rajveer ne socha k sayad woh us ki badi bahen hai.

Us ladki ki jo badi bahen thi woh puja karne k liye ander k taraf chali gayi aur woh ladki wohin mandir k sidhiyon k upar baith gayi. Rajveer thodi hi duri par baitha hua tha.

Phir Rajveer ne notice kiya k thodi hi duri par kuch ladke khade the. Jin main se ek muscular bodywala handsome sa ladka khada

tha....jo sayad us gang ka leader tha. Woh ladka aapne friends ko is ladki k taraf ishara kar k kuch instructions de raha tha, Aur baki k ladke hansh rahe the. Rajveer ko yeh aacha nahin laga. Phir bhi woh dekhne laga k woh sab aakhir karna kya chahte hain.......?????

Kuch instructions dene k baad woh ladka aape sare friends ko lekar wahan se chala gaya mandir k paas wali gali k taraf. Sirf wohi ladka wohin par khada tha jise woh kuch samjha kar gaya tha.

Us ladke ne apne aankhon main ek black spec.lagaya ,Jo jyada tar blind persons istemal karte hain. Aur hath main ek stick pakad kar us ladki k samne se gujra...aur girne ka natak kiya. Woh ladki bhagti hui wahan par aayi aur us ko sahara diya.

Us ladki ne us ladke se kuch pucha....aur us ladke ne bhi kuch kaha.Sayad woh ladki use 'kahan jana hai ' yeh puch rahi thi.Aur us ladke k kuch kahne k baad woh ladki us ladke ka hath pakad kar us mandir ke paas wali gali k taraf jane lagi....jahan par aabhi aabhi us andhe ki acting kar rahe ladke k friends gaye the.

Rajveer chaunk gaya.Sochne laga k kahin yeh sab is ladki k helping nature ka faida to nahin utha rahe hain na....???????

Kahin yeh sab mil kar us ladki k sath koi galat harkat to nahin karenge....!!!!!!!!!

Rajveer k samajh main hi nahin aaraha tha k woh kya kare...... Tabhi woh ladki ne achank Rajveer k taraf dekha aur chaunki... Sayad woh Rajveer ko dekh kar yeh soch rahi thi k us ne pahle use kahin dekha hai...!!!!!!!

Tabhi Rajveer ne apne right hand k do fingers ko aapne ankhon k taraf dikhate hue us ladki ko kuch ishara kiya.Jis ka matlab tha k woh ladka andha nahin hai.....!!!!!

Woh ladki chaunki, Woh samajh gayi thi k Rajveer kya kahna chahta hai......!!!!!!!! Lekin use is baat par yakeen nahin aa raha tha.....!!!!!!!! Woh yeh soch rahi thi k woh Rajveer k isharon par yakeen kare ya nahin.......!!!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#129

Haan jee , here is the comment for next part.

Ye kya chal raha hai mujhe samjh hi nahi aa raha hai? Jitna samajh aa raha hai vo ye hai ki i hope ye ladki Naina hai jis ka kaam hai sab ki madad karna aur vo Raj apna past soch raha hai.😃

Par vo ladka kaun tha jo us k is nature ka fayda uthane ki koshish kar raha tha.😕

Alekh tha vo cycle waala ladka ye to pata hai aur samajh bhi aaya mujhe kyounki dono twins hain to i hope Naina kabhi bhai nahi bolti hogi na us ko to Alekh aisa keh raha hoga Naina se.😛

Par mujhe nahi pata tha ki bhagwaan Raj ki prayer itni jalsi sun lete hain.😉

Sahi kaha tha Raj ne ki bhagwaan agar mujhe pata hota ki aap ka mood itna accha hai to mai kai saare ashirvaad maang leta abhi.😆

update was really awesome, update soon dear.👏

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Hi dear..

i was online so maine poora update padh liye..Lucky me ....Update was really gud..I think this girl who is so helping in nature is Naina n Raj is remembering the past...Woh bike wala ladka Alekh hai jo Naina ka bhai hain n Woh madir wala so called handsome lafanga Huda hi hoga..

Raj is seeing taht girl everywhere...Wow this is indeed love..Temple wala scene bahut funny tha

"Use Bhagwan ji par gussa aa gaya...Woh un k samne gaya aur khade ho kar dhire dhire se kahne laga,
"Maza aa raha hoga na aap ko...????? Mujhe is tarah se pareshan kar k.....!!!!!!!!! Aaj pata chala...k kyoun har film main Amitabh Bachhan aap ko itne emotional dialouges marte the...????

Kitni aachi thi meri zindagi.....aur aab aap ne is naye prob, ko mere dimag k screen par headlines k tarah baar baar repeat telicast kar k mujhe pareshan kyoun kiye ja rahe hain.....????? Woh ladki meri kuch nahin lagti...... phir bhi....!!!!! Aagar aap ko aisa kuch lagta hai....to bulaiye us ladki ko is mandir main aabhi isi waqt......aur haan ...kripa kar k us ka naam bhi bata dijiyega mujhe.....!!!!!!!"

Dil hi dil main itna kah kar woh jaise hi muda ......woh chounk gaya.....kyoun k woh ladki us se thodi hi duri par khadi thi..... Aur hath jod kar prayer kar rahi thi......

Rajveer hairani se kabhi us ladki ko to kabhi bhagwan ko dekh raha tha.Use yakeen hi nahin ho raha tha k aabhi thodi der pahle us ne jo kuch bhi kaha woh itni jaldi puri ho jayegi.

Woh mushkurate hue Bhagwan ji se kahta hai:-" Kya sach main is k sath mera koi rishta hai.....!!!!!!!! Main na kitna bewakuf hoon......haan..agar mujhe pata hota k aabhi aap kafi mood main hain wishes pura karne k liye ....to main do char aur wishes kar leta...."

ha ha really kabhi kabhi wishes kitni jaldi poori ho jati hain..So Rajveer has seen dat those guys want to take advantage of Naina's helping nature..Gud dat he has warned her..I'm waiting to see Naina's reactions..

She shud now beat dat guy so much dat he wont repeat this act for next 7 births!!!!!

Thanx for informing n do update soon

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