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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just came back 4rm college. and first thing i do is read ur ff because it is so amazing i love ur update
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Brilllianntttttttttttt!!!!! plz update quickly!!! just love zis ff
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That was totally cool and sooooo sweet!!!! Please continue soon. I think it's tomorrow, right?!!! Yay!!!!😃
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loved the part!
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i loved it...
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Gr8 update
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I hope the confess soon I dont know who should say I love you first maybe they should both say it at the same time
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NIce update. Now both are realising that they have fallen in love. Good now wait for the admitting part and the proposal part. Update soon
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continue soon, i luv this ff, continue
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Hey everyone😉, Thank you soooo much for reading my FF and a big hug to all that commented:


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hey guys heres a quiky update, im in a hurry so forgive my mistakes😳
Day 7

Today is the last day of the trip and today kanya has decided to confess her love!

Kanya wakes up, shes all happy and excited shes dancing,

Kri: Kanya! Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?

Shan: haan, reli strange na, u look reli excited!

K: [smiling] haan, aaj mujhe apne pyar ka ehsaas hua hai, aur aaj main usse bata doongi, im sooo happy!

Shan: [shocked] Tumhe pyar ho gaya hai? Kaise? Kisse? Kaun hai woh?

K: relax relax, itne sare sawaal? Anyways, haan mujhe pyar ho gaya hai, Ranbir nanda se, hes sooo sweet I just love him,

Shan: WHAT! Are u serious?

K: [blushing] nodding her head

Shan: wow that?s awesome, im so happy for u! [hugs her]

K: but im sooo nervous mujhe kuch samjh me nahin araha, main use kaise kahoon? Kya kahoon?

Kr: Kanya, tumhe bas wohi kehna hai, jo tumhare dil mein hai, jo tumhara dil kahe, kehdena, kyunki pyar me insaan soch ta nahin hai, okay!

K: thanx kripa [really nervous but excited] but agar usne na kehdiya, agar uski koi GF hui to?

Shan: C?mon kanya, pyar yeh nahin sochte ke anjaam kya hoga, bas beinteha karte jate hain, aur haan agar woh tumhare liye bana hai, to woh tumhe zaroor mile ga, and btw I think he loves u!

K: really?

Shan & krips: Really, ab jaldi tayar hoke use kehde.

K: thanx guys, but btw main pehnu kya? Im so nervous, mere pas to koi achi dress bhi nahin hai,

Shan: I think tumhe ek sexy dress pehenna chahiye!

Krip: ya, in red, woh tumhe reject kar hi nahin payega!
K: par, mere pas to aisa koi dress hai hi nahi.

Kr: don?t worry madam, we are at your service,

Shan: yep, lets go shopping!

K: par, tum dono ko aayan, aur angad se milne nahin jaana?

Kr: Kanya, at this time I think you need our help more then them and we want to be with you, okay!

Shan: ya kanya, now stop wasting time and lets move!

They leave for the mall.

In the meanwhile Ranbir in his room:

Hes also really excited, because he has realized that he found his true love,

Angad: hey ranbir, tum puri raat kaha the?

R: who main, doosre room mein tha,

Angad: okay, btw you look really happy today whats up?

R: nothing yaar,

Angad: you cant lie to me, c?mon tel me na,

R: ya, tumse kya chupana, actually, IM IN LOVE! [blushing]

An: aha, that?s good news, hmm blushing and all, hehe, so whos the lucky girl?

R: Kanya,

An: WHAT! Kanya, u cant be serious, to akhir pyar ho hi gaya,

R: ya, I don?t know how, but I just realized last nyt that she is my dream girl I just love her,

An: wow, that?s awesome, btw usse propose kab kar rahe ho? Hmmm [raising eyebrows]

R: actually, main chahta hoon ke woh mujhse kahe ke woh mujhse pyar karti hai, and I will make sure she confesses her love today, bcoz I know she also loves me, [smiling]

An: That?s gr8! So are u going to meet her now?

R: I don?t know what to wear, im confused!

An: well, Mr. Ranbir nanda is thinking what to wear? The guy who girls are crazy for is thinking how to impress a girl? Im really surprised but really happy for you yaar! [he hugs him]

R: thanx angad, but I cant decide what to wear,

An: Red, the colour of love,

R: are u mad, I cant wear a red shirt, its impossible, il look like a freak.

An: [laughing]

R: main yahan itna nervous hoon aur tum has rahe ho,

An: sorry, but im not saying wear a red shirt, hehe was just kidding u must take red roses.

R; but what must I wear?

An: I know,

R: what?

An: Clothes [starts laughing]

R: angad, can u stop kidding now, and help me.

An: okay okay, waise aayan kaha hai?

R: I don?t know and plz use to bata bhi mat, it?s a secret until me and kanya are together ok, warna woh phone karke mom, big d aur pure ghar ko bata dega, plz I beg of u, usse kuch mat batana.

An: okay baba, I really finding it funny seeing you so nervous [starts laughing again]

R: hey ab hasna band kar okay, teri turn ayegi na, tab pata chalega,

An: okay serious, tumhare pas koi dang ke kapre hain? I think humein shopping jaana chahiye.

R: okay chalo jaldi, I cant wait to see kanya! Lets move

They also go to the mall

At the mall

Kanya kripa and shanaya are shopping one way.

K: kripa shanaya, tum dono nahin lagta hum yahan mere dress ki shopping ke liye ayethe nake in sab faltu ki cheezon ke liye.

Kr: relax kanya, just chill hum full proof shopping kar rahe hain, okay for our selves also.

Shan: ya kanya, we got the whole day.

K: [getting more nervous] I don?t know main usse kaise kahoon gi,

Kr: don?t worry be happy!

K: ya ab chalein?

Kanya sees some red roses and picks them up and smells them. And starts thinking of ranbir:

In the meanwhile ranbir and angad are also in the mal but on the other part, they are walking around shopping when ranbir stops at a jewellery shop.

He sees this beautiful diamond necklace

R: WOW! Look at that angad I think yeh sirf kanya ke liye hi bana hai, I have to buy it.

So he goes and buys it, [its like the one he gave her when she was wearing a white sari]

R: he looks at the necklace and starts thinking of kanya:

--RANBIR--Kuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya haiKuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai Do chaar din se lagta hai jaise --KANYA--Sab kuch alag hai, sab kuch naya haiKuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya haiCheezein main rakhke bhool jaati hoonBekhayaali mein gungunaati hoonAb akele mein muskuraati hoonBadli hui si meri ada haiKuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai --RANBIR--Pighla pighla hai dil mera jab seAchchha rehta hai mood bhi tab seHanske milta hoon aaj kal sab seKhush ho gaya hai jo bhi mila haiKuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai --KANYA--Rang chamkile saare lagte hainRaah mein bikhre taarein lagte hainPhool ab zyaada pyaare lagte hainMaheki hui si jaisi hawa haiKuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai --RANBIR--Dhyaan ab apna zyaada rakhta hoonSochta hoon main kaisa lagta hoonAaina ho to dekh leta hoonKaise yeh chehra aisa khila haiKuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai --RANBIR--Yeh nasha jis mein donon rehte hain --KANYA--Yeh laher jis mein donon behte hain --RANBIR--Ho na ho isko pyaar kehte hain --KANYA--Pyaar mila to --RANBIR--Dil kho gaya hai --BOTH--Kuch to hua hai, kuch ho gaya hai They both sing and dance in the mall and behave like saif and preeti, driving everyone crazy. K: krips, shan I cant wait to tell him that I love him, ab aur intezaar nahin hota, I need to see him I need to talk to him, I just cant wait anymore. R: Angad, I cant wait to hear her say those three words, oh man, im madly in love with her. Just thinking about her makes me crazy, They all shop finish and go back to the resort. Kanya wears this hot red dress that she bought and ranbir wears a white suit, with a pink shirt and jeans. Krip and shan: Best of luck kanya!K: Thanx guys, Angad: good luck bro!

R: thanx angad I really need it.
They both leave to meet eachother: R: hi kanya, kaisi ho?K: im okay ranbir and you?

R: tum aaj bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho,
K: thanx, tum bhi ache lag rahe ho.R: so? todays our last day, then back to college.K: yeah, yahan kitni maza arahi thi na?R: ya, tum kuch kehna chahti thi?K: haan, woh, ummm I mean nahin,R: why are you hesitating, c?mon say it!

K: Ranbir, actually, I ?
R: [bolo na plz I cant wait anymore] tumhare haath mein kya hai? Wow red roses kis ke liye?K: ummm, woh.They hear a loud scream and both run to see what happened. Its tinaR: kya hua tina?Everyone is there.K: what happened?Krip: tum aise chilayi kyon?Tina; [nervous] woh chipkali, wahanThey all start laughing, Shan: ek chipkali keliye itna shor, you are mad tina!K: itni mushkil se himat jothayi thi, ab main usse kaise kahoon gi? The bus driver: C?mon everyone its time to leave!R: itni jaldi! Plz ten more minutesBD: no, im sorry college se phone aya tha, weather reports say they will be a storm so we need to hurry up. C?mon everyone apna saman jaldi leke ajao!K: really upset Krip: kya hua kanya, keh diya?K: nahin, us stupid tina ki wajah se hum interrupt ho gaye,Krip: don?t worry wahan pohonch ke bata dena, okayK: but, kripa I think he also loves me, woh bhi meri tarhan nervous tha aur itna dress ho ke aya tha, I think he loves me too.Krip: that?s gr8 atleast now u know,K; ab chalo warna bus humein chod ke chali jayegi.day 7 is not over yet but i G2G sumwer so couldnt finish but will finish it tomorrow or on monday! really sorry about that, hope u all liked it, plz comment/criticize! 😳
Edited by nadz_J - 17 years ago

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