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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 update
i am xcited for da next update
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Hey thanks and yeh i know only in this but in Kyph they were quite quick at everything. lolz and rankan were too slow, in one year rankan didnt even kiss eachother. lolz.
and thanks so much for shifting the ffs i know it must be difficult. will update really soon actually i lost my update so i have to re write it, i know what it was about but im just lazy!
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u r welcome... yeah shifting the FFs was a headache n but I got it done lolz😆😃 kind of has fun doing it as well😉

aww angad finger got bit😆 that was funny😃

nice update...can't wait for the next part hope krips don't do something stupid..😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: patel12345

gr8 update
i am xcited for da next update
update soon

Hey thanks so much im glad you liked it! will update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Jaslove

u r welcome... yeah shifting the FFs was a headache n but I got it done lolz😆😃 kind of has fun doing it as well😉

aww angad finger got bit😆 that was funny😃

nice update...can't wait for the next part hope krips don't do something stupid..😉

Hey yeah im sure it was, im glad you managed.
yeah i loved that bit too, thought it was silly and i musnt post it but then couldnt think of anything else, lolz.
thanks, will update soon and i hope she doesnt as well. lolz 😉
nadz
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Posted: 16 years ago

In the engagement kanya and kripa come down, dressed beautifully, ranbir and angad see them and get lost in the beauty.

Kanya and kripa bring riya down,

Ranbir starts singing:

R: Bano Ki Saheli, Resham Ki Dori

Looking at kanya and she smiles at him.

Angad sucks his finger and winks at kripa and she gets embarrassed and hides her face behind riya.

A: Chup Chupke Sharmaye
Dekhe Chori Chori

A and R: Bano Ki Saheli, Resham Ki Dori
Chup Chupke Sharmaye, Dekhe Chori Chori
Ye Mane Ya Na Mane, Main To Ispe Mar Gaya
Yeh Ladki Hai Allah, Hai Hai Re Allah
Yeh Ladki Hai Allah, Hai Hai Re Allah

Kripa goes to her father and hugs him saying: Babul Ki Galiyan Na Chadhke Jaana, (she says showing her thumb and twitching her nose)
Paagal Deewana Isko Samajhana


Kanya says hugging her mum: Babul Ki Galiyan Na Chadhke Jaana, Paagal Deewana Isko Samajhana.

Together: Dekho Ji Dekho
Ye To Mere Peeche Pad Gaya

Yeh Ladka Hai Allah
Hai Hai Re Allah
Yeh Ladka Hai Allah
Hai Hai Re Allah

They sing and dance together. After the engagement, late at night when everyone is sleeping angad calls kripa and she goes with him.

He takes her to a lake house, its beautiful, a small house surrounded by the lake! As they walked through the pier kripa noticed that the whole pier was decorated white beautiful pink and white roses, it was so beautiful. She smiled all the way and as she stepped in the lake house a bucket of red roses fell on her. she looked up at angad and blushed, in front of her it was written I love you all over and the whole lake house was decorated with white and pink flowers and drapes, there were bouquets all over.

"angad…" she tries to explain how excited she was but he tells her to keep quite and tells her to look at the sky, it was a full moon, it was shining brightly and they both looked at it for a while then suddenly fire crackers started playing in the sky, it was beautiful and colorful and the last fire cracker said:

"Will you marry me?"

at seeing this kripa's eyes moist and she looks back at angad who was now on his knees holding a diamond ring in his hand, she looks at him and a tears falls.

"Kripa, will you marry ma?" he asks her still on his knees.

She smiles "Yes, yes!" she says as he puts the ring in her finger and gets up.

"I love you kripa!" he tells and she hugs him tightly.

"I Love you too"

They have a long hug.

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Kanya is watching this with a doorbin.

"dono, ek saath kitne cute lagte hain na?" she tells ranbir.

Ranbir whos annoyed by her interest in there lovestory instead of her own "Haan, ab tum unhe dekhna band karogi" he tells her annoyed.

She laughs, hearing that he's annoyed, she loved annoying him, it was a hobby now.

"kya ranbir, tum kyun itna jal rahe ho?" she asks him teasingly.

"main kyun jaloon? Anyways jab fursat mil jaye to mujhe aa ke bula lena" he says getting up and going.

"kahan jaaa rahe ho?"

"jahanum mein"

"mujhe bhi aana hai" she teases

"ticket chahiye, jo tumhare pas nahi hai" he leaves annoyed.

She laughs on her own. She follows him, he goes and sits on the rock and starts throwing smaller rocks in the lake.

"ranbir" kanya says childishly, he gives her a dirty look and turns back to the water.

"Ranbir… kya hua" she asks as he makes a face like a stubborn child, she smiles.

"chooo chweet " she says pulling his cheeks, and he looks at her, with a faint smile.

"tum gusse mein bohot cute lagte ho" he smiles finally as she pecks him on his cheek.

"ab meri turn"

"kis cheez ke liye" she asks surprised.

"Tumne mujhe kiss kiya, ab mujhe bhi return karni hai" he says childishly.

"ranbir, tum pagal ho" she says smiling as he pecks her on her cheek.

They both have a sweet chat.

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Angad and kripa get lost in eachothers arms, they have an intense eye lock and angad starts kissing kripa, all over her face and she allows it with a tear falling out of her eyes, and she moves alittle away from him.

"kripa, main tumse sacha pyar karta hoon, aur sache pyar mein hichak nahi hoti, sirf pyar hota hai… tumhe mujhpar bharosa hi nahi" he says seeing her hesitation, and walks away.

She runs and hugs him from behind.

"im sorry angad, im sorry… main tumse bohot pyar karti hoon, aur tum par pura bharosa hai mujhe" she tells him feeling guilty to hurt him.

"aaj se mein sirf tumhari hoon, tum jo chaaho kar sakte ho" she tells him.

He turns to her and kisses her tear and smiles faintly, seeing her eyes closed "main sirf tumhara pyar aur vishwas, test kar raha tha" he tells her and she opens her eyes and hugs him.

***********************

After that both of the couples, stay in love forever, they argue, fight, but love each other the most. Love was in the air for them everyday. After graduation, they tell there parents about there love and their parents agree they get married.

***********************

One year later

Kanya and kripa are pregnant, it's the last month. The whole eight months they kept angad and ranbir on there toes. "angad, mujhe chocolate ice cream chahiye, Abhi" kripa screams. "ranbir, mujhe imli chahiye ABHI" kanya screams. Angad and ranbir quickly go out and bring it and give it to them, then sit outside.

"god, inke cravings kab khatam honge" angad tells ranbir.

"I know, they've become so annoying"

"kya kaha, annoying huh?" kanya says with tears in her eyes "main yahan tumhari wajah se, itna suffer kar rahi hoon, aur tumhe main annoying lagti hoon" she says fighting with him.

"nahi baby, mera who matlab nahi tha" ranbir tries to calm her down.

She argues with him and throws things around while angad sits and watches.

"kanya, hum kripa ki baat kar rahe the, why are you fighting" he tries to help.

"What" kripa comes out "angad, I didn't expect this from you, tum jaante ho, mujhe kitna dard hota hai? Aur phir bhi tumhe kahan parwa hai" she starts sobbing like a baby.

"nahi, darling main to bas help karne ki koshish kar raha tha" he tries to explain.

She keeps crying then suddenly feels a kick.

"aah…" she suddenly starts smiling "angad, baby kick kar raha hai" she says pulling angads hand on her stomach. Angad also starts laughing.

Kanya also starts feeling something and she also tells ranbir.

After a few days, in the hospital.

Kripa gives birth to a cute little girl and kanya gives birth to a sweet little boy.

"ole, ole, kiya hua baby" angad says playing with the baby, he takes the baby to kanya and sits next to her.

"angad, maine tumhe nau mahine bohot sataya na?" she asks smiling. "im sorry" she says holding his hand. He smiles at her "I guess it was worth it" he tells her as they both play with there new born baby. Then they start arguing on the name. finally the decide to keep a name that starts with both of there initials "Akansha" "im so happy humein beti hui, bilkul tumhare jaisi" angad tells kripa pulling her nose. "nahi, dekho iska nak tumhare jaisa hai" she tells him. "haan aur ankhein apni maa jaise" he tells her pecking her cheek. They both smile and look at there new angel, Angad puts his one arm around kripa and holds the baby with one hand.

Ranbir takes hold of his baby boy and hands him to kanya, he's not good with babies. "mere jaisa lagta hai, na" ranbir asks, kanya looks at him and back at the baby "haan, ankhein, kaan, mun, baal sab mere jaise hain, bas naak tumhare jaisa hai" she teases. "kanya…" he says annoyed. "okay sorry, ab yahan aa ke, baby ko haath mein lo" she tells him. "main, kaise" he says scared. He sits on the bed and she helps him, hold the baby and puts her hand under hers. So both of the hold hands and the baby and look at each other with love. Kanya and ranbir also decide to keep there sons name with a little of both of there names so they decide on "Karan" ka from kanya and ran from ranbir.

Three years later, kripa, kanya, ranbir and angad go on a picnic with karan (kanya and ranbir's son) and Akanksha (angad and kripas daughter) all four of them play volley ball while the kids play in the sand, after playing angad notices karan holding akanksha's hand. "ranbir, tera beta meri beti ke saath flirt kar raha hai… meri beti ko koi chehre main bardaasht nahi karoonga!" he says.

"what, they are kids yaar" ranbir tells him "angad, tum bhi na" kripa says.

"nahi kripa abhi se hi te karlete hain, I don't want my daughter to ever have any problem" they all laugh at him. "beti hai na, to sochna to parega, to ranbir what dono ka rishta abhi se pakka karlein?" he asks ranbir. Ranbir laughs "sure, pakka"

"hey, hello, tum dono kaun hote ho inka rishta pakka karne wale?" kanya and kripa say together. "humare bache love marriage karenge, samjhe tum dono" they continue. "lekin kripa, kahin kisi ghalat ladke se pala par gaya to?" angad says worried. "angad, humein tum dono mil gaye na? to unhe bhi unke jeevan saathi mil jayenge, tum dono ko abhi se chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi" she tells him.

"okay, okay by the way, aaj tum bohot khoobsurat la rahi ho" he tells her winking. "thanks" she says blushing " I love you" he says pecking her. "love you too" kripa tells him.

"so romantic" kanya says. "hmm, I love you" ranbir says hugging her. "love you too" "ranbir main soch rahi thi, humein doosra baby plan karma chahiye' she says still hugging him. No way, not again, he thinks, but thinking of how much joy karan brought to there life he smiles and says, "hmmm"


Kanya, ranbir and angad, kripa's small nok jok continues all life and they spend there life happily together, when they met they prayed Kahin pyar na ho jaye, lekin jab pyar hota hai, to koi nahi rok pata! Keep loving!


The end

Adios


Nadz_J!

Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Hey guys, since KIT ended I've just been updating this FF with no comments so i've decided to end it as it is the couples are already in love and all is well between them!

Angad tells kripa that he loves her and proposes her.

Angad and kripa get married, rankan get married and live happily ever after!

The end!

Nadz😉
Nooooooooooooooo please write proper end 😭

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Posted: 16 years ago


will end it only for you dear!

mwah!😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome Ending thank you very much for write this part and its so sweet to saw Both pair Happy with thier kids and i live the way angad protect his daughter soooo sweet thank you so much again /👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

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Awesome Ending thank you very much for write this part and its so sweet to saw Both pair Happy with thier kids and i live the way angad protect his daughter soooo sweet thank you so much again /👏



Thank you very much for all the claps, it made the effort worth it!

and Thank YOU! for actually telling me to finish it properly cause i was feeling aweful to actually finish it like this because this FF is very close to me, it was my first FF so it was close to me! Thank you for your feedback and suggestions!

Love
Nadz😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
Dear Readers,

I would like to THANK ALL OF YOU for all the comments, feedback and appreciation. Im glad you liked my silly imaginations. lolz😆😆😆

It was possible only because of all of you! Thank you for all your support!🤗🤗🤗

Adios phir milenge Chalte chalte😉

Luv
Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago

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