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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: spate22

What do you mean it's not exciting?!!! It was very very very exciting!!!😃 You really should write a book!!!😉😆 It was just awesome!!!👏So that's how Rankan meet again, huh?!! Very smart!!😉 I think it's going to be fun with Rankan under the same roof!!😉 What does Kanya know about Rohit?!! It sounds interesting!! Rankan are just sooooo cute!!!😳 I can't wait for the next update!!😍 Thanks for updating!!! I wonder how Kanya will make Ranbir apologize?!! I can't wait!!😃

Shreya

THANK YOU, your comments are always the longest. thanks! book and me😆😆😆 that is really funny, it will be the lowest selling. lol. will update soon! keep reading!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 21

Kanya and kripa go on the table, ranbir and angad are alos there. Kanya looks at ranbir with narrowed eyes. Kanya sits opposite ranbir and kripa oppsite angad.

Ranbir keeps doing isharas and kanya just looks at him angrily.

Pam: to beta tum dono karte kya ho?

R: hum abhi bhi college mein hain.

Pam: acha, kaunsi college mein? Mumbai me hogi na?

R: nahin aunty hum delhi, ki acharya college mein jaate hain.

Pam: kripa aur kanya bhi usi college mein hai, to aap ek doosre ko jaante honge na?

R: haan, bohot achi tara se jaante hain.

Pam: acha, aap pehli baar panchgini aye hain?

R: pehle to aunty aap mujhe tum keh kar bulaiye aur second haan very first time.

Pam: Kanya, kripa apne doston ko panchgini nahin dikhaogi? Kal se tum dono inhe panchgini ki ser karaogi okay!

K: Par mom!

Pam: par- var kuch nahin, maine kahan na.

Kr: okay, mama hum inhe panchgini zaroor dikhayenge.

Kanya steps on kripas foot.

Kr: OUCH!!!

Pam: Kya hua?

An: kya hua kripa?

Kr: nahin woh machar kat gaya. [Scratching her hand]

Ranbir knows what kanya done he gives her a mischievous smile.

They all finish dinner and go there own rooms. Kanya is going to her room when ranbir stops her in the corner, he pushes her to the wall.

K: what the hell, kya kar rahe ho?

R: tum aise baat kyun kar rahi ho? I love u and I was missing you isiliye tumhe rokliya.

K: oh, ab pyar yaad aya aur pehle to bohot smart ban rahe the, mujhse sorry kehelwaya!, I don't wana talk to you! Jab tak tum sorry nahin kehte, I wont talk to you!

R: oh Ego problem, kanya galti tumhari thi jab koi soya ho, how can you scream in his ear? And I love you come on don't act childish!

K: I don't care galati kiski thi, you have to say sorry to me in front of everyone, okay!

R: hey hello, jab kuch galat kiya hi nahi so why must I say sorry? Agar tumhe ego problem hai, that's not my problem!
K: sorry to tumhe kehna hi hoga!

R: well, try your luck!

K: I will, [she pushes him and goes away]

R: [looks at her going and smiles]

She turns back in a serious mood and sees him smiling and turns back, she blushes and then gets back to her serious face and goes to her room.

R: man I love her! [he also goes to his room]

The next day…

Pammi is in the kitchen kripa is helping Ranbir also goes.

R: morning aunty! Morning kripa!

P; Good morning beta!

K: hey Ranbir how was your night?

R: good thanks! Can I help?

P: nahin, nahin aap kaise?

R: phir aap???? [making a sad face] pehle beta banati hain, aur phir kaam bhi nahin karne deti? C'mon aunty its no big, let me help!

P: theeke, tum yeh table pe rakh do!
R: that's like a good aunty! Thank you!

He starts setting the table and helping with the cutting and stuff.

Kanya comes down, she sees ranbir sitting on the table with harry and angad, she goes to the kitchen.

K: morning mom! Morning kripa! Kuch help karoon?

P: ab arahi hai tu? Sab ho gaya hai, ranbir ne bohot madad ki.

K: ranbir ne? what a joke!

P: sach,

Kr: ya kanya, hes too good!

K: whatever, koi bari baat nahin hai, chalo ab nashta karlein? Im damn hungry!

P: chalo.

They all go to the table and have breakfast then everyone gets up and start leaving. Harry has to go to a friend, pooja has some work at the studio, pammi will stay home and kanya and kripa have to take angad and ranbir for a outing.

Kanya is still fuming; she just has to get ranbir to say sorry but doesn't know how???

They go to the mall and then to the lovers park, the whole day passed but kanya is still not talking to ranbir, (I know shes over reacting but it's the ego)lol. Its around five o'clock in the evening, Scene shifts to kripa and angad. Kripa and angad are sitting on the grass, and looking at all the couples.

A: its so nice na?

K: what?

A: to be in love.. I mean when you in love you forget the whole world its so sweet!

K: hmmm, so ever been in love?

A: I don't know!

K: what do you mean you don't know? How can you not know?

A: well I don't know if its love!

K: oh okay, so who is she? [little concerned look]

A: hai koi khoobsurat pari.

K: ohhh,

Theres silence for a few minutes.

A: Kripa, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai!

K: kaho,

A: woh, actually…

It starts raining…

A: oh my god, chalo [he runs to the shade]

Kripa is still there she is enjoying the rain, she calls him.

A: are you mad? Bimar ho jao gi, come on!
K: tum jao, main thodi der mein ajaoongi!

A: [he keeps staring at her and smiling] she looks so beautiful!

kripa goes there and pulls him out, he also gets wet and suddenly starts enjoying it, they both play in the rain. And suddenly kripa slips and angad catches her and slips too. Shes on top of him they both laugh, kripa tries to get up but her hair gets stuck on angads shirt, while trieng to take it off there eyes meet and they both get lost. Angad manages to remove her hair from his shirt they both get up.

K: [her heart is beating really fast they were so close how she wished they could stay like that forever] Chalo, bohot der ho gayi hai!
A: ya, lets go!

They both go and find ranbir and kanya are already home.

The scene fades.

Sorry for the late update and that too so short but I cant concerntrate on the ff at the moment got exams end of the month and also work, so sorry but will update soon! I want lots of comments and suggestions how ranbir will say sorry to kanya!

Nadz

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey comeon ranbir and kanya had a whole day together but they didnt use the time they had together(dont think dirty i m just saying that they didnt talk to each other)...
in for this fantastic update👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sorry nadz but i dunt have a clue of wht is happenening coz i have been reading only ur oder ff lately! I am sorry!!!!! But i liked ur update....update de oders 1 too! All de best for ur xams!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update!!! Rankan are sooooooo cute!!! I'm sure Kanya won't be able to resist Ranbir for long!! Who knows maybe Ranbir gives in first!!😳 As long as they patch things ups!!😉 I have some suggestions!!
1. Ranbir gives in and says "sorry" because of Kanya ignoring him!!
2. Ranbir does something romantic for Kanya and Kanya completely melts!!!😉 And in that moment Ranbir finally does say "sorry" to her and she forgives him!!
3. Kanya could use the jealousy card in order for Ranbir to apologize!!!😳
Anyway, I forgot that you had exams!!!😲 I'm sorry!!!😒 Don't bother to update for atleast the next two weeks!!! Ok?!!👍🏼 Good luck with them!!👍🏼 Thanks for the update though!!!😃
Shreya
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank you soooo much everyone for the comments, i still want more.😉 Lol 😆
Please pray i pass my exams, then my next update! Economics is quite tricky at times😕 so please pray for me!
Nadz
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spate22

Awesome update!!! Rankan are sooooooo cute!!! I'm sure Kanya won't be able to resist Ranbir for long!! Who knows maybe Ranbir gives in first!!😳 As long as they patch things ups!!😉 I have some suggestions!!

1. Ranbir gives in and says "sorry" because of Kanya ignoring him!!
2. Ranbir does something romantic for Kanya and Kanya completely melts!!!😉 And in that moment Ranbir finally does say "sorry" to her and she forgives him!!
3. Kanya could use the jealousy card in order for Ranbir to apologize!!!😳
Anyway, I forgot that you had exams!!!😲 I'm sorry!!!😒 Don't bother to update for atleast the next two weeks!!! Ok?!!👍🏼 Good luck with them!!👍🏼 Thanks for the update though!!!😃
Shreya

Hey thanks for the comments and suggestions i thought of all of them as well😳😕, i guess our minds think alike but then not sure wich one it will be but the jealousy track will come later so not now but will see how the story is going then will decide how he'll say sorry!😉
Nadz
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg dat was amazing
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey everyone will update tonite, i've written the update just have to type it and post, will do it today!

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