Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 21

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yeah i know but the problem is until i dont update i keep thinking wats next once i update i know its finalized otherwise i keep chaging the story in my head😆😆 lol. but yeah now i will slow it down as i got to study got exams at the end of the month, that too economics😕 Thanks!

Nadia

do some angad kripa scene too

HEY I SEE U LOVE A-K like me, lol but cant put too much of them since its KIT forum but they will be some scenes in panchgini. just wait and watch! gope you like them😕😳

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Next day

They both wake up and are busy with their own families, they have lunch.

Ranbir goes in his room and tries to phone kanya but she doesn?t answer, because her phone is in her purse in the cupboard. After one hour

Kanya, is with pooja and shantu in the room they are talking. And her phone rings again she goes to see and cuts it.

R: mera phone cut kardiya? Uggghh [frustrated]

P: kaun tha?

K: kripa, thi mujhe abhi usse baat nahin karni!

P: oh okay! Kanya tujhe pata hai, mama tere liye ladka dhoond rahi hai, and I think she has found one!

K: WHAT! Mujhe mama se baat karni hogi, I don?t want to marry anyone, at the moment.

P: hmmm? try karle!

Kanya goes to her mother.

K: mama, mujhe apse baat karni hai!

Pam: bol putar!

K: mama, pooja di keh rahi thi ke aapne mere liye ek ladka dekha hai?

Pam: woh to main kabse dhoond rahi hoon, aur jaane se pehle tune khud kaha tha ke jise main choonungi tu usse shaadi karegi!

K: tab baat alag thi, mama mujhe aapko kuch batana hai.

Jeet: pammi, pammi kahan hai tu?

Pam: kanya main tusse baad mein baat karti hoon

Pammi goes to see her friends kuljeet, kripas mother and kamini, riyas mother.

K: oh no, mujhe mum se baat karni hi hogi!

On the other side

R: what does she think of her self, wahan jaa ke mujhe bhool gayi? Ab mujhe phone kare, im not talking to her!

Kripa comes to her.

Kr: hello!

K: [gets scared] hey kaise ho?

Kr: eh tujhe pata hai, riya ki sagai ho rahi hai!
K: what, sach? That?s so nice chal usse thoda sata ke ate hain!

Kr: ya lets go,

K: waise ladka kaun hai?

Kr: I don?t know, mamma ne bataya ke uski sagai ho rahi hai.

K: oh okay chal use poochte hain.

They go to riyas house.

K: [she goes and hugs her] kaisi hai? To tub hi shaadi kar rahi hai?

R: [getting shy]

K: oohh, sharma bhi rahi hai!

Kr: kaun hai woh?

R: who Mumbai mein rehta hai,

K: arrange hai?

R: obviously!

K: oh okay! Naam kya hai jiju ka?

R: rohit!

Kr: kitni sharma rahi hai, dekhto!

K: to ab tu humein chod ke chali jayegi?

R: ek, din to hum sab ko shaadi kar ke jaana hai, tum dono ko bhi yeh karna hoga.

Three of them have an emotional moment. [Riya kanya and kripa were childhood friends and neighbours.]

Kanya goes home and the usual pooja telling her flop stories, shantu irritating with her sarawe jokes and harry watching tv. And pammi was busy on the phone with jeet. Kanya gets really tired and goes to her room, its already 10pm. When ranbir called her it was 3pm.

K: oh shit ranbir phone kar raha tha, she runs and takes her phone she sees, 32 missed calls. Oh shit ranbir bohot ghusse hua hoga.

She tries to call him but he cuts her off. So she sends him a msg.

K: IM SORRY!!

Ranbir reads it and deletes it!

K: Ranbir, pooja di aur shanta tai yehan the that?s why I had to cut you off, im really sorry!

K: ranbir please im really sorry!
K: im also missing you a lot!

K: c?mon ranbir forgive me!

R: do dino se yaad nahi ayi, ab kya hua bore ho rahi ho to mujhse baat karni hai? Ab fursat mili, im trying to call you since 1 oclock, but how does that matter to you, you just don?t have the time!

K: its not that ranbir please, try and understand, im really sorry!

He doesn?t reply.

K: Humse Rahoge kya hamesha khafaMaaf bhi kardo jaanaMaan to li hai humne apni khataMaaf bhi kardo jaanaDekho ye gussa chhodoAb tum ye kissa chhodoHum hain sharminda galti hogi na aindaaMaan bhi jaao suno tumko kasam haiKaisi ye zidd hai kaisa sitamb hai

R: your shayari wont work! [saying it to himself doesn?t reply]

K: c?mon ranbir what is this bachpana? Talk to me! Answer my phone!

K: why are you doing this ranbir, I love u! I miss u!

K: okay, if you don?t wanna talk, forget it. BYE! Anyways mama is looking for a boy for me, I also don?t need to run behind you!

She starts crying,

K: itna over react kyun kar raha hai? Main bhi uske piche nahin bhagoongi!

She looks at the ring he made her wear and while she is taking it off, Her phone rings she answers in her crying voice.

K: hello?

R: kanya, tum ro rahi ho? [worried]

K: isse tumhe kya?

R: im sorry kanya, please ro mat.

K: IM SORRY ranbir I know mujhe tumhara call cut nahin karna chahiyetha lekin main pooja di aur shanta tai ke samne tumse baat nahi karsakhti thi!

R: okay ab rona band karo aur apni khirki ke bahar dekho.

She gets up to go to the window. She sees a full moon.

K: its beautiful.

R: I know but not more then you!

K: [blushes] I love u, Ranbir!

R: me too! I miss you soo much! Yeh ek mahina kaise nikle ga, I really don?t know!

K: me too, but hum chand ko dekh kar samajh sakte hain k eek doosre ke paas hain hum!
R: I LOVE U! I LOVE U! I LOVE U! koi araha hai, will chat later. Bye!

K: [she gives him a kiss through the phone] Bye! She puts the phone down

They both smile for long thinking about hearing each others voice.

They both look at the moon and start getting flashback of the good times.15 days have passed and kanya and ranbir hardly get to talk to eachother.

Nandas mansion

Rohit and angad comes to ranbirs house?

Ro: hey dude howzit?

A: hey ranbir wasup?

R: hi guys, kya plans hain?

A: guess what?

R: What?
A: rohit is getting engaged!

R: WHAT!! Don?t lie.

A: for true!

R: whos the unlucky girl?

Ro: say lucky, she lives in panchgini, her name is riya!

R: panchgini?

RO: yep, and we have to go there today, and you are coming.

R: of course dude tu sooli char raha hai so mujhe aur angad ko to ana hi hoga!

Angad and ranbir give a five. And laugh.

Ro: whatever guys humein abhi nikal na hai, get your things!

R: cool, ill be back in a bit, just tell mum all about it!

Angad tells malika about the engagement and that they have to go. Rohit invites malika but she says she will try on the engagement day, which is 5 days later.

Rohit, ranbir and angad go in ranbirs car. While rohits family comes in their own cars.

When they get there, they are welcomed by riyas family, kripa and kanya family, riya is upstairs she hasn?t seen rohit as yet. Kripa and kanya are with her getting her ready.

R: im so nervous, I hope hes good looking and a good person.

K: don?t worry, ri we?ll go check him out, chal krips.

R: nahin nahin, mere saath beheto warna main nervousness se mar jaoongi. Please don?t go!
K: okay, as u wish!

Ranbir, angad and rohit also get off and are greeted. They all go in and sit down.

Kanya is wearing the following outfit:

http://salwarkameezonline.com/images/anarkalichuridar2sko.jpg

Kripa is wearing the following:

http://indiafashionexpo.com/shopping/images/ifeanarkali3a.jpg

They both have their hair left loose and straight!

Three of them start walking and ranbir and angad see kripa and kanya.

They both look at eachother, they are both excited. Kanya and kripa are helping riya come down and haven?t noticed ranbir and angad. Ranbir and angad go away from there.

K: riya, jiju kafi handsome hain.

R: sach

Kr: sach kya khud dekhle!
R: kaise?

She had this scarf on her head and stuff, they bring her down and she sits on the sofa next to rohit.

Then they are introduced and all the normal stuff. Kanya is standing there and she sees ranbir but then he vanishes, she thinks she is dreaming angad does the same.

K: whats happening to me? Ranbir sab jaga dikh raha hai.

Then kanya and kripa decide to go to the garden, on the swing. They both go and sit on the swing.

K: im so happy for riya, but I feel I?ve seen this rohit somewhere,

Kr; ya, isn?t he in our college?

K: I think so, pata nahi.

She sees ranbir behind the tree again.

K: kripa main abhi ayi, [she runs towards the tree and finds ranbir there]

K: im dreaming, im dreaming kanya get out of it!

Ranbir goes to her and kisses her on her cheek.

K: [shocked] RANBIR!

R: ya,

K: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

R: apne dost ki sagai ke liye aya hoon!
K: what, rohit tumhara dost hai?

R: yep!

K: I cant believe this, [she hugs him] im so happy.

R: me too. Btw tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Just like a princess!

K: thanks.

They sit behind the tree and talk.

On the swing angad goes upto kripa.

A: hi!
Kr: she just ignores.

A: I said hi!

Kr: [shocked] tum sach me ho?

A: [he goes close to her and says in her ear] haan!

Her heart starts beating faster then ever, while he is close to her.

Kr: im sorry, mujhe laga mein,

A: waise tum mere sapne kyun dekho gi?

Kr: no, I just thought I was imagining!

A: oh okay!

Kr: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

A: rohit mera dost hai.

Kr: to tum yahan 6 din rahoge?

A: haan, shayad 7din.

Kr: oh kool, [shes feeling awkward and shy] ill see you later then. [starts to walk]

A: he holds her hand, kripa aaj tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho.

Kr: [blushing] thanks, she runs away.

He sleeps on the swing.

A: man I love her!!!

They all go in riyas house, they are deciding who will sleep where, they decide rohit and his parents will sleep at kripas house and ranbir and angad will sleep at kanyas house. riyas house. Kripa also has to shift to kanyas house, kanyas house is bigger then the other two. They had kept the rooms ready for rohit and his parents but they didn?t know angad and ranbir will be coming.

They all go to kanyas house, and pammi tells kanya to show ranbir and angad the room.

K: ayi ye.

R: hmmm.. you look cute dealing with me with so much respect, I like it!

K: [smiles] don?t get so used to it its just cause of mama, okay!
R: oh, and I was getting happy for nothing!

K: yeh raha tumhara aur angad ke room.

R: aur bathroom kahan hai?

K: it?s a ensuite.

R: aur tumhara room,

K: woh wahan, bohot door hai tumse.

R: oh, phone pe bohot pyar araha tha aur yahan itni berukhi se baat kyun kar rahi ho?

K: that?s me, Okay bye!

She goes down and angad and ranbir settle down.

Its night and time for dinner kripa and kanya are helping in the kitchen. Shantu as usual doing her bakwas.

Shantu: pammi tu pagal hai, teen teen jawan ladkian hai ghar mein aur tune un do mustando ko yahan rakha hai.

Kanya and kripa look at eachother and smile.

Pam: shanta tai, aap khama kha baat ka batangar banarahi hai, kisiko thodi na pata tha ke rohit apne doston ko leke ayega, aur ab agaye hai, to riya ke ghar mein to reh nahin sakte, aur kripa ka ghar bhi full hai, isliye kripa ko apne kamre se nikalna para, to bacha humara ghar. Isme burai kya hai, hum sirf inki madad kar rahe hain.

S: patanahi, tujhe kya karna hai.

Pam: ab tum dono kya dekh rahi ho, table tayar karke, un dono ko bulalo!

K & Kr: okay mama!

They both set the table and go up to call, them. They knock the door.

Theres no answer. So both of them open the door and get in. they both are sleeping peacefully.

Kanya and kripa look at them they both look so innocent, while sleeping.

K: does ishara saying lets do it!

Kanya goes next to ranbirs ear and kripa next to angads and they both scream. WAKE UP!!!

R: [getting scared] kya hua

A: what happened [shocked]

K: khana tayar hai, niche aa jao.

She turns to walk away, but ranbir pulls her and she is forced to sit on him.

R: itni si baat, sidhe se nahin keh sakti thi?

K: chodo mujhe ranbir, koi dekh lega.

He pulls her closer, [she is sitting on him and her face is close to his]

R: main nahin chodoonga!

K: ranbir, don?t act silly koi ajayega.

R: you have to say sorry!
K: no way, u are mad, main kyun sorry kahoon.

R: okay, I don?t mind having you here.

K: ranbir pagal mat bano, let me go!

R: no!
she struggles but doesn?t succeed.

They hear pooja di coming.

K: okay sorry!

And she quickly straightens herself before pooja can come in.

P: kanya, kripa chalo mama bula rahi hai!

K & kr: ayi di.

They both go away. Kanya is burning because she had to say sorry.

Kr: jaane de na, kanya, its not a big deal.

K: use bhi sorry kehna parega, warna main usse baat nahin karoongi!

Kr: tub hi na,

Pam: kanya, kripa baatein band karo aura a ke khalo!

Kr & K: aye mama!

That?s it for now, next update lets see if kanya can manage to make him say sorry.

Hope you all liked it! Although it wasn?t really exciting C?mon everyone start commenting😉!