ANJAAN..[FF]...Part IX...Page 1s - Page 9

I know this part is VERY long..!! I didn't mean that much long...!!! I kept on writing and didn't realise myself how big the part was...!!! Anyways... DO comment...!!! And tell me whether you are liking the fan-fic or not...!!!

As the first part was very long therefore, I couldn't add RagVir part in that but I had made a promise with Shagun I couldn't break that either, so I posted this part too...!!! And dedicating to our very sweet Shagun 😊😊and Rafia di (miss you di come back,please.. 😭😭😭)

Part VII

The door was opened with a cracking noise… Someone entered the room… He looked at the person sleeping on the bed… He went near to him and sat beside him… There was affection in his eyes… He held the sleeper's hand…
"Ranveer" he said in a low voice… Ranveer woke up…He was wearing black shirt and trousers. He got fresh and sat on the bed with his elder bro. The bros loved each other immensely.
R: What's up bhaiyya?
A: I wanna share something with you.
R: Yes…
A: In these last months, I have got two dearest friends of mine: Ragini and Sadhna. Both are very caring and sweet…
Ranveer was listening to Alekh attentively…
A: Last night, we went to Priya's birthday… I and Sadhna… Hmm, Ranveer, the time we spent together (stood up from the bed) was unforgettable…
R: You are lucky bhaiyya. Don't let your friendship to break… Under anyone's pressure…
A: Ranveer… (sat besides him, again) I can understand.
R: No bhaiyya, everything is okay… And many things are complicated…
A: As in….
R: Bhaiyya, I have strange dreams, continuously… I saw a gal in it whose face is not clearly seen and she went far from me very far…
A: Don't consider such dreams…
R: But… You know…
A: Ranveer… I don't wanna talk about the past… Feel the new air…
R: Hmm..
A: Don't take me wrong… I want you… These days when you spend more time in your room, I feel very lonely… Whatever you had passed through with it's disheartening…. But don't punish me… I mean… I can't see you in pain…
Ranveer hugged Alekh tightly… Indo entered the room and seeing the two brothers together he had tears in his eyes… The boys didn't know his presence…
In: Hello my boys…
R: Oh dad.. How are you? How was your day…? You seem quite tired isn't 't?
In: Hmm, it was quite tiring… I want both of you to quickly finish your studies and help me…
A: Naveen is there to help you…
In: Don't even think that he helps us… He is working just because of your mom wish….
R: Mom and her decisions… And her plans…
In: Look son, I know whatever Vasu did…
R: Don't repeat it dad, please….
In: Forgive her… After all she is your mother…
A: Give him some time, dad…
R: Take me to shopping…
A: No… I am very busy today…
R: Dad, ORDER bhaiyya to take me to shopping…
In: Alekh… Take him…
A: No dad… He NEVER buys anything… And you know, my weakness is shopping… I buy unnecessary things… No…
In: (smiles) Go…! You will have fun…

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"Jiji….jiji…..Where are you?"
Ra: What had happened? Why are you shouting?
Sa: Look na jiji… I have to buy a new watch….
Ra: Oh…Sadhna… You were shouting because you want to buy a watch…. I thought there is something very serious…
Sa: Ohoo…It is not for me but for our sweet Malti BHABHI…
Ra: I am not in the mood of going….
Sa: I don't care…!!
Ra: Fine…
Sa: Jiji…. When you have to go then why you do these nakhras…
Ragini smiled…
"Now what can I say my sweet sis… Let's go…"

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Co-incidentally Alekh and Ranveer and Sadhna and Ragini reached the mall at the same time… They didn't see each other…
A: Ranveer I am going to buy jeans… Are you………
R: No I am not going with you, I am in the basement… Text me when you are finished with your shopping…
A: My shopping… I see…
Ranveer and Alekh went to their respective shops…
Sa: Jiji, you have those snaps with you…
Ra: Which one…?
Sa: Those of all three of us…
Ra: Oh that one… Yeah… Sadhna I have to go in the basement's shop, please first go there…
Sa: We are already late jiji… Ok, we should shop by ourselves then we will meet at the food court…
Ra: That's better…
Ragini was walking towards the shop… She bumped into some one…
Ra: Oh My God…! Can't you see…
She turned and saw Ranveer standing there…
R: Excuse me, ma'am, you should know how to walk…
Ra: Ah… And…(she looked at the floor, where her things were fallen) what's this… Uff….
R: It's not MY fault…
He rolled his eyes and turned…
Ra: Spoilt lad..
R: What…. I didn't hear you PROPERLY…
Ra: It's not my FAULT if you have a hearing problem…
R: Hello… Be in your limits…
Ra: Wow… You hear that very properly…
R: You don't know who I am…
Ra: I don't wanna know… And if you are dieing to tell me who are you then go ahead, let's see how many problems are cling to you…
R: (sarcastic) You are saying this to me…
Ra: Oh…! I pity you…!!! You are blind too… Oh God…! Why every disability to him? Well, it's neither the nature fault, you are unique…
R: Listen (pointed the finger towards him)…
Ra: Don't point finger on me…Understand….
R: (fully irritated) Just go ahead… I think malls are made for shopping…
Ra: You think that… I always know it…
R: I…I….
Ra: This lead to the conclusion that you were fail in your classes… No problem… Alphabets can be taught easily…. I can teach you here only…
R: You…you…you….
Ra: (in the middle) 'V'…'V'…'V' Now your turn….
R: I am not here to play with you…
Ra: Really? Forget it… Why am I wasting my time?
R: I have wasted my time...
Ra: Now will you give my shopping bag back…
Ranveer realized that he was holding Ragini's bag…
R: Here it is…
Ra: THANKS…
They turned… Ranveer was frustrated…
R: Worst Day…!

hey amazing parts ... infact FABULOUS!

Awwww thats so sweet of u..... Loved both the parts, Saalekh realization first step is beautifully expressed simply beautiful and RagVir part Blush i cud actually imagine the scenes hihi.... Loved the fact the beautiful Bond between Aalekh Ranvir and Sadhna Ragini retains its something which is beautiful!!!!!!

I cant wait for next part it wud be so beautiful i can imagine LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!

Luv,

Shagun

Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

hey amazing parts ... infact FABULOUS!

Thank you so much...!!! Thanks a lot...!!! I am so happy...!!! 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: just_in

Thank you for updating,Loved these parts:

R: Dad, ORDER bhaiyya to take me to shopping'😆

R: (fully irritated) Just go ahead' I think malls are made for shopping'
Ra: You think that' I always know it'
R: I'I'.
Ra: This lead to the conclusion that you were fail in your classes' No problem' Alphabets can be taught easily'. I can teach you here only'
R: You'you'you'.
Ra: (in the middle) 'V'''V'''V' Now your turn'.

😆

So u still not telling us the mystery 😉

Sabr Ka Phal Meetha Hota Hai...!!! 😉😉😉
Will unreveal each and everything...!!!
Thanks for liking it...!!!

Originally posted by: sweet_shagun

Awwww thats so sweet of u
..... Loved both the parts, Saalekh realization first step is beautifully expressed simply beautiful and RagVir part Blush i cud actually imagine the scenes hihi.... Loved the fact the beautiful Bond between Aalekh Ranvir and Sadhna Ragini retains its something which is beautiful!!!!!!

I cant wait for next part it wud be so beautiful i can imagine LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!

Luv,

Shagun

Aww...!!! Thanks for liking and reading it...!!!

Sounds nyc, really nyc, Btw is there Ranvir in next part?

Luv,

Shagun