ANJAAN..[FF]...Part IX...Page 1s - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sweet_shagun

Sounds nyc, really nyc, Btw is there Ranvir in next part?

Luv,

Shagun



Nice question!!! 😆😆😆 Hmm, as I cannot bring the real magic in the parts especially when in come to the couples...!!! But definitely I will try to add RagVir part in it...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankoo...!!! I will try my best so that you could enjoy it while reading...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i just completed reading ur whole FF and wud love to say that it is just awesome👏👏👏..... ur FF is quite different from the original show n thats what i loved the most in ur FF......
please reveal Ranvir's mystery soon and yeah update soon as i cant wait any more for the next part.....
please update soon😊😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: cuty_pie

hey i just completed reading ur whole FF and wud love to say that it is just awesome👏👏👏..... ur FF is quite different from the original show n thats what i loved the most in ur FF......
please reveal Ranvir's mystery soon and yeah update soon as i cant wait any more for the next part.....
please update soon😊😊


*~VASUNDHARA~*



Awww...!!! Thank you so much...!!! You are sho shweet...!!! 😃😃😃 InshAllah Ta'la I'll update the next part sooner than soon...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part VIII
Malti was in her room…
M: Haye…! Only a week is left then me and Vinu ji…! (put her stole on her face)
Natwar entered the room…
Na: Malti…..Malti….. Malti…
M: Ohoo… What is your problem Natoo…
Na: Hainji…
M: Natoo….
Na: Haan Haan… Mujhe pyaar say bulaye Nat-war…! (Call me Nat-war)
M: Shut up….
Na: Hain……..
M: Now if you say "hainji" again..!! I swear I will kill you…!!!
Na: Malti……
M: Hmm…
Na: Malti….
M: NOW SAY SOMETHING….
Na: Mujhay pyaar…. Mujhay pyaar hai….. Tumharay jeevan k saathi ……..(I love yours…. I love yours hubby…. )
M: (cut him) Natoo…!!! Yuck…!!! I couldn't even think that you'll be…
Na: Oh…. Yeh baat aap apnay cheray say upper walay hissay k andar maujeed dimaag mein laayega bhi nahi…. (*Shortly* Don't bring such talks in your head) Mein to us komal… gulaab…. Kali….
M: You love the flowers in their house…. Yeah they are very beautiful, indeed…
Na: Ohoo…. Sadhna humein aap say pyaar hai… (Sadhna I love you)
M: (make face) Oh so you love that "dhamaka packet"….
Na: Meharbaani kar k unko aisa na kahein… (Please, don't say her words)
M: Anyways, now I am not interested in listening to your crap….
Malti left the room…

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"ALEKH! You aren't taking my words seriously…"
A: Oh Sadhna! Chill… After all you are a 'gal' you will wear all these dresses…
Ra: Yes Sadhna, now-a-days you panic a lot…
Sa: Jiji… You too…
A: When someone tells you the truth… You mind it…
Sa: Excuse me…!
Alekh laughed….
Ra: But there is a problem…
A: What?
Ra: You know Alekh, Sadhna is right; she always keeps herself away from 'girlish' dresses…
A: SO……. That's not a big deal when Alekh Rajvansh is there, everything is perfect… (touched his collar)
Sa: Ohoo… Really?
Ra: Well, I have to go to pick Malti Bhabhi….
Sa: Why?
Ra: You know her 'nakhras'…!!!
Sa: So what…! We are not gonna listen to her…
Ra: Relax…! It's ok and mom too want Malti Bhabhi to shop, you know she should choose dress of her own choice…
Sa: (Rolled her eyes) As you wish…
Alekh brought a pair of shoes and a sari…
Sa: Now what's this?
A: Practice... And where is Ragini?....Alright I know where she will be…
'The Practice Began'
Sa: Ah…. I dunno how to wear it…. I am better in my casual dress… I'll go in the wedding exactly like this…. I'll wear sari over jeans so that if I will be uncomfortable I can…….
A: Ms. Chatarpatar…. Please listen to me…
Sadhna wore the sandals… She was uncomfortable in them and couldn't balance herself… She hold Alekh's hand and start walking…
A: I never thought this would be hilarious…
Sa: Don't make fun of me….A a a a a
Sadhna was about to fall when Alekh grabbed her… Sadhna looked into his eyes… A strange feeling touched them… They were completely lost…. There was affection in their eyes… They kept on staring each other… Wind was blowing harder which made Sadhna's hairs to fall on her face…. Alekh gently remove the locks from her eyes… They were in the stationary "eye-locked" position…
Sa: Done for now….
A: Oh… yes….
Sa: Mom said she will be back by the evening….
A: Alright…. I am going….
Sa: Hey…wait…will you have coffee or tea….
A: Tea will be better for now…
Sadhna tied her hairs and was about to leave the room when Alekh hold her hand…. Sadhna turned back…..
Sa: What?
Alekh came closer to her and remove the clip and smiled…
"You look better in untied hairs."
Sadhna smiled back and went…..

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Ragini was not getting any place to park… There was another car which was wrongly parked… Ragini gave horn… She lost her temper and came out of the car….
"Can't you see, because of you we couldn't park our cars…"
The person came out of the car….
"Sorry……….
Ragini was shocked to see Ranvir…….

Part VIII end…..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
wow!!! too gud... i realy hope RagVir again have a fight dis time coz i realy loved the last fight of ur FF😆😆....... n yeah not to 4get... the budding love story of SaLekh is also too cute😍😍..
waiting for ur next part..... please update soon...


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuty_pie

wow!!! too gud... i realy hope RagVir again have a fight dis time coz i realy loved the last fight of ur FF😆😆....... n yeah not to 4get... the budding love story of SaLekh is also too cute😍😍..
waiting for ur next part..... please update soon...


*~VASUNDHARA~*



Thanks a lot...!!! Yeah sure... there will be some cute fighting scene of RagVir...!!! Nice to hear that you like the previous fight...!!! InshAllah Ta'lah I'll update the next part sooooooooon....!!!! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
lol *cutes*

aimen sweet scene b/w saalekh and love rr fighting. hote hote pyaar hogaya ... hehehehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lol RagVir's coincident meetings are something which sounds exciting indeed!! However Saalekh part was cute cant wait for next update ExCeLlEnT PaRt!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

lol *cutes*

aimen sweet scene b/w saalekh and love rr fighting. hote hote pyaar hogaya ... hehehehe



Thanks...!!! SO glad that you like Salekh and RagVir fighting...!!! I thought I wasn't doing the justice but these comments really ENCOURAGE me...!!! Thanks for reading and praising...!!! 😳😳😳

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