ANJAAN..[FF]...Part IX...Page 1s

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Well, after days of thinking I finally decided writing a fanfic...!!! Hope you guys appreciate it...!!!








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INDEX...
Part I: Same post...Page No 1...
Part II: Page No 2...
Part III: Page No 3...
Precap: Page No 4
Part IV: Page No 5
Precap: Page No 8...
Part V: Page No 9..
Precap: Page No 10...
Part VI: Page 11
Part VII: Page 11..
Precap: Page 12...
Part VIII: Page 13...
Precap: Page 14...
Part IX: Page 15...

CHARACTERS...
Hmm, they are almost same...!!! Sadhna and Ragini are sisters...!!! What is the real name of Mamaji in SERIAL? For this part I am calling him Bauji...

PART-I

It was cold winter night... There was silence on the streets,,, A girl entered the house and head towards her room leaving Kaushalya shocked...
Ka: She didn't greet anyone...
She clearly figure out that something is fishy... She knocked the room and found her lying on the bed... She sits beside her...
"What is the reason dear? You didn't greet us."
She remained silent, which make Kaushalya more worried..
"Sweetheart! Is there something very serious?"
Finally, she burst into tears... She cried hysterically... Kaushalya didn't console her so that she can be a little bit relaxed... Kaushalya brought a glass of water for her...
Ka: Now tell me... What is menacing you?
The girl lift her head... Her eyes were shimmering yet looking extremely beautiful, her long black hairs were adding more beauty... She was tall and has great features... She would have been "dream girl" if she doesn't have to bear dark complexion... Yes, you all guess it right.. She is Ragini...
"Should I tell mom about the incident?"
Ra: No mom, everything is fine.. Actually, last night, I couldn't sleep well that is why I was tired today and can't do well at the dance class so our teacher scolds me... I feel really bad...
Ka: (with a smile) This is such a small thing... Now go and take a bath I had prepared tea for you...
Meanwhile, the bell was rang... It wasn't just "rang" but the person doesn't take off her finger from the switch...
Ra: Oh...It must be Sadhna...
The door was opened by a man nearly 70... It was Sadhna at the door... She was so boyish and this was something which Kaushalya hates...Ragini pampered her a lot and always escape her from the wrath of Kaushalya... Sadhna entered the house wearing pink shalwar kameez... She was fair and inherits the beauty from her sister... She loves Ragini and take great care of her....
Sadhna greeted her father...
Sa: Pa, where is mom?
Bauji: She is making tea for both of you...
Sa: What? Jiji has returned... Oh pa, I promised her that I'll come to her dance class by the off timings...
Bauji: Sadhna! Try to fulfill your promises.
Sa: Pa I totally forgot.... Ok lemme ask forgiveness from her...
Bauji: Yup go...
Before going to her room she entered the kitchen..
Sa: Hey mom what's up?
Ka: Badmaash! Always tease me.. You know very well I don't like this his and hellos ... Grow up now...
Sa: Mom, whenever you scold me, there is a strange look in your eyes... And I love it.... I will remain the same so that you are always there to correct me... The way you explain me things mom, I like it....
Kaushalya has tears in her eyes...
Ka: This is till when you are here... Whenever, your dream man will come and take you with him then who will correct you...
Sa: Mom, these tears look very bad in your eyes... Now smile...
Ka: Uff, in your talks I forgot giving tea to Ragini...
Sa: Mom, gimme the tray, I'll give it to jiji....
Sadhna entered the room... She said in a loud voice....
"I know very well my jiji is angry with me."
Ragini looked at her... She smiled back...
"No my sweet sister,,, I am not angry with you,,"
Sa: Ok, then take tea and tell me how was your day today..
Sadhna sit in front of Ragini with her cup and look her impatiently...
"How was MY day? I regret going to dance class today." Ragini was lost in her own thoughts...
Sadhna look at her and repeat her question again...
"Why Jiji is quiet? Something MUST have happened to her... Someone might have RIDICULE her.. I won't spare that person..."
Ragini get an idea that her silence will perplex her sister... She then break the ice...
Ra: Sadhna if I am not beautiful, am I responsible for this?
Sadhna was right someone ridicule her sister...
Sa: Jiji, just tell me who said so... I swear I will TEACH that person a lesson that he'll never FORGOT....
Ra: Cool down Sadhna, I have COMPROMISED now...
Ragini started crying... Part I end on the face of determined Sadhna's face.....





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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great! I love the fact that u hav made sadhna tomboyish and so cool.
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oyyee maaahhh!!
that was too good yaar!!
cant belive we have such creative writers who are mebers here on the Bidaii forum!!
keep it upp!!
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wow i like it...!!
keep up the gud work !!
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Thanks for all of you who take out the time and read this fanfic.. 😳😳😳


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hey aimen grt FF yaar ... u write better than me .. :D
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

hey aimen grt FF yaar ... u write better than me .. :D



Hey don't say anything about the fanfic which I LOVE...!!! Believe me I really love JTYJN...!!! It's GREAT...!!! 😃😃😃
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bornleader its a gr888 start..sadhna is different yet interesting..
now v've got anoda story writer u n affiy..hehehe dats really gud!!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: dina

bornleader its a gr888 start..sadhna is different yet interesting..

now v've got anoda story writer u n affiy..hehehe dats really gud!!!!!!!!!



Thank you very much dina...!!! Your comments really matter for me...!!! 😃😃😃
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The sun was peeping through the window… Sadhna doesn't want to get up.. She enjoys sleeping… Ragini was totally opposite to her… She uses to get up early and help her mom in house chore… Ragini was compelling Sadhna to wake up but Sadhna was busy in dreaming…
Ra: Sadhna wake up its 9:00 already…
Sadhna hurriedly get up… She couldn't believe in her ears that it was 9:00…She has lots of, lots of, lots of stuff to do….
Sa: Oh jiji, Alekh will kill me…
Ra: Yeah dear, that's why I was waking you up….Alekh has called twice….
Kaushalya called Sadhna from the kitchen…
Sa: Oh God save me… Jiji I have to go but mom will give me tons of work to do… I'll have to do the dishes, dust the rooms and, and….
Ra: Sadhna relax….I'll manage everything….
Ragini and Sadhna came downstairs… Sadhna was behind Ragini so that she can save her for Kaushalya…
Ka: Girls, today Vinu's in-laws are coming… I want you to remain in house all the time…
Sa: What???
Ka: Any problem Sadhna….
Sa: Erm, no mom…(whispers in Ragini's ears) I don't know why I am so loud sometimes…
Ra: Mom, don't worry….we'll manage….
Sadhna was shocked….Why we'll manage… Bauji was observing them… He asked Sadhna to come to his room…
Sadhna was clad in jeans and shirt and was looking so cool…The bandanna tied was giving her full attitude look…
Sa: Yup Bauji…
Ba: I know, you don't want to stay at home…
Ragini too come along Sadhna….
Ra: Bauji, this time I also don't want to stay AT home….
Ba: But what's the reason?
Sa: Your gonna-be daughter-in-law…
Ba: Hush, don't be rude….
Ra: Sadhna is right bauji, I don't like her either.
Ba: Why girls?
Sa: I don't know why I don't like her…. Bhaiyya should have got some one BETTER than her…
Ba: Oh dear, she will adjust and for doing so she needs time and your help…
Ra: Anyways Bauji, let Sadhna go…
Ba: Fine…But your mom won't allow her to go…
Ra: That's what I'll manage…
Sa: Oh jiji, I love you…
The two sisters hug each other and Sadhna went from there…. Ragini didn't want Sadhna to be at home…She knows very well why Sadhna don't like Malti, going to be daughter in law of this house… Malti once make fun of Ragini with her friends which was heard by Ragini and Sadhna…. Sadhna was about to burst on her when Ragini stop her… She doesn't want to say anything about the incident… She was now used to it…
Sadhna reached a palace type place… She reached to a room whose door was narrowly open… Inside a room a handsome young man was standing in front of mirror, setting his hairs.. He was wearing blue jeans with black jacket…. He was looking extra cool and hot…!!! (Omg..!!! I cannot describe Alekh…OMG OMG)…Sadhna entered the room and Alekh gave him the sweetest smile.
A: Oh madam, finally you have arrived… You know I was waiting for you…
Sa: Yeah, auntie told me downstairs…
A: Alright…So you have met choti maa….
Sa: Yup…
A: I see..
Sa: Well Alekh, what about your assignments….
A: Oh Sadhna I forgot…. I forgot doing all my assignments and only a week is left…
Sa: Relax yara….
A: I cannot Sadhna….. Oh…. How could I forgot….
He then looks into Sadhna's eyes and wink….
Sa: No… Alekh… This is not done….
He gives her a sweet smile… (*faint*) ….
Sa: Oh…!!! Fine…. I'll do….
A: Fine then completes the assignments…. And give me day after tomorrow… Today I have to go to party so….
Sa: Wait….. I have lots of work at home too….
A: Oh…From when MADAM has started doing house work…
Sa: Erm, from…. Erm…from today at from the very moment…. So?
A: Ok, I was a fool to ask your favour…..
Sa: Ah.. Really? I am going and won't do your work…That's final…
A: Wait…wait…Relax I was just joking…..
Sa: I see….. But Terms And Conditions Apply…
A: For me too…
Sa: Yes….
A: Ok, then tell…
Sa: You will get to know later…
"Alekh"…. Someone called Alekh from downstairs….
A: Sadhna please asked mom what she has to say…
Sa: Okay….
Sadhna went downstairs… A tall lady with black curly hairs on her back, clad in a beautiful cream sari was standing in the hall… She was Vasundra Rajvansh…
Sa: Namaste auntie….
Va: Sadhna… Where were you?
Sa: Alekh was waiting for me so long that is why I was there in his room… Choti Maa didn't tell you of my arrival…
Va: Nah… She might be busy… Well, Sadhna actually I want your favour….
Sa: Yes…
Va: Dolly was showing her interest towards dance so I thought if Ragini could help her…. You know with some steps and how to change steps in every beat and all….
Sa: Jiji won't deny auntie… But the problem is her vacations… You see, after vacations she has to join university too so… Anyways, let me ask her…
Va: Alright…And…
A: Sadhna…. You are growing lazier….
Va (smiles) : Your BOSS… Go…
Sadhna went from there….Avni…Ambika's daughter-in-law… was watching this from a distance… Sadhna saw her…
"Oh…She is here…Eavesdropper! Can't she get a life...?"
Avni smiled at Sadhna who didn't give any response….
"I never understand why such jokers are the choices of everyone… Look at choti maa… How simple and well-mannered she is and this AVNI …Oh! Fake person alive on this earth… (Watch upwards…referring to God) And yeah, how could I forget my sweet MALTI…!!! Hey God! Give some brain to my brother…"
Avni came to Sadhna…
Av: Hi Sadhna, you are here again...
"What does she think of herself….And what's this AGAIN? Loser…!!!"
Sa: Yeah, actually due to EVILNESS or PARTIALLY EVILNESS of someone this home needs a ANTI-EVIL prayer… And how could you offer the prayer when you haven't seen a place of worship…..
Avni makes face… She then tried to show-off her ear-rings…. She loves doing so…..
Sa: Hmm, Avni… Are you going to any wedding or engagement party…
Av (shocked) : No….But why?
Sa: Your dressing compelled me to ask…..
Sadhna wink at Avni and went upstairs…..
Av (thinks) : I'll teach her a lesson…!!!

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