ANJAAN..[FF]...Part IX...Page 1s - Page 4

Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

O0oooooooo00000000 kool ...lets see hw ragini does tht ... i hope our ragini in bidaai does tht too. ...

Originally posted by: born-leader

Dunno your real name and it doesn't look nice calling you Sad...!!! Anyways friend, you make me really very happy by telling that you are loving my characters...!!! InshAllah I'll post the next part soon...!!! 😃😃😃

Here I am with the next part I took a lot of time in writing this one... Not writing I'll say posting this one Hmm, I was about to stop writing but then someone ask me to post it So I am dedicating this part to them and they are.

Our very sweet

Affy Di.and Rafia Di...

This part is for you!!

Part IV

It was the pleasant morning' The flowers with dew on them were adding more beauty to the atmosphere' A girl was playing in the garden' She was running and enjoying the every moment' Her face was not clearly shown' All of a sudden she went far away' She was not seen' The pleasance turns into the dread ness' The flowers which were blooming suddenly turn as they were dead' She was searched but there was not a single sign of her' 'NO!!!' Someone shouts'. 'Where are you?'

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Alekh was getting ready' Vasu came'
Va: Good Morning Son'
A: Good Morning Mom'
Va: Where are you going?
A: Morning walk mom'
Va: Well, when your university will re-open???
A: Probably after this month' But why are you asking'
Va: Son, this time I want Ranveer to take admission in the university in which you are putting in'
A: Mom, we will solve his problem'Don't worry'
Va: Alekh! Try to understand' I can't see Ranveer unhappy'
A: Neither can I mom' But changing the university is not the solution' Try to evict the problem from its root'
Va: So you also think that I am wrong'Exactly like your father'.
A: No mom'
Alekh made Vasu to sit besides him.
A: Mom' We all know that you are possessive about your children' You love Ranveer a lot' But mom, Ranveer needs some time'
Va: I know son, but now I don't want him to be alone' I want you to be with him all the time'
A: Alright' Ok now I am going Sadhna must have reached the park'
Va: Bye'
Alekh reached the park where Sadhna was walking on the track with Ragini'
A: Hey Sadhna, Hi Ragini'
Sa & Ra: Hello'
A: Well beautiful ladies, you would have waited for me'
Sa: Actually Mr. Busy we waited almost half an hour for you but there were no sign of you'
Ra: Sadhna is right' You are always late'
A: Al right ladies' You win and I lose'
Sadhna smiles'
Ra: So what are you doing now-a-days'
A: Hmm, just old usual stuff' Nothing interesting'You say how are your classes going and ONLY a month is left then back to university'
Sa: Month'??? You told me that a WEEK is left'
Alekh gave a naughty smile'
Sa: ALEKH'!!! I completed your assignments' I woke up all night' And, and'
A: Listen; if I haven't said so then my assignments would not have been completed'
Sa: Alekh I'll kill you'
A: Sorry '
Sadhna stared him angrily'
Sa: Jiji, have you completed your assignments'
Ra: C'mon don't talk about university and assignments' We need to be relaxed' And I am getting bore' Let's go somewhere'
Sa: Jiji is right we should go somewhere'!!! Why not at 'The Caf' we haven't gone there for ages'
A: Not a bad idea' Let's go'
Ra: Right now'
A: Yup, as per your wish'
Ra: I am not even ready right now'
There were two guys walking on the same track where these three friends were talking' The guys heard what Ragini said'One of them laughed'
'Ha ha ha, she will put face powder on her face' Even if she apply expensive creams she'll look odd with her other friends''
Alekh's anger rose'
A: What the hell they think of themselves' Let me teach them a lesson'
Ra: Alekh leave it'
Sa: Why jiji??? Alekh I am also coming with you'
Ra: No' You shouldn't go'
A: I agree we mustn't go'
Sadhna looked shocked'
'Is this the same Alekh Rajvansh??'I doubt''
A: Instead, Ragini will go'
Sa: You are the same Alekh'.muah what an idea' GO JIJI GO'
A: Go Ragini' If you are MY friend' Tell them that you have FIGHTER blood running in your body just as Sadhna'.
Sa: (confused) What does that mean..??
A: Wrong compilation of words'Sorry'
Ragini was confused'
'Shall I go??'
A: Ragini GO'.
Ragini went to those guys who were now a little bit far from her' She speeded up'!!! Alekh and Sadhna too follow but they didn't let Ragini know'
Ra: Excuse me'
The guys turned back'
'Hey buddy look she has come to ask the name for beauty cream''
Ra: Well, I don't think of asking names of any cream from you people' If you know it you would have used it'
Both the friends looked disturbed'
Ra: Who are you to tell me how I am'??? If you have commented on me then I should comment on you too' You' Have you ever seen yourselves from your back'? How bad you look while walking' And when you were laughing at that moment your whole body was VIBRATING looking as two HIPPOS are fighting over their food' Have you seen yourselves in mirrors'? You have no looks' You have a weird smile like the one shown in horror movies' from now onwards don't wear your younger bro's shirt for the sake of fashion' LOSER' And Mr. Whatever from now onwards if you tease ANY of the girl then I am not gonna spare you' And I MEAN it'!!! Got it'?
Ragini stopped for a minute' The two guys were totally shocked' One of them tried to say something'
''Behanji (sister)' We are sorry''
Ra: I will DIE if my bros would be like this' Never relate me with you' Go now and don't waste my time' A big burden on this world'
Sadhna laughed at this'
Sa: Fine now RUN'
'No behanji' we are extremely sorry' First forgive us''
A: Look, now don't waste our time and go from here'
They both RAN'
Sa: Jiji'That was FANTASTIC'
Ragini smiled'
A: OUTSTANDING' You were just MIND BLOWING'
Ra: Really'?
A: And funny too' I mean HIPPOS'That was too much' Poor souls'
Sa: Alekh' That was not funny' They should be taught'
A: Yeah all I am saying is'. Ok forget it'.
Sa: Alekh, thank you so much'
A: For what'?
Sa: I haven't seen jiji like this... and that's only because of you' If you weren't here then jiji wouldn't have answered' That was all needed' Thank you'
A: Hey'Don't be formal'
Ra: No Alekh thank you' Today I am feeling as I have got a new life' Now I won't let others to make fun of me' (with a low voice) neither of others'
A: YAY' That's like OUR Ragini'
All three of them set off for caf'
Ra: Caf' is at walking distance' We must walk'
They talked, joked and finally reached at caf' where the SAME guys were having coffee'
Ra: They are here too'
They spotted the three friends and at the same moment their coffee spill'
A: Chill' We are not here to continue the fight'
Sa: Strange' They are here too'
A: Destiny'!
Sa: Destiny'?
A: Yup, haven't you seen in your SUPER HIT FILMS'Hero always met heroine twice before their love grow'
Sa: What do you mean'?
A: Maybe, one of these two guys is your going-to-be hubby'
Sa: ALEKH'
Ra: Sadhna just for fun' Just imagine'.
Sa: Jiji you too'
Ra: I have done this billion of time'just for fun Sadhna'please'
Sadhna closed her eyes'
Sa: Eww' never'
Alekh and Ragini laughed'
A: But then there will be a major problem'
Ra: What'?
A: Where Sadhna will live'? On land or in water'.
Ra & Sa: ???
A: (laughs) HIPPOS live on land and in water too'
Ra: Alekh you are making fun of me'
A: No Ragini sorry' But'(laughs) You literally commented on their BACKS'I mean'
Ra: Was it too much'?
Sa: Enough Alekh'
A: Ok' But' One more time' FIGHTING HIPPOS and VIBRATING BODIES'
This time Ragini and Sadhna laughed too' Alekh laughed a lot' Suddenly his eyes started shimmering with unshed tears' Sadhna noticed it'
Sa: What happened Alekh'?
A: I wish Ranveer was here too'
Ra: Alekh' Please, don't mind me asking but what really happened to Ranveer'
Sa: And why he didn't meet anyone' I mean we are your friends and we haven't seen him' Now, it's been a long time' Half of the year'
Alekh remained quiet' Sadhna put her hand on his shoulder'
Sa: Alekh'We are sorry if we have asked you something wrong'
A: Nah, it's alright' I'll tell you everything but when the time will come' Now let's go'
Ra: Yup'
Sa: At our place'
A: Nopes'
Sa: Why'?
A: Anita is coming today so I must need your help'
Sa: For what'
A: To be very honest, I didn't like Anita' And mom wants me to marry her' She told me last night about her decision' Now I need your help'
Ra: Alekh' auntie will understand if you would tell her your problem' Say straight no for this marriage'
Sa: Yeah, what's the need of anyone's help'
A: You won't understand' Anyways, we should leave now'
Alekh was quiet while driving'
Ra: Alekh, don't panic everything will be alright'
A: I hope so'
Sa: Anita might be good girl' That is why auntie has chosen her for you'.
A: But I don't like her'
Sa: Do you like someone else?
A: No' And why are you asking such type of question? I am not accepting Anita is a different matter'
Sa: You should have a reason of not accepting Anita'
A: Yeah but'
Sa: There might be someone because of whom you are disagreeing
A: Sadhna I am already tensed' Don't ask me more and more perplexing questions'
Sa: Don't act childish' You should tell us.
A: I don't like anyone.. (After a pause) I mean I don't want to marry'That's it'
Ra: Look Alekh when you are not ready for marriage you should tell this to auntie'
Sa: Exactly' Vinu bhaiyya has rejected many proposals'
A: You can see it's result'
Ra: (laughs) C'mon' Malti bhabhi is not that bad'
A: (sarcastically) yeah you are right'
Ra: She is in the competition with KAMMO Ji'
A: Kammo'?? Who is she?
Sa: You don't know about Kammo Ji'
A: No'
Ra: Arrey'' Avni is Malti Bhabhi's best friend and Malti bhabhi called her KAMMO'
Sa: And we call her Kammo Ji'
A: HAHA I see' Finally I got something to irritate her'
Sa: Naughty '
Ra: Fine' Sadhna we should go home' And Alekh you should talk to Indo uncle'
A: Okay, let me talk to dad first I wonder I'll get time for it'
Ra: Why not?
A: She is coming today and dad might be busy in office' How will I talk to him? I want her not to come'
Sa: She won't' I pray it happens'

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Vasu was in her room lost in thoughts' She remembered the day when she argued with Indo to send Ranveer abroad for higher studies' But like his brother, Ranveer too wanted to study in his own country' Vasu was determined she would never let her decision be insulted once again... She was lost in her thoughts when Alekh entered the room'
A: Mom, do you know where pa is?
Va: No'
Alekh turned to return'
Va: Alekh, share some moments with your mom too'
A: Actually, I want to talk to dad very urgent, by the way mom, Anita was coming'
Va: Yeah, but Mr. Gupta was very busy today so he dropped the idea' He has informed me'
'I was sure Alekh will approve' Otherwise he wouldn't be so impatient for Anita's arrival' I wish everything go fine''
Just then, Indo entered the room'
A: Hi pa' How was the day??
In: Very hectic' What about yours'??
A: It was very interesting '
In: (Removing his shoes) Hmm, I am going to get fresh after that we will have a nice chat'!!!
Va: Have you seen your dad's behaviour Alekh, he didn't talk' And then you ask me why I can't understand your dad'
A: Mom, he has arrived just now'
Va: So, he would have asked me about my day'
A: Yup'
'Why mom can never understand dad? When we can then why not mom. Why we always see our parents fighting?'
Indo joined them back' He was about to say something when Vasu interrupts'
'Indo' You are very late today; you know I decided of visiting Mr. Kaur' But you are always late' Your work is everything for you'
In: Vasu' As I have told Alekh, I was very busy' There were lots of works to do' If you had discussed with me then I would have tried to come and today Mr. Gupta was coming so there is no space left for visiting Mr. Kaur'
Va: My plan was changed'
In: How would I know about this sudden change in your programs'
A: Pa, I'll talk to you later'
Va: You stay here'
A: Mom, pa is so tired' Don't fight'
Va: Alekh'Don't teach me what's right and what's wrong'I know it very well'
In: Sweetheart go, your mom is angry and I don't want your mood to go off'
Va: I don't like repeating my words'
In: (with a smile) my wife is very angry' Vasu cheer up, what's wrong'
Va: Nothing' Go and talk with others' Tell them about your 'day''
Alekh remained silent' He was feeling rest less'
Va: Now why are you standing here Indo'?
In: Vasu'..ENOUGH' I can't bear your non-sense anymore'.!!!
Indo left the room in a great wrath'
Yeah, this is the same couple who is named as the perfect couple but by whom? Only those who have seen them in parties'They weren't the best couple indeed' Vasu always fight with Indo without any reason' Indo, from the day one, tried hard to understand Vasu but his efforts were in vain' When Alekh and Ranveer were kids they always hid themselves in the rooms and now naturally they are more attached to their father'

Part IV ends

Ok, that's all for this part. Hoping that you may find it interesting. I accept that Ranveer's mystery is not told and the part is long too. Actually there were some points to be told and first I was not writing Ragini's part but that Taj Mahal episode disappointed me and I changed Ragini in the fan-fic' So sorry for keeping you wait and not unfolding Ranveer's story and neither show him in the part'Do comment on this part. I'll be eagerly waiting for your replies. And InshAllah there will be lot more in the next part and finally entry of Anita. I think everyone know about Anita of Kasturi; if not then let me know'. Now your turn to comment'

Originally posted by: born-leader

Here I am with the next part I took a lot of time in writing this one... Not writing I'll say posting this one Hmm, I was about to stop writing but then someone ask me to post it So I am dedicating this part to them and they are.

Our very sweet

Affy Di.and Rafia Di...

This part is for you!!

Originally posted by: born-leader

It was the pleasant morning' The flowers with dew on them were adding more beauty to the atmosphere' A girl was playing in the garden' She was running and enjoying the every moment' Her face was not clearly shown' All of a sudden she went far away' She was not seen' The pleasance turns into the dread ness' The flowers which were blooming suddenly turn as they were dead' She was searched but there was not a single sign of her' 'NO!!!' Someone shouts'. 'Where are you?'

wow i like Ranveer's past...anotha mystery

Ra: So what are you doing now-a-days'
A: Hmm, just old usual stuff' Nothing interesting'You say how are your classes going and ONLY a month is left then back to university'
Sa: Month'??? You told me that a WEEK is left'
Alekh gave a naughty smile'
Sa: ALEKH'!!! I completed your assignments' I woke up all night' And, and'
A: Listen; if I haven't said so then my assignments would not have been completed'
Sa: Alekh I'll kill you'
A: Sorry '
Sadhna stared him angrily'

that was very cute !!

Sa: You are the same Alekh'.muah what an idea' GO JIJI GO'
A: Go Ragini' If you are MY friend' Tell them that you have FIGHTER blood running in your body just as Sadhna'.
Sa: (confused) What does that mean..??
A: Wrong compilation of words'Sorry'

God this was hilarious !!! 🤣🤣

They talked, joked and finally reached at caf' where the SAME guys were having coffee'
Ra: They are here too'
They spotted the three friends and at the same moment their coffee spill'
A: Chill' We are not here to continue the fight'
Sa: Strange' They are here too'
A: Destiny'!
Sa: Destiny'?
A: Yup, haven't you seen in your SUPER HIT FILMS'Hero always met heroine twice before their love grow'
Sa: What do you mean'?
A: Maybe, one of these two guys is your going-to-be hubby'
Sa: ALEKH'
Ra: Sadhna just for fun' Just imagine'.
Sa: Jiji you too'
Ra: I have done this billion of time'just for fun Sadhna'please'
Sadhna closed her eyes'
Sa: Eww' never'
Alekh and Ragini laughed'
A: But then there will be a major problem'
Ra: What'?
A: Where Sadhna will live'? On land or in water'.
Ra & Sa: ???
A: (laughs) HIPPOS live on land and in water too'

lmao 😆🤣

Yeah, this is the same couple who is named as the perfect couple but by whom? Only those who have seen them in parties'They weren't the best couple indeed' Vasu always fight with Indo without any reason' Indo, from the day one, tried hard to understand Vasu but his efforts were in vain' When Alekh and Ranveer were kids they always hid themselves in the rooms and now naturally they are more attached to their father'

nice i like aalekh and ranveer being more attached to indo

Originally posted by: SadButTrue1

aaaww thanx aimen !!! 🤗

Originally posted by: SadButTrue1

It was an awesum part...liked everything about it

Keep up the good work !!

Will be waiting for more 😊

Ok, so now I have to write fast...!!! Fine.... I'll try my best to do the update as soon as possible...!!! 😊😊

Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

thanks a lot aimen ... the part was superb! hw cud u tell tht it was sour .... its grt!