Bedtime FF ~Kiss Goodbye~ complete 6/10

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Haha wowwwww i come home to see my treat ready......😆😆
awesome...here i go....

Okie firstly lady the way ur exploring the emotions here......the depth...u make ur readers seriously just fall into the character...tune in completely...thats the finesse with which u pen ur characterization.....👏
seriously hats off....👏

Take Armaan for instance...his past...the marriage of his parents...the consequent strain..the distance...i bow down honestly...great going....and hence his reluctance...the confusion about muskaan...simply brilliant.....👏

Next our heroine...ahh her portrayal as the firece...rebellious sort of rejected issue...excellent one there......refusing to go home while anjie torn between the battle of father and daughter...only u cud show it so well i guess.....once again an ovation👏

Its just going great......ok the misunderstanding as crept in....consequncenes i guess are known....seriously very eagerly waiting for more to unfold....u cast a spell u know that...cant wait to sink in deeper...

love
Jia

Edited by jia.. - 16 years ago

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

awesome part!!! im loving it already!! please continue soon 😳

Avanti

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astha

@Asthuox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Kat di , 🤗🤗
Where have u been , i havnt seen you online that much now
Hope you are fine 😳😳

Wat an intro, Damm Kat di, Yur simply Outstanding. 😳😳

Your FF's are a Killer. Got me Hooked. 😆😆😆 😉 Armaan and Muskaan? Someone call the doctors im in a BIG shock 😆😆😆 Ahahah who i was looking For Enters as a Storm in AM Liife. Hmmm..i wonder whats cooking in your Mind. 😲😲😲 😉

Poor Ridhima , Her Daughter Got blood cancer! 😲😲😲 i mean her and armaan's bacha 😲😲
Armaan Better give his Blood or i will come and take some. 😈😈😈 Mwahaha 😉

i just the loved the way she asked him straight face. Poor Soul.

part one was just WOW. The way you penned down everything is beyond words. All the emoticons , the grace is so grand. Beautiful 👏
Armaan mistakes her for a hooker .. Tut tut 😲😲

Goshhh .. i need to read more..😆
Pleasee continue soon.

Love Asthu 😳

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Cheers guys update ....tomorrow

love kat

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

ridz is seriously into business.... n not a hooker gr888 prt.. waitngg 4 more dosage n no update tom.. arrreee nahi nahiiiiii

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

pakkkkkkka na tom u wil update.......

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Yipeee!!! Another bedtime ff!! OMG what a fabulous start!!! First the initial shocker of Armaan and Muskaan getting married and then Ridz's entry...LMAO the funniest dialog was when she said that she wanted his blood!!! Lolz... OMG AR have a daughter together?!?!? Wow...interesting as always!! Imagine mistaking Ridz for a hooker!!! I wonder why she slept with him though....What did she write in her article anyway..One night with superman?!?! LMAO...😆😆

Gr8 part di...can't wait for more....Do continue soon...

P.S. gr8 to know that your lappy's repaired!! Can't waaaait for the updates of kiss and breath.. 😉

Love,

Ananya

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

awesome first part Kat

looking forward to the next

Sania

Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 16 years ago

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

okay!! m lost!!! i have no idea wats happenin...

is dis d misunderstandin dt he was tlkd abt in d intro??? i cudnt read d whole thin in 1 stretch..guess dtz y...newayz!!

m gonna read bth dem again..mybe ten itll mke more sense!!bt ovb frm d last bit..cnt wait 2 hear her out..yd she gve in..willingly???hmmmm!!!