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Posted: 17 years ago
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"100 %. Recently detected, she has gallbladder stone. What else you find?"

"I won't tell anything else now. I am taking this paper with me. I will let you know later on."

"But Rajveer beta u shouldn't beat them. They can take revenge on u."

"But there was no time to think. Seeing Mr. Aagarwal's condition I was out of myself. I thought if my father was at that situation what should I do. For sure I wouldn't flew away. Actual thing is if we protest we can stop the injustice."

"Excellent."

"Sir, he looks very come n quite. Pad asal me jalant aag ka gola hai ye."

"He is exaggerating .Sir we are getting late. We have to leave now."

"Ok beta, waqt mile to phir aana."

Raj stood up. Naveen also stood up seeing Raj. But it seemed that he was unwilling to leave so early.

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Next day
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Raj has just come out from the bathroom. He saw his mom entring through the main gate with Naina , from the window.

"Mom aur Naina?? Aaj kaise??"Raj was surprised to see his mom n naina.
He quickly went downstairs .


When Mrs Shekhawat enetred the manson Raj hugged her from back side and said "Are u angry with me?"

"Leave me , liar ."Mrs Shekhawat said with mock anger.

"Mom there is nothing to worry, I am fine."

"What did u think , I would not be able to know if u don't tell me?"

"I know u get every information from your spy ."Raj said staring at Ramu kaka.

"Now come inside .Raj picked up the sootcase .He felt a pain in his knee.By reflex "ouch"escaped from his mouth.

Doctor told Raj not to pick up any heavy things. But Raj absolutely forgot .

"what happen? Is ur knee aching? What should I do wih this boy?"

Raj sat down on the couch and streched his leg. Again feel a pain in his knee.

Seeing raj in pain , Mrs sekhawat forgot that she was angry with Raj earlier.

"Mom u go , and take a bath. Don't fall in the trap,it is his drama."

"No Naina ,Raj is not acting. I know my son well."

Raj watched Naina carefully for the first time.Naina was wearing a light pink salwar kammej. As she is very beautiful, everything shoots on her.Her beauty is in her simplcity.

Raj thought," we met again after 8 months. Naina has changed a lot. Now she has dignity in her appearance."

"Let mom go first, then I will show u drama very well."

"Don't dare Raj. Naina has grown up now . aap tu uspe haath nehi uthayega."

"so why didn't she give the receiver to u , when I called u yesterday?"

"I told her to do like this. I don't like ur work at all. "

"Mom u know I can't return to Kolkata , for my research work I have to live in Mumbai."
" tu janti hai na, utna bada haveli me mein akeli raheti hoon. Kisi din mar jayungi to kisi ko pata bhi nehi chalega."

"What about ur P.A.? Isn't she taking a good care of u?"Raj said taunting Naina.

"Ofcourse she is taking care of me.Niana is not like you, understand?By the way yesterday u have told naina that she is feeling my ears?"

"Ohh, Naina you have told this to mom also?Disgusting!!!"

"haan , to kya hua? Meri marji. "

"Bas bas. Aab tum dono chup ho jao.Naina beti , chal humlog upar chalte hai. Fresh hona bhi to hai."

Naina n Mrs Shekhawat went upstairs.

Raj adjusted himself in the couch.He was feeling relaxed inspite of all the tension . But why?is it due to Naina?May be..
Naina was just like a fresh flower, or like a first dew drop in a dawn who can refresh anyone's mind.

He couldn't understand when he closed his eyelids.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Naina was standing in a very beautiful peach colored saree.
She turned hearing the footsteps.
It was Raj.
She smiled. With each forwarding step of Raj, Naina took one step back until she was trapped between the wall and Raj.
Raj pulled her closer by her waist. He was staring at her, and her gaze was so intent that Naina was feeling uncomfortable. But her uneasiness was lessening with every passing second. she leaned to his touch.
His fingers trailed upwards her arms to cupped her face with his both hands and then he brought her face more close and…..

"Raj uth jaa, abhi kiu so gaya ? ye bhi koi sone ka waqt hai kya? Uthh na jaldi"
Raj sat straight."Mom, tum"said Raj rubbing his eyes wearily and looking morosely at his mom.

"Haan, mai. Come at dinning table in 5 mins."

"Hmm, U go, I am coming mom."

Mrs. Shekhawat left.

"Ohh, so I was dreaming."

Raj was feeling embarrassed at the dinning table. He sat opposite of naina. He didn't stare at Naina for once. The more he attempted to forget, the more clearly he could see the scenes of his dream."I can't think of Naina like this. Shame on u, same on u Raj.After all she is my friend. How can I?"In frustration Raj banged the table with his right hand.

"What happen beta?"

"umm.. aa…ahhh….oo..mirchi…..kitna teekha hai…aahaaa….pani do….pani."Raj tried his best to cover.

"Shanti!!!What's this? So much mirchi? I have told you not to give rich food to Raj"Mrs. Shekhawat scolded

"Madam, me to srif…"Shanti said in a low tone.

"Bahes mat kar."

Shanti didn't say anything. But she was confused. Khana teekha kaise ban gaya.

Niana:"Raj, how far is the Juhu beach form here?"

Raj:"Not much far."

Niana:"Will u take me there today?"

Raj:"Hmm."

Niana:"And Where is Chowpati Beach ?"

Raj:" Its between Marine Drive and Malabar Hill."

Niana:"And now where is the Marine drive?"
Raj was giving the answers without staring at Naina.
Noticing that Mrs. Shekhawat said"Raj, Can't you say properly. "

Raj:"I am replying na?"

"You are giving reply staring at your dish. What kind of decency is this?"

Raj murmured"Ohh maa, i can't make u understand , why can't I stare at Naina.uff!!!why I dreamt such a thing."

Naina remained silent for rest of the time.

"Naina kuch mind to nehi kiya naa. Then I will be in problem. Naina will leave here at lest for 1 week. How do I avoid her?"


They finished their lunch in silence.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Later in the afternoon
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"Hello, Raj, are you fine?"asked Aalekh. Concern was evident from his voice.

"Kiu mujhe kya hoga?"

"What? You don't know anything? Aaj tu ghar se bahar nehi nikla kya?"

"No. But why are you asking?"

"Don't you see the posters on the wall of ur house?"

"Poster? What poster? "

"tere bare me likha hai."

"kisne lagaya?"

"Golu bhai's gang, who else? If they can reach to you, they will kill you. What the hell you have done to them?"

"What have they written in the posters?"

"I didn't see .I have heard from my brother. As far I know they have given threat to kill you. Raj you go to Kolkata for some days."

"Hmm. I have to think of this."

Raj disconnected the phone and turning back he found her mom standing there….frozen….panicked…
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thats all for today guys.

hope u will like it.

waiting for your comments.

plz plz plz reply.

ur comment means a lot to me.

so plz reply.

you will get the next update as soon as i will get ur comments.
lots of love
tania
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
wooooooooow super,duper itz awesum,

but RN shld confess,its realy gud,




Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: aarsow

wooooooooow super,duper itz awesum,

but RN shld confess,its realy gud,




Aarthi

thanx a lot.
RN will confess soon.
keep reading.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud.cont soon.......

thanx a lot.
keep reading.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi!!Tania!!!
Sorry for the late reply dear.
Very nice update!!!!
Continue soon.


love
Riya.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!Tania!!!
Sorry for the late reply dear.
Very nice update!!!!
Continue soon.


love
Riya.

It's not a problem.
thanx for liking it.
i am updating now.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode-5
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Raj was pacing ups n down in the balcony. He was trying Naveen's no for the last 15 minutes continuously. But it was engaged everytime. He saw a police van stopped before his house and Naveen stepped out of that. Raj felt little bit relaxed seeing Naveen.

Reaching out Naveen said" Are u afraid, Raj?"

"Do you come here hearing about the posters?"

"Ya. Not only your house, they have stick those posters on the every wall of this area."

"We have identified two of them. We will arrest them in the evening."

"Kaha se arrest karega tu?"

"I can't tell you now those details. But don't worry. They don't know which one is your house. But they have guessed that you live in this area."

"Are you sure?"

"Ya, I am sure. Do din se mere do admi tere ghar k upar nazar rakh rahi hai. Aagar aisa kuch hota to un dono ko zaroor pata hota."

"And what about Golu Bhai?"

"He is in jail custody now and no chance of getting bail."

"AMR party hath pe hath dal k baitha rahega kya? Wo log jaroor use churane k kausis karenge ."

"Not at all. Aandar ki baat to ye hai ki wo log bhi Golu bhai se naraz hai.So he will not get any help from any one. And everyone understands that. That's why people are ready to give statements against him."

"Ohh. Good."

"Court has given order to submit charge sheet within 90 days. But I think, I can submit before that. But one thing for sure, jab wo bahar aayega tab to tera jindegi hell bana dega.But don't worry , I will not give him that chance."

"What is the main charge against him?"
"Murder. A few. But he is in problem for the last murder because we have eyewitness for this case."

"Aaise aadmi ko to shoot kar dena chahiye."

"Aagar aisa kar sakta to aacha hi hota. Maine socha tha goli marke rat ko rail line k upar chod ke ayunga, aur kahe dunga encounter me mara gaya hai. Ye newspaper walo ki waja se aisa kar bhi nehi paya."

They were talking for a long time standing in the balcony.

Raj felt pain in his knee again."Naveen come inside. aandar chalke baat karte hai. My knee is aching again. Aur mom bhi tujhse baat karna chati hai. She is very upset now."

"Here is nothing to upset. But don't go near the Wadala station road for few days. Aur bike pe to bilkul hi nehi."

"Hmm."

Raj removed the curtain to go inside. He found his mom and Naina behind the curtain.

"Mom, aap yeha?"

"Haan. I want to talk to him."

Coming inside Naveen said" Don't be upset, aunty. I am with Raj always. I will not let anybody to touch him."
"Par chinta to hota hai na, beta. He lives here alone. Kab kya ho jaye..aajkal newspaper me jaise news padti hoon,padkar hi to meri hath-pair thand ho jati hai."

"Aunty, aap dekhenge Golu bhai ki atyachar ki namuna. We have one of them with us. Aaj mere pas aaya tha. Mai usko bulati hoon. Usko dekhenge to aap bhi bolenge Raj golu bhai ki aadmi o ko pitke koi galti nehi ki hai."

Naveen dialed a no and then said "Mr. Gupta usko aandar le aayo."

After a few minutes the sight brought tears to their eyes.

A man whose age not more than 25, struggled to come inside. Infact he dragged himself towards the room almost lying on the floor. He had no power to stand. He was wearing a dirty shirt. Coming inside he started breathing heavily and then said with a weak voice "thoda pani milega?"

Naina brought a glass of water.

"He is not older than us. Golu bhai ki aadmi o ne asisa pita hai ki aabhi khara bhi nehi so sakta .Aab batayie aunty, Raj ne kuch galat kiya hai kya?"

Mrs. shekhawat didn't find any words to say.

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