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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
Next Day
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Gafar has come to meet Raj as he couldn't meet him that day.

"gafar bhai iss barish ki mosom mai repairing hoga kya?"

"Wo to aaplog jaisa bolenge."

"Ok, wait. Mai maa ko phone karke poochti hoon."

Raj dialed the number of his Kolkata's house.

First time no one received the call.

"koi phone kiu nehi utharaha hai?"Raj said to himself.

Raj dialed again.This time someone receive the phone from that side.

"Hello."

"Ohh, Raj , you."

"ya , me.Give the reciever to mom."

"Aunty is not here .She is taking rest."

"Tell mom , its very urgent."

"U tell me, whats so urgent?I am her P.A."

"P.A!!!!!!!! When did mom appoint u?But u can't help in this matter Naina."

"By the way ,did you get a scolding from your mom, yesterday? "

"That's not ur matter."

"You don't listen a single word of aunty. Now suffer.Now u have to return to Kolkata."

"Is there any advantage for that.?"

"Ya, only one advantage.You have to obey my orders.Aunty has given full power to me.She is very angry with u. Even aunty has told that she will not receive your call from today."

"Is mom really angry with me?"

"Very much. Actually she is worried about u.She told me to take your responsibilty.I refused."saying this Naina started laughing loudly.

"Hmm, you are filling mom's ear against me, right?"

"I have no time for that duffer. I am very busy with my job. Now say quickly why do you call for, I can't talk to you for long . I have to finish lots of work."

"Uff. Ask mom should I tell gafar to start the repairing work. Gafar is waiting for a long time."
" Its natural.U had to repair handwriting of thousands of people. Tell gafar there is no need to reapair now. Tell him start the work after rainy season.One more thing Dr. Shribastav went to ur house today .U were not at home.He called back here. He will go in the afternoon. Please stay at home in the afternoon. Don't make mom more angry."

"Ok, byee."

"Listen, I will not come here from tomorrow…U do whatever u want.No one will stop you. Hearing about your heroism aunty's b.p gone high.We just returned from doctor's chember now.There is no need to tell u what he said ,after all I have to manage all the things."

Naina disconnected the phone without waitng for Raj's reply.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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"Huhh, I have no right to know what happened to my mom.Its too much."Raj was dissappointed.

But it was not stable for long time.When he remembered how much Naina cares about her mom , how she is managing everything,how she helps his mom in every step, it was not possible for him to be angry with Naina anymore.

On the other hand naina ran away from there and stopped only when she reached her home.On the way to her room she found her father sitting on the wheel chair. Naina hugged him from back .
"Why my angel is so happy today?"
But Naina was not there to give reply.
Mr. Ahluwalia smiled at her angel's childish behavior.
She was already in her room.

Naina switched on the radio.
It was playing........

Every night in my dreams
I see you. I feel you.
That is how I know you go on.


Naina moved around in the room while humming the tune….

Far across the distance
And spaces between us
you have come to show you go on.


She jumped into her bed and was lying flat for sometimes….. she clutched the bedsheet and cuddled in.

She kept on humming.

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never go till we're one

Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on.


Naina got up and sat crossed leg. She pulled a pillow and hid her face in it. She couldn't stop herself thinking about Raj. She blushed at her own thought.

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

There is some love that will not
go away

You're here, there's nothing I fear,
And I know that my heart will go on
We'll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on.


Sometimes later when Mr. ahluwallia came to her room by moving his wheel chair, he found his daughter asleep. He saw a smile on her face…a peaceful slumber. He pulled the cover on her. But he didn't go from there. He was watching his angel, his only one support, his only ray of hope in her dark shaded life. One glimpse of Naina made him forget about all his pain.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
Thats all for today guys.

I am waiting for ur comments.

plz plz reply.

ur comments matters a lot to me.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Hi!!Tania!!
A very nice one..
Do continue soon dear.
Take care.


Love
Riya.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
loved it......naina is really caring..........nice song too........
..
lipi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
@riya-thanx a lot.
i'll update soon.
@lipi-thanx for liking it.
keep reading.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
episode-3
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Raj's house [kolkata]
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"Hi aunty! how r u?"

"I m fine beta."

"Did u take the breakfast?"

"Ya.Aaj tu mujhe daant nehi payegi."

"And medicines?"Naina asked raising her eyebrows.

"Abhi wahi lene jaa rahi thi."

"Kya abhi tak aapne medicines nahi li."

"Are beta le rahi hoo na."

"Hmm. Thik hai."

"Waise I got a leave for 1 weeks from the school." She says smiling.

"That's gr88."

"To kab chalna hai?"

"Kal hi chalte hai."

"Thik hai."

"Achha to mai abhi raj ko pone karke bata deti hoon."

"Suddenly a smirk appears on her face."

"Ek minute aunty."

"Kya hua beta?"

"Kyun na hum raj ko surprise de."

"Kya?"

"Haan hum raj ko bina bataye Mumbai chalte hai."

"Thik hai. Jaisa tu kahegi.

"Achha aunty mai abhi chalti hoo. Baba wait kar rahe honge."

"Hmm. Thik hai."
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Central jail (Mumbai)
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A constable was walking hurriedly towards the group of cell taking a tray of food. He was looking lil-worried n tensed. Suddenly he stopped in front of a cell. There was a man lying down ok the floor. The constable slided the tray inside the cell making sure no one was watching him. The man looked up n grinned.

M :- jo aapun ne mangwaya thaw o laya hai?

C :- haan.

M :- thik hai.

The constable went away from there n the man uncovers the tray n smiles while looking at a mobile.

(p is the person with whom the man is talking)
Then he dialed a no.

M :- hello.

P :- are golu bhai kaise hai aap.koi takleef to nehi hai na aapko. Aagar wo lok jada shan patti dikhai na to mujhe bata dena mai sidha kar dunga.

GB :- mai thik hoo.

P :- to phir bhai koi kaam tha?

GB :- haan wo aadmi jisne hamare logo ko pita use kisi bhi haalat me dhundh ke nikalo. Mujhe wo aadmi chahiye kisi bhi halat me.jinda ya murda.

P :- thik hai bhai mai abhi apne logo ko laga deta hoo use dhundhne me.aap fikar mat karo bhai.

GB :- hmm. Koi bhi khabar ho mujhe isi no pe phone kar dena.

P :- ji bhai

GB :-chal rakhta hoo.

P :- ji bhai

Golu bhai cut the phone n there was a big wicked smile on his face."Aab dekta hoon tu kaise bachta hai."

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Posted: 17 years ago
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In Naina's house
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It was nearing afternoon and Naina was sitting alone in her room and going through her dairy.
It was her old habit.
She writes everything, every little incident of her life in her dairy.
Whenever she missed Raj she go through her dairy.
While turning the pages she stopped at one half-tornt page. A smile spread on her face.
She touched the page softly.

7th march 2008(page from her dairy)
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Today I, baba, aunty n raj went for a walk n also took our dinner together.
Till now I used to think that just I like him. That my love is one sided.
But after the moments we spent together I feel as if he also likes me.
And I m so happy today that cannot even express it.
I just hope that raj also feels the same about me as I feel about him.

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Raj entered the library and he found Naina there. He found another girl whom Naina couldn't tolerate. Mischievous smile appeared on his face. So he went to that girl to make Naina feel jealous.
R :- hi .
G :- hii.
R :- so why r u sitting here all alone.
G :- aise hi. By the way tum aapni gf ko chodkar yeha kiu?
R :- GF? Meri to koi GF nahi hai.
G :- kyun wo hai na. Naina.
Listening to this naina started blushing, While raj burst out laughing. N bcoz of this sudden reaction of his naina was shocked .
G :- y r u laughing?
R :- tum us naina ki baat kar rahi ho. Hahahaha
G :- ha kyun?
R :- wo kis angle se meri GF dikhti hai. Infact meri GF to tum jaisi koi khubsurat ladki hogi. naina to khubsurat hai hi nehi"
G :- bt tum dono to har waqt saath rehte ho.
R :- are wo to isiliye kyunki wo log hamare family frnds hai.
G :- oh.
Naina left the library without saying a word that day. Later In the evening she torned the page of the dairy. Even she didn't talk with Raj for one week.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
that's all for today.
waiting for ur comments..
thanx guys...who gave reply...thanx a lot.
guys plz reply...
i am very upset with the comments...
is it that bad???/
tell me...
i'll stop then.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Hey Tania!!
It is not at all bad...
Please do not stop writing!!!
The update was short yet very nice.
Take care.




love
Riya.

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