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aarthi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

hi,

this fic is simply super n very diff,thrillin 2,

awesum,contn dear,

dialogues r gud,

Aarthi

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

superb concept of graphology update it soon.

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Tania Roy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985
Hey Tania!!
It is not at all bad...
Please do not stop writing!!!
The update was short yet very nice.
Take care.

love
Riya.

thanx a lot riya.

yes...update was short...but next time i'll give long one.

keep reading.

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Tania Roy

@TaNia2008

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*
nice ud.cont soon.........

Thanx a lot.

keep reading.

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Tania Roy

@TaNia2008

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: aarsow
hi,

this fic is simply super n very diff,thrillin 2,

awesum,contn dear,

dialogues r gud,

Aarthi

Aarthi thanx for liking it.

keep reading...

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Tania Roy

@TaNia2008

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: varshita
superb concept of graphology update it soon.

varshita

thanx a lot.

i am glad that u liked the cocept.

keep reading.

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sofia

@mystified

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

hi just read all the parts...it's awesome...keep up the good work...

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

sorry for replying late.................its awesome

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Tania Roy

@TaNia2008

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: mystified
hi just read all the parts...it's awesome...keep up the good work...

Thanx a lot.

i am glad that u liked it.

keep reading.

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Tania Roy

@TaNia2008

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

Episode-4
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Naveen rang the doorbell.

The girl, who was sitting at the back seat of the car that day, opened the door. There was no trace of tension on that face.
"Come inside. Dad is waiting for u."The girl welcomed them.

Raj and Naveen headed for the drawing room. Mr. Aagarwal was watching TV. He had banded on his forehead and his right eye was covered with bandage also. He was wearing a loose shirt and was looking much better.
Mr. Aagarwal: "Please seat Rajveer jee.agar uss din aap na hote to kaya hota, bhgwan e jane."

Raj sat on the sofa next to Mr. Aagarwal." Sorry sir. I forgot to ask about your health in the last two days. It was my duty to ask how are u?"

"Not at all. I should inform you about dad's health. I absolutely forgot. Actually I was so busy with dad."The girl gave an apologetic look.

Mr. Aagarwal: "Trisha, do u inform ur mother that Rajveer has come?"

Trisha went to call her mom.

"Nice name. Ur name is as sweet las u are."Naveen said to himself.

Mr. Aagarwal: "Driver didn't came on that day. Court bhi bandh tha. Issliye mai Trisha ko bola ki mai hi uss chod kar aayu colg tak. Aur kaha phas gaya dekho."

Naveen:"Kaunsa college me padti hai aapka beti?"

" Padti nehi padati hai christ church me."

Mr. Aagarwal said staring at Raj" So what do u do, Rajveer?" I mean which profession?"

Naveen didn't give Raj any chance to give reply. " He is a graphologist. It is his profession. Its better to say he is well known graphologist." Naveen said while grinning at Raj.

Mr. Aagarwal: Ohh, That's great. In foreign they take help of graphologist for crime detection. In America n Europe the judiciary gives lots of importance on it. But we don't have any system like that in India. Do u practice privately?"

Raj was going to give answer but stopped as an aged woman entered the room with Trisha.Raj was going to stand up but aged woman said "Aap baithiye, baithiye. I have heard everything from Trisha.Thanx a lot Mr. Shekhawat."

" U can call me Rajveer."

"Ok.So where do u live Rajveer beta?"

"Andheri East. But my paternal house is in kolkata."

"Kolkata.ohh.that's my home town."

"Tumhara ghar kolkata me kaha hai?"

"It's in Kasbah."

"One of my colg friend lives there. Sudha Shekhawat."

Raj smiled."She is my mother."

"Ohh. You are Sudha's son. That's call the jinn factor. You are just like your mom. Sudha always used to protest against injustice. Rajveer beta can I have the phone no of your Kolkata's house.

"Sure."

Raj gave the ph no.

"Btw what do u do?"

Mr.Aagarwal:" Aab tak ye hi bat ho raha tha. He is a graphologist."

"That's mean handwriting expert."

"Not like that. I can tell about that person seeing his handwriting."

"Its impossible."

" Then test me."Raj said confidently.

"Tell me what I have to do?"

"Ok you write 5-6 lines in English. Do u have magnifying glass? I need that."

"But we don't have."

"No its ok. I will manage."

Mrs. Aagarwal quickly finished the writing.

Raj started examining the handwriting. Trisha was more interested than her mother.

But Naveen has no interest in that. His eyes were fixed on someone.

"So what do u find?" Trisha asked curiously.

"Your mom has problem in abdomen region."

"Strange. How do u know this?"

They both were shocked.

"Now tell me, am I right?'