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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

It was a wow Dii....specially becoz of the last portion!!! I did love all the teasing to Raj and the way he threw daggers at the group thru his eyes....it was all very funny!! I was wondering if they planned to break off his marriage....πŸ˜† But seriously that was all very funny11! - thanks alot for loving the whole part. Well naaah it was just fun and they don't have any serious motives. I'm glad u luved it and had a gr8 laugh

And next...they truly expressed their happiness for him...and cheered for him....and that was actually sweet!! The frndship....their love for each other....is very very nice!! - yes they also know how to express their true feelings

And next was Shaina....set to woo Rajveer...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...awweee...wat a part!! Firstly I love that song...and it was cool to imagine that song in the scene...and then of course Raj's reply.....wah wah!! Perfect gem...thats why love him so much...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜³ - yep definitely he is a gem for sure and well yeh zindagi me pehli baar the arrogant Shaina haar gayi.

Continue soon dii...and thnx for the lovely part!! πŸ˜› - thanks once again

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok so now ur updating only one of your fic, not fair yaar pls try to update the second one too.

Good update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The show of Raj's friends didn't finish that soon and he continued teasing him more n more yaar,πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† what can he do but they showed BParty which never happened and Naina got angry with him and ab to Raj se koi nahi bacha sakta in sab ko na.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

U again chosen songs superb,πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ loved so much your song choice. 😊😊 😊 Raj was just waiting for all of it to get over so he can kill all of them and to his relief it happened soon.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› And Raj caught them to kill them and they were laughing like hell.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

But they knew so well how to change is drastic mood otherwise they will not be able to see his marriage of Raj.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† And at last that dance sequence was fantastic πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ when Naina too joined them but ye kya after the dance she again sat with muh fulaoo.

Now Raj tried his best to convince her but she is not ready for that so he sat leaving all his attempts and now she is expecting him to come and convince her πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. Finally Shaina got a chance to win that bet and we know Raj can't stand that.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

When Raj started responding Shaina i felt he is doing to make Naina feel jealous but he did that to tease Shaina n finally she understood that no any girl can effect him anymore only his Naina πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ and i think being a good friend of her she is happy for her.😊 😊 😊

So now Raj is unable to wait as next day is his marriage, waiting to know what will be Raj's next move.
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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!! - thanks very much

The audience are enjoying themselves with the entertainment provided!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course as it was very gud drama

Even Navin laughed his head off at the last act which had the parents part!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - hehehe yeh he had seen it with his own eyes na the way Raj always used to get scared when the parents came

Raj's torture has not ended and the show continued with all his friends having a gala time at his expense!!!! - yes poor him

Rishi purposely teased him more seeing him sitting with his hand covering his face!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - well shaitaan itni aasaani se sudhar ta nahi hain

They enacted the whole scene ke Raj kaise rishta lekar gaya tha Naina ke ghar but obviously made it more comical!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - surely and they enjoyed it very much

Varun as Rajveer is desperate to get married and went on his knees and pleaded Shaina!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yeh he was playing the part but a bit from his side too

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it is

Varun kept showering Shaina with gifts and she kept rejecting it all!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - after all she is Miss Attitude

Finally she put the garland around his neck and he leapt with joy!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - as I said before ke gaane ke end me haseena maah jaatee hain

Once again they ended with a pretence kiss and Varun again tried to take advantage of that!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - well its hard to change a devil for sure

But Shaina pushed him away before he did that!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep she is not the one to mess with

Raj threw daggers at the group through his eyes and Rishi saw it and gulped!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - haan kyu ke sab oske ghusse se darr te hain

They showed a bachelor party which never really happened in the first place!!!! - hehehe they had just gotten carried away

But then Raj remembered that neither did the rest of the things take place!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yeh he was totally mad that heights of exaggeration

Naina got angry at Raj and Raj tried to convince her that he held no such party but she turned away from him cross!!! - well oska bad luck hee kharaab hain ke jab dekho phas jaata hain

On the stage Aalekh, Sameer and Rishi fooled around with the women!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - yep boys will be boys

The song is very nice and perfect for a bachelor party sequence!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - I'm glad u liked it

Varun is running around a woman he was hooked on and others tried to knock sense into him!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - yeh he was acting like a dimwit

It ended with Shaina pretending to be Naina coming in and giving him a tight slap!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - well for once atleast they did a decent drama

I am sure Shaina enjoyed that one after Varun took advantage of their pretend kiss the first time!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - definitely as it was revenge

Finally Raj got down to take his revenge and the guys ran off with Raj after them in pursuit!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - hehehe yeh to hona hee tha na

Eventually Raj caught them to kill them and made them apologise and even then they were laughing like hell!!!!🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - ab kya kare puri situation hee itni comical hogayi thi

Rishi finally announced that it was all to tease Raj and the truth is that Raj loves Naina a lot and can't live without her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh after all he is a very true friend and only naughty by heart but not evil

They knew well how to change Raj's mood otherwise they would not have been around to see Raj's wedding!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - surely kyu ke wo sab ko zaroor maar deta

They truly expressed their happiness for him and the dance sequence was very nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - they are true friends indeed and thanks for liking it

It is great to see their friendship and love for each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - it sure is

The song is very nice and just perfect for Raj's friends!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh I liked it too and couldn't find a better one to use

Raj smiled at all of them and Aalekh pulled Raj and Naina into the dance floor and all of them danced together!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - it wasn't that hard to cool him down after all

Raj held onto Naina's hand lightly took it to his lips and she smiled shyly and moved away!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - they can't leave a chance to romance for sure

By the end they were back to square one as Naina was still annoyed with Raj and walked away!!!!! - all I can say is that its too difficult to understand women

Raj tried his best to convince her but she ignored him and now when he gave up for the time being, she is expecting him to make more effort in cojoling her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe as I said too difficult to understand women

Raj can't wait for his wedding day as then Naina would finally be his forever and there would be no fear of them getting caught!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes he is very impatient

Finally Shaina got a chance to win that bet and went after Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yeh the good old bet

She tried to seduce him by flaunting her beauty and singing!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - well they are her best assets

The song is very nice and apt for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thank you

Raj desperately wants her to leave him before anyone saw them like that but she is not letting him go!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab kya kare her baar bechaara phas jaata hain

She pretended to fall and he caught her in his arms!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› - yes the typical move in nearly each story

Raj stared at her as if he couldn't see anything else and Shaina wasn't too happy to think that he had fallen for her!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - haan kyu ke wo bet jeet na nahi chahti thi na

She never wanted to bring any misunderstanding between them and she thought in a way it was good that she found out his true self!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - surely she just wanted her friend's welfare

Then Raj told her to move as he was busy looking at his bride!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe that's our Raj the best.

Shaina was flabbergasted and couldn't understand how it was possible for Raj to resist her!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - well she definitely needs to get used to it that not everyone is head over heels for her. wo to sirf ek hee hain jo aisa hain

Naina is so happy and now even Shaina is convinced of Raj's integrity and felt really happy for Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes all's well that ends well


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ok so now ur updating only one of your fic, not fair yaar pls try to update the second one too. - are don't worry I'll be doing the other one too soon

Good update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - thanks very much

The show of Raj's friends didn't finish that soon and he continued teasing him more n more yaar,πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† what can he do but they showed BParty which never happened and Naina got angry with him and ab to Raj se koi nahi bacha sakta in sab ko na.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yeh he was really boiled by then kyu ke naa hi sab ne oska mazaak uraaya but they got Naina angry with him as well

U again chosen songs superb,πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ loved so much your song choice. 😊😊 😊 - thank u


Raj was just waiting for all of it to get over so he can kill all of them and to his relief it happened soon.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› And Raj caught them to kill them and they were laughing like hell.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehe maarta nahin to oska ghussa thanda kese hota. But they were just too amused.

But they knew so well how to change is drastic mood otherwise they will not be able to see his marriage of Raj.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† And at last that dance sequence was fantastic πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ when Naina too joined them but ye kya after the dance she again sat with muh fulaoo. - well they r his friends after all who r his well wishers

Now Raj tried his best to convince her but she is not ready for that so he sat leaving all his attempts and now she is expecting him to come and convince her πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. - hehe yeh he has got one difficult woman

Finally Shaina got a chance to win that bet and we know Raj can't stand that.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - oh yes he can't

When Raj started responding Shaina i felt he is doing to make Naina feel jealous but he did that to tease Shaina n finally she understood that no any girl can effect him anymore only his Naina πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ and i think being a good friend of her she is happy for her.😊 😊 😊 - definitely he is only bowled over by one beauty who is going to be his wife

So now Raj is unable to wait as next day is his marriage, waiting to know what will be Raj's next move.
πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ - surely more fun is on its way

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 43

Varun: (from behind) kyu apna time waste karahee ho jisko tumme koi interest hee nahi? (stood in front of Shaina) hum jese mard ki bhi kadar karna sikhlo, fiada hee fiada hain

Shaina: (clearly not interested) Oh really? (searched over his shoulder) I'm sorry me kadar zaroor karti per mujhe to koi mard dikhai hee nahi deta (she turned to leave)

Varun: (held her hand and twisted it behind her) Ouch, now that surely did hurt

Shaina: (angry) Mera haath choro

Varun: Hum wo hain jaaneman jo ek baar haath pakar le to phir kabhi nahi chorte (she still struggled) Ek baar apna dil deke to dekho

Shaina: No thanks (pushed him) mujhe naahi tumhaara dil chaaheye or naahi mujhe tumse koi dilchaspi hain.

Tossing her hair behind her, she stomped off clearly disappointed about many things. Varun just stared after her with a grin that he was going to make her accept defeat against her denial sooner or later.

As she walked around the hall, soon these dhol beats took over again and she got prevented by all these guys. She tried to push her way through them but they didn't let her leave and then arrived, the hero Mr. Varun who challenged her for another dance.

Varun: Tera rang balle balle, teri chaal balle balle

Tera roop balle balle, tere gaal balle balle

Dekha tujhe to mujhe pyaar hogaya haiiiii

Tere khayaalon me yeh dil khogaya

He danced away constantly asking her to join in. Finally she did.

Shaina: Oh naiyon naiyon, oh naiyon naiyon

Oh naiyon naiyon mainu dil tera naiyon chaahida

Oh naiyon naiyon mainu dil tera naiyon chaahida

She went and pushed him back on top of the other guys.

Shaina: Ek tu hi mere naal naiyon naiyon janchta

Ek tu hi mere naal naiyon naiyon janchta

The dance continued between them with their tit for tats. Varun tried to convince her that he was not a bad guy and she would miss out if she lost him.

Varun: Dhol jaani, dhol jaani mere paas aa teri meherbaani

However she knew he was just one of them.

Shaina: Jhooth bole na, jhooth bole na neeyat me hain teri beimaani

Now Shaina just wanted him to leave her alone but everywhere she went he popped up some way or the other. His teasing was to the limit and she really wanted to strangle him but she couldn't.

Varun: Oh kurti teri chhentdi, duppatta tera leheriya

Hoiiiii oh kurti teri chhentdi dupatta tera leheriya

Hindustani rani banjaa raja ki tu goriya

With attitude she showed off her assets and warned him.

Shaina: Main kudi Punjab di mera resham da rumaal ve

Hoiiii main kudi Punjab di mera resham da rumaal ve

Zindagi bhar bhoolega na kar doongi wo haal ve

He held onto his heart as if he got a big attack and danced like an insane man in love.

Varun: Oh naiyon naiyon, oh naiyon naiyon

naiyon naiyon tere bin dil naiyon lagda

naiyon naiyon tere bin dil naiyon lagda

naiyon naiyon tere bin dil naiyon lagda

Tujhe dekhte hee haye dil mera nachda

Tujhe dekhte hee haye dil mera nachda

After sometime he had her cornered and wrapped her in his arms. She struggled badly for him to leave her but he just enjoyed making it more difficult.

Shaina: Na dekh challe, challe dil phenk challe challe

Mujhe chod challe, challe na chedh challe challe

Finally she elbowed him in his gut and freed herself.

Shaina: Paagal deewana dildaar hogaya

Isko sambhaalo ye bekaar hogaya

He didn't give up at all and was determined to have her no matter what. It was his last attempt.

Varun: Mera yaar balle balle, dildaar balle balle

Inkaar balle balle, iqraar balle balle

Dekha tujhe to mujhe pyaar hogaya

haiii tere khayalon mein yeh dil kho gaya

She denied him more.

Shaina: Oh naiyon naiyon mainu dil tera naiyon chaahida

Oh naiyon naiyon mainu dil tera naiyon chaahida

Varun: Haii naiyon naiyon tere bin dil naiyon lagda

Naiyon lagda

Tujhe dekhte hee haye dil mera nachda

Shaina: Oh naiyon naiyon mainu dil tera naiyon chaahida

He pleaded

Varun: Tujhe dekhte hee haye dil mera nachda

She rejected.

Shaina: Oh naiyon naiyon mainu dil tera naiyon chaahida

No matter how much Shaina tried to free herself from Varun's presence he didn't let her be and constantly irritated her. She was left with less choice and in the end thought to just let him be since there was no point in fighting him away as he just kept coming back.

On the other side Naina was still not talking to Rajveer because she didn't believe him yet still about the bachelor party. And then she was annoyed with him for dancing with Shaina even though she had heard his last comment and had burst out laughing. However she just loved playing hard to get.

Rajveer: Naina please meree baat suno, me sach kehraha hu ke koi bachelor party nahi huwi thi

Naina: (scrounged her face) I don't want to talk to you Raj (walked away from him)

Rajveer: (held her hand back and pulled her towards him) Oh really, me bhi dekhta hu ke kab tak tum meree baat nahi maanti or raazi kese nahi hoti

She pushed him away and crossed her arms across her chest. She also wanted to see what he would do but pretended to be less interested. She walked passed him but stopped a few steps ahead after the dhol beats played and she was forced to turn around.

Men: Yeh kudiyaan nashe di pudiyan

Ladies: Yeh munde gali de gunde

Men: Yeh kudiyaan nashe di pudiyan

Ladies: Yeh munde gali de gunde

Men: nashe di pudiyan

Ladies: gali de gunde

Rajveer: oooooh ohhhhhhhhh

She stared at him surprised whilst he gave her a bow and then these people from the background came rushing towards him with excitement and played the drum beats loud and fast.

Rajeev: Mehndi lagake rakhna doli sajaake rakhna

Mehndi lagake rakhna doli sajaake rakhna

Lene tujhe oh gori aayenge tere sajna

Most of the people joined in and Naina just looked on

Men: Mehndi lagake rakhna doli sajaake rakhna

Oh ho oh ho

Then he was surprised too when she interrupted and answered him

Naina: hoooooooooooo aaaaaaaaaaaah

Sehra sajaake rakhna chehra chupaake rakhna

Sehra sajaake rakhna chehra chupaake rakhna

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil me dabaa ke rakhna

He gave her a dreamy romantic look

Ladies: Sehra sajaake rakhna chehra chupaake rakhna

Men: Mehndi lagake rakhna doli sajaake rakhna

Oh ho oh ho

Others cheered him on dancing away with him

Hoye hoye hoye hoye hoye hoye

He saw she still didn't look convinced so he thought of something really great to tell her. Something which he knew would impress her immediately as it would be straight from his heart.

Rajveer: Ud udke teri zulfe, karti hain kya ishaare

Dil thaam ke khare hain aashiq sabhi kunwaare

She looked at him with awe whilst he gestured with his hands, although she wasn't the one to give in easily.

Naina: Chup jaaye saari kudiyaan ghar me sharam ke mare

Gao me aagaye hain paagal sheher ke saare

He pretended to be offended by that and grabbed her hand whilst she struggled.

Rajveer: Nazre jhuka ke rakhna daaman bachaake rakhna

She couldn't stop thinking that was this guy for real or what. No matter how much she tried to stay cut off from him she just couldn't stop loving him more.

Rajveer: Nazre jhuka ke rakhna daaman bachaake rakhna

Lene tujhe oh gori aayenge tere sajna

However she came out of her trance and released herself. She still had to play hard to get.

Men: Mehndi lagake rakhna doli sajaake rakhna

Ladies: Sehra sajaake rakhna chehra chupaake rakhna

He noticed how she still wanted to the game to carry on so he wasn't going to lose at any costs. He continued to pursue her further knowing that she would have no choice but to be bowled all over him again.

Rajveer: Me ek jawaan ladka tu ek haseen ladki

Yeh dil machal gaya to mera kasoor kya hain

She raised her eyebrows at him and then gave a sarcastic grin

Naina: Rakhna tha dil pe kaaboo yeh husn to hain jaadoo

Jaadoo yeh chal gaya to mera kasoor kya hain

He had her wrapped into his arms now

Rajveer: Rasta hamara takna darwaaza khulla rakhna

He was the most wonderful thing that had happened to her.

Rajveer: Rasta hamara takna darwaaza khulla rakhna

Lene tujhe oh gori aayenge tere sajna

She covered his mouth with her hand

Naina: Kuch or ab na kehna kuch or ab na karna

She smiled and wrapped her arms around his neck

Naina: Kuch or ab na kehna kuch or ab na karna

Yeh dil ki baat apne dil ne chupaa ke rakhna

The boys behind them wolf whistled and cheered them on whilst Naina became shy and left Rajveer's grip.

Men: Mehndi lagake rakhna doli sajaake rakhna

Ladies: Sehra sajaake rakhna chehra chupaake rakhna

He was really excited and he held her hand and made her join in the dance with him

Shava oye oye oye, shava oye oye oye, shava oye oye………….

The happy festivities continued with all of them mingling in and pulling each other's legs. Rajveer was glad that Naina had discarded the bachelor party idea since it never actually happened and now she was talking to him again. It would have been worse if before his wedding everything would have been destroyed and he would have killed Rishi and gang for sure. Then he would have made sure that they had apologized a thousand times before he would have had released them.

Anyhow now things were back to normal and the evening was nearing its end. He just couldn't wait till tomorrow when he would have Naina all to himself and no one else to disturb them.

Twenty minutes later

Neelu and Shaina came searching for Naina and then grabbed her out of the crowd. She was curious as to what was their problem but both of them didn't look as if there was anything serious.

They had just come to her to urge her to sing a song on that auspicious event. She clearly refused that she wasn't going to in front of so many people but they kept insisting.

Soon the gang noticed them talking so they joined in and enquired as to what was going on. The girls told them of how they wanted Naina to sing and how she was refusing. The others also insisted Naina to sing but she still was hesitasnt and didn't agree.

Rajveer pushed her and convinced her finally and she had to agree as it was terribly hard to refuse him for anything.

The girls took Naina with them in the centre and got everyone's attention

Neelu: Ladies and gentlemen aaj is shubh afsar pe hum sab ne to apne dil ki baat bata bhi dee or dikha bhi di (smiled and others laughed too) per ek aisa insaan hain jisne abhi bhi kuch nahi bataya to ham sab ne socha ke ose bhi moka dena chaheeye (Naina kept telling her not to hype it up like that but she continued to tease her) to here is presenting to you all the bride to be Naina.

There was applause and then Naina sat down joined by her friends behind her. After a brief pause she practiced her vocal chords.

Naina: Sabki baraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

Sabki baraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

Dulhan banake humko rajaji lejaana

Sabki baraatein aayi

Her gaze fell on Rajveer who sat opposite her to a distance and gave her loving looks.

Naina: Baandh ke sehra humse milke niklenge saare armaan dil ke

She covered her eyes with her hands and then peaked out to see him

Naina: Aakhon me taare naache

Haaye aakhon me taare naache ghoonghat yu uthaana

Phir humko haule haule baahon me chupaana

Sabki baraatein aayi

She got up and looked around the hall towards all her close ones and then went towards them one by one.

Naina: Apno se judaa me hotee huwee

Kuch hastee huwi kuch roti huwee

She hugged her father and shed one or two tears. He also became misty eyed but told her not to cry. She wiped her tears and then with a smile turned her attention towards Rajveer.

Naina: Jab chorungi babul ki gali tumre angna aaungi chali

With sudden modesty taking over her she hid behind her mother but stole glances with Rajveer.

Naina: Jab tan mann se teree banungi

Gori baiya meree dharna haule se

She placed her mehndi clad hands in front and displayed them.

Naina: Mehndi waale haatho ki

Haaye mehndi waale haathon ki churi khankaana

Phir haule haule mujhko baahon me chupaana

Sabki baraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

Dulhan banake humko rajaji lejaana

Sabki baraatein aayi

All of her closeones came to her and either hugged her or just kissed her on the forehead or the cheeks. She smiled and laughed with them all feeling sad at the same time as the feeling sunk in that she was going to miss them all. As she kept going she eventually landed in Rajveer's arms and she went beetroot red as he stared at her and complimented her with his seductive eyes.

Naina: Phir bindya ki sab chandaniya

Or paayal ki sab raaginiya

Tere ghar aangan me loota degee

Dulhe raja teree dulhaniya

He rested his head on her shoulder and gave her playful nudges with his head.

Naina: Pehle tum khelna mere rang roop se

Phir chun daalna ang ang ki kaliya

She hugged him and rested her head on his chest.

Naina: Kore tan ke phoolo se

Haaye kore tan ke phoolo se saijeeya sajaana

Phir haule haule humko baahon me chupaana

Then others came and separated them teasing them to the core since that was the best they did best. As naina saw all of them laughing and enjoying together she felt too sad thinking that she won't be amongst them any longer.

Naina: Sabki baraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

Dulhan banake humko rajaji lejaana

Sabki baraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana

Dulhan banake humko rajaji lejaana

Sabki baraatein aayi

By the end she couldn't control anymore and she choked. Instant tears fell out of her eyes and she hugged her mother tight crying out. Everyone became concerned and tried consoling her as they knew what she was going through. It sure was a tough time but they all were confident that her future was going to be full of happiness and only happiness. Rajveer was living proof of it and they had full confidence in him.

The atmosphere turned quite sentimental for the next ten minutes as Naina was settled down by them all and they fussed over her to make sure she was alright or not. She was alright but still a bit upset.

The gang met up and thought the evening was at an end and they needed to end it on happy note and not on sad one. They gathered together to make a plan and then informed Rajveer who also agreed that it was a perfect idea to cheer Naina up too. Then they all disappeared somewhere and Rajveer took Naina with him too to explain to her everything
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Posted: 14 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Varun is again after Shaina so that she takes an interest in him instead of Raj!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shaina ne usse accha jawab diya and turned to leave!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Varun caught her hand and twisted it behind her and is not letting her go!!!!

Finally she pushed him off saying that she has no interest in him and stomped off!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Varun stared after her with a grin that he was going to make her accept defeat against her denial!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

I hope Varun is as serious as Raj in this case and really loves Shaina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Varun challenged her for another dance and it continued with him trying to convince her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and just perfect for Varun and Shaina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shaina wanted him to leave her but he keeps popping up someway or the other and she really wanted to strangle him!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Varun had her wrapped in his arms and she struggled badly but he just enjoyed making it more difficult!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

As usual finally she elbowed him in his gut and freed herself!!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Varun did not give up and in the end Shaina just let him be as he just kept coming back!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

On the other side Naina was still not talking to Raj aur Raj usse manane ki koshish kar raha tha!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina wanted to see what Raj would do but pretended to be less interested!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj sang and Naina just looked on and then she answered him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and perfect for Raj and Naina and its my all time favourite wedding song!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is trying to convince Naina and Naina is just lost in him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

But then she came out of her trance and he saw that she still wanted the game to carry on!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Naina maan gayi and she hugged him and everyone cheered them on!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Naina became shy and left Rajveer's grip but he made her join in the dance with him!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj is glad that Naina is talking to him again!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Agar aisa na hota then Raj would have killed Rishi and gang for sure!!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Neelu and Shaina wanted Naina to sing but she clearly refused and then the others also insisted Naina to sing!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj finally convinced her and she had to agree as it was terribly hard to refuse him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and emotional!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is getting really emotional while singing and went towards her close ones!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She hugged her father and both of them shed tears and he told her not to cry!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

She hid behind her mother and stole glances at Rajveer!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

All of her close ones came to her and hugged or kissed her and she is sad as she is going to miss them all!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

She eventually landed in Raj's arms and they are romancing again and she hugged him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Then others came and separated them teasing them to the core!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina saw them laughing and is too sad that she won't be amongst them any longer!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina is now crying and hugging her mother and everyone is trying to console her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

It sure was a tough time but they had full confidence in Raj that Naina's future was going to be full of happiness!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The atmosphere turned quite sentimental and Naina is now alright but still a bit upset!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The gang wanted to end the evening on a happy note and not on a sad one!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

They came up with a plan to cheer up Naina and informed Raj who agreed!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I wonder what this gang has come up with now!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was surely a lovely part....3 songs!! All were nice...but its needless to say I loved the Raj-Naina one most!! Hehehe...

And u knw wat...I actually cud imagine Rajeev while singing this portion:

Rajveer: Nazre jhuka ke rakhna daaman bachaake rakhna



Kya ghazab dhaa raha tha...☺️....haiiiii....But anyways...getting back on the track....I liked the Varun-Shaina part as well.

And that 3rd song...one of my favs....and it was very nicely portrayed by you....as usual...hehe.

But wud love to knw...wat they hav decided on to cheer up Naina...ohh...I love this gang and their ideas.

Pls con
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Arwa
Update was really gud.πŸ‘πŸ‘
I think now Shaina is pretty much impressed by Varun but still she wont accept her defeat..Uski na mein haan chhupi hui hai..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I hope Varun is as serious as Raj in this case coz I dont want Shaina to b hurt..
All the songs were gud but specially mehandi laga ke rakhna..Its my all time favourite and then my favourite couple were dancing on it too.Raj had a hard time convincing Naina but atleast he succeeded..
Naina was getting really emotional while singing that song..I suppose every girl go through these emotions while getting married afterall its them who leave their loved ones behind..I think we all shud think of changing this customπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Wat is Raj and his gang planning to cheer up Naina???πŸ˜ƒ
Pls continue soon
Bye
When will u update lost yaar???
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats so good
loved the songs
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.




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