|~| Scenario of the Week #1 |~|

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Friends!

Well, I missed the date for WOTW & MOTW,

so it'd be weird to put one up two days late, since that would mess everything up. 😆😳

So sorry 😳

Instead, I'll put up this in the meantime :P

~Scenario of the Week~

I'll give you a scenario, and you will tell me how you would write a scene on it, in two perspectives. Confused?

Okay, by two perspectives, I meant:

- Writers POV: If you, as a writer, were writing out the next scene, how would you write it?
- Reader's POV: If you, as a reader, were reading the scene, how would you like to see it go?

Some people might want it the same both ways, but, some, as both writers and readers, like to add twists and cliffhangers, while as readers, they get really impatient with them 😉

Come on, don't deny it, we all know it's true, right? 😉😳

Okay, so Scenario is:

Sonia is a college student. She has an online boyfriend who she has never met (and he lives halfway across the world). A really nice wedding proposal comes for her, and her parents have accepted it, since the guy's family are their family friends and the guy is absolutely wonderful and successful. Now, Sonia's only boyfriend is a college dropout struggling for a job and living on his parent's money.

What should Sonia do? Run away from home? Tell her parents she has an online boyfriend? (Her parents are very strict people who oppose online relationships.) Marry the guy her parents want her to marry? (He's very sweet and will keep her really happy.)

If you were in Sonia's position, what would you do?

(lol scenario's nothing too new 😆)

~ FF Dev. Team

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark Love



Okay, so Scenario is:

Sonia is a college student. She has an online boyfriend who she has never met (and he lives halfway across the world). A really nice wedding proposal comes for her, and her parents have accepted it, since the guy's family are their family friends and the guy is absolutely wonderful and successful. Now, Sonia's only boyfriend is a college dropout struggling for a job and living on his parent's money.

What should Sonia do? Run away from home? Tell her parents she has an online boyfriend? (Her parents are very strict people who oppose online relationships.) Marry the guy her parents want her to marry? (He's very sweet and will keep her really happy.)

If you were in Sonia's position, what would you do?

(lol scenario's nothing too new 😆)


i hope i type this fast enough to be the first one.... ok.. fine it it goes.... if i were a writter... id probably strt it ou by saying she agrees... coz she had too.... and you no slowly slowly she tells him the truth..... (eventually) but as for the love of her life...... he and her are still at it.... she should meet him... and then later her love finds out.. and he gets pissed.. or something like that... and she clears the mess up... SLOWLY... and ultimately she convinces her parents... and stuff.... lol... well im a writter so i need to have a proper story ryte??? hehe.. a fast quick story would be boring...
As a reader... hmmm thats tough... i wouldnt the story ive writen... wid ofcourse not TOOO many twists and turns.. and NOT too much confusion.. but more love and passion...
and As me???? if i were sonia??? id make my parents understand that I LOVE THAT MAN... and make him look good enough for them to say yes... im too stubborn arent i??? very boring ... but thats wat i would PRACTICALLY do..... or.. i would elope wid him .. maybe to switzerland... oooh.. yes!! that would be lovely... but if its too cold... i guess paris would do... HAHAHHA.. wait he needs money.... crap... deos he have enough money to go to goa atleast???
lol! awsome post di!!!!i hope i ahve understood it well enough
love vini
Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark Love


~Scenario of the Week~

I'll give you a scenario, and you will tell me how you would write a scene on it, in two perspectives. Confused?

Okay, by two perspectives, I meant:

- Writers POV: If you, as a writer, were writing out the next scene, how would you write it?

Some people might want it the same both ways, but, some, as both writers and readers, like to add twists and cliffhangers, while as readers, they get really impatient with them 😉

Come on, don't deny it, we all know it's true, right? 😉😳

Okay, so Scenario is:

Sonia is a college student. She has an online boyfriend who she has never met (and he lives halfway across the world). A really nice wedding proposal comes for her, and her parents have accepted it, since the guy's family are their family friends and the guy is absolutely wonderful and successful. Now, Sonia's only boyfriend is a college dropout struggling for a job and living on his parent's money.

What should Sonia do? Run away from home? Tell her parents she has an online boyfriend? (Her parents are very strict people who oppose online relationships.) Marry the guy her parents want her to marry? (He's very sweet and will keep her really happy.)

If you were in Sonia's position, what would you do?

(lol scenario's nothing too new 😆)

~ FF Dev. Team

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**Edited**

Sonia stared at the light of the monitor screen …. The whole house was asleep and she felt like her whole soul was in torment …. What was she to do? As she started at Messenger screen she waited in anticipation for him to log on….

Her whole family had decided that Raj was the one and she had met him…he was fair, handsome and charming …he had this look about him….she seen him at a couple of weddings and he was also nice friendly and he made the effort, even thou she was trying hard not too, but slowly she found herself drawn to him… and then there was Amit who lived miles apart from her who she connect to with from a social network society… there was not a day which went by when she had been so eager to get on line and talk to him…. She found herself telling him everything it was so easy…. Maybe it was the mere fact he was miles apart and not there to judge her as the computer had this sense of security as nothing could harm her virtually. As she could switch of when ever she wanted and had that control…. But now there was a knock on the door and the world through the looking glass showed parts of her future… was Raj that future?

As she clicked on new mail she typed in the name heavy heartedly as she knew what to do…

Dear Amit

………………………….

Love Kat😳

Edited by Catwoman - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Kat that was beautifully penned!!
as a reader i would like to see exactly how the writer brings about the confusion of Sonia since she has to make adecision, which involves her loved ones. it would be interesting to see the phase she goes through and the stream of emotions which attach it.
i dont what i would do if i was Sonia - cant say much on that part
Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark Love


- Writers POV: If you, as a writer, were writing out the next scene, how would you write it?
- Reader's POV: If you, as a reader, were reading the scene, how would you like to see it go?


Okay, so Scenario is:

Sonia is a college student. She has an online boyfriend who she has never met (and he lives halfway across the world). A really nice wedding proposal comes for her, and her parents have accepted it, since the guy's family are their family friends and the guy is absolutely wonderful and successful. Now, Sonia's only boyfriend is a college dropout struggling for a job and living on his parent's money.

What should Sonia do? Run away from home? Tell her parents she has an online boyfriend? (Her parents are very strict people who oppose online relationships.) Marry the guy her parents want her to marry? (He's very sweet and will keep her really happy.)

If you were in Sonia's position, what would you do?



If Sonia ran away with her "online boyfriend" and got married, believe me, it would turn out to be a nasty marriage and end up in a divorce. Why? First of all, she doesn't know this guy. Never seen him, and once she gets married to him, things will turn out very differently and she will be very disappointed because she didn't get what she expected. Plus he can barely sustain a living... She needs to think rationally. Love isn't what she sees in movies or on TV. It's FAR FAR FARRRRRRRRRR from that...

It's a better option if she marries the guy her parents chose for her, cause he'll be able to provide for her, and as time passes, they will fall in love and have an awesome marriage.

As the writer, I would try to make Sonia's character understanding and rational who truly kknows what she's gotta do and as a reader, that's what I'd like to read as well.

And if I was in Sonia's position, i would do what I would make Sonia's character do :P 😆😆

Awesome topic Madzzzzzzz! You keep missing on the WOTW 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Sania ...love what ur saying but as a writer...i guess it would be difficult to pen with the torment of her feeling... her heart ache and her confusion of what is right or wrong...
To follow her heart or head? Mind u Madz has not told u what she like character wise? so to grasp the concept is a little ....hmmm i dont know... i guess i like to read others comments here
BTW thank u
Love Kat
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@zuzu i with u what if the guys online like a fat guzzer in a vest about 40 year old perv🤢.... man the stories on the net there are load...👎🏼
Pluswe all wear masks on the net hide ourselves and emotions seriously the guy her parents have choosen is really alive in her face not a alias...
Love Kat
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Catwoman

@ Sania ...love what ur saying but as a writer...i guess it would be difficult to pen with the torment of her feeling... her heart ache and her confusion of what is right or wrong...

To follow her heart or head? Yep thats exactly what i was thinking, i guess it would be hard to pen lol
Mind u Madz has not told u what she like character wise? so to grasp the concept is a little ....hmmm i dont know... i guess i like to read others comments here
BTW thank u no problem
Love Kat

Originally posted by: Catwoman

@zuzu i with u what if the guys online like a fat guzzer in a vest about 40 year old perv🤢.... man the stories on the net there are load...👎🏼 i know its pretty horrific to know how old the girls/boys end up being!!

Plus e all wear masks on the net hide ourselves and emotions seriously the guy her parents have choosen is really alive in her face exactly not a alias...
Love Kat

Sania
Edited by ArmiandRidz4eva - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Catwoman

@zuzu i with u what if the guys online like a fat guzzer in a vest about 40 year old perv🤢.... man the stories on the net there are load...👎🏼

Pluswe all wear masks on the net hide ourselves and emotions seriously the guy her parents have choosen is really alive in her face not a alias...
Love Kat

HAHAHHAHA fat guy in a vest.... So true kat di so true!!!!!!!!! i mean.. im probably huge and ugly and have 17 cats and live alone ... hahahahhahaha lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Catwoman

@zuzu i with u what if the guys online like a fat guzzer in a vest about 40 year old perv🤢.... man the stories on the net there are load...👎🏼

Pluswe all wear masks on the net hide ourselves and emotions seriously the guy her parents have choosen is really alive in her face not a alias...
Love Kat



lol, true true, he could be an oldie 😆😆😆 but even if he was the kinda guy that he made out to be, Sonia would be disappointed. He's a high school drop out (cmon.. you AT LEAST need to have a high school diploma!) he can barely support himself... hows he going to support her? And once they get married and they dont have enough money to raise a family, she's going to get sick of him, their relationship will turn sour, and thats the end of it. Oh and what I meant by she would be disappointed was that you really dont no how a person REALLY is until you marry them... so this guy could be your boyfriend but once you get married... you are disppointed because you didn't expect him to be the way he is... ok thats enough.. i've been listening to those Marriage Revolution webcasts a little too much 😆

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