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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: subha2601

Veer ananya part was so funny. 🤣 🤣 🤣
Plz continue asap.

thnk youu
happy you thought it was funny
will to try to update todayy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieA

omg...haha 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 ...Ananya n Veer part was hilarious!...plz plz conti...x

thnk youu
wil try to continue todayy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: heaven princess

lol that was funnyy...hehe..looking forward to more Veer annaya parts.....i see u rote it in the 21st century hehe......all sai in english hehe....

ps. can u make the parts a bit longer please

there are more cumingg
but i dnt noe how to write in hindi thts why i wrote iit in english
yep i will try to make next part longerr
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
hey good one... 👏
loved it yaar.............😉
i mean plz do continue..😆😆
veer-ananya toh chuha billi...ki tarah ladne lage woh bhi...😉😆😆
shadi ki peheli hi raat...... *blushhhhhhhhh 😆
na jane Dharam sia ka kya haal chaal hai....🤔
BTW...i hope hamare tom n jerry...kabhi pyar mein padenge 😆
Edited by Rash2cool - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xoxcuddlesxox

really good first part plz update soon

thnk you will update soonn
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Hii Everyone

Part 2
Heres the next part

Veer ran to the door and opened it

It was His Nivriti mom

Nivriti:What was all that noise. You guys weren't fighting were you

Veer: No mom I was just tell ananya how much I love her

Veer turns to ananya angrily and she also gives him a glare

Nivriti: What a perfect pair [She looks at them admiringly] Ok, I better go now

Veer and ananya smile and Niviriti leaves the room and as soon she shuts the door behind her Veer goes to the bed and takes the pillow and throws it on the sofa and says

Veer: Im sleeping on the sofa today but tomorrow the bed is mine

Ananya: We will see about that tomorrow

Ananya gives a small laugh and goes to sleep

On the other hand Dharam comes inside the room there he sees Siya who is standing by the window and he walks to her and stands by her

Dharam: you look really pretty today

Siya blushes and looks down

Then all of sudden there is a sound of thunder Siya gets scared and hugs Dharam tightly

After 2 minutes she notices what she did and lets go of Dharam

Siya: uuh umm im sorry

Dharam: its okk

Dharam: I know you are not happy with this wedding

Siya in a low tone says who told you this, I am really happy with this marriage

Dharam: did you say anything?

Siya: umm nothing

Just when shes about to go Dharam calls her she gets really happy and turns around

Dharam: Siya you can sleep on the bed and I will sleep on the sofa

Siya was so sad because she was hoping him to say something else

Siya: okk

Dharam gets the pillow and goes to sleep on the sofa

Siya on the other hand is talking to herself and says omg this Dharam is so unromantic

Dharam hears something

Dharam: did you say some thing?

Siya: no

Siya in her mind says I really have to stop talking so loud and goes sleep

The next morning arrived

Dharam and Siya were both up ready and were sitting at the dinning table having breakfast but veer and ananya hadnt come down as yet

Dharam and Siya were done eating so decided to go see veer and ananya

Dharam knocked on the door

Veer and ananya were sleeping

Dharam: I think they are still sleeping

Siya: ananya usually wakes up late

Dharam: so does veer
They both laugh

Dharam starts banging on the door

Veer falls off the sofa

And all of a sudden the banging stops and Dharam and Siya leave

Veer thinks who could be banging the door and then goes to the bathroom and takes a bath and comes out all dressed with wet hair he sees that Ananya is still sleeping and goes towards her

Ananya is sleeping peacefully look like a beautiful doll Veer stands over her head and for a few minutes stares at her dreamily. Still staring

Suddenly Ananya opens her eyes

Ananya: What you looking at?

Veer: Nothing [coming out of his day dream]

Ananya: Yes, you were [She gets the bedcovers, and pulls it towards her as she is scared Veer might do something]

Veer: [in his mind he says] Pagal!

Veer laughs and walks out the room

Sorry I tried to make this part longer

But i think i also made it a bit stupid
I will try to make it better next timee
Enjoy
Read and Comment😊
Edited by sweetest girl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
very nice update, ur story is coming along fantastically, thanks for updating soon and not keeping us waiting, wait eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
yaaaaaaa gud part

waiting to read further more update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
hi iram....😛
update is super dear specially the dialog of nivriti😍
and the situation of sia......
i also liked the end where veer was staring ananya 😍 and then she got up pulled her bed cover towords her😆...and veer saying pagal...😆
loved ur part yaar....👏
plz update it soon....im waiting eagerly😍........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
😆😆😆lool...wah a part...its so cute! loved VA's pair...dey r so suitd for each other lol specailly da nok-joks! n da last part wen Veer is lookin at Ananya n she wakes up n gets scared! 🤣lool...Veer realises wah hes doin n calls her pagal lool hehe...😆😆
also wen DS cam to call VA to brekkie...haha veer fell off da sofa...lol..🤣🤣🤣dt was funi...n i can relate to it hehe😆😆😆
DS r jst so adorable!...i was smilin wen Sia said Dharam isnt romantic at all! lool... 😆
its soo diff as well...as da couples r alreadi married...so dey lovestories will start afta marriage...😍
PS: can u give a lil precap ...jst a thought...
Overall...wonderful update! update soon xx-x-xx
🤗🤗🤗

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