* [Vivaah] [part 9 page 29] - Page 4

hey this is a cool fan fic! all married by force...i hope u keep their misunderstandings and fights atleast for 2/3 more chapters, i love it..

great 2nd part liked it alot plz update soon

Hey sweetest girl (soz dnt noe ure name)

ure fan fic is going really well....i loved tjhe fites n nok jokes between veer and ananya..they not happy with marriage..but they soon will be...hehe... i have the feeling...veer may be but ananya will tke sum tyme..

lol dharam started to bang on door and veer fell of the bed🤣🤣🤣 veer babu shara sambhalyeh apne apko..

well dne
wens the next part

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

very nice update, ur story is coming along fantastically, thanks for updating soon and not keeping us waiting, wait eagerly for the next part

Originally posted by: itemshera

yaaaaaaa gud part

waiting to read further more update soon

Originally posted by: subha2601

It's lovely.
Plz update soon.

Originally posted by: starpisces123

hi iram....😛
update is super dear specially the dialog of nivriti😍thnk you
and the situation of sia......
i also liked the end where veer was staring ananya 😍 and then she got up pulled her bed cover towords her😆...and veer saying pagal...😆
loved ur part yaar....👏 thnxx
plz update it soon....im waiting eagerly😍........ will try to upate todayy

Originally posted by: CutieA

😆😆😆lool...wah a part...its so cute! loved VA's pair...dey r so suitd for each other lol specailly da nok-joks! n da last part wen Veer is lookin at Ananya n she wakes up n gets scared! 🤣lool...Veer realises wah hes doin n calls her pagal lool hehe...😆😆 happy u enjoyed it

also wen DS cam to call VA to brekkie...haha veer fell off da sofa...lol..🤣🤣🤣dt was funi...n i can relate to it hehe😆😆😆

DS r jst so adorable!...i was smilin wen Sia said Dharam isnt romantic at all! lool... 😆

its soo diff as well...as da couples r alreadi married...so dey lovestories will start afta marriage...😍 thnk youu

PS: can u give a lil precap ...jst a thought... yess i will frum now on

Overall...wonderful update! update soon xx-x-xx

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Originally posted by: Girl_2007

hey this is a cool fan fic! all married by force...i hope u keep their misunderstandings and fights atleast for 2/3 more chapters, i love it..

ok, comment on 1st part:

😆😆😆janam lete hi marriage fix kar diya..these parents bhi na😆, ok, but sounds really interesting😳

wow! marrying at the sweet age of 16, that will be cool😛

Dharam looked at siya who was looking really preety and was feeling shy and he smiled at her aw!!😳😍

Veer looked at Ananya who was looking really mad 😲🤣 and he also smiled at her 🤣

i just loved the contrasting opinions of the two brothers! specially those lines👏👏

oh my god! shadi ki pehli raat aur aisse comments😲 👏keep it on girl!

i was shocked when veer said that he wont touch her, as they know they arent happy wid the marriage😳, it also reminded me of jodha akbar, but ur part was in a different way😃

😆😆fighting for the bed😆👏😆

well i dont think its dumb at all😕, in fact its really nice and cool👏its kind of different fan fic who can make anyone smile😳, and i think u shud continue wid the english dias as u started wid them. also, i dont think it wud have been the same thing if u had have translated to hindi.

conclusion: dialogues in english are fine😃

comment on 2nd part:

veer was telling ananya about his love?? is that called love😆😆aw! good excuse

so veer gives in.😆😆

aw! dharam is so sweet😳 (unlike veer😆). siya blushes..

and then, they hugged for whole 2 minutes?? omg!😆😆😆

atleast siya is happy wid the wedding😳 finally a normal princess of that times😛

dharam also sleeping on the sofa... cute 😳

dharam unromantic😆😆 i guess she will take the 1st step😆

so that was the 1st nigh of their wedding😆omg!

well, the 1st morning:

veer stares at the sleeping beauty, finally something positive for her in his mind😳😳

but, she thinks about...well dunno, and covers herself wid blankets😆

lols such a big comment😛 didnt knew it wud be so long.

anyways, ur fan fic its not stupid dear, i love it, in fact we all love it because the way it is writted😳

so i hope it continues like this, really😊

Originally posted by: xoxcuddlesxox

great 2nd part liked it alot plz update soon