An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 7

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Mahak hi,

me Vershita i am new to IF.

I read ur fic n it's just awesome dear.

u right damn well.

I like the name of Vyom.

It's too interesting.

Update it soon.

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

AMAZING....TOO GOOD.

thanks dear. 😊😊

Abhi ne to abhi se hi apni setting kar li Nandini ke saath 😉....Good for the tooo of them..... And the way RAj adressed them in his note.....loved how he pulls their legs.

bhai jaroori bhi hai na vaise bhi vo itne dino tak door tha Nandini se.😉😉

WOW what an come back....excellent job for the scene on RAj and Naina's reunion.⭐️

Haan dekho kya haalat karti hai Naina Raj ki.😆😆

And raj's apprehension about how Naina will react when she knows that he is alive.....and how he would have to put lot of efforts for 'manavofying' her..............how very considerate for him .........sooooooooo sweet and loving😳

vo jaanta hai na apni Cadet Singh ko.😉😉

GREAT JOB.....

thanks buddy.😃😃

wating eagerly for the next update....

@ litika

thanks dear

@ fantatic 21

thanks dear

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

update was really gud..So finally Raj is back n infront of Alekh n Naina ...wat will happen now...........Abhi has found his soulmate Nandini n their scenes were too romantic..Wats d mystery behind eagle????????/

Pls update soon

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was awesome finally Raj ki entry ho gayi aur use bhi pata hain ki Naina ko manane ke liye use ab bahut papad balene padange haina

Abhi-Nandini scene was so romantic

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hi vertika,
toooooooo Gooooooood update. finally Abhi n Nandini r with each other. n most awaited movment is arived when Naina saw Raj.
she definately got her shock of lifetime, she gonna react this way.
n they saw each other then i can't wait to see how Naina is going to encounter Raj.

waiting for update...................

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

thanks Shaina.😊😊

Naina realised that Vaibhav aur Abhimanyu ke behaviour mein kuch gadbad hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very smart!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

haaan vo to tha.😉😉

Aalekh aur Naina ne milke Choube ke room mein transmitter fit karwa diya!!!😊 😊 😊Very clever of them!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

bhai Raj ki student hai ye sab to kar hi legi.😉😉

Yeh Abhimanyu aur Nandini ke beech mein problem kya hai??😕 😕 😕

yahi ki Nandini ko Raj par trust tha par Abhi confuse tha.😡

Abhimanyu toh lagta hai Nandini se pyaar karta hai par Nandini usse naraz hai!!!!

haan par maan bhi gayi vo lagta hai tune doosra update nahi padha.😕😕

Lala ke peeche Eagle tha!!!I😊 😊 😊nteresting very very interesting!!!!😊 😊

kahin na kahin to hogi hi Lala ki roots na.

I am very happy that Naina is going to be a part of the mission!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😃 😃

Hum sab k liye jaroori hai ki vo Raj k saath rahe.😉😉

Naina aur Aalekh ne aisa kya suna jo unhe lagta hai ke dhoka bhi ho sakta hai??😕 😕 😕

vo Chaubey se baat karne waale ki awaaz Raj k jaise sun kar cahukte hain.😲

Aalekh and the others convo was too funny and of course the Tom and Jerry chase as usual!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

haan vo dono aise hi hain.😆😆

Abhimanyu toh Raj ko dekh kar shocked ho gaya!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

hoga hi it was not expected.😲😲

Abhi and Raj's meeting was very emotional!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

haan

Raj ko Abhay aur Nandini ne bachaya tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

bhai dost isiliye hote hain na.😉

Raj ne Abhimanyu ko maaf kar diya!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Haan I know Raj is just so sweet!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😊 😊 😊

vo hai hi aisa darling.😳😳

Aur toh aur usne Nandini se bhi kaha Abhi ko maaf karne ke liye!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kitna bada dil hai uska!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is darling .😛😛

Hey guys ye raha next update jis ka aap sab besabri se intezaar kar rahe the.

Jab Naina ki aakhein khul to us ne saamne Alekh ko dekha. She called him near her.

"Alekh mai kahan hoon abhi?" she asked.

"Naina hum jo kaam karne aaye the jahan abhi hum vahin hain." Alekh replied calmly.

"To tumhare kehne ka matlab hai maine Rajveer sir ko dekha hai yahan." Naina was speechless because of Alekh's silent confession, "Kahan hai sir Alekh kahan hain vo?" Naina asked like a stubborn child who wants his toy as soon as possible.

"Haan Naina hum dono ne Rajveer Sir ko dekha hai aur ye sach hai ki vo zinda hain." Alekh explained her every thing how Rajveer got saved.

"Kahan hai……….kahan hai vo batao?" Naina again asked.

"Vo vahan kahde hain." Alekh pointed towards a window where Rajveer was standing n busy in gazing the sky.

Naina got up from bed n moved towards him. Her legs were still shaking n she was going weaker weaker with each n every passing second. Her heart was sinking n she was shivering with a happiness. Naina was completely lost to know that he is still alive. Her heart knows no boundation of happiness today. Par kahin andar narajgi bhi thi ki Raj ne us ko kyoun nahi bataya ki vo zinda hai.

Idhar Raj apne hi khayalon me gum tha ki Naina jab uthegi to kaise jawaab dega us ko us k sawaalon k.

Naina placed a hand on his shoulder. He felt it n turned.

"Naina, tum uth gayi." Raj ki aankhein kuch keh rahi thin aur jabaan kuch.

"Mat kahiye mujhe Naina."Naina screamed in pain.

Raj was dumbstruck. He knew it was coming but didn't know how will he solve it.

"Naina meri baat to suno." He held her both shoulders with his hands.

"Kya suno mai? Kya suno ?Aap k zinda rehte hue bhi mujhe pal pal aise jina pada jaise ki mai mar chuki hoon. Aap k jane k baad meri kya halat thi jaante hai aap samjhte hai aap ki kisi apne ko kho dene k baad kaise jeeta hai koi. Mai kaise jee rahi thi ye gunaah le kar apne upper ki mai jis ko bhi chahti hoon ya pyaar karti hoon vo mujhe chod kar chala jaata hai. Aap ne ek bhi baar socha ki jis Cadat Naina ko apne Rajveer sir k alawa kisi par bhi nahi tha vo bharosa jo aap par tha us k chale jaane k baad mai kis par karti bharosa. Apne aas paas maine ek khol bana liya tha aisa ki abki baar koi mere paas na aaye varna vo bhi khatam ho jaayega." Naina ka itne dino ka dard ab ansoon ban k behne laga , " Maine socha tha aap dosron k bare me bhi sochte hain par nahi aap bus apne aur apne mission k bare me sochte hain. Aap ko koi bhi parwaah nahi hai ki mai jiyoun ya maroon………….". she couldn't continue n started cruying hard.

Is k aage Raj ne Naina ko kuch bhi nahi kehne diya. He covered her mouth with his hands and said,"Aisa mat kehna phir kabhi. Mai maut se lad kar wapas tumhare liye hi to aaya hoon aur agar tum ko kuch ho gaya to mai kabhi bhi nahi jee paaonga Naina." Raj ki aankhon me ansoon the.

Pata nahi andar kitne tufaan the Raj aur Naina k jo u dono ko ek saath samate lena chahte the.

Naina hugged Raj tightly when he said this n further said, "Aaj k baad promise kariye kabhi mujhe chod kar nahi jaayenge. Ek pal k bhi liye nahi." Naina was still sobbing on his shoulder.

"Mai promise karta hoon Naina ab kahin nahi jaaoonga tum ko chod kar."He was very happy to find her old Naina back.

Alekh was watching all it from a distance as soon as Raj hugged Naina Alekh left that room with his eyes filled with tears.

They both stood there in same position for at least ten minutes. Naina's sob were getting lighter n lighter. Raj was ruffling her hair with his hands. They both apart after 20 minutes .Naina lowered her eyes n Raj didn't miss the slight blush rising in her cheeks.

He smiled n said, "Naina andar chalein?"

"Yeah……….yes sir".Naina replied with out seeing in his eyes.

They both entered in main hall where Chaubey n Alekh were waiting for them.

"Lft Alekh aap ne Academy me bata diya hai na major ko ki aaj aap log yahan rukne waalen hain." Raj asked.

"Yes sir bata diya hai vaise bhi ab 10 baj chuke hain hum kaise jaayenge bhi." Alekh saw Naina's face who was really looking happy.

"Haan to Chaubey aap Cadet Singh aur Cadet Sharma k sone aur hum sab k khane ka intezaam kariye." Rajveer said.

"Sir vo sab ho gaya hai bus chaliye khana khate hain.Vaise sir ab Naina Lft hai par aap chahe to Naina ko abhi bhi Cadet bol sakte hain. Vo kya hai na aap k muh se Naina ka naam har tarah se accha lagta hai." Chaubey said in teasing manner.

Both Raj n Naina blushed at his this comment. Raj gave him a killing look. They all went to take the food n after having meals they all went to there respective rooms for that night whereas Alekh n Chaubey were in hall. Soon all of them dozed off except our RN. Naina got the same room where Raj used to do case work .She saw Raj's lap top n with g8 curiosity she opened it.

She was amazed to see her photos in his lappy. All the photos of past 8 months .Her eyes gone wet but she smiled because she can feel his love for her.

Raj entered in the room n found Naina watching her photos. He felt embarrassed with g8 difficulty he called Naina from back, " Naina vo mai apna lap top lene aaya tha."

Naina was staring him. Vo hut gayi raaste se. Raj aage bada aur apna lap top uthaya us ne vo kamre se nikalne hi waala tha ki Naina ne bola, "Sir aap se kuch poochna tha."

Raj said, "Haan pooch Naina." Without turning in her direction.

She came to him n stood in front of him . She took his lappy from his hands n placed it at the bed. She saw straight in Raj's eyes n asked, "Aap k lappy me meri photos kyoun hain?" her tone was mischievous though she knew the answer.

Raj understood everything so he decided to tell her everything now ," Vo Naina mai………………" but failed.

"Haan boliye sir mai sun rahi hoon." Naina teased him.

"Vo Naina …………pehle to mujhe sir nahi Raj bolo now ur not still my student. U r my friend, colleague n my l………." Raj stopped abruptly.

"Last waala kya tha sir…………nahi Raj ?" Naina again asked in teasing manner.

"Naina……….." Raj screamed n said, "Tum jaanti ho par still playing with me n?." Raj said finally.

Naina surprised but said, "Kya jaanti hoon mai?"

"Batoo……" Raj said moving towards her.

"Haan," she moved a littlie back.

Aise tab tak Raj aage aata raha aur Naina peeche hoti gayi jab tak he finally pined her into wall .Naina was silent now n Raj was looking in her beautiful eyes n finally after collecting his all courage he said, " I love u Naina. U r my life aur mai tumahre bina nahi reh sakta ek pal bhi."

Yahi sun na chahti thi Naina Raj se. She lowered her eyes n smiled shyly.

"Ab meri baat ka jawab do. Do u love me or not?" Raj asked.

"Aap ko kya lagta hai?" Naina asked.

"Pata nahi bata do varna mai kisi aur ko dhoondh leta hoon." Raj said in joking tone.

She hit him on his chest n said, "I love u too."

Raj was boundless happy today. He hugged her even tighter this time. Naina was also lost in him. Raj's hand started moving on her back. He sealed her lips with his. This kiss soon deepened n became more passionate. After kissing for a long time. He slipped her top over her shoulders n started kissing it. Naina was enjoying it. He removed her both the strips of her top n continued kissing her. He kissed her all over her neck, her face n all possible body parts. Now he bent n removed her top from her tummy n started kissing it too.

Naina was moaning a littlie. Raj didn't stop. She pulled her to him n he placed her lips to him again n soon their kiss deepened n they kissed for at least fifteen minutes. They both really wanted this from a long time. Their tongues were playing. Naina was enjoying n she was delighted with passionate Raj's love.

He left her after loving her so passionately for at least half an hour.

"So Lft. Naina 'ah' Singh aap mujh se pyaar karti hain na?" Raj asked naughtily.

Naina thought to play along with him, "Nahi mai aap se nahi Captain Shekhwata , Lft. Huda se pyaar karti hoon."

"Don't u dare to say it again." He warned her.

Par Naina ko to shaitani karni hi thin a so she further added, " Lo ab aap ko sach itna kadwa lagta hai."

Raj was unable to find out what was she saying. Par chehra to uter hi gaya Raj ka he said softly, "Are u serious?"

"Ummmm, haan yahi samajh lo." Naina said with a naughty smile.

Ab Raj ka patience khatam hone ko tha,he twisted her hand by holding her wrist n said, "To yahan kya kar rahi hain aap Lft. Singh. Go to Huda."

"Raj leave my hand it's hurting me." Naina screamed almost in pain.

Raj immediately left her hand n taking his lappy he left the room. Naina was still calling him but he paid no attention to it.

Next day morning at 9'o clock:-

"Naina chal ready hai na tu, hum ko wapas academy jaana hai." Alekh said taking the breakfast.

"Ok nikalte hain." Naina said.

"Koi kahin nahi jaayega Lft's." Vaibhav said entering.

"Sir aap", Naina , Raj, Alekh go up from their seats n saluted major.

"Aap dono ka saaman yahin aa gaya hai ab se aap humare mission ka hissa hain." Vaibhav said.

"Mission kaisa mission apun samjha nahi sir?" Alekh asked.

Now Vaibhav n Rajveer told them everthing. "Aap k saathi bhi is ka hissa hain. Isiliye un ko Eagle k un jagahon par posting di gayi hai jahan vo sab se jyada active hota hai. Eagle ko trap karne k liye hum ne jo jaal bichaya hai us k liye kal Captain Nandini yahan aa rahi hain." Vaibhav informed them, "Aur haan Lft. Huda abhi apni Assam posting k liye nikal rahe hain aap jaa kar un ko see off kar aaiye tab hum aage ka kaam dekhte hain aur aage ki cheejein discuss karenge."

"Kya Huda ja rahela hai?" Alekh surprised.

"Haan Lft. Aap sab k saathi aap se aaj se 10 dino baad milenge yahin aur tab hum Eagle ko finally saare sabuton k saath pakad lenge." Vaibhav told them, "Now rush Lfts. Aur haan aap meri bahar khadi jeep le jaaiye."

Naina saw Raj's face that he will react but he turned his face but he couldn't hide his swollen eyes. Naina samjh gayi ki Raj poori raat ro raha tha .Par ab kya karein jana to tha hi Huda ko see off karne.

They left immediately n reached KMA on time. Huda was in mess that time. Naina n Alekh reached there searching for him.

"Oye Phoolan aur Kaidi mujhe to laga ki mai bina tum logon se mile hi chala jaaonga." Huda said.

"Isiliye to tere jaane se pehle hum aa gaye." Alekh said.

"Par tum log kal raat me the kahan?" Huda asked.

Alekh aur Naina ko Major ki kahi hue vo baat yaad aayi .

"Haan yaar batao na kahan the kal raat tum dono?" Huda asked again.

"Huda vo baat aise hai na ki…………….." Naina told him about the mission but not about Raj because Vaibhav told them not to reveal it in front of anyone jab tak kaha na jaaye.

"To bhi mujhe bata kar to jaate na." Huda complained.

"Tu Sameera k saath busy lag rahela tha to apun ne socha ki tujhe kyoun faltoo me disturb karein." Alekh told.

"Oye nahi kaisi aise koi baat nahi thi." Huda said, "Vo bus mujhe bye bye karne aayi thi yahan."

They all became silent for a moment.

"Accha chalo oye koi baat nahi meri saari tayyari ho chuki hai mai ab nikalta hoon." Huda told.

They all came out n finally bid a good bye to Huda. Huda saw his Phoolan with teary eyes n thought in his mind, 'Ho sakta hai Phoolan mere jaane k baad tujhe mere pyaar ka ehsaas ho jaaye mai us din ka intezaar karoonga.'. His eyes were teary soon he left.

Here in Delhi:-

"Abhi ye dekho koi msg aaya hai." Nandini called him n showed somesignals they were receiving.

Abhi came there immediately n checked it, "Mujhe jo sahk tha wahi hua."

"Kya hua Abhi?" Nandini asked really tensed.