RK FF:SITAM..Part 18,Page 25,14/03/2010

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sam111222

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Hi, Ananya.I read bothe the parts together today only. Really, both the parts were mind blowing. Raj and Kranti alone at a lonely place.😉 Rai ki himmat ka jawab nahin, Kranti ko bhari party mein se kheench laya. and Kranti also loves Raj😳. too good.👏👏. waiting for the next part. please update soon.👏

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Sari

@Seebz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

wow!!!!!!....brilliant yaar..........u r the best how wonderfully u have added these moments............so romantic.yaar...😍..Raj ke courage ka jawaab nahi.....poor kranti ..feel bad for her...just hope she says yes to raj...and they both get married soon....then take revenge to those idiots😡

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

ANANYA .............U R GREAT .............. *Deep bow* Sorry yaar ............

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

............me aaj hi part 6 aur 7 padi .............

Outstanding / Brinllaint / Passionate

I have fallen flat at the chemistry you described betwn K & R ........

Keep it up...........

You are describing all that we are eager to see in the serial ...............

I'm sorry yaar .............hum log sahi time par respond nahi kar rahe hai .........

Par .......... I swear ........... we love this FF ..............please please continue ............

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

wish you a cracking diwali have fun.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: stranger in us
wow you are improving with each update . keep up the good work

Thanks..a lot..for the compliment..

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol
ANANYA .............U R GREAT .............. *Deep bow* Sorry yaar ............

Hmm..I honoured..😃

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol
............me aaj hi part 6 aur 7 padi .............

Outstanding / Brinllaint / Passionate==Thanks..😊

I have fallen flat at the chemistry you described betwn K & R ........==hmm..good..

Keep it up..........==I will..

You are describing all that we are eager to see in the serial ...............==Really..so am I..

I'm sorry yaar .............hum log sahi time par respond nahi kar rahe hai ........==It's OK..

Par .......... I swear ........... we love this FF ..............please please continue ...........==Yes..I will continue..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Seebz
wow!!!!!!....brilliant yaar..........u r the best how wonderfully u have added these moments............so romantic.yaar...😍..Raj ke courage ka jawaab nahi.....poor kranti ..feel bad for her...just hope she says yes to raj...and they both get married soon....then take revenge to those idiots😡

Yaar..the story is too far..don't be so relaxed right now...Raj is brave..but..he will have to give lots of effort to get Kranti's love..😉

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sam111222
Hi, Ananya.I read bothe the parts together today only. Really, both the parts were mind blowing. Raj and Kranti alone at a lonely place.😉 Rai ki himmat ka jawab nahin, Kranti ko bhari party mein se kheench laya. and Kranti also loves Raj😳. too good.👏👏. waiting for the next part. please update soon.👏

Don't be so happy..story is so far..Kranti..is a tough deal for Raj..it's not so easy to get Kranti..and her love..Raj..he will get a tough time..this time..the case is more difficult..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Here I come Ananya😃....Wonderful narration👏👏...Uff why Kranti is soo unromantic😡...Raj is kissing her neck,telling "I love u" and "I can't live without u" stuffs but Kranti is standing stiff😡😆😳...I hope soon she too feels the same kind of attraction towards Raj😳...I m sure she is feeling it but still is in denial😉..

Oh and whatever happened to her Babuji was so bad,...I really want Raj to help her out in her revenge mission against that Kriplani😡..

Sanjay-Nirmal interaction was also very cute😛

Overall very interesting Ananya👏...I hope in the next part Kranti too confesses her love for Raj😳

Keep dreaming...but..Raj..I feel pity for him..it's not so easy,...to win Kranti.. and thanks..you liked my writing style..and the narration..thanks a lot... Kranti is not going to express her feelings to Raj..have patience..take care..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

PART 8

THE DREAM IS OVER

Raj ki neend tooti...tab woh Sanjay k ghar me tha..guest room me..Nirmal thi saamne..

Nirmal--kaisa lag raha hai ab?Sar par chot kaise lagi..?

Raj ne realize kia..k uske sar pe bandage bandhi hai..Kranti kaha hai?Woh nahi dikh rahi hai..kaha gayi..theek toh hai na?Sanjay aaya..poochha,"kyaa bhai..kyaa hua tha?"

Raj--Kranti kaha hai?

Sanjay--Usine kal raat ko phone kia..aur kaha..tujhe chot lagi hai..tum dono race course k paas ho..

Raj--Haan..hum dono the waha par...usne sab kuchh bataya..k uske Baojee ki death kaise hui..

Sanjay--ohh..kyaa pata chala tujhe?

Raj ne tab sab kuchh bataya..jaisa Kranti ne usko bataya...

Sanjay--yeha tak ki kahani samajh me aati hai..par tujhe chot kaise lagi?

Raj--Pata nahi..yaar..par main Kranti k saath tha..she was so nice to me..and we were having a good time..she gave a hug..and..

Sanjay--Tujhe chadh gayi hai..Kranti..tujhe gale lagaayegi...itne saalon me jo nahi hua.. kal raat ko hi..woh hoga..tune bhaang pee rakhi hai kya??

Raj--Nahi..yaar..main tha uske saath..woh ro rahi thi..mere kandhe pe sar rakh kar..I ..kissed..

Sanjay hansne laga...bola,"khayali pulao mat paka.."...

Nirmal--Sanjay..mujhe Raj k sar par naya bandage baandhna hai..tum zara dekho.. baahar ..mehmaan logo ne nashta kia k nahi..

Sanjay--haan..

Raj ko kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha hai..kyaa hua..kal raat..Kranti k saath..Raj ne.. Sanjay paagal ho gaya hai kya?Nirmal baithi hai..Raj k paas..

Raj--Kranti kaha hai?

Nirmal--tumne achha nahi kia..you went too far..

Raj--What did I do?

Nirmal--Kranti se tumko pata chala..k uske saath kyaa hua..yeha tak kahani samajh me aati hai..uske baad kyaa Raj?

Raj ko kuchh bhi samajh me nahi aa raha hai...

Nirmal--tumne zabardasti Kranti k kareeb jaane ki koshish ki..

Raj--nahi..

Nirmal--Haan..tumne ki..woh mana kar rahi thi..par tum shaadi k lia baar baar usko force kar rahe the..

Raj--but..uske baad..usne khud mera haath pakda..aur..hum..

Nirmal--nahi..baaki tumhara khwaab tha...jo tumne behoshi me dekha..

Raj--What?

Nirmal--haan..tum Kranti ko zabardasti pakad k khade the..aur Kranti ne dia tumko zor ka dhakka...tu pahle se hi nashe me the..tum jaa kar geere zameen par..patthar se tumhara sar takra gaya..aur tum behosh ho gaye..tumhare mobile se Kranti ne phone kia,jo bhi... Kranti k saath good times..tumne sapna dekha Raj...

Raj--seriously?

Nirmal--Sanjay jab pahoocha..tab tumhare sar se khoon beh raha tha..ghar le kar aaya tumko..saare log pareshaan..humara driver Kranti ko ghar chhod aaya...tum baar baar Kranti ka naam le rahe the..aur neend me ajeeb ajeeb awaz nikaal rahe the..Raj..you got too physical with Kranti in your dreams..shame on you..

Raj--Mujhe abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai..k sab kuchh ek sapna tha..

Nirmal--You shoud be ashamed of yourself..

Raj--Why should I?

Nirmal--tumne..zabardasti..uska make-up kharab kia..uske baal khol die..kyaa ho gaya tha tumko?Koi rakshas ghoos gaya tha ..tumhare andar?

Raj--See,main kuchh bhi samajhne k laayak nahi ab..please,kisi din aram se baat karenge, abhi mujhe ghar jaana hai...Bye..sorry..tum logo ka mood kharab hua...your night got totally spoiled..all thanks to my activities.. sorry..Nirmal..Bhaabhijee..abhi chalta hoon...

Nirmal--Raj..bandage toh karva lo..

Raj--nahi..ghar jaa kar nahana hai..main ghar me kisi Doctor ko bula loonga..

Nirmal--Thodi der baad..main aa jaaoon?

Raj--NO..you take rest..I will manage..Delhi me Doctors ki kumee nahi hai..bye..

Sanjay ko "bye" keh kar Raj nikal pada..apne ghar ki taraf..haan..Nirmal ne jo kaha..sach kaha..Raj ne vaakei me zyaadti ki Kranti k saath..he went too far..itne saalon k baad mili.. bahut jaldbaazi ki Raj ne..par jo bhi tha ..sapna bahut achha tha...Raj ko abhi tak yakeen nahi ho raha hai ..k jo hua..woh sach me ek sapna tha..Kranti..uske itni kareeb thi..sochne me hi kitna achha lag raha hai..pata nahi yeh sapna kab haquikat me tabdeel hoga..

Raj ghar pahoocha..uski Maa pareshaan ho gayi..uske sar par chot dekh kar..

Maa--kaise lagi chot?

Raj--kal raat baarish hui thi..main feensal gaya..Maa..aur chot lag gayi..main aram karna chaahta hoon..

Maa--naha le..main Doctor ko bulati hoon..

Raj--Jee..Dad uth gaye..?

Maa--Haan..aaj zara unse baat kar lena...dopaher ka khana saath me khaa lena ..

Raj--Jee..

Lunch k waqt..

Dad--Tum Office jana shuru kyon nahi karte?

Raj--Kab se jaana hai?

Dad--kal se..jaaoge?

Raj--Jee..jaaoonga..

Dad--Tumhari Maa bata rahi thi...k College k dino se hi tum kisi se pyaar karte ho..

Raj--Jee..?

Dad--Is me sharmaane ki kyaa baat hai..?Tum pyaar karte ho?

Raj--Jee..

Dad--Shaadi bhi usise karna chaahoge?

Raj--Haan..

Dad--Toh..pareshaani kyaa hai?

Raj--Woh raazi nahi..

Dad--Aur..tumko usise shaadi karni hai..right?

Raj--Hmm..

Dad--Koshish karte raho...tumhari Maa bahut taarif karti hai..us ladki ki..Kranti naam hai na uska...hmm?

Raj--Jee..

Dad--Achhi baat hai..tum Office jaana shuru karo..main jaaoonga..unke ghar..rishta le kar.. fikar mat karo..

Raj--Woh raazi hogi?

Dad--Raazi karao..BE A MAN..kal subha 10 baje..I want to see you in the office...

Raj--Yes..Dad..

Dad se baatein kar k..Raj zara relaxed hua...par kyaa faida?Kranti..usko kaun samjhaaye? Raj ko abhi bhi yaad nahi aa raha hai..k exactly kyaa hua tha kal raat ko..sar par kab chot lagi..Kranti ne kab dhakka dia..kuchh yaad nahi aa raha hai..

Raj bistar me leta hua tha...aise me..phone ki awaz...

Raj--Hello...

"Aainda..mere saath aisi harkat ki..yaa karne ki koshish ki..then God Help You.."

Raj--Kranti??

Kranti--Haan..Raj..jo hua..achha nahi hua..aainda mere raaste me mat aana...

Raj--Kranti..suno..

Kranti--Get lost..

Raj--Kyon kar rahi ho aisa?Tum mujhe takleef de rahi ho..aur khud ko bhi...

Kranti--I don't need you in my life...so..stay away from me..

Raj--NO....Kranti..mera dimaag agar ghoom gaya na..toh tumhare lia achha nahi hoga..

Kranti--Raj..dhamki mat do..main nahi darrti...

Raj--Thode hi dino me..Mere Dad rishta le kar jaayenge..tumhare ghar...sharafat se haan bol dena..varna..

Kranti--kyaa kar loge?

Raj--Pahle k zamane me ladkion ka Haran kia jaata tha..mujhe bhi aisa kuchh karna hoga..

Kranti--Main kisi aur se shadi karoongi..tumhare saamne...dekhna..tum..

Raj--try karo...sab k saamne..usi mandap se tum ko ghaseet kar le jaaoonga...

Kranti--Keep dreaming..after all..it's tax free..

Phone kat gaya..

Raj ko kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha hai..Kranti itni naraz kyon hai?Raj ne kyaa bigada hai uska?Sar me dard bhi hai..aur dil me aag lagi hui hai...Kranti se sharafat se ab baat nahi karega..Raj jitni narmi dikhaayega..Kranti utni hi berookhi se pesh aayegi..time to change the way..par kya usse bhi koi faida hoga??

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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