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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

sound intresting plz continue it

"When it rains, you dont see the sun, but its there.
Hope we can be like that.
We dont always see each other,
but we will always be there for one another."

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
awesome prologue..
of course you shuold continue....
i have a feeling that she is anorexic? or similar.....
but really looking forward tor eading this fic! great job!
I dont mind AR but AK all the way...hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
hey gr8 intro. im sure ur aware already that i love ak fan fics😆 how i wish there were more ff on them!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
great concept
waitin for u to start
eternal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: pyari_pari

nice concept plz do continue can't wait😊

thanx so much pari, am posting the first part today😳

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

gr8 intro

continue soon

thanx dear will post a part today😛

Originally posted by: sweet honey

intresting concept...do cont...

thanx so much dear, will do😳

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

very interesting concept! pls go ahead😃

thanx so much jiya...will do and thanx again

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

YAYYY, another FF, ur prolouge really is interesting!!

It's up to you if u want to add AR, cuz i'm a fan of both ;) hehe
-Natasha

lol hiya natasha is it kay if i call you nats?😳 thanx so much dear, lol im still deciding...itll be half way if they are introduced😉

Originally posted by: rima791

awesome concept hun

love it, will be looking forward to read this one
yay!! AK all the way!!

thanx a lot rima, yeap ak all the way!!! 😆

Originally posted by: superstar15

good job sukhi

for ur new ff
im looking foward
to it cont soon.

thanx so much rhea...will do😳

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

really excited to read ur fan fic!

can u pm me when u cont ?

thanx so much hun, and will do😛

Originally posted by: ttimpy

definitely sukhi...............u shud continue....it sounds pretty interesting.....plo. add me to ur pm list..............

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

aww thanx timpy, and your added to the pm list😃

Originally posted by: prabhi

😛nice concept. i like it; it's different..

plz continue i can't wait for the first part 👏

thanx a lot prabhi, was just going to pm you but you commented😆 and thanx again dear

Originally posted by: monikaseth

gr8 intro

continue soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx so much monika...😳

Originally posted by: sun_423

sounds interesting....👏👏👏 continue soon..😊

thanx dear and will continue shortly😳

Originally posted by: kvn1983

sound intresting plz continue it

"When it rains, you dont see the sun, but its there.
Hope we can be like that.
We dont always see each other,
but we will always be there for one another."

thanx nidha will definitely continue..and cute poem😳

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

awesome prologue..

of course you shuold continue....
i have a feeling that she is anorexic? or similar.....
but really looking forward tor eading this fic! great job!
I dont mind AR but AK all the way...hehe

thanx so much katie or do you prefer ekta?😳
hmmm lets see is she anorexic or is something else??
thanx again dear...lol dont worry im a crazy ak fan😳

Originally posted by: Kaj!

hey gr8 intro. im sure ur aware already that i love ak fan fics😆 how i wish there were more ff on them!

thanx so much kaj! yeap yeap i do lol, i agree!! btw kaj when are you updating your ff???😉

Originally posted by: deeya123

great concept

waitin for u to start

thanx a lot deeya...will post a part very soon😳
thank you everyone for the encouraging comments, so i'm posting the first part in an hour or so...hope you'll like it...😳 as always - sukhi :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Nice intro!!!

Seems very interesting
If you can please Pm me when you continue
Thankzz 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
thank godd a-k f-f at last and a good one ... plz dont add a-r in it plz just for once make an alone a-k ff i am dieing too read because everyother story has a-k and a-r not only a-k !! soo plz make a-k f-f !! thankss continue soonn waiting 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
lovely concept sukhi; its very realistic; somehting many people think of them self, undesirable; I'd love to read this ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: imdudehead

Nice intro!!!

Seems very interesting
If you can please Pm me when you continue
Thankzz 😉

thanx so much dear, i will do so and thanx again😳
aww thanx so much di glad you like it😛

Originally posted by: sabzz

thank godd a-k f-f at last and a good one ... plz dont add a-r in it plz just for once make an alone a-k ff i am dieing too read because everyother story has a-k and a-r not only a-k !! soo plz make a-k f-f !! thankss continue soonn waiting 😃

aww thanx so much sabzz dear, lol im not really sure if i am going to, i wanted to keep it an ak and i think it's going to stay just ak😛 lol and thanx for the comment dear😳

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

lovely concept sukhi; its very realistic; somehting many people think of them self, undesirable; I'd love to read this ff

thanx so much faiza! glad you like it😃...yeap yeap its one of the reasons why im writing it and the constant remarks some have to face😳 and thanx again dear😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20

Chapter 1:

"Uff Kripa! Get up it's time to get to school, you'll get late my gulabo!" Gayatri hissed. "Let me sleep mom can't you let me go to school tomorrow!" a sleepy Kripa whined back. "no means no!" Gayatri screamed back and turned her attention towards a laughing Suryaban. "what is there for breakfast or are you saving that for your gulabo?" he snickered as Gayatri through him a glare.

Back upstairs, a tired Kripa dragged herself out of bed and towards the bathroom, walking out half an hour later dressed in loose jeans, and a shirt. "Ugh still the same ugly as yesterday!" she mumbled and walked down the stairs. "Hey sis! Good morning!" Karan mumbled politely and moved over to the next seat to make room for Kripa. "Here Kripa, make sure you finish all of it!" Gayatri ordered. Kripa merely nodded and turned her attention back towards the eight paranthe Gayatri had just placed on her plate. "whatever happened about dieting?" Suryaban snickered from behind the newspaper. Kripa glanced up at him, once again insulted by the constant nagging marks from her parents.

"I'm getting late Mom I'll be home by four! Bye love you! And hate you dad!" Kripa mumbled as she jogged towards the door.

At the young age of sixteen Kripa was not like 'normal' teens, she was constantly ignored and insulted because of her appearance. Since the age of ten something happened in her life that ruined her completely, her self esteem dropped as she took in glances of her appearances day by day through the eyes of society. But little did she know her life was soon going to change for the worse.

*****

"oye Angad look at that man, I think she entered the wrong school!" Josh snickered glancing at a shy new student standing by the school gate. Angad turned around hoping to find a sexci looking girl but instead spit out his soda. "what the hell? Did she not read the sign NO FAT PEOPLE ALLOWED!" Angad spat. Prithivi nodded, "or girls weighing more than 65 kilos!" Josh grinned, "she looks new let's have some fun!" Angad nodded and made his way towards her.

"Hey beautiful!" Angad called out towards shy Kripa. She glanced at him surprised, blinked her eyes twice and turned behind herself and back again. "are you talking to me?" she spoke a bit squeaky. Angad chuckled, "nahin I'm talking to casper!" Kripa smiled shyly and glanced at him; dressed in ripped jeans and a black shirt, boy did he look handsome as ever. Angad caught her gaze on him and immediately flinched away. "nice shirt!" he snickered. Kripa blushed and glanced at her oversized shirt, something she always did to hide away some of her weight. It worked and other times it didn't. "can I help you?" Kripa asked politely. Angad stared dumbfounded as he stared at her face.

Seconds later he found his voice, "yeah by not shaking the earth!" he burst out laughing. Josh and Prithivi followed his lead and watched as Kripa ran away hurt.

*****

"Hey is he here yet?" Josh asked the several inches shorter Prithivi. "Nope not yet, he'll be here in five minutes in the meantime, look at that fireball!" he snickered and turned his gaze behind Josh. "damn boy look at that figure!" he laughed. "this one is mine you can have her once I am done!"

"how about not Prithivi! And Josh your supposed to save her for me!" a husky voice spoke from behind them. Both turned surprised at his entry, "when the heck did you get here, and oye I saw her first; she is damn fine! Boy does daddy want a piece of that!" Josh snickered with the rest. "watch me do my thang!" Prithivi laughed and headed towards the girl. "Yaar Angad do you think he can do it?" Josh asked. Angad chuckled and nodded negatively. "he's not a man yet!" both laughed and watched carefully as Prithivi headed towards the girl. Instead of a kiss or a hug, he walked back towards them a hand on his red cheek.

"Watch me do my thang!" Angad repeated Prithivi's words. Prithivi shot him a glare and all turned their heads back towards the lunchroom. "let's get some food I'm hungry, what else are we supposed to do for lunch! Hopefully the moti wont eat all of it!"

To be continued…that's it for now guys I will post a character intro later tomorrow…and I hope I am not offending anyone with this ff…if I hurt anyone's feelings please do forgive me, my main intention is to make everyone see how others are labeled in a group and as the story progresses how people no matter what shape and size are equal….J as always - sukhi

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